“契訶夫法則”看讀后續(xù)寫隱藏線索的利用周萍

1、從“契訶夫法則”看讀后續(xù)寫隱藏線索的利用,契訶夫（Chekhov），19世紀末俄國偉大的批判現(xiàn)實主義作家，情趣雋永、文筆犀利的幽默諷刺大師，短篇小說之王，著名戲劇作家。他創(chuàng)作態(tài)度嚴謹，重視文學的寫生，筆下一草一木無不栩栩如生，刻畫心理亦往往入木三分，是世界短篇小說巔峰之一，并成為短篇小說的代名詞,Chekhov 1860-1904,ChekhovsLaw,契訶夫法則是一種文學技巧，在故事早期出現(xiàn)的某一元素，直至最后才顯現(xiàn)出它的重要性,換言之，在故事開頭出現(xiàn)過的物品一定要在后面的故事情節(jié)中用到，否則，它就不應該出現(xiàn),契訶夫法則”對讀后續(xù)寫的啟示,1.故事前面隱藏的線索為故事后續(xù)的發(fā)展指明了方向；

2、 2.在閱讀故事時應重視隱藏的線索； 3. 隱藏的線索在后續(xù)的故事發(fā)展中應有所交代,課例（讀后續(xù)寫講評課,Cookie Thief,It was late and raining heavily one night. A young woman was waiting for her flight at an airport. She was leaving for London because she got a new job there. It was said that her new boss was a typical English gentlemanpolite, modest

3、, humorous and considerate. She was excited as well as a little nervous about her new life. With several long hours before her flight, the woman hunted for a book in the airport shops, bought a packet of cookies and found a place to sit. She took out a book and started to read. Although she was abso

4、rbed in her book, she happened to see that the man sitting beside her, as bold as he could be, grabbed a cookie or two from the bag in between them. Educated to be well-mannered, she tried to ignore it to avoid an argument. But to show that she was the owner, she started to take cookies from that ba

5、g too. Unfortunately, the man didnt get that hint（暗示）, since he didnt stop grabbing the cookies. “How annoying!” She thought. As the greedy cookie thief kept eating, the woman munched(用力咀嚼) some cookies and watched the clock. She was getting angrier as the minutes went by, thinking, “If I werent so

6、nice, I would blacken his eyes.” With each cookie she took, he took one, too; when only one was left, she wondered what he would do. With a smile on his face, and a nervous laugh, he took the last cookie and broke it in half. He offered her a half, and ate the other. She grabbed it from him, glared

7、at him and thought, “Oh, brother. This guy has some nerve and he is so rude! Why he didnt even show any gratefulness?” She had never known when she had been so angry, and sighed in relief when her flight was called. She gathered her belongings and headed to the gate quickly, refusing to look back at

8、 the rude thief. She boarded the plane, sank in her seat, and looked for her book, which was almost complete,1. hunt for a book: search for a book 2. bold-bolder-boldest: 大膽的，敢于冒險的 3. grab vt/vi -bb- 抓住，攫取 grab sth (from sb/sth) : seize grab hold of me / my arms： 抓住我/我的胳膊 grab at sth：抓住，利用（機會） 4. ge

9、t that hint = take a / the hint:領會某人的暗示 5. munch/ mnt / (on / at) sth 大聲咀嚼 6. blacken his eyes：打腫他的眼睛 blacken sbs name / reputation:玷污某人的名聲 5. break/ cut / tear sth in half:把某物分成/切成/撕成兩半 6. sigh in relief：let out a sigh of relief=breathe in relief 7. head to the gate: 走向登機口 =be headed 朝 前進，向去: + for

10、/towards/back etc The ship was heading for Cuba. 船正駛向古巴。 Its about time we were heading home . 我們該起身回家了。 head north/south etc We headed south towards the capital. 我們朝南向首都進發(fā)。 Where are you guys headed? 你們要去哪兒？ 8. sink in her seat I 倒下; 頹然坐下尤因非常疲倦或虛弱:+ into/to/down/back etc She let out a groan and san

11、k into a chair. 她呻吟了一聲，頹然倒進椅子里,gentleman；the woman; a packet of cookies; the man; cookie thief ; a nervous laugh; ate; thought; rude; the plane,gentleman; the woman; the man; cookie thief,a packet of cookie; a nervous laugh; the plane,ate; thought,rude,Which underlined words will you choose? Why,Div

12、ide the underlined words into 4 groups,The underlined words most likely to be used,the woman the man cookie thief a packet of cookies the plane,important object,main characters,important name,place where the story would go on,Read the story again and find out two hidden clues in it,Its said that her

13、 new boss was a typical English gentleman-polite, modest, humorous and considerate,The woman thought that man was a cookie thief and she was angry with him,Thinking：When and where would she meet her new boss? How would she meet him,In fact, the man was not a cookie thief and the woman made a mistake

14、. That was a misunderstanding. Thinking：How would the story go on to bring it to light,Reverse 反轉(zhuǎn),The hidden clues in the given part,She would meet her new boss. She would find that not the man but herself was a cookie thief,Trends in the storys development,Paragraph 1 As she reached in her baggage,

15、 she gasped(喘氣) with surprise. _,Para 2：With several long hours before her flight, the woman hunted for a book in the airport shops, bought a packet of cookies and found a place to sit. She took out a book and started to read,NOT cookies,She would find that the man was not a cookie thief but herself

16、,She would feel guilty and wanted to apologize to the man,The hidden clues in the given sentences,Paragraph 2 Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her._,It was said that her new boss was a typical English gentleman polite, modest, humorous and considerate,The hidden clues in the given

17、 sentences,She knew that the man was her new boss by accident,She apologized to the man,How to describe the womans feeling（anger,tried to ignore it to avoid an argument. #“How annoying!” She thought. #munched some cookies and watched the clock. #thinking, “If I werent so nice, I would blacken his ey

18、es.” #She grabbed it from him, glared at him and thought, ”O(jiān)h, brother Why he didnt even show any gratefulness?” #She had never known when she had been so angry, and sighed in relief when #and headed to the gate quickly, refusing to look back at the rude thief,action and body language,facial express

19、ions,subjunctive mood(虛擬語氣) -（wish，guilt，regret,exclamatory sentences(感嘆句) and questions,Polish your writing,A sample,As she reached into her baggage, she gasped with surprise. She found a packet of cookies lying in her handbag. It had been only a few seconds before she realized that she herself was

20、 the real cookie thief. Feeling extremely ashamed, the woman covered her mouth with her hands. How she wished that she hadnt eaten the mans cookies so carelessly. She looked around to make sure that nobody noticed her unusual behaviors. gasp /gsp / at sth 喘氣,Surprisingly, she found the man sitting just behind her. What made the atmosphere more delicate was that the man a