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1、computer is important.作文：1、 連接詞 1. To begin with, 首先 2. In addition, 其次 3. Whats more, 再者 4. Also, 此外 5. Evidently， 明顯地2、 引導(dǎo)辭 1. there is no question that 毫無(wú)疑問(wèn) 2. an army of publics put that 一些人說(shuō) 3. from a substantial amount of individuals perspective, 在一些人看來(lái) 4.with the rapid development of industri

2、alization and commercialization, 隨著工業(yè)化商業(yè)化的快速發(fā)展一+二+computer is important.1.1 + 2.1 To begin with , there is no question that computer is important.1.5+2.3Evidently, from a substantial amount of individuals perspective, computer is important.三、定從和同位語(yǔ)（位于核心詞之后） 1. which lies extremely close to our life

3、與我們的生活緊密相關(guān) 2. which caters to the needs of different groups 迎合了不同人的需求 3. , as a great force to call on people to develop constantly， 作為一種偉大的力量驅(qū)使著人們持續(xù)發(fā)展 computer is important.1.2+2.2+3.1In addition, an army of publics put that computer which lies extremely close to our life is important.1.4+2.1+3.2Al

4、so, there is no question that computer which caters to the needs of different groups is important.1.5+2.4+3.3Evidently, with the rapid development of industrialization and commercialization , computer ,as a great force to call on people to develop constantly, is important. v4、 插入語(yǔ)（be后行前助行間）be后：compu

5、ter is puter is ,as a matter of fact, important.行前：computer influences our puter ,directly or indirectly , influences our life.助行間：computer will influence our puter will ,to a large degree,influence our life.1. ,as a matter of fact, 事實(shí)上說(shuō)2. ,directly or indirectly, 直接或間接3

6、. ,to a large degree， 很大程度上computer is important.1.3+2.1+4.2Whats more , there is no question that computer is ,directly or indirectly, important.1.5+2.2+4.1Evidently, an army of publics put that computer is ,as a matter of fact, important.五、句子連連看 puter plays an indispensable role in our community.(

7、左右都可以) 電腦在我們的社會(huì)中扮演著重要的角色。1.1+2.1+3.1+5.1To begin with, there is no question that computer which lies extremely close to our life plays an indispensable role in our community.1.3+2.3+3.2+5.1Whats more, from a substantial amount of individuals perspective , computer which caters to the needs of differ

8、ent groups plays an indispensable role in our community.1+2+4+5.1Evidently, an army of publics put that computer ,as a matter of fact, plays an indispensable role in our community.1+2+4+5.1Whats more, with the rapid development of industrialization and commercialization , computer ,directly or indir

9、ectly, plays an indispensable role in our community. puter betters the efficiency of our academic performance and undertaking.（左右都可以） 電腦促進(jìn)了我們工作和學(xué)習(xí)的效率。1+2+3+5.2Also, an army of publics put that computer which lies extremely close to our life betters the efficiency of our academic performance and unde

10、rtaking.1+2+4+5.2In addition, there is no question that computer ,to a large degree, betters the efficiency of our academic performance and undertaking. 3. the needs of chinese economy has largely been met due to sustainable development. ，which leads to the result of this consequence/phenomenon.（只能單

11、獨(dú)出現(xiàn)） 中國(guó)的經(jīng)濟(jì)因?yàn)榭沙掷m(xù)發(fā)展已得到極大地滿足，這就導(dǎo)致了這種現(xiàn)象的結(jié)果。 4. publics have placed a very high value on education for a long term ，which leads to the result of this consequence/phenomenon. （只能單獨(dú)出現(xiàn)） 公眾在長(zhǎng)期都很重視教育，這就導(dǎo)致了這種現(xiàn)象的結(jié)果 5.nothing is more important than to do something.（出現(xiàn)在左邊） 沒(méi)有什么比做什么更重要了。 puter will exert a positiv

12、e/negative influence on our livelihood, further contributing to the growth/decline of our living standard.（左右都可以） 電腦會(huì)給我們的生活施加積極/消極的影響，進(jìn)一步導(dǎo)致了生活水平的上升/下降。1+2+3+5.6Also, there is no question that computer which lies extremely close to our life will exert a positve。1+2+4+5.6In addition, an army of public

13、s put that computer will ,as a matter of fact, exert a。 7.publics throughout the world could achieve something incredible under the condition of sustainable development.（只能出現(xiàn)在右邊） 在可持續(xù)發(fā)展的條件下，全世界的人們可以成就一些難以置信的事情。 8. the quality of our livelihood will go from bad to worse due to economic depression.（只能

14、單獨(dú)出現(xiàn)） 我們的生活水平因?yàn)榻?jīng)濟(jì)蕭條變得每況愈下。 9. the quality of our livelihood will be good , better and best due to economic boom.（只能單獨(dú)出現(xiàn)）我們的生活水平因?yàn)榻?jīng)濟(jì)繁榮變得蒸蒸日上。10. publics throughout the world will fall in love with this effective,extremely useful technologycomputer.（只能放在右邊）adj,adv+adj+n全世界的人會(huì)愛(ài)上這種高效的，極其有用的科技電腦。1. 主系表2.

15、 主謂賓 3. 主系表+主謂賓 computer is important computer plays an indispensable role in our community.因?yàn)椋?due to the fact that primarily owing to thatTo begin with , there is no question that computer which lies extremely close to our life is important due to the fact that it plays an indispensable role in ou

16、r community.Evidently, an army of publics put that computer is ,as a matter of fact, irreplaceable due to the fact that it betters the efficiency of our academic performance and undertaking.basic skill 1+2+3主系表+主謂賓（5.1） 4.主謂賓+主謂賓5.2+5.6computer betters the efficiency of our academic performance and

17、undertaking due to the fact that it will exert a positive influence on our livelihood, further contributing to the growth of our living standard.使用原則：1. 連接詞每個(gè)句子都要有2. 盡量少用3. 定從、同位語(yǔ)、插入語(yǔ)只能在句子中出現(xiàn)一個(gè)。4. 主謂賓 主系表+主謂賓 主謂賓 主謂賓cultural fusion 第二段：好 壞 一好一壞第一句：主謂賓（好）第二句:主系表+主謂賓（好5.4）第三句：主謂賓(5.6)第四句: 主謂賓To begin

18、with, there is no question that cultural fusion which lies extremely close to our life/prosperous history plays an indispensable role in our commuity / harmonious society. Also, cultural fusion is , directly or indirectly , very impressive due to the fact that publics have placed a very high value o

19、n cultural fusion , which leads to the result of this phenomenon. In addition , cultural fusion will exert a positive influence on our livelihood, further contributing to the growth of our civilization.Evidently, publics throughout the world has fallen in love with this varied , extremely vivid civilization-cultural eration 類型：好