復件高考作文評卷

1、高考閱卷方式：高考閱卷方式：1. 分工明確，專人負責分工明確，專人負責2. 監(jiān)控嚴格，時間統(tǒng)一監(jiān)控嚴格，時間統(tǒng)一3. 標準清晰，檔次分明標準清晰，檔次分明請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語寫一請根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語寫一篇短文。篇短文。 Small things make a big difference. The small things you do can make us a responsible member of the society.注意：注意：無須寫標題；無須寫標題； 除詩歌外，文體不限；除詩歌外，文體不限； 內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例；內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生

2、活中的具體事例； 文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱；文中不得透露個人姓名和學校名稱； 詞數(shù)不少于詞數(shù)不少于120左右，如引入提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。左右，如引入提示語則不計入總詞數(shù)。評分原則評分原則本題總分為本題總分為3030分，按分，按5 5個檔次給分。個檔次給分。 詞數(shù)少于詞數(shù)少于120120，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。 評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其評分時，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。評分檔次的確定應在內(nèi)容調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。評分檔次的確定應在內(nèi)容符合題目要求

3、的前提下側(cè)重語言的表達。符合題目要求的前提下側(cè)重語言的表達。評分時，應注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容切題，語評分時，應注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容切題，語言表達準確、多樣、連貫、得體。言表達準確、多樣、連貫、得體。拼寫與標點符號是語言準確的一個方面，評分拼寫與標點符號是語言準確的一個方面，評分時，應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美時，應視其對交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。拼寫及詞匯用法均可接受。如書寫太潦草，以至影響辨認，將分數(shù)降低一如書寫太潦草，以至影響辨認，將分數(shù)降低一個檔次。個檔次。我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我各檔次的給分范圍和要求各檔次的給分范圍和要求第五檔第五檔

4、25-30分分完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。所有內(nèi)容與提示吻合。應用了較豐富的語法結(jié)構和詞匯。語法結(jié)構與詞匯應用準確，雖有個別錯誤，但不影響意義的表達；具備較強的語言運用能力。恰當使用了語句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構緊湊。完全達到了預期的寫作目的。第四檔第四檔19-24分分完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。主要內(nèi)容與提示吻合。應用的語法結(jié)構和詞匯能滿足任務的要求。語法結(jié)構與詞匯應用基本準確，個別錯誤對意義的表達有一定影響。較恰當?shù)厥褂昧苏Z句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構較緊湊。達到了預期的寫作目的。第三檔第三檔13-18分分基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務。主要內(nèi)容與提示比較吻合。應用的語法結(jié)構和詞匯能基本滿足任務的要求。有一些

5、語法結(jié)構與詞匯的錯誤，對意義的表達有較大影響?；灸苁褂谜Z句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構比較松散。整體而言，基本達到了預期的寫作目的。第二檔第二檔7-12分分僅完成試題規(guī)定的部分任務。主要內(nèi)容與提示基本吻合。語法結(jié)構單調(diào)，應用詞匯有限。有較多語法結(jié)構或詞匯方面的錯誤，影響了意義的表達。語句間的連接成分運用不當，缺少連貫性。信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。第一檔第一檔1-6分分未完成試題規(guī)定的任務。主要內(nèi)容與提示不太吻合。語法結(jié)構單一，應用詞匯十分有限。有較多語法結(jié)構或詞匯方面的嚴重錯誤，嚴重影響了意義的表達。缺乏語句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。信息未能傳達給讀者。 As a member in our so

6、ciety, I can never emphasize the importance of making contributions to the society too much. As a matter of fact, it is the small things we do that show our sense of responsibility. When it comes to this topic, the story of myself is the case in point. I still remember the time when our class was se

7、lected to do cleaning in a small community. Mops and other kinds of tools in hand, we worked hard, regardless of awful heat under the sun. we did all the tasks so carefully that it was not until dusk that we finished cleaning. Tired as we were, we felt proud of ourselves. What a tired but graceful d

8、ay! The most instructive lesson Ive learnt from the experience is that everyone is adequate to do something small but remarkable in order to make our society colorful. Only in this way can we make ourselves a responsible member of the society.第五檔第五檔27-28分分漂漂亮亮漂漂亮亮靚靚 As is known to us all, small thin

9、gs can make a big difference. In our daily life, even if the things we do are very small, we still can make us a responsible member of the society. For example, one weekend, our teachers took us to a park where we were about to plant trees. With the help of our teachers, everyone at least planted on

10、e tree. Some enthusiastic students planted more. Every one of us was really happy to do something for our society. In the meanwhile, we were confident that there would be a forest in the park many years later. Last week, I went to the park. Those trees we planted ten years ago have been taller than

11、I. what a exciting thing! We do make us a responsible member of the society. Although we just did a small thing, but it did make a big difference. Dont hesitate to do small things just because they are small. Do it, and you will see the big change you make. Let us be a responsible member of the soci

12、ety. 第四檔第四檔22-23分分清清楚楚清清楚楚順順 It goes without saying that the small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society. As a consequence, small things make a big difference. Three year ago, I failed in an important exam. So I had to go to a old school. Before the exam, I thought the questio

13、ns were very easy for me to write down. So I didnt realize some small things about the exam. Eventually, I failed. As my own experense, I can firmly convinced that small things will make a big difference. And the small things will be helpful for succeed. If you dont notice the small things, you must

14、 be failed. Finally, I will give you some advice. In your life, please remember notice the small things. And then, you will succeed.第三檔第三檔15-16分分馬馬虎虎馬馬虎虎行行 As is widely acknowledged, small things make a big difference. I learned this from one of my experience that I was through Senior One school lif

15、e. One day, when I was play badminton with my classmates in my PE class, I mistake, so we class not got a good grups. I feel nothing. But my classmate told me :your mistake is able to our team lost.” I realized I mistake is very important. I was so froursetrted. that my classmates confort and encour

16、loagement as well as the teacher advice and instaction to helped me devote my spare time to practing playing every day. It wasnt long before. We are win on our school game. From this experience, I am definietly convinced that a small things make a big difference, a people the mistake can will to the

17、 class last. The small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society.第二檔第二檔9-10分分糊里糊涂糊里糊涂 糊糊 Year of my school live tought me a lot of many things. What impressed me the small things we do can make us a responsible member of the society. Memories back to my. just go to high school. th

18、at time I alway. I didnt no do the teachers speak and I do read my book. that time I think listen to teachers speaking isnt no impant. I think this is a small thing. No listen I can do it, but In the exam my grade is fanl and lost is class, the head go to my. Say:you wrong, listen is small, but listen teacher speak you. can do it. I think Im wory. I should listen the teacher speak. next I can successful.” Now I know the small thing. Deternitnall you can successful. We should imapant a small thing.第一檔第一檔3-4分分一塌糊涂一塌糊涂慘慘啟示：啟示：語