初中英語素材中考英語作文模板作文病句和錯句修改

1、中考英語作文 模板 作文病句和錯句修改 中考英語作文 英語作文模板：圖表作文的框架 as is shown/indicated/illustrated by the figure/percentage inthe table(graph/picture/pie/chart),_ 作文題目的議題 has been on rise/ decrease (goesup/increases/drops/decreases), significantly/dramatically/steadily rising/decreasing from in to in . From the sharp/mark

2、ed decline/ rise in the chart, it goes without saying that . There are at least two good reasons accounting for . On the one hand, . On the other hand, is due to the fact that . In addition, is responsible for _.Maybe there are some other reasons to show . But it is generally believed that the above

3、 mentioned reasons are commonly convincing. As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that I am sure my opinion is both sound and well-grounded. 中考英語作文 英語作文模板：實用性寫作 ( 申請信 ) Your address Month, Date, year Receivers address Dear ., I am extremely pleased to hear from you./ to see your adverti

4、sement for the position in And I would like to write a letter to tell you that./ I am confident that I am suitable for the kind of the job you are advertising. listed. On convenience. ./ I feel I am competent to meet the requirements you have the one hand, On the other hand, I am enclosing my resume

5、 for your kind consideration and reference. I shall be much obliged if you will offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. I will greatly appreciate a response from you at your earliest convenience/ I amlooking forward to your replies at your earliest Best regards for your health and success.

6、Sincerely yours, X X X 中考英語作文 英語作文模板：現象說明文 Recently ,what amazes us most is,it is ture that There are many reasons explaining.The main reason is. what is more.thirdly .As a result. Considering all there,.For one thing ,for another .In Conclusion. 一種事物或現象（負面意義傾向） 關于A的話題，早已引起了廣泛的社會關注。如今在電視、報紙、日常生活的很多角

7、落， 都有越來越多的關于 A的議論。 給 A 一個精確恒定的定義并非易事，因為它的概念涉及了科學、人性、思想、經濟、社 會、自然等廣闊的領域。一般而言，我們可以這樣描述A A能成為公眾關注的焦點，主要是由于它對個人、集體乃至整個世界都有著不容忽視的 不良影響。 認真分析后我們可以看到， A對社會/世界/健康的不利有很多。首先，從最直觀的角 度來看，A的出現直接損害了 （這里加入一句針對性的話， 如人類的身體健康和環(huán)境的平衡） 。 （舉例）。其次，從更深一層次上講，它為人類的精神文明蒙上了一層陰影。更可怕的是， 由于A所產生微小利益，卻促成了許多可悲的人們?yōu)槠渫跛?，破壞了人類生存的法則和 空

8、間。 事實上，A的出現是社會發(fā)展和人類進步的產物，A所帶來的危害是人類進化過程中付 出的代價。同時，A的產生來源于部分人們的自私和趨利性，他們看到的是膚淺和片面的利 益，而從未從整個全局和人類整體的利益出發(fā)去認識和分析它。這使得A始終揮之不去。對 此，我奉勸他們，跳出狹小的角落，用長遠和全局的眼光去重新審視A。 而如今，我們已深受其害， 要想消除它的危害，我們必須從根源上杜絕它的產生， 我們 每一個人都應給予 A高度的重視，用系統(tǒng)的和科學的方法去解決， 唯有這樣，避免它帶來更 多損失，我們人類前進的腳步才會更加平穩(wěn)，更加歡快的邁向輝煌的明天。 初中英語作文病句和錯句修改 下面的英語句子都是出自

9、 朗文國際 三冊和四冊的學生作文 ， 不是病句就是錯句 . 讓 我們用銳利的眼睛 ， 一起來找茬吧 . 1. We have computer class one week a time. 2. Go into my school， you can see many flowers. 3. There have 100 books. 4. I study there very happy. 5. I usually swimming there. 6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees. 7. Several h

10、ours after, he was surprised. 8. He had to asked the other one. 9. He thought he speak well. 10. Mr. Li is come from Beijing . 11. He was very hardly. He likes studying Chinese. 12. This film is very good-looking . 13. It is very good to family look. 14. I think we can t live Internet. 15. People us

11、e the net to send the mails has the most people. 16. I have a future dream. 17. It can help me to walk on my life road. 18. I think everything must be change a lot. 19. I just wonder what does my future like and what should I do. 20. But I singing not very well. 21. Tom s mum didn t care him. 22. Al

12、most students use the computer not study. 23. Send mail is most of people like to do in the net. 24. When I was very small. 初中英語作文病句和錯句修改 怎么樣 , 找出錯誤沒有啊 . 下面我們來看看要怎么改正吧 1. I have computer class once a week. 英語中表達頻率次數時 : 一次 once, 兩次 twice 從三次開始用 three times . 2. Going into my school, you can see many

13、flowers. 這里使用動名詞 going 做主語 , go 這個動作由后面的 you 發(fā)出. 3. There are 100 books. 表示某個地方有什么 , 一般使用 There be 的存在句型 . 4. I study there very happily. Study 是個動詞 , 表示動作的程度要使用副詞 , 不可以用形容詞 happy. 5. I usually swim there. -ing 結尾的動名詞不可以單獨做句子的謂語 . 6. I forget said this, our school wall beside has many trees. 這個句子的表達

14、和語法上都有問題 . 如果單從中文意思來看 , 大家都明白他在說什么 , 但是要是讓外教來批改 , 估計他會無盡的苦惱了 . 所以我們在不失句子原意的基礎上 , 使用正 確的語法 . 該句子的表達應該為 : By the way, there are many flowers beside our school wall. 7. Several hours later, he was surprised. 使用 after 時 ,不能放在時間表達語的后面 . 8. He had to ask the other one. “Have to do something ” 是固定用法 , 不定式后

15、用動詞原形 . 9. He thought he spoke well. 這個句子屬于語法時態(tài)的不一致 10. Mr. Li is from Beijing . 一個英語句子中不能有兩個謂語動詞 . 11. He studies very hard. He likes studying Chinese. 首先要區(qū)分 hard 和 hardly. 雖然兩個都可以做副詞 ,但在意思上有很大的區(qū)別 . He works very hard. 他工作很努力 He hardly works. 他幾乎不工作 . 這個兩個表達相差很大 其次 ,be 動詞后面不能使用副詞 . 12. This film is

16、 very interesting. 這是一個完全中文式的英語句子 . good-looking一般用來形容人物的 . 13. It is fit for family to enjoy. 又是一個中文式的句子 , 14. I think we can t live Internet. 學生想要表達的是不要過分依賴因特網 . 不改變原意的基礎上 , 我們修改為 : I think we can t rely on Internet. 15. Most people use the net to send the mails. 這是一個要表達比例的英語句子 . 學生在這里做了一個中文句子的”強行

17、”翻譯. 16. I have a dream about future. Future 在這里不可以直接修飾 dream. 17. It can help me to walk on my life s journey. “人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含義，不可用“road ”來表達。 18. I think everything keeps on changing. 不細心看這個句子 ,我完全不了解他想表達什么 . 但從上下文來推測 ,我想他想表達世事 在變化的意思 . 19. I just wonder what my future likes and what I should do. 賓語從句要使用正常語序 20. But I don t sing very well. 動名詞不可以單獨做謂語動詞使用 . 一般現在時的句子表否定 , 如果是實意動詞需要有 do 來幫忙 . 21. Tom s mum didn t care about him. Care 是個不及物的動詞，不可以直接加賓語。 22. Almost of the students use the computer not to study. 一個句子中間只能有一個謂語動詞。 23. Send mail is most of people like to do