高一書面表達賞析與速寫2

1、守諾言 為了紀念 頒給某人一等獎 因為 而仰慕某人 被覆蓋 與朋友玩的開心 出現(xiàn) 提醒某人某事 因為而原諒某人 做某事而不受懲罰 對做出解釋 由于 說謊 謀生 怒視 對.有益 裁減 一個成功的事例 培養(yǎng) 以為基礎(chǔ) 以為背景 以出名 一個被廣泛接受的理論 有機會做 挺過一個月 意外地 老實說 相反地 被預(yù)定、 冒險 用粗魯?shù)姆绞?盼望 對是基礎(chǔ)的，基本的， 擋住光線 取決于 仍是個迷 心碎 感到沮喪 厭倦 從心底感激你 好奇地 對.感到驚訝 感到高興；感到振奮 看書著迷了 穿著紅色大衣 衣衫襤褸的男子 帶著笑容的女孩 心碎 感到沮喪 厭倦 從心底感激你 好奇地 對.感到驚訝 感到高興；感到振奮

2、看書著迷了 穿著紅色大衣 衣衫襤褸的男子 帶著笑容的女孩 心碎 感到沮喪 厭倦 從心底感激你 好奇地 對.感到驚訝 感到高興；感到振奮 看書著迷了 穿著紅色大衣 衣衫襤褸的男子 帶著笑容的女孩 心碎 感到沮喪 厭倦 從心底感激你 好奇地 對.感到驚訝 感到高興；感到振奮 看書著迷了 穿著紅色大衣 衣衫襤褸的男子 帶著笑容的女孩 心碎 感到沮喪 厭倦 從心底感激你 好奇地 對.感到驚訝 感到高興；感到振奮 看書著迷了 穿著紅色大衣 衣衫襤褸的男子 帶著笑容的女孩 心碎 感到沮喪 厭倦 從心底感激你 好奇地 對.感到驚訝 感到高興；感到振奮 看書著迷了 穿著紅色大衣 衣衫襤褸的男子 帶著笑容的女孩

3、 心碎 感到沮喪 厭倦 從心底感激你 好奇地 對.感到驚訝 感到高興；感到振奮 看書著迷了 穿著紅色大衣 衣衫襤褸的男子 帶著笑容的女孩 擔心；提防 高一書面表達賞析與速寫高一書面表達賞析與速寫 開課班級：高一（開課班級：高一（4） 開課時間：開課時間：2016. 4. 12 1.The child jumped with joy as soon as the child saw the new toy . _ _ the new toy , child jumped with joy. 2. Our school is in the centre of the town , so It at

4、tracts more and more students . _（位于）（位于）in the centre of the town , the school attracts more and more students . Conclusion： 添加副詞、介詞短語、非謂語動詞等，改變一個句子的開頭,扮靚 句子。 1.我回家發(fā)現(xiàn)我家被洗劫一空 2.“不入虎穴，焉得虎子” 3.中國的長城象巨龍一樣縱橫中華大地，它從西到東蜿蜒前行，穿過沙 漠，越上山峰，隱入山谷，最后匯入海洋。 If you want to achieve great success in life, sometimes yo

5、u need to face challenges and even take risks. The Great Wall of China runs _ China like a huge dragon .It winds its way from west to east ,_ desert,_ mountains _ villages and till it at last _ the sea. On my arrival , I found everything in my house gone. Conclusion：遇到難以表達的，可以偶爾采取 解釋、簡化、甚至含糊意譯等方式去處理

6、 。 段落寫作 （一） 為什么能成功？ 有人認為是因為勤奮；有人認為是因為天賦；有人認為是 因為教育；有人認為是因為運氣 “貫徹不重復原則” 行文中嘗試應(yīng)用同義詞，或意思相近的短語 Some people _ he is successful because of his hard work. Some people _his talent as a main factor of his success. Its also _that the good education he has received lead to his success. But some people _that he

7、 has achieved success on account of his good luck. 表示原因： because consider as a main factor of Lead to On account of = as a result of =because of beautiful， fantastic, impressive, unique, amazing splendid, awesome, 辦公室倆個女生吵得不可開交，顏段長嚴肅地說：“吵什 么？把吵架的原因說清楚”，倆個美女爭先恐后地各執(zhí)一詞。 “夠了”，段長忍無可忍，大吼一聲，“丑的先說”，頓時， 世界安靜

8、了！勸架也需要智慧。 注意形容詞和副詞累積、巧用； 增強語境，拓展文意 段落寫作 （二） 辦公室倆個女生吵得不可開交，顏段長嚴肅地說：“吵什么？把吵架的 原因說清楚”，倆個美女爭先恐后地各執(zhí)一詞?！皦蛄恕?，段長忍無可 忍，大吼一聲，“丑的先說”，頓時，世界安靜了！勸架也需要智慧。 Two girls in the office were quarreling _. Tell me the reason for the quarrel , Mr. Yan spoke _. The two beautiful girls were both _ to speak first. Thats enou

9、gh! Mr. Yan felt _and roared , “The ugly, speak first!” _,it came to be a quiet world! To stop a quarrel also needs wisdom. 小詞巧用，最能體現(xiàn)出一個學生的寫作功力。形容詞和副 詞的大量積累，不是一兩天就能一蹴而就的。 Two girls in the office were quarreling noisily and violently . Tell me the reason for the quarrel , Mr. Yan spoke seriously. The

10、 two beautiful girls were both eager to speak first. Thats enough! Mr. Yan felt unbearable and roared , “The ugly, speak first!” Immediately, it came to be a quiet world! To stop a quarrel also needs wisdom. 小詞巧用，最能體現(xiàn)出一個學生的寫作功力。形容詞和副 詞的大量積累，不是一兩天就能一蹴而就的。 the first（extremely）small plants It was not (

11、immediately) obvious that dinosaurs (gradually )died out (strongly) suggest that I (firmly) believe that I (sincerely) hope that as is (vividly) shown in the picture 段落寫作 （三） 高一課業(yè)負擔很重，學習壓力很大，作為同桌的你 會無私幫助學習有困難的同學嗎?(陳述2種原因即可） “目標分析法” 1、把一個話題化整為零，分解成多個小話題，再各個擊 破，去構(gòu)思和發(fā)展語篇。 2、拓展因果；拓展條件、目的或補充其他相關(guān)的信息 佳句（三班

12、同學） 1 1. As we know, everyone has his strengths and weaknesses 2. Besides, I make further progress when I help others 3.It is helpful to talk about problems in study with my friends. 4.It benefits me as well when I answer questions for my friends. 5.It is always good to share with my friends. 6.It i

13、s a pleasure to help others gain confidence after working out problems. 7.When I answer questions raised by others, I get further understanding as well, which is beneficial to my study. 8.While I explain to others, I benefit a lot from it as well. 9.It is a win-win. I want to pass on the positive en

14、ergy . In my opinion, if I am a top student in class. I will serve my classmate heart and soul .Reasons are as follows. First, it is known that everyone has his strengths and weaknesses .When I answer questions from my friends, I am making further understanding in study and thus I benefit from it as

15、 well. Besides, it is a pleasure to help others to get confidence ,which is easier to develop friendship in helping each other. I will spare my time to help my friends. By doing so, we make progress together. It will be a very pleasant experience. - 林事宏 Writing （ 20 分） 假如你是黃如論中學高一（4）班的一名學生，由于學習 習慣不好

16、導致基礎(chǔ)較差，學習很吃力。同桌近一年來給你很 多的鼓勵和學習上的幫助?，F(xiàn)在你寫封感謝信表達你的謝意。 感謝信三個部分 1.開頭要明確地表示謝意。 2.主體部分列舉對方提供的幫助，說明該幫助所起 的作用。 3.結(jié)尾部分再次表達誠摯的謝意并問候?qū)Ψ健?Para1簡短表示感謝簡短表示感謝 (短語：因為短語：因為而感謝而感謝) thank you for appreciate ones doing be grateful /thankful to sb. for express my deepest gratitude（感激之情） for Para2細述對方給予的幫助和對自己的影響細述對方給予的幫助和

17、對自己的影響 (常用句式）常用句式） It was nice/kind/thoughtful of you to do It was with your selfless help that Without your help I would not have done Para3再次表明謝意并表達回報愿望再次表明謝意并表達回報愿望（常用句式）（常用句式） thanks again for your generous help I appreciate it more than I can say Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, w

18、hich I will treasure for ever A thank you letter Dear_, 我寫這封信是為了表達我最真切的感激之情for the help you are offering to me. Thank you so much. At the beginning of Senior One , I had great difficulty in .沒有你的幫助，我早就輟學,再也沒有機會是在 你無私的幫助下，我重拾信心，并逐漸取得進步 Thank you again從我心底 Best wishes. Yours Sincerely, Li hua Summary 1.貫徹不重復原則 2.注意形容詞和副詞累積、巧用 3.改變一個句子的開頭，爭強