初三英語專題匯編書面表達(dá)(一)

1、【英語】初三英語專題匯編書面表達(dá)( 一)一、英語書面表達(dá)1 面表達(dá)假如你是amy，德國的交 生sara 下周即將來你家寄宿，昨天你收到她的來信，在信中，她 如下信息：1你家情況； 2.有關(guān)餐桌禮 ；3. 她要承擔(dān)的家 ；4. 在，你就她提出的 她回信，也 祝她在你家 得開心！要求： 1. 文章必 包括 片中主要內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng) ；2. 文中不得出 真 的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息；3. 字?jǐn)?shù) 110 。dear sara，i m glad to hear from you yesterday._love，amy【答案】 dear sara，i m glad to hear from you yester

2、day. welcome to my family next week.i have a small family. there are three people in my family, my parents and me. in china, unlike in the west, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. and sometimes the chinese hosts use their chopsticks to put food in your bowl or plate. this is a si

3、gn of politeness. the appropriate thing to do would be to eat the whatever-it-is and say how delicious it is. if you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say thank you |in politely and leave the food there.as for housework, i think its our duty to help our parents do some housework. so you can

4、 help my parents wash the dishes, clean the room and make the bed. i hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework.of course, if you like, i will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.love,amy【解析】【 解】 篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短 ， 文章增色不少，如be glad to， hear from ，unlike in the west ， on t

5、he table ， a sign of， help sb. do ， do some housework ，wash the dishes， clean the room ， make the bed ， take care of， how to do 等。而復(fù) 并列 構(gòu) in china, unlike in the west, plates are placed on the table and shared by everyone. 和 if you feel uncomfortable with this, you can just say a polite thank you an

6、d leave the food there./ i hope you can take care of yourself and your family by doing housework./ if you like, i will teach you how to cook delicious dishes.等復(fù) 從句 構(gòu)的運(yùn)用，豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多 化，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué) 中注意 牢 一些固定句式及短 ，寫作 就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有 性，也更富有條理?！军c(diǎn)睛】 面表達(dá) 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求將所 定的材料內(nèi)容 整理后展開思 ，考 運(yùn)用所學(xué)英 知 準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意

7、思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，盡可能使用高 和 復(fù) 的句式 構(gòu)以便得到 高的分?jǐn)?shù)。2“ 帆起航新學(xué)期，學(xué)姐學(xué) 提建 ”。你 上就要 了，在初中的學(xué) 和生活中你一定有很多收 ， 學(xué)弟學(xué)妹 提幾點(diǎn)建 吧！要求： 1. 內(nèi)容完整， 言流 ， 寫 范清晰。2. 短文中不能出 正式姓名，校名。100 左右?！敬鸢浮?im going to graduate from junior high school. as your senior, i have some suggestions to the young.as old saying goes, all wor

8、k and no play makes jack a dull boy. to begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.moreover, you should get along well with others. to have more friends, not enemies.last but not least, you could be active in school team work. ability is as important as your study, you can also

9、 enjoy your colorful school life as welli hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.【解析】【 解】 篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短 ， 文章增色不少，如be going to ，graduatefrom ， to begin with ， both and，get along well with others ， be active in， as important as ，as well 等。而 to begin with,/ moreover,

10、/ last but not least, 等短 的運(yùn)用，既豐富了短文內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多 化，更使短文很有條理，是本文的亮點(diǎn)。在學(xué) 中注意 牢 一些固定句式及短 ，寫作 就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章表達(dá)更有 性，也更富有條理。【點(diǎn)睛】 面表達(dá) 既不是 英，也不是可任意 的作文。它要求將所 定的材料內(nèi)容 整理后展開思 ，考 運(yùn)用所學(xué)英 知 準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能 漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的 、短 和句式，盡可能使用高 和 復(fù) 的句式 構(gòu)以便得到 高的分?jǐn)?shù)。3 面表達(dá)隨著 子 代的到來，西方文化如潮水般涌來，中國 文化的 承面 著巨大的挑 。有人 學(xué)校 當(dāng)開 文化 （set up tradit

11、ional culture classes ），但也有人 沒有必要。假如你是mike, 你用英 寫一封 件， 你校英文 投稿寫一篇短文， 數(shù)80 左右， 你 開 文化 的看法。your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryyour reasonsthe root （根） of chinese culture, know more about,spread, developyour suggestiondear editor,as we all know, chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge b

12、ecause of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _yours,mike【答案】 dear editor,as we know, chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapiddevelopment of international technology nowadays. in my opinion, it s necessary for schools toset up traditional c

13、ulture classes.first, traditiona l culture is the root of chinese. as chinese, we shouldn t give up our traditionalculture and run after western culture. second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. they can raise their sense of national pride. last bu

14、t not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our chinese culture.all in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. let schools to set up traditional culture classes!yours,mike【解析】 是一篇 材料作文， 我 開 文化 的看法。 合所 材料，可知本文主要考 一般 在 ，人稱 第一，三人稱，

15、注意主 一致 ，句子 構(gòu)主要 系表 構(gòu)和 構(gòu)，注意一些常 句式的 用，比如：chinese traditional culture isfacing，it s necessary for schools to ， we shouldn t，they can raise，itis of greatimportance to等句式的 用。寫作中注意運(yùn)用代 ，注意多種句式交替運(yùn)用。寫作中注意敘述 序，符合 關(guān)系。點(diǎn)睛：本文 構(gòu) 湊， 言 。開 介 了中國 文化面 的 ，接下來介 我 開 文化 的必要性的原因，最后號召更多的學(xué)校開 文化 。此 becauseof， in one s opinion,

16、give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等 些 的運(yùn)用也 文章增色不少。4 面表達(dá)同學(xué) ，中考后就會迎來漫 的暑假了，班會 上老 大家 假期學(xué) 和生活 劃。假如你是李 ， 根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示用英 向同學(xué) 一下你的 劃。內(nèi)容提示：暑假 劃學(xué) 博 群 ；學(xué) 技能（或自 一點(diǎn)）生活健康飲食；堅持鍛煉（或自擬一點(diǎn)）其它熱愛公益；親近自然（或自擬一點(diǎn)）注意：1. 表達(dá)中必須包括所給要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，不要簡單翻譯。2. 詞數(shù) 90 左右。開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。3. 表達(dá)中請勿提及真實(shí)校名及姓名。de

17、ar classmates,summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it._i hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. that 【答案】 dear classmates, s all. thank you.summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.first, id like to choose several good books and read them carefully. this can help me o

18、pen my mind and learn more about the world. i also think its necessary for me to learn at least one skill. im interested in cooking, so i will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.second, health is the most important. so i will eat healthily and exercise more. i plan to eat more fr

19、uit and vegetables and keep running every day.third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. i will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our earth a better world. also, travelling out is a good choice. while tra

20、velling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. we have more chances to search the internet. i know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. i will say no to them.i hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. thats all. thank you.【解析】亮點(diǎn)說明：這篇習(xí)作的層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。文中使用了非常好的短語，例如 id l

21、ike to do ， help me open my mind ， at least， be interested in ，during theholiday ， plan to do ，join in ， be kind to someone in need ， pay more attention to ，be close to nature ， search the internet 等。而 first, id like to choose several good books and read them carefully./ second, health is the most i

22、mportant./third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. 等表順序詞和綜合句式的運(yùn)用，既使短文層次清晰，又豐富了習(xí)作內(nèi)容，使表達(dá)多樣化，是本文的最大亮點(diǎn)。點(diǎn)睛：書面表達(dá)題既不是漢譯英，也不是可任意發(fā)揮的作文。它要求將所規(guī)定的材料內(nèi)容經(jīng)整理后展開思維，考查運(yùn)用所學(xué)英語知識準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)意思的能力。所以，考生不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，要盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞、短語和句式，盡可能使用高級詞匯和較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)以便得到較高的分?jǐn)?shù)。5書面表達(dá)你即將升入高

23、中，面臨寄宿（a boarding school ）和走讀（ a day school）兩類學(xué)校的選擇。請你以 “a boarding school or a day school為題?！睂懸黄涛?，內(nèi)容須包括：讀寄宿學(xué)校的利和弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利和弊；你的選擇和理由（不得與上述兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容重復(fù)）。注意： 1. 詞數(shù) ;100 詞左右（文章開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；2. 文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必須包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。a hoarding school or a day schoolwe are going to graduate from our mi

24、ddle school, _【答案】we are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.if we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. however, we may have less time to stay wi

25、th our family. if we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. at the same time computer games and tv plays may make a bad influence on us.as for me, i prefer a boarding school. we should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析】【分析】整體分析：這是一篇給材料作文?？梢?/p>

26、分三段寫。第一段要寫總體交代你即將升入高中，面臨寄宿（ a boarding school ）和走讀（ a day school）兩類學(xué)校的選擇。第二段要寫詳細(xì)敘述讀寄宿學(xué)校的利弊；讀走讀學(xué)校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的選擇和理由?！驹斀狻繉懽髦耙?.審清題目，看看有哪些要求？哪些時態(tài)？人稱？2.確定文章類型，記敘文？說明文？議論文？看圖？還是應(yīng)用文？3.確定時態(tài)，單一還是混合。4.寫下關(guān)鍵詞、短語、句型。5.列出提綱和段落，并運(yùn)用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫秃瓦^渡詞銜接。6.根據(jù)提綱和段落結(jié)構(gòu)句型及關(guān)鍵詞句完成文章。寫完后反復(fù)閱讀修改推敲潤色，人稱、時態(tài)、單復(fù)數(shù)一致等。運(yùn)用自然過渡法和自然銜接法來是文章更

27、為地道、通順、純正。用的短語、句型：both kinds of 、if we choose a boarding school 、 at the same time 、 as for me, i prefer a boarding school 、 payattention to 、來增加了文章的亮點(diǎn)?！军c(diǎn)睛】這類作文的寫作方法要注意認(rèn)真審題，注意過渡性語言的使用。做到：要點(diǎn)要全，表達(dá)要清晰明確，使用短語，句型要準(zhǔn)確，注意避免拼寫和語法錯誤。6 亞洲文明對話大會近期在北京召開，你的印度朋友danny 收看了大會相關(guān)報道，對華夏文明產(chǎn)生了濃厚的興趣，來信向你了解中國文化。假設(shè)你是李華，請根據(jù)以下

28、內(nèi)容提示用英語寫一封回信給danny。要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容歷史文化歷史悠久，文化各異；傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，多彩習(xí)俗（舉一例）文明行為相互尊重，以禮相待；互學(xué)共鑒，共同成長（或自擬）身邊文明校園文明（自擬一點(diǎn)）注意： 1. 詞數(shù) 90 詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。2. 回復(fù)必須包括所以要點(diǎn)，可是當(dāng)發(fā)揮，是短文連貫，通順。3. 文中不得提及真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。參考詞匯 : civilized 文明的dear danny,i m glad to receive your letter. since you are interested in civilization（文明） of china, i

29、would like to share something with you.i hope you can come to china someday to experience the ancient culture of china. look forward to hear from you soon.all the best,li hua【答案】 dear danny,i m glad to receive your letter. since you are interested in civilization（文明） of china, i would like to share

30、something with you.chinese civilization is one of the oldest and longest civilizations in the world. china is a country of 56 nationalities. different nations have difficult cultures. in my country, we have many traditionalfestivals, such as, the spring festival, mid-autumn festival and the dragon b

31、oat festival . they arealso called “ three major chinese holidays ” ine thechinacustoms.here ofar eating zongzi and racing dragon-boat on the dragon boat festival.china is a nation of etiquette （禮儀） . chinese people can respect, trust and help each other. we all learn and grow together. everyone in

32、my school should protect the whole public environment. climbing the trees, picking the flowers and throwing garbage at random are not allowed there.i hope you can come to china someday to experience the ancient culture of china. look forward to hearing from you soon.all the best.li hua【解析】【分析】本文要求給你

33、的印度朋友danny 寫一篇關(guān)于華夏文明的回信。【詳解】文章需要介紹下中國的文化。表格中列舉了三個要點(diǎn)，寫作時注意不要漏寫。平時注意多多積累句型、短語。細(xì)心檢查避免疏漏。以圖表展示的作文要以“讀 ”為主，首先要認(rèn)真讀懂圖表中的要求，對所給信息加以分析、推斷、篩選、概括，去粗取精；在寫作時目的要明確，要注意內(nèi)容的準(zhǔn)確性和嚴(yán)肅性。【點(diǎn)睛】寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系，上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞。如but, so, then等?？梢赃m當(dāng)使用高分句子。本篇文章寫的好的句子有：chinese civilization is one of theoldest and longest civiliza

34、tions in the world中華文明是世界上最古老、最悠久的文明之一。china is a nation of etiquette （禮儀），中國是一個禮儀之邦。7書面表達(dá)根據(jù)要求完成短文寫作，請將作文寫在答題卡指定的位置上。每年春節(jié)，每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（lucky money ）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信（wechat）或支付寶（alipay）收壓歲錢。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？請結(jié)合自己的實(shí)際寫一篇文章，詞數(shù) 80 詞以上，文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)校名和人名。內(nèi)容包括如下：1. 你的壓歲錢的來源和用途；2.

35、對合理使用壓歲錢的建議（至少3 點(diǎn)）；3. 呼吁大家節(jié)約用錢，把自己的壓歲錢用在最需要、最有意義的地方?！敬鸢浮?every spring festival i receive a lot of lucky money from my parents and relatives. now i even get it through wechat or alipay. i usually buy some of my favorite books, school things and some fancy clothes. sometimes i also buy some gifts for

36、my parents.in order to make good use of the lucky money, i think we can do the following things. first, we should save part of the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. second, it is a good idea to buy something useful for our parents or teachers so that we can show our love toth

37、em. what is more, why not donate our lucky money to the poor kids in need? helping others makes us happy.all in all, let us manage our lucky money properly. we should use our money in a meaningful way.【解析】【詳解】每年春節(jié)，每個孩子都能收到來自長輩的壓歲錢（luckymoney ）。隨著生活水平的提高，大部分孩子得到越來越多的壓歲錢，有些甚至通過微信（wechat）或支付寶（alipay）收壓

38、歲錢。同學(xué)們該如何管理自己的錢，讓自己的錢用得更有意義？這是一篇給材料作文，本題所給材料比較詳細(xì)，寫作中注意將所給內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，不能逐字翻譯。通過閱讀材料可知這篇短文主要使用的人稱就是第一人稱，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，注意謂語動詞的變化。動筆前可以按照材料內(nèi)容列出簡單提綱，寫作中注意語義通順，符合邏輯關(guān)系。上下文之間可以適當(dāng)使用連接詞?！军c(diǎn)睛】文章使用了很好的短語和句子： in order to make good use of the lucky money, i think we can do the following things. first, we should save part o

39、f the money for our study instead of wasting it on video games. 這些給文章增色不少。8“美麗的瓊海我的家，人人都要保護(hù)她”。自雙創(chuàng)以來，我們的生活環(huán)境得到了很大的改觀，人人積極參與雙創(chuàng)活動，讓人點(diǎn)贊的文明行為隨處可見。作為一名中學(xué)生，請你寫一篇短文號召大家加入到雙創(chuàng)活動中來。要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2.必須包含所給提示，并做適當(dāng)?shù)耐卣梗?. 行文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)人名、校名或地名；4. 詞數(shù) 80 左右，（短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)）；since the government created the

40、 civilized and healthy city, our living environment has improved a lot. everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can be seeneverywhere.as junior high students,_let s take action now. our actions can make a difference andeadlto a more beautiful city.【答案】 since the gove

41、rnment created civilized and healthy city, our living environment hasimproved a lot. everyone plays an important role in building our city, so good behaviors can beseen everywhere.as junior high students, on the one hand, there are a lot of things we can do. we should be politeto others and try to b

42、ehave well. it s kind of you to help people in need. meanwhile, we can helpclean up our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. also, we can plant more trees and keep offgrass. on the other hand, there are many things we shouldn t do. we shouldn t make a lot ofnoise loudly in the public. we can

43、 t spit anywhere and we shouldn t throw rubbish everywhere.at the same time, we shouldn t break traffic rules.let s take action now. our actions can make a difference and lead to a more beautiful city.【解析】【詳解】瓊海正在進(jìn)行 “雙創(chuàng) ”活動，即創(chuàng)建文明城市、創(chuàng)建健康城市，城市的生活環(huán)境有了很大的改變。這篇作文要求我們用英語寫一篇短文，號召中學(xué)生們都參加到 “雙創(chuàng) ”活動中來。題目中并沒有規(guī)定

44、具體的寫作內(nèi)容，而是用圖表的形式，列出了寫作的提綱。通過審題可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)從兩個方面來敘述：即應(yīng)該做什么；不應(yīng)該做什么。根據(jù)這個內(nèi)容，寫作時，把短文分成兩個層次，這樣可以使文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰、條理。整篇短文應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第一人稱 we 來敘述。寫作時應(yīng)注意：首先英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣和漢語是不同的，不能逐詞翻譯，寫漢語式的英語，而應(yīng)從句子的整體結(jié)構(gòu)考慮，使用恰當(dāng)?shù)脑~匯、短語和句型，以常見的主謂賓或者主系表構(gòu)成的簡單句為主，穿插使用并列句或者復(fù)合句，改變文章節(jié)奏，提升文章檔次。語句之間使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B接成分，使文意連貫、流暢。【點(diǎn)睛】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，短文作者根據(jù)題目要求，向中學(xué)生們發(fā)出號召，共同參

45、與到城市“雙”創(chuàng) 活動中來。首先短文的內(nèi)容完整，文章根據(jù)題目中列出的圖表，補(bǔ)充了具體的寫作內(nèi)容，從應(yīng)該做的和不應(yīng)該做的兩個方面，對中學(xué)生的日常行為提出了要求。文章條理清晰，有層次。其次短文中使用了正確的時態(tài)和人稱，語法規(guī)范，語言準(zhǔn)確，語句通順，符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。短文中句子結(jié)構(gòu)以簡單句為主，也使用了并列句和復(fù)合句以及一些較復(fù)雜的高級句式，語句之間也使用了較好的連接成分，如we should be polite to others andtry to behave well.、it s kind of you to help people in need. meanwhile, we can h

46、elp clean up、our city in order to make it clearer and tidier. 、 we can t spit anywhere and we shouldn t throwrubbish everywhere. at the same time, we shouldn t break等等traffic。 rules.9書面表達(dá)我校決定讓學(xué)生輪流打掃廁所，以此作為教育學(xué)生的一種方式。這件事在學(xué)生中引起了強(qiáng)烈的反響，請你把下列不同意見整理成一篇書面材料，報告給學(xué)校。同意 ：1多數(shù)學(xué)生是獨(dú)生子女，不會做事。2學(xué)生應(yīng)該學(xué)會做艱苦的工作。3學(xué)會理解和尊重清潔

47、工人的勞動。不同意： 1很臟，容易使學(xué)生生病。2不是學(xué)生應(yīng)該做的事情。3打掃教室就足夠了。注意：1短文應(yīng)包括表中所有內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但不要逐字翻譯；2不少于80 詞。生詞提示：respect尊重【答案】 a strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students do voluntary labor.some students think it is a good way of education. now most families have only one child. they nev

48、er do hard work. to do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work. it can also help them understand and respect the cleaners.but others have different points. they think it is easy for them to get sick. they don students jobs. cleaning the classroom every day is enou

49、gh.【解析】【詳解】閱讀題干要求，這是一篇看法類的作文，那么首先得點(diǎn)明討論的話題，然后分別寫出不同人群對此事的看法，時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主。重點(diǎn)詞匯及短語：argument爭論；take place發(fā)生； among（三者或三者以上）之間；agood chance for sb對某人來說是個好機(jī)會；help sb do sth幫助某人做某事；get sick生病。亮點(diǎn)句型：（ 1） a strong argument has taken place among students since our school made students dovoluntary labor. 自從我們學(xué)校讓學(xué)生做自愿勞動以來，在學(xué)生中發(fā)生了一場激烈的爭論?，F(xiàn)在完成時（ have/has+done ）。（2） to do voluntary labor is a good chance for them to learn how to do difficult work.做義務(wù)勞動是他們學(xué)習(xí)如何做困難工作