2020年高考英語作文高分素材訓(xùn)練：2.1-高考應(yīng)用文寫作高分技巧-31頁

1、二、高考必須掌握的3類寫作技巧 1. 高考應(yīng)用文寫作高分技巧類型一 邀請信 (2019全國卷改編)假如你是李華, 你校將舉辦音樂節(jié)。請寫封郵件邀請你的朋友Allen參加, 內(nèi)容包括:1. 時間;2. 活動安排;3. 歡迎他表演節(jié)目。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。練考場審題Step 1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱I (Li Hua), You(Allen)時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時, 一般將來時段落布局開頭點(diǎn)題:點(diǎn)明寫作目的, 并表達(dá)問候主題段落:此次活動的內(nèi)容和目的, 并希望Allen表演節(jié)目結(jié)尾:再一次真誠邀請Step 2:頭腦風(fēng)暴 字字珠玉(1)美詞:aim at, enr

2、ich, promote, be involved in, issue the certificate, highlight, confirm(2)佳句:Aiming to enrich the students school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during which time a variety of activities will be organized

3、, such as National Costume Show, Chinese Traditional Instrument display and Classical Chinese Plays Performing, and so on. I am confident that your presence and participation will be among the highlight of the festival. Step 3:斟酌詞句 妙筆生花要點(diǎn)1:音樂節(jié)安排在下周的周一到周五, 在禮堂舉行。一般表達(dá):The festival is scheduled from Mo

4、nday to Friday next week in the auditorium. 詞匯或句式升級:(分詞作狀語以及定語從句)旨在豐富學(xué)生的學(xué)校生活, 促進(jìn)傳統(tǒng)文化, 我們將舉辦音樂節(jié), 節(jié)日安排在下周一到周五的禮堂舉行, 屆時將組織各種各樣的活動。Aiming to enrich the students school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during wh

5、ich time a variety of activities will be organized. 要點(diǎn)2:音樂節(jié)的末尾, 我們希望您能表演節(jié)目, 并為獲獎?wù)哳C發(fā)證書。一般表達(dá):At the end of the festival, wed like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners. 升級表達(dá):音樂節(jié)的末尾, 我們希望您能表演節(jié)目, 并為獲獎?wù)哳C發(fā)證書。相信您的到場和參與將會成為音樂節(jié)最精彩的部分。At the end of the festival

6、, wed like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners. I am confident that your presence and participation will be among the highlight of the festival. Step 4:銜接過渡斐然成篇Dear Allen, How are you doing? Im writing to invite you to join us in the Music Festival

7、to be held in our school. I feel honored if you are present. Aiming to enrich the students school life and promote our Chinese traditional culture, the festival is scheduled from Monday to Friday next week in the auditorium, during which time a variety of activities will be organized, such as Nation

8、al Costume Show, Chinese Traditional Instrument display and Classical Chinese Plays Performing, and so on. At the end of the festival, wed like you to be involved in the performance as well as issue the certificates to the winners. I am confident that your presence and participation will be among th

9、e highlight of the festival. Would you please confirm your participation at your convenience? I genuinely hope that you can squeeze some time for our festival and have fun with us. Yours, Li Hua假定你是李華, 想邀請外教Henry一起參觀中國剪紙(paper-cutting)藝術(shù)展。請給他寫封郵件, 內(nèi)容包括:1. 展覽時間、地點(diǎn);2. 展覽內(nèi)容。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以

10、使行文連貫。_【參考范文】Dear HenryIm Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now Im glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set

11、 aside some time for the art feast. The exhibition, whose theme is “beauty of China”, will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our clubs works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Bes

12、ides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. Im sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! Im looking forward to your reply. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua類型二 建

13、議信(2018全國卷)假定你是李華, 你的新西蘭朋友Terry將去中國朋友家做客, 發(fā)郵件向你詢問有關(guān)習(xí)俗。請你回復(fù)郵件。內(nèi)容包括:1. 到達(dá)時間;2. 合適的禮物;3. 餐桌禮儀。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。練考場審題Step 1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局類型建議信人稱第二人稱(you)時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時要點(diǎn)歡迎到中國做客, 愿意提供建議到訪(朋友家)時間餐桌禮儀Step 2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉(1)美詞:the time to arrive, the appointed time, the suitable presents, table manners. (2)

14、佳句:I am very glad to hear that you will come to China for a visit. Its my pleasure to offer you some advice on the Chinese customs about visiting. Step 3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點(diǎn)1:得知你要來中國朋友家做客, 真是太好了。一般表達(dá):Its great to hear youre invited to a Chinese friends home. 很高興得知你將來中國朋友家做客, 并且想了解有關(guān)訪友的中國習(xí)俗。(增加細(xì)節(jié))Its so great

15、 to hear youre invited to a Chinese friends home and want to know the Chinese custom about visiting. 很榮幸可以與你分享我的經(jīng)歷和介紹相關(guān)的中國傳統(tǒng)與風(fēng)俗。(高級句型)It is a great honor to share my experience and introduce the relevant Chinese custom and tradition to you. 要點(diǎn)2:首先, 到達(dá)時間要準(zhǔn)時或稍微早一點(diǎn)。一般表達(dá):Firstly, make sure to arrive on

16、time, or a bit earlier. 根據(jù)中國傳統(tǒng), 比約定時間早到5至10分鐘比較好, 準(zhǔn)時到達(dá)也可以。(高級句型)According to Chinese tradition, it is better to arrive 5 or 10 minutes earlier before the appointed time but it is fine on time. 要點(diǎn)3:希望你在中國玩得愉快. I hope you can enjoy your stay in China. Step 4:銜接過渡斐然成篇Dear Terry, Its so great to hear yo

17、ure invited to a Chinese friends home and want to know something about Chinese customs. Firstly, according to Chinese tradition, it is better to arrive 5 or 10 minutes earlier before the appointed time but it is fine on time. If youd like to bring a gift, fruit is usually a good choice. At the dinne

18、r table, it is appropriate to wait for the elderly people in the family to start eating. But if they insist that you start first, just go ahead. Sometimes the host offers guests more food than they need. In that case, its OK to let them know you are full. I hope you can enjoy your stay in China. You

19、rs, Li Hua假定你是李華, 你所喜愛的Global Mirror周報創(chuàng)刊五周年之際征集讀者意見。請你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給主編寫封信, 內(nèi)容主要包括:1. 說明你是該報的忠實(shí)讀者; 2. 贊賞該報優(yōu)點(diǎn):兼顧國內(nèi)外新聞, 介紹名人成功故事;3. 提出建議:刊登指導(dǎo)英語學(xué)習(xí)的文章。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。_【參考范文】Dear editor-in-chief, Congratulations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror! Im a regular reader of your newspaper. I l

20、ike it very much mainly for the following two reasons. First, it covers both national and international news so that, by simply turning the pages, I can learn all important things that have happened during the week. Equally attractive are the success stories of world-famous people, which help me und

21、erstand how a person can work hard to make the world a better place. As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror carry articles to guide us in our English learning, and I hope that it will become even more popular. Yours sincerely, Li Hua類型三 道歉信(2016全國卷改編)假定你是李華, 與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書店, 因故不能赴約。請給他寫封郵

22、件, 內(nèi)容包括:1. 表示歉意;2. 說明原因;3. 另約時間。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右; 2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。Step 1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱I (Li Hua), You(Bob)時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時, 一般將來時段落布局開頭點(diǎn)題:點(diǎn)明寫作目的, 并表達(dá)歉意主題段落:說明致歉的原因結(jié)尾:再次致歉, 并另約時間Step 2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉(1)美詞:express my heartfelt apology;represent our school to do;available;as a result(2)佳句:I cant go with you as planned.

23、Im writing to express my heartfelt apology to you. How about going to the bookstore this Sunday. Step 3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點(diǎn)1:很抱歉無法跟你一起去書店。一般表達(dá):Im sorry that I cant go with you to the bookstore. 句式升級(高級詞匯, 名詞性從句, 分詞作狀語)我誠摯地向你道歉, 這周五不能按計劃和你去書店了。I have to express my heartfelt apology to you that I cant go with

24、you to the bookstore this Friday as planned. 要點(diǎn)2:我入選代表我校參加英語辯論賽。一般表達(dá):Im chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition. 句式升級(定語從句, for引導(dǎo)的并列句)我入選代表我校參加英語辯論賽, 這對我非常重要, 因?yàn)槲乙恢眽粝胗羞@樣的機(jī)會代表我校參賽, 展示我們的實(shí)力。Im chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate compe

25、tition, which is of importance to me, for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school. 要點(diǎn)3:這個周的周日如何?那時你是否有時間呢?一般表達(dá):How about going to the bookstore this Sunday? Will you be available then?句式升級(高級詞匯, 意趣盎然)Would it be convenient for you if we go to the book

26、store this Sunday?Step 4:銜接過渡斐然成篇Dear Bob, How are you doing? Im indeed very sorry that I cant go to the bookstore with you this Friday as planned. How I wish I could go with you! However, Im chosen to represent our school to take part in the English debate competition, which is of great importance

27、to me, for I have been dreaming of having such a chance to show our strength on behalf of my school. As a result, I have to miss our appointment. Please accept my sincere apology from the bottom of my heart. Would it be convenient for you if we go to the bookstore this Sunday?Im looking forward to y

28、our reply. Yours, Li Hua假如你是育才中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華, 昨天你在英語課上做數(shù)學(xué)作業(yè)被英語老師Miss Cheng發(fā)現(xiàn)了, 你的數(shù)學(xué)書被英語老師收走了。請用英語給英語老師寫一封道歉信, 內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括以下要點(diǎn):1. 向老師道歉;2. 解釋上課為什么做數(shù)學(xué)作業(yè);3. 提出自己的請求并作出保證。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右, 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫;2. 信的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計入總詞數(shù)。Dear Miss Cheng, _Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【參考范文】Dear Miss Cheng, I sincerely apologize to you

29、for doing maths homework in your class. I would appreciate it if you could forgive me. Having been caught doing other things in your class, I know any excuse may be meaningless. However, I did so because my mother happened to fall ill yesterday and I had to send her to hospital and look after her by

30、 myself, for my father is a migrant worker working far away. As you know, the next class would be maths. If I couldnt finish my maths homework before it, I would be severely punished. Anyway doing other things in class is not acceptable to any teacher. I swear it will never happen again. But I do ne

31、ed my maths book back. Will you be so kind as to give it back to me? Thanks a lot. Best wishes! Yours sincerely, Li Hua 類型四 感謝信(2019浙江高考改編)假定你是李華, 經(jīng)常幫助你學(xué)習(xí)英語的朋友Alex即將返回自己的國家。請你寫一封郵件, 內(nèi)容包括:1. 表示感謝;2. 回顧Alex對你的幫助;3. 臨別祝愿。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右;2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。練考場審題Step 1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱I(Li Hua), You(Alex)時態(tài)一般過去時,

32、 一般現(xiàn)在時段落布局開頭點(diǎn)題:點(diǎn)明寫作目的, 感謝對方幫助主題段落:具體指出曾經(jīng)的幫助結(jié)尾:再次表達(dá)感謝, 給出臨別祝愿Step 2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉(1)美詞: have difficulty in, under your patient guidance, not only. . . but also. . . , generous(2)佳句I can well remember there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English. It is you who taught me how to learn English w

33、ell. Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning. Step 3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點(diǎn)1:你教給我如何學(xué)英語。一般表達(dá):You taught me how to learn English. 句式升級 (強(qiáng)調(diào)句)是你教給我如何學(xué)英語。It is you who taught me how to learn English. 要點(diǎn)2:你幫助我提高了英語并且給了我更多學(xué)習(xí)的自信。一般表達(dá):You helped improve my English and gave

34、me more confidence in learning. 句式升級 (倒裝句)你不但幫助我提高了英語, 并且給了我更多學(xué)習(xí)的自信。Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning. Step 4:銜接過渡 斐然成篇Dear Alex, Ive heard that youre leaving China soon, so Im writing to express my sincere blessing and thanks. I can well remember

35、 there was a time when I had difficulty in learning English. It is you who taught me how to learn English. Under your patient guidance, I gradually made progress and began interested in English. Not only did you help improve my English, but also gave me more confidence in learning. Thanks again for

36、your generous help. Wish you a pleasant journey home. Yours, Li Hua假設(shè)你是李華, 梁教授去年六月推薦你去悉尼大學(xué)深造, 現(xiàn)在你已經(jīng)被悉尼大學(xué)化學(xué)學(xué)院錄取, 請寫封信向梁教授表示感謝。1. 表示感謝;2. 感謝原因;3. 如何回報。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右;2. 可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。_【參考范文】Dear Professor Liang, I am writing to extend my gratitude to you because with your help I am now a student of Ch

37、emistry Department of Sydney University. Last June, when I applied to become a graduate student of Sydney University, you really gave me a lot of valuable help. Not only did you write commendation for me to Professor Wells who works in the Sydney University, but also gave me careful and patient inst

38、ructions on how to fill the application forms and write the application letters. It is your unreserved help that enables me to obtain this splendid opportunity of further education. For the following two years I will study hard to reciprocate your sincere help and expectations with excellent grades.

39、 Yours, Li Hua類型五 申請信(2019全國卷)假定你是李華, 暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí), 得知當(dāng)?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展覽。請寫一封信申請做志愿者, 內(nèi)容包括:1. 寫信目的;2. 個人優(yōu)勢;3. 能做的事情。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。練考場審題Step 1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱I(Li Hua), Sir/Madam時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時, 一般將來時段落布局開頭點(diǎn)題:問候并說明寫信的原因及目的主題段落:分兩點(diǎn)闡述為什么申請做志愿者:個人優(yōu)勢;能做的事情結(jié)尾:衷心的祝愿Step 2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉(1)美詞:apply for position, be q

40、ualified for, as follows, specific introduction, furthermore, share. . . with. . . (2)佳句I have heard the Chinese painting exhibition is to be held, and Im writing this letter to apply for a volunteer position. The reasons why Im qualified for the job are as follows. Furthermore, I can speak fluent C

41、hinese and English at the same time, which makes it no problem for me to help visitors from all over the world. If Im chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them. Step 3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點(diǎn)1:我有一些勝任這份工作的

42、原因。一般表達(dá):I have some reasons to be qualified for the job. 句式升級(定語從句)我勝任這份工作的原因如下。The reasons why Im qualified for the job are as follows. 要點(diǎn)2:如果你們給我這份工作, 我將盡最大努力去幫助參觀者。一般表達(dá):If you give me this job, I will do my best to help the visitors. 句式升級(被動語態(tài), 虛擬語氣)如果我能被選為志愿者, 我有能力去幫助參觀者理解繪畫作品, 并與他們分享在繪畫后面的歷史。If

43、 Im chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings with them. Step 4:銜接過渡斐然成篇Dear sir/ Madam, Im Li Hua, a Chinese student having education in London now. I have heard the Chinese painting exhibition is to

44、be held, and Im writing this letter to apply for a volunteer position. The reasons why Im qualified for the job are as follows. Firstly, I have had an interest in Chinese painting ever since I was a child. As a result, I am familiar with this art form and can give very specific introduction to the v

45、isitors. Furthermore, I can speak fluent Chinese and English at the same time, which makes it no problem for me to help visitors from all over the world. If Im chosen to be a volunteer, I would be able to help the visitors understand the paintings and share the history behind those Chinese paintings

46、 with them. Thank you for your time. Hope to hear from you soon! Yours, Li Hua假定你是李華, 你校英語協(xié)會招聘志愿者, 接待來訪的國外中學(xué)生。請你寫信應(yīng)聘, 內(nèi)容包括:1. 口語能力;2. 相關(guān)經(jīng)驗(yàn);3. 應(yīng)聘目的。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。_【參考范文】Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English assoc

47、iation. I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. Whats more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students. Im particularly interested in this job because I want to further im

48、prove my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills. Hopefully I can receive your acceptance. Yours faithfully, Li Hua類型六 告知信(2019全國卷改編)假定你是校排球隊(duì)隊(duì)長李華。請寫封郵件告知你的隊(duì)友Chris球隊(duì)近期將參加的比賽, 內(nèi)容包括:1. 比賽信息;2. 賽前準(zhǔn)備;3. 表達(dá)期待。注意:1. 詞數(shù)80左右;2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié), 以使行文連貫。練考場審題Step 1:精準(zhǔn)審題謀篇布局人稱I(Li Hua), You(Ch

49、ris)時態(tài)一般現(xiàn)在時, 一般將來時段落布局開頭點(diǎn)題:寫明比賽信息, 包括比賽時間和地點(diǎn)主題段落:賽前準(zhǔn)備什么, 是否需要訓(xùn)練結(jié)尾:期待Chris能夠積極參加Step 2:頭腦風(fēng)暴字字珠玉(1)美詞:schedule, take an active part in, make full preparations for, adapt to, favourable(2)佳句As is scheduled, the match will take place at 8:00 am on Saturday at our school playground this weekend and I hop

50、e you could take an active part in it. Whats more, carrying some hot water is necessary so that you can drink it before or after the match. Step 3:斟酌詞句妙筆生花要點(diǎn)1:我們計劃本周六上午八點(diǎn)在操場上舉行比賽。一般表達(dá):We plan to hold the match at 8:00 am on Saturday at our school playground this weekend. 句式升級(定語從句, 賓語從句)按照計劃, 比賽將于本周

51、六上午八點(diǎn)在學(xué)校操場舉行, 并且我希望你能積極參加。As is scheduled, the match will take place at 8:00 am on Saturday at our school playground this weekend and I hope you could take an active part in it. 要點(diǎn)2:你最好帶些熱水, 以便賽前賽后喝。一般表達(dá):Youd better carry some hot water so that you can drink it before or after the match. 句式升級(動名詞作主語)并且?guī)崴呛苡斜匾? 以便你賽前賽后喝。Whats more, carrying some hot water is necessary so that you can drink it before or after the match. Step 4:銜接過渡斐然成篇Dear Chris, Im Li Hua. Im glad to tell you some information about volleyball match. As is scheduled, the match will take place at 8:00 am on Saturday at our