書面表達申請信

1、2017 屆高三書面表達專項訓練四：申請信書面表達解題步驟：1、審：審定體裁、題材、人稱、時態(tài)、結構等；2、編：編寫要點，按順序列出；3、寫：連詞成句，連句成文；4、查：查內容，查格式，查語法，查書寫等。申請信審題提示：1、審定體裁、題材：書信、申請2、審定人稱：第一和第二人稱3、審定時態(tài)：現在時，將來時4、審定要點：認識，優(yōu)勢，計劃5、審定結構： 可分為三或四段申請信篇章結構設計：第一段：自我介紹，信息來源，寫作目的第二、（三）段：申請理由及自身所具備的長處與優(yōu)點結束段：期望（要表達出真誠與委婉）常用表達法：第一段：自我介紹，信息來源，寫作目的I read with interest you

2、r advertisement and would like to take up the challenge asI am very in terested in your advertiseme nt forI am writ ing to apply forI wish to apply for the positi on ofI am writing to express my interest in I am very interested in the possibilities of working with your club as a teacher assistant.第二

3、、（三）段：申請理由及自身所具備的長處與優(yōu)點（ Main body ： How to show your advantages ability, good qualities, experience, personality, motivation, etc. ）1.1 have a good comma nd of很好地掌握了2. I have an in timate kno wledge of非常熟悉3. I am a very diligent student with a nice character and I am used to working as part of a tea

4、m.4. I have two years experience as 5. I have more thanyears of practical experienee.6. I obtained practical training in all aspects of7. I am outgoing and open-minded, which makes me.8. I am highly competent and self-motivated to w ork in 9. I have received quite a number of honours.10. I believe I

5、 have the qualifications and experience for the position.11. I think I am competent to meet your requirements.12. With good academic performance and sufficient practical experience, I feel I am the rightperson you are looking for.結束段：期望（要表達出真誠與委婉）1. I should be glad to have a personal interview.2. I

6、 am looking forward to your reply.3. I will appreciate it if you give me an interview.4. I should be grateful if I can get this opportunity.5.1 won der if it is possible for you to6. Thank you for considering my application. I am looking forward to meeting you in the near Future.高考真題范例：(1) 2006年全國卷I

7、I英語作文假定你是李華，亞洲冬季運動會將在你居住的地方舉辦，現正在招募志愿者，你希望成為其中一員。請按要求用英文給組委會寫一封信。內容應包括：1.個人情況：年齡，性別，學歷2. 個人條件：英語好，愛好體育，善于交際，樂于助人，熟悉本地情況3. 承諾：提供最佳服務注意：詞數100左右，開頭語已為你寫好；可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；Dear Sir / Madam:My n ame is Li Hua. I would like to work as a volun teer for the Win ter Asia n Games. I was quite excited whe n I he

8、ard the Asia n Win ter Games will be held in the city I live. My n ame is Li Hua. I am an 18-year-old boy stude nt in a senior middle school. And I want to be a volun teer for the games. I like En glish and sports very much. I like making friends and I am ready to help others. I can be a good interp

9、reter in every sports during the time. Hope the games will be a great success. Hope I will be chose n to be one.Yours faithfully,Li Hua(2) 2010年天津卷假設你是晨光中學的高中生李華。你校擬選拔一些優(yōu)秀學生，利用暑期到晨曦希望小學為學生輔導英語。你希望參加此活動。請根據以下提示，用英語給校評選組寫一封申請信:對此活動的認識（如對本人、學生及社會的益處等）個人優(yōu)勢（如性格、獨立生活能力、語言能力等）你的計劃（如怎樣進行輔導等）注意：1詞數不少于100 ；2.

10、可適當加入細節(jié)，以使內容充實、行文連貫；3信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入詞數。參考詞匯：晨曦希望小學Che nxi Hope SchoolDear Sir or Madam,I m Li Hua from Class One, Senior Two. As far as I am concerned, I believe to teach English for pupils from Chen Xi Hope School will be good for both the primary-school stude nts and the high-school stude nt tutor,

11、 which thus will result in substa ntial social ben efits.I thi nk I am qualified for being the pupils En glish coach, because I have good charactebeing independent in life and proficient in English. That s why I appoperlthe position. Ican join the in structive activity.My plan for coaching the pupil

12、s is to teach them by listening, speaking, reading and writing. What s more important is to stimulate their interests in leanning English as a foreignIan guage, creati ng a good lear ning en vir onmen t. I hope you can offer the opport uni ty.Yourssin cerely,Li Hua（3）2012年全國卷I假定你是李華，從互聯(lián)網（the In tern

13、et）上得知一個國際中學生組織將在新加坡（Singapore）舉辦夏令營，歡迎各國學生參加。請寫一封電子郵件申請參加。內容主要包括：1. 自我介紹（包括英語能力）2.參加意圖（介紹中國、了解其他國家）3.希望獲準。注意：1詞數100左右；2可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫3.郵件開頭和結尾已為你寫好Dear Sir or Madam,rm Li Hua, a middle school stude nt from Chin a. I read the announ ceme nt of the summercamp that you have posted on the Internet and

14、 I am interested in it. I know that you welcomestude nts from differe nt coun tries and rd like to take part in it. Ive bee n lear ning En glish for 10 years, and I speak flue nt En glish. What is more, Ill be able to tell stude nts from other coun tries about China and lear n about their coun tries

15、 as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Look ing forward to your reply! Best regards ！Yours,Li Hua（4）假設你是新華中學的學生李華，得知某英文報暑假招聘兼職記者，你有意應聘，請按下列要點給報社寫一封申請信。1.表示感興趣2.說明優(yōu)勢：知識能力、英語水平、合作精神、相關經歷3.希望得到回復注意：1.詞數：100左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫Dear Sir or Madam,I m student from Xinhua Middle

16、School. I mlad to learn that you want a fewpart-time English reporters. I m quite interested in it.I think I m fit for the job. As a student, I ve read a lot and have much knowledcmany fields. I m fond of English and do well in both speaking and writing. Besides, I get along with and enjoy work ing

17、together with others. Above all, I once worked as a reporterfor my school broadcast ing stati on. So Im sure I can do the job well if I get the positi on.I m looking forward to your reply.YoursfaithfullyLi Hua 高分書面表達自帶哪些特征(資深閱卷老師建議)1. 內容充實，要點全面考生可嘗試下面幾個步驟來避免審題偏差或遺漏要點：(1) 通讀提示要求，明確體裁、人稱和時態(tài)三大要素。(2) 圈劃

18、出內容要點，按一定順序用數字編好號。同時，要注意內容要點不一定全在內容提示中，可能會散布在書面表達要求及注意事項中。(3) 完成草稿后，再次核對所有內容要點，查漏補缺。2. 單詞書寫要正確，避免犯低級錯誤 首先考生在平時學習中要重視詞的拼寫，要養(yǎng)成邊讀、邊記憶、邊寫的“手、腦、眼” 并用的好習慣。其次學會歸納整理單詞，通過比較，強化記憶。最后務必把考試說明中的重要單詞 背誦出和默寫出，并做到靈活運用。3. 注重句型積累，打好語法基礎考生應該把簡單句的五種句型結構熟記，另外，根據書面表達評分標準，語法結構的 豐富性是決定一篇優(yōu)秀文章的關鍵。感嘆句、倒裝句、復合結構、強調句型、定語從句、 名詞性從

19、句、非謂語動詞、虛擬語氣等交替使用，可使文章的語言充滿層次感，從而較好 地體現出考生語言運用能力。4. 注意銜接緊湊，加強文章連貫性要想寫出一篇好文章，提高文章檔次，應增強文章邏輯性、 可讀性?？忌谄綍r要注 意連接詞的積累， 并盡量多地訓練把簡單句連成復雜句， 把不相關的幾個句子用連詞連接;多閱讀一些范在平時的寫作中，要隨時提醒自己用連接詞連接句子與句子、段落與段落 文，看文中如何把連接詞用得恰到好處。5. 盡量使用高級詞匯高級詞匯的使用是得高分必備條件之一， 能顯示出考生深厚的語言功底。 何為高級詞匯 呢就是多使用一些生動、具體、形象的詞語，具體原則如下：(1) 盡量用短語代替單詞。這可反

20、映出考生有較強的語言運用能力，避免詞語單調乏味。如： Can you bear his rudeness 可改為： Can you put up with/ live with his rudeness(2) 用新學的詞匯代替以前學的詞匯，換句話說，盡量用別人少用的詞匯。這樣可做到張 揚個性，標新立異。如： There is a mistake in your homework. 可改為： There exists a mistake in your homework.(3) 多用情感方面的詞語。如： luckily ， fortunately ， really， obviously ， to

21、 be honest ， wholeheartedly 等。這類詞語的使用可增強文章的醒目性和感染力，易引起閱卷老師 的共鳴。假如你是李華，從報紙上看到中老年英語培訓機構Mid . Senior ESCH面向高中畢業(yè)生招聘暑期兼職輔導員， 負責學員課間服務事項。 請根據下面的廣告內容用英語寫一份求 職信。ASSISITANTS WANTEDValuable chances are open for high school graduates who are good at English Their work is to tend the senior students during the break Requirements attached ：1Good at English2Experienced pri