2020-2021年中考英語書面表達試題和答案

1、2020-2021年中考英語書面表達試題和答案一、中考英語書面表達(含答案詳細解析)1 .書面表達隨著電子時代的到來，西方文化如潮水般涌來，中國傳統(tǒng)文化的傳承面臨著巨大的挑戰(zhàn)。有人認為學校應當開設傳統(tǒng)文化課(set up traditional culture classes ),但也有人認為沒有必要。假如你是 Mike,請你用英語寫一封郵件，給你校英文報投稿寫一篇短文，詞數(shù)80左右，談談你對開設傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more

2、about, spread, developYour suggestionDear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays.Yours, Mike【答案】Dear editor,As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the

3、 rapiddevelopment of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, it s necessary for schools toset up traditional culture classes.First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As C hinese, we shouldn t give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional cultu

4、re classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schoo

5、ls. Let schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours, Mike【解析】這是一篇給材料作文，談談我對開設傳統(tǒng)文化課的看法。結合所給材料，可知本 文主要考查一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，句子結構主要為系 表結構和動賓結構，注意一些常見句式的應用，比如： Chinese traditional culture is facing , it s necessary for schools to, we shouldn t, They can raise , it is of great importance to

6、 等句式的應用。寫作中注意運用代詞，注意多種句式交替運用。寫作中注 意敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。點睛：本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。開頭介紹了中國傳統(tǒng)文化面對的問題，接下來介紹我認為開設傳統(tǒng)文化課的必要性的原因，最后號召更多的學校開設傳統(tǒng)文化課。此處becauseof, in one s opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call。解這些詞組 的運用也讓文章增色不少。2 .安全對每個人都很重要。請根據(jù)以下信息內容提示，寫一篇關于校園安全的英語小短 文。提示：1.體育鍛煉3 .上下樓梯4 .交朋結友

7、5 .食品衛(wèi)生要求：1.語句通順，表達準確，內容連貫；2 .短文可以適當發(fā)揮；但要包含以上要點。3 .詞數(shù)：80100詞。短文開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially important to usstudents.【答案】 Safety has become the focus to us all. How to be safe at school is especially importantto us students. First, we shou

8、ld take care not to get ourselves injured while we are having sports.Second, There are too many students at school, and our hallways are too narrow. So don t crowd with each other especially when we go upstairs or downstairs. Or there may be an accident.Besides, we should be friendly and get on well

9、 with others, don t quarrel or even fight. Last butnot least , We should be careful to eat healthy food and keep away from junk food, which is harmful to our health.In a word, its important to remember these for us all.【解析】這是一篇給材料作文。結合要點提示，可知本文主要從三個方面進行敘述，注意圍繞要點 組織材料，適當發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內容確定主要句子的時態(tài)，及句式等重要內容。寫作

10、中注 意語義通順，符合邏輯關系。上下文之間可以適當使用連接詞。3.臨近畢業(yè)，學校在學習小組內開展了初中階段自評和組評活動，假設你是Moonlight小組的組長，請根據(jù)下面表格中的信息和提示，為你的組員Tommy進行綜合素質的評價，寫一份素質報告.NameTommyCharacteristics聰明、大方（各舉一例）Hobbies喜歡看書，認為看書有很多好處（請列舉2個好處）Honour他在家?guī)椭黾覄?。在學校和同學相處融洽。上學途中遵守交通規(guī)則（舉一例）。今年，學校授予了他優(yōu)秀學生獎（Award for Best Student）Problems面臨考試，遭受壓力痛苦，他沒有充足的睡眠.You

11、r suggestions(根據(jù)實際情況提2點建議)要求：1、表達清楚、語法正確、上下文連貫；2、要點必須包括所有相關信息，并作適當發(fā)揮；3、詞數(shù)：100詞左右；4、不得使用真實姓名、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】 Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his fri

12、ends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on children s growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets on well with his classmates. On the way to school, he obeys the traf

13、fic rules. He crosses the road when the light is green. Our school presented him with Award for Best Student this year.However, Tommy is stressed when the exam comes. And he doesn t have enough sleep.I think he should go over what he has learned before exams. I t s better for him to manage his time

14、wisely so that he can have enough time to rest.【解析】這篇作文要求我們按照表格里的內容介紹一下Tommy的情況，為Tommy寫一篇綜合素質的評價報告。在表格中有非常詳細的關于Tommy各方面的內容，我們需要用正確的英語把這些內容有條理的表達出來。表格中涉及的內容較多，寫作時要注意表達的條理性。這篇 作文應主要使用第三人稱來寫。在最后要給Tommy提一些建議，這一部分應該用第一人稱。同時注意表達的準確性，尤其是表格中的第五項和第六項內容。【亮點說明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇作文內容完整，包含了表格中的所有內容，沒有遺漏要點。表達準確，注意了被動

15、形式的使用，如 He was rewarded by our school this year.o寫作時注意了條理性，使文章具有層次感，條理清楚。短文注意到了長短句的結合，并恰當?shù)氖褂昧艘恍┻B詞，使文章表達的連貫。如 He is always ready to help others. He not only likes reading detective novels but also likes watching programs about sports news.、 He is good at running. He won the first place in our school

16、sports meeting this year. 等。4.書面表達共享單車(shared bikes)在蘇州投入使用以來，給人們帶來了諸多便利，受到人們的追捧，改變了人們的出行方式，但同時也遇到了一些挑戰(zhàn)，是國民素質的照妖鏡，請你根據(jù)表格中信息的提示，給21世紀英文報寫一篇關于共享單車看法的稿件。社會現(xiàn)狀自從出現(xiàn)，飽受贊譽。1.隨處可見，出行方便諸多優(yōu)勢2 .有益健康，3 .費用不圖，減少污染 負擔得起存在問題1 .未及時歸還2 .占道擋路你的觀點我認為（考生自擬，至少2點）注意事項：1.短文須包括表格中所有提示內容，要求語句通順，意思連貫。2.表格中 你的觀點”一欄用23句話展開合理想象。

17、作適當發(fā)揮。3.詞數(shù)在90個左右，文章的開頭部分已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life.【答案】 Shared bikes are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared.Shared bikes have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that

18、 its easy for us to get around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using shared bikes costs so little that we can afford it.But there are some problems too. Some people cant return shared bikes in time. Sometimes shar

19、ed bikes take up too much of the road, so they are in our way.I think we should encourage more people to use shared bikes properly. After all, its a way of living a green life.【解析】這篇作文要求我們給21世紀英文報投稿，談一談自己對共享單車的看法。題 目中利用表格的形式給我們列舉了短文的主要內容，包括：共享單車的優(yōu)勢；存在的問題 以及你自己對這件事情的看法。前兩個內容我們需要根據(jù)表格的提示用正確的英語表達， 而自己的觀

20、點則需要學生們自己發(fā)揮想象力，組織語言，并表達出來，要求至少兩點。通 過審題可知，這篇短文應主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，第三人稱來敘述，短文可以分成兩段或 者三段，一個內容一段或前兩個內容合到一段。寫作時，應注意英語表達習慣和漢語的不 同，不能逐詞翻譯，而應從句子的整體考慮，簡單句、并列句和復合句交叉使用，改變文 章句式節(jié)奏，使用不同的句式，避免單調。語句之間注意使用恰當?shù)倪B接成分，使整篇文 章意思連貫、表達流暢。點睛：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文。首先短文內容完整，包含了題目要求的所有信息。短文分成 了四段，第一段引出話題共享單車；第二段講述了共享單車的一些優(yōu)點；第三段介紹了一 些問題；最后一段作者提出了自

21、己的看法。分段敘述使文章的結構清晰，主題明確，有層 次性。其次短文中使用了恰當?shù)臅r態(tài)和人稱，文章以第三人稱、一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)為主，語法 規(guī)范，用詞準確，句式富于變化。例如 They can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us toget around on shared bikes. Also, riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using shared bikes costs so litt

22、le that we can afford it. 這幾個長 句；另外文章中還使用了恰當?shù)倪B接成分，如 Also, What s more, But, sometimes, After a博 等。正確文章行文連貫、語句通順、表達流暢。5中國傳統(tǒng)文化源遠流長，代代相傳。近期各校都在開展學習中國傳統(tǒng)文化活動。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“弘揚中國傳統(tǒng)文化”為題征文，請你用英文寫一篇報道，介紹你校上周舉辦的 “講中國成語故事”活動并談談你的收獲與感受。提示詞語：Chinese idioms, story, collect, share,learn from, acient提示問題： What did you d

23、o during the activity of Telling Chinese idioms story? What did youlearn from the activity? What do you think of it?【答案】The activity of “ Telling Chinese idioms story” was held in our school last week.In order to take part in this activity, I collectedlots of Chinese idiom stories in advance. Many s

24、tudents, including me, actively shared the Chinese idiom stories in the activity. After each story, the teacher explained the meaning of idioms and how to use it correctly. Welearned alot from our teacher.I didots of reading in the process of preparation. My reading ability has improved greatly. Wha

25、t more, I realized the richness of Chinese acient culture. I really had a good time on the activity. 【解析】【詳解】1 . 題干解讀：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，只給了一些要點提示，但都不很明確。學生除了要把所給要點提示都表達出來外，還要進行適當拓展，使文章內容充實。2 .例文點評：例文采用三段式；用第一人稱來敘述講成語故事活動；因為活動已經(jīng)舉辦，所以時態(tài)采用一般過去時；對參加活動的過程描寫完整且條理清晰。3 .高分亮點：短語： in order to ， take part in ， lots

26、of， learn from ， in the process of， What s more， have a good time 。句型：被動句型。6 2019 年 2 月 20 日，中央宣傳部授予北京榜樣優(yōu)秀群體“時代楷?！狈Q號。時代楷模充分體現(xiàn) “愛國、敬業(yè)、誠信、友善”的價值準則。某網(wǎng)站正在開展以“向時代楷模學習”為主題的英語征文活動。假如你是李華，請用英語寫一篇短文投稿，談談生活中你該怎么做，以及這樣做的意義。提示詞語：pick up, rubbish, study, honest, important提示問題： What should you do in your dailylif

27、e? Whysdoo? you doAs a middle student, I can do alot tolearn from our role models.【答案】例文As a middle student, I can do a lot to learn from our role models. First, we can protect the environment. For example, we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so on. Second, we shall res

28、pect people around us. Respect others to start from small things. Third, behave well. We should be kind to others, warm-hearted to everyone, and generous to our friends. By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful.【解析】【詳解】題干解讀：該題目屬于應用文寫作，但寫作時要按照應用文格式寫，寫作時承接短文開 頭，具體寫出怎樣做以及這樣做的意義。例文點評：例

29、文采用的是一段式，人稱用的是第一人稱復數(shù)形式，時態(tài)主要用的是一般現(xiàn) 在時，描述具體怎么做時，描寫細致，條理清晰。高分亮點：短語： protect the environment ; pick up the rubbish ； behave well; be kind to sb ; more and more beautiful 。句型： By doing so, our world will become more and more beautiful ； we can pick up the rubbish, recycle things in our daily life, and so

30、 on。7.隨著網(wǎng)絡的發(fā)展、人們消費觀念的轉變，購物方式也在悄然的發(fā)生變化。 網(wǎng)購”已成為一種時尚，越來越多的學生也加入到網(wǎng)購群體中。請你根據(jù)以下表格的提示，寫一篇網(wǎng)上購物的文章。優(yōu)點(advantage)1.不需要出門；節(jié)約時間；避免擁擠、勞累2.價格通常比較便宜3.可供選擇的范圍廣，品種多缺點(disadvantage)1.只看到圖片， 看/、到商品本身2.容易購買大量不太需要的東西，造成浪費你的觀點提示詞匯：網(wǎng)購 shopping online; 商品 goods;導致 cause注意：1.所表述的內容必須包含表格中的所有方面，可適當發(fā)揮；2 .文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學校的名稱；3

31、 .詞數(shù)：100詞左右，文章開頭已給出，但不計入總數(shù)。With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online.【答案】 With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It hasbecome fashionable. Some of us students also join the group.Shopping online has many advantages. Just wit

32、h the click of a mouse, you can buy what you interested in without going outdoors. You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowds and save a lot of time. When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower.Every coin has two sides. Its dis

33、advantages are obvious, too. On one hand, it s very easy for you to buy goods that aren t like the pictures you see on the Internet. On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed. That s a waste of money.All in all, I love shopping online.【解析】本文屬于材料作文，主要講

34、述網(wǎng)購的優(yōu)點和缺點。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容?！玖咙c說明】這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別適用一些亮點詞句，如convenient ， disadvantage， ingood quality ， figure out ， have the chance to do ， be attacked by， of course， take care of 等。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫。點睛：寫作時可以從以下幾個方面做起：認真審題。審好題是寫好書面

35、表達的關鍵。審題時要注意試題的要求，抓住要點，詞數(shù)符 合要求。 構思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關的寫作材料。通常書面表達給 出的話題是開放的，而具體的內容要求學生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹?心突出、明確的關鍵。初寫短文。一切都準備就緒，就可以動筆寫作了，在寫作的過程中我們要注意句子的準確性、連貫性以及簡潔性。使用的詞語、短語及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時還要注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤色。修改潤色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯誤外，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，格式是否正確，詞 數(shù)是否符合

36、要求等。8 .假設彳是Beth,前段時間曾向英語校刊投送一篇題為My English Teacher Miss Zhang的短詩。近日，又至畢業(yè)季，師生們忙著互致臨別贈言。為此，編輯部策劃開“ A Letter to MyTeacher 專欄，邀請你以信件的形式重新投稿。短詩如下： ”My English Teacher Miss ZhangThere is a teacher, Miss Zhang,Who is friendly, patient and helpful.Always encouraging us to try, She leads us to a world of why

37、.We all respect and admire her.注意事項：1 . 稿件內容須根據(jù)短詩展開合理想象，不得抄寫短詩原文：2 .要求語句通順、意思連貫、符合情境。3 .詞數(shù)在 70 個左右，稿件的首尾已在答題卡上給出，不計入總詞數(shù)：4 .稿件必須寫在答題卡指定的位置上?！敬鸢浮緿ear Editorial Office,I am writing to recommend as The Most Popular Teacher She is Miss Zhang.She is my English teacher She is in her forties Her small round

38、 glasses make her look smart She often works to high standards and is willing to work extra hours She is kind and helpful ， too She always helps us with our study She loves jogging， so she looks healthy To my surprise， she has donated blood many times since 2001 She has also decided to donate her bo

39、dy for medical research after her death I really love her and I want to be a teacher like her in the future I think Miss Zhang is the most suitable person to be the Most Popular TeacherI hope that you agree with me Yours sincerely， Beth, 【解析】 【詳解】本文是一篇給材料作文。根據(jù)編輯部策劃開“A Letter to My Teacher專欄，邀請你以信件的形

40、式重新投稿。文章時態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時，人稱主要為第一人稱。本文所給材料比較詳細，考生要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并可適當發(fā)揮。在寫作時，注意緊扣主題，連句成篇，要層次清楚，要點分明，中心突出。同時要注意語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣；盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，最好不要寫太長的復合句；盡量選取簡單的易拼寫的單詞，確保正確率；詞匯、句式要豐富多樣，可以為文章增色添彩。最后要細心復核檢查，確保正 確無誤。 【點睛】 點睛：首先認真審題，看清題目中的要求和要點；然后根據(jù)提示內容，列出寫作要點及每 個要點中可能要用到的表達；然后緊

41、扣要點，動筆寫作，在寫作過程中，要注意句與句、 段與段之間的過渡，必要時可適當運用表示轉折、因果、并列、比較等關系的連詞，使文 章過渡平穩(wěn)，自然流暢；最后，要仔細檢查有無單詞拼寫錯誤、標點符號誤用等，還要檢查語法結構是否合理，有無重復、啰嗦的語言，大小寫是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。9 書面表達假如你是英語俱樂部的Cathy,上周五你們收到了外教Angel為同學們網(wǎng)購的英文書籍。俱樂部的同學們很喜歡網(wǎng)購圖書這種便捷的方式，并打算在本周五交流讀書后的感受。請你根據(jù)以下信息, 給 Angel 寫一封電子郵件，告訴她俱樂部的活動情況，并說說網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。寫作要點：1 表達收到圖書后的喜悅與感激之情

42、。2 介紹活動的情況：（ l ）上周五，俱樂部成員們一起讀英文書。（ 2）本周五的下午3 點，大家將共同交流讀書的體會。（ 3）同學們將在下個月網(wǎng)購其他的英文書。3 說一說網(wǎng)上購書有什么好處。寫作要求：1 不得使用真實的姓名和學校名。2 可適當加入細節(jié)，使內容充實，行文連貫。3 字跡工整、語言精練、表達準確、條理清晰。4 至少 80 詞。 Dear Angel,How are you doing?Best wishes!Yours, Cathy 【答案】Dear Angel,How are you doing? I m writing to tell you tharet cweeived t

43、he books that you bought for us. We are grateful to you and all of us are very happy 。t go fromLast Friday， we had a reading party, which was held on Friday in our reading room. Then we are going to hold an activity to share the feeling with others at 3:00 on Friday afternoon. All of us are fond of

44、buying books on the Internet. We are going to buy some books on the Internet next month. As far as I am concerned, on the one hand, the books on the Internet are cheaper than those in the bookstore. On the other hand, there are all kinds of books, so we needn one bookstore to another .Best wishes!Yo

45、urs, Cathy 【解析】 【詳解】 本文屬于材料作文，向外教介紹俱樂部中讀書交流會的活動，并且告訴外教同學們現(xiàn)在喜 歡網(wǎng)購圖書并闡述網(wǎng)購圖書的好處。根據(jù)要表達的內容確定并準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯，可適當增加內容。亮點說明：這是一篇優(yōu)秀的作文，很好的完成了試題規(guī)定的任務，語言表達符合英語習慣，準確運用時態(tài)、主謂一致，特別使用一些亮點詞句，如bought sth for sb, be grateful to,be going to do, share sth with sb, be fond of, as far as I am concerned, on the one hand.on the other hand, from to 以及 we had a reading party,which was held on Friday in our reading room 中 which 引導非限制性定語從句。增強邏輯關系，增加上下文意思連貫，用詞準確，句子通順，行文連貫