病句的分析與修改（The error analysis and modification）

1、病句的分析與修改（The error analysis and modification）Discrimination and correction of the error of Chinese senior high school entrance examination breakthrough1. of the following sentences modify is not correct ()Since middle school, A. has always participated in the school track and field team training.Ame

2、ndment: delete always, or delete always.B. has strengthened her confidence through the violin competition.Amendment: delete pass, or delete make.C., who was retired, was both physically and physically strong.Change: robust to abundant.D. we should use all the outstanding achievements of mankind to s

3、erve the motherland construction.Revise: put everything in the back of human.I have 2. the following sentences is a (), please modify the sentences on the.A. we should always keep in mind the traffic regulations, to ensure the safety for yourself and others, do civilized people secure way.B. our hea

4、dmaster is very young, about thirty years old.C. we have to believe in our ability to be confident before all kinds of tests.D. experts point out that too little exercise is the main cause of obesity.3. symbols are used to revise the following sentences, each sentence is only a change. (change numbe

5、r, add number, delete number, position number)The summer is a good time to study Xiandao lake, people enjoy the cool summer, reading.In order to avoid the tsunami after outbreaks of infectious diseases in the world, and India ocean affected by regional and local governments made great efforts.4. rea

6、d a shopping mall below: 51 golden week small activities advertising fragments, complete the related topics.During the event, for the care and love of our customers to thank us for many years, the mall will benefit 500 thousand yuan reward consumers; provide door-to-door service for B C D at the sam

7、e time the mall will A to buy large appliances in the customer.(1) the text line sentence should be changed to happen:(2) in order to make the semantics clear, the word free should be added to A, B, C and D.5. modify the following words in line statement, the semantic coherence, no errors.Time is a

8、magic and merciless carving knife, creating wonders between heaven and earth. It can put the ice melts into water to support a tree seedlings. Of course, it can turn gardens into deserts, and a transforms ruins into cities. You cherish it, it is around you grow green, bears heavy fruit; you ignore i

9、t, it turns to smoke, B disappeared disappeared.Correction:A:B:6. the following sentences she didnt do is (a) (2)A. class 2009 started a speech with the theme of smile for mother.B. solidarity is the key to success.C. through the mighty grace, the Chongqing Bachuan middle school have higher visibili

10、ty.D. when I was studying abroad, I only published a few bad articles in magazines.7. the following is a student in a middle school in Lanzhou in the composition of words, two sentences have underlined wording in the original sentence, please modify. (3 points)The wonderful campus art festival stimu

11、lated the enthusiasm of the students to participate actively. In the festival, the students give full play to their strengths. Through this activity, the students of art can be greatly improved.8. Zhang Ting classmate wrote the following message for our school radio station, please help her to make

12、changes. (3 points)Liu Peng of our class was honored as saving star on campus. Since the implementation of the save with me since he responded positively, not only their own austerity, and several students also spontaneously organized a conservation action group, A undertake the obligations of super

13、visors to save water and electricity, greatly reduce the waste of class. In addition, he also tried to pick up the class mobilization cans, mineral water bottles, packing boxes and other waste, to sell scrap charge money to do expense, save money.B Liu Pengs behavior in the class produced a good dem

14、onstration, received the praise of teachers and students.The A phrase collocation, can be changed to .The B sentence is incomplete, in the add one word.9. in the following sentences, she didnt do a sentence is ()A. in the process of the construction of the Three Gorges Dam, the workers no matter wha

15、t kind of difficulties encountered, but they can break, walk the line.Under the rude interference of the train conductor, Edisons wish to sell the newspaper on the train was dashed by.C. China Disabled Peoples art troupe performed a large musical dance my dream in Hongkong, which was warmly welcomed

16、 by the audience.D. in order to prevent the outbreak of SARS is no longer rebound, the city leaders require all units to further strengthen the management, to develop strict preventive measures.10. in the following sentences, the sentence is (a)A. bean and river grass on both sides of the river, mix

17、ed in the water blowing in the face.B. the Japanese militarist aggression China, all extremely brutal committed atrocities have been forever in the history of shame.C. flowers and people will encounter all kinds of misfortune, but the long river of life is endless.D. my mother was very miserable abo

18、ut our straitened lives.11. in the following sentences, she didnt do a sentence is ()A. through the joint efforts of everyone, SARS epidemic has been slowly controlled.B. should cultivate our students into both rich knowledge and noble quality.C. from the day he went to school, Chinese had a strong

19、interest in him.D. I made my mothers smiling face and a sentence of words absorbed into the lens to make album.12. in the following sentences, she didnt do a sentence is ()A. has built the Beishan Mountain into a provincial Forest Park, which is an important project for the local government to imple

20、ment the strategy of sustainable development.The annual generating capacity of B. power station is not only supplied to Hangzhou, but also transported to Shanghai, Nanjing and other places.C. Zibianziyan drama in the development of personality, guide the students to read the masterpiece, have a cert

21、ain effect.D. Street hopes to vigorously carry out legal education through various channels to prevent teenagers from breaking the law and breaking the law.13. in the following sentences, she didnt do a sentence is ()A. he was very angry at his carelessness.B. monitor is proposed to carry out the ac

22、tivities of teacher use of the winter vacation, we have to go along.C. the meeting took place less than twenty-four hours after the delegation arrived in Beijing.D. I dont think anyone can deny the negative impact of meteor garden, even though its very popular with teenage boys and girls.14. in the

23、original and peer assessment table Gansu composition, made the following correction, choose a correcting incorrect ()A.: the original stone garden, on the ridge, sat a few nose in holding the book of students.(comment: Carrie is one of the many means, students are written. Should delete the numerous

24、, students to students).B. Original: woodworking room came knocking, the carpenter Master Zhang in the repair desk, he is a clever and imaginative person.(comment: ingenuity refers to the ingenious conception, unique to describe the ingenious and unique artistic conception, should be deleted.)Origin

25、al: C. saw some children laughing off the flowers, throw in the ground, I was rushed to, regardless of personal danger to scold them.(comment: anger and the meaning is too heavy, regardless of personal danger should be modified or deleted.)D.: the little naughty hands are holding hands and staggerin

26、g away.(comment: a describe walk slowly swing, should be changed into Yili, to show their mistake after the guilty mood.)15. in the following sentences, she didnt do a sentence is ()A. Beijing city will strive to improve the ecological environment, to ensure the Green Olympics requirements for envir

27、onmental quality in Beijing.B.s performance through the Chinese mens football team,Its important to recognize that its good to have a good attitude.During the period of C. fifteen, the state will focus on the development of five high-tech zones, and the two high-tech zones in Xian and Yangling provi

28、nces are all in them.D. our newspapers, TV, Internet and propaganda media are more responsible to set an example and stop the nonstandard use of words.16. in the following sentences, she didnt do a sentence is ()A. as we entered the stadium, we saw many flags and cheers.B. Wang is full of confidence

29、 in his ability to learn computer well.C. reading is an important way to understand the world and develop thinking.D. brother is not only thin, but also full of spirit.17. the words used in the following sentences are not appropriateA. Harmony: the teacher always has a kind and friendly smile on his

30、 face.B. surprised: listen to this sudden news, everyone is surprised.C. staggers: looking at the tottering father, my tears welled up.D wreak havoc: most of the northern part of China in the spring breeze sand raging, once again aroused peoples attention to environmental protection.18. in the follo

31、wing sentences, she didnt do a sentence is ()A. principal asked famous mathematicians to teach students how to deal with the problems encountered in their studies.B. this novel perfectly shapes the glorious deeds of a Communist Party member.The political situation of C. stability and unity is the ke

32、y to the success or failure of Chinas socialist modernization drive.D. dust blows from degraded grassland and dry land around some deserts in Inner Mongolia and reaches Beijing and Tianjin via Hebei.19. the right thing to say is ()A. the education of the party and the government made me recognize an

33、d correct the mistake of practicing Falun gong.B. the education of the party and the government made me correct and recognize the mistake of practicing Falun gong.C. under the education of the party and the government, I corrected and realized the mistake of practicing Falun gong.Under the education

34、 of the party and the government, D. made me know and correct the mistakes of practicing Falun gong.20. in the following sentences, she didnt do a sentence is ()A. please dont take this matter to heart.B. he has been interested in astronomy and Mathematics for a long time.C. tells us from a lot of f

35、acts that environmental disasters have no borders.D. not only his composition in the coming to the fore, and often in the top of the class.21. in the following sentences, she didnt do a sentence is ()A. through our joint efforts, so that we completed the production of class web work.Whether B. has g

36、ood psychological quality is one of the conditions for the examination to achieve good results.In the C.21 century, a large number of intellectuals with scientific culture are needed to build their motherland.D. in learning and practice, we should be good at using scientific learning methods.22. in

37、the following sentences, she didnt do a sentence is ()A. as the founder of Chinese ink freehand painting, Xu Weis artistic achievements have been recorded in the history of the world painting.B. the Chinese youth in the new century should set up the courage to shoulder the fear and march forward cou

38、rageously.The formulation of the Tenth Five Year Plan of C. is the general blueprint for the development of China in the next five years, and is the direction and goal of the National Peoples efforts.D. a person is bound to make no mistakes in his work. It is not important to make mistakes. The key

39、is how to treat the mistakes correctly.She didnt do the following 23. lines in the four sentence is ()At the beginning of the class meeting, A. Lin was the first to speak on the stage. He said: B. my poor language is because there is no extracurricular time reading extracurricular book results. I am

40、 determined to learn from Zhang Hong, C. reads at least 2000 words a day, and strive to write reading experience every day. D. Lin not speak, won the enthusiastic applause of the students.24. the following is Xiaoming class to give him the phone to say a few words, crossed part of some mistakes and

41、correct some improper expression.Xiao Ming, you still in order to meet the upcoming anniversary for our young Chinese society to write the manuscript! Genre is not limited, poetry, prose, essays can be. Also ask you to mobilize more students to contribute in the class. You see,There are ten classmat

42、es in our class, and even I handed in the manuscript. You can write the manuscript to me, and I give you advice. Please note that the deadline until the end of the month.Correct: _The _The _The _25. revise the following sentences.The teacher to train us, really, and deliberately plan.The Yang Lin st

43、udents in the school not only Chinese achievement is very outstanding, but also among the best in my class.26. the following text of three words, each has a language problem, please modify.The Beijing Olympic Organizing Committee recently held a press conference, announced in April 15th this year, h

44、eld the first session of the Olympic songs collection activities. Collection activities will be held for 5 consecutive sessions, each selected 10 songs into the Beijing Olympic theme song candidate songs. These songs are widely sung by people from all walks of life, and finally determine a song that

45、 fully embodies the Chinese cultural characteristics and the Olympic spirit, as the theme song of the 2008 Beijing Olympic games.27. the following two sentences are inappropriate collocation, inappropriate, please correct in the original sentence.The Hu Dayong students study hard, good grades, when

46、the school pacesetter honorary title.The president met with visiting the provincial peoples Congress, and introduced the school moral education work to them.28. the following two sentences, each with a speech, please amend.The senior high school entrance examination soon, every candidates are ready

47、for the exams.After the comprehensive improvement of the previous stage, the city garbage problem has changed.29. below is a class of students to the community proposed a paragraph of writing, painting line part of the problem, please modify the line below.Now is the season of planting, yinianzhijiz

48、aiyuchun, therefore, we put forward the following requirements: the community and the majority of citizens to respond positively to the afforestation, the benefit of future generations of the call to the hometown devoted to greening and beautifying the environment; everyone from a tree, a seedling s

49、tart to consciously practise civic obligation; we should be brave to be green, dare to stop the destruction of green behavior, dare to undermine the social order behavior of the struggle. Let us sweat trees, build a beautiful home.The _The _The _The _The _30. revise the following sentences.It is sec

50、urity, which is one of the important conditions at the World Cup soccer tournament success in South Korea and Japan to ensure.The recently at the Beijing International High Tech Expo, a new nano battery for a lot of the audiences eyes.31. in the following passage and line four sentence is not gramma

51、tical or inappropriate, please correct them.Thank you for joining me at my 13 birthday party. I saw the birthday gifts from many of the people on the table, and I recalled the past. I especially remember my deskmate Zhang Xiaobo, he is a nice little fat! In order to help me study mathematics, he gav

52、e up the pre Olympic training. With his help, I have made great achievements in mathematics.The _The _The _The _32. the following text is selected from a classmates speech. Please point out the mistake and write the modification method.Students, we can not forget,There have been many people who are

53、actuated by high ideals even shed blood, and struggle for the rise and fall of the motherland; we can not always indulge in what I do not state the world of the Great Wall and the four great inventions. As the builders of the motherland in twenty-first Century, we will not be responsible for the res

54、ponsibility, but we must not forget, when the oath of the young pioneers - ready, ready at all times.The _ should be _.The _ should be _.The _ should be _.The _ should be _.33. modify the following sentences.The development of the productive forces of socialist countries on the objective is to impro

55、ve the peoples level of production.The Japanese even repeatedly beautify aggression, but can not cover up the truth of history.34. modify the following sentences.In todays study, what we lack is not cleverness, but lack of effort and perseverance.Draw a line 35. following a paragraph in part of speech, please correct in the original text.One of the programs aired by the tourism satellite in May 4th was protested by many animal protectors. In this episode, a cat was dropped from the four flo