專題十七 書面表達(dá)

1、專題十七 書面表達(dá)考點(diǎn)一提綱類Writing 1(2015課標(biāo))假定你是李華,你校英文報(bào)“外國文化”欄目擬刊登介紹美國節(jié)日風(fēng)俗和中學(xué)生生活的短文。請(qǐng)給美國朋友彼得寫信約稿,要點(diǎn)如下:1.欄目介紹;2.稿件內(nèi)容;3.稿件長度:約400詞;4.交稿日期:6月28日前。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.開頭語已為你寫好。Dear Peter,I􀆳d like to ask you to write an article for our school􀆳s English newspaper       &

2、#160;     寫作提示本文為書信體提綱式作文。寫作時(shí)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為基本時(shí)態(tài),以第一人稱為主體人稱;注意要點(diǎn)要齊全,包括欄目介紹、稿件內(nèi)容、稿件長度和交稿日期;寫作時(shí)注意恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂勉暯釉~和過渡詞,以使文章行文連貫、流暢,這一點(diǎn)是高考英語高分作文所必須具備的要素。One possible version:Dear Peter, I􀆳d like to ask you to write an article for our school􀆳s English newspaper. The“Foreign Cultures

3、”section in our newspaper is very popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spen

4、d their holidays and festivals,and the life of American high school students.You can write anything relevant so long as it􀆳s interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before June 28?I􀆳m looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua Writing 1(

5、2015課標(biāo))假定你是李華,計(jì)劃和同學(xué)去敬老院(nursing home)陪老人們過重陽節(jié)(the Double Ninth Festival)。請(qǐng)給外教露西寫封郵件,邀她一同前往,內(nèi)容包括:1.出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間;2.活動(dòng):包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。注意:1.詞數(shù)100左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.結(jié)語已為你寫好。            Looking forward to your reply.答案寫作提示1.本文為應(yīng)用文電子郵件的寫作,屬于提綱類作文。在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)使用第一人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):

6、(1)出發(fā)及返回時(shí)間;(2)在敬老院的活動(dòng):包餃子、表演節(jié)目等。One possible version:Dear Lucy,I􀆳d like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.It is the day for the elderly in our culture.We􀆳ll go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly pe

7、ople there.We􀆳ll also spend some fun time together singing,dancing and playing games,which we hope will make them happy.We should be back around 4 o􀆳clock in the afternoon.If you are able to come with us,please let us know and we􀆳ll wait for you at the school gate at 9 in

8、the morning.Looking forward to your reply. Yours,Li Hua Writing 1(2015天津)1.假設(shè)你是晨光中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李津,你校擬向美國友好交流學(xué)校的中文班捐贈(zèng)一批圖書。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示,寫一封郵件與中文班班長Chris聯(lián)系,并告知將于今年七月赴對(duì)方學(xué)校參加夏令營時(shí)帶去贈(zèng)書。(1)自我介紹;(2)擬捐贈(zèng)圖書的類型、冊(cè)數(shù)、用途等;(3)詢問對(duì)方的其他需求。注意:(1)詞數(shù)不少于100;(2)請(qǐng)適當(dāng)加入細(xì)節(jié),使內(nèi)容充實(shí)、行文連貫。參考詞匯:學(xué)生會(huì)the Student UnionDear Chris,    &#

9、160;           Yours,Li Jin答案1.寫作提示1.書信格式,用第一人稱和第二人稱,主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí);2.要點(diǎn)齊全:自我介紹;捐贈(zèng)圖書的類型、冊(cè)數(shù)、用途等;詢問對(duì)方的其他需求;告知將于今年七月赴對(duì)方學(xué)校參加夏令營時(shí)帶去贈(zèng)書。3.注意上下文的連貫性和書信語言的得體性。One possible version:Dear Chris, I􀆳m Li Jin,chairman of the Student Union in Chenguang High School.I􀆳m

10、 writing to tell you something about donating books to your class.To enhance communication with your school,we prepared about 100 books ranging from Chinese cartoon to literature.With them,you may have a better understanding of China and its culture.We􀆳ll take the books when participating i

11、n the summer camp this July to your school. Would you please tell me something about your other requirements? We will spare no effort to meet your needs.I sincerely hope that we may exchange with each other more and develop our friendship.Best wishes!Yours,Li Jin  Writing 1(2015安徽)某英文雜志正在舉辦以“Fa

12、ncy yourself as an interviewer”為主題的征文活動(dòng),請(qǐng)你以“A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview”為題,寫一篇英語短文。內(nèi)容包括:1.采訪的對(duì)象;2.采訪的原因;3.想提的問題。注意:1.詞數(shù)120左右;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.短文中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息;4.短文的標(biāo)題已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。A Famous Chinese I Would Like to Interview            答案寫作提示1.本文為提綱類作文,寫作時(shí)主要

13、采用第一人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般過去時(shí),同時(shí)還要恰當(dāng)使用虛擬語氣。 2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):(1)表明采訪的對(duì)象;(2)闡明采訪的原因;(3)說明想提的問題。One possible version:A Famous Chinese I Would Like to InterviewThe person I would like to interview is Yang Liwei.I would really like to interview him because he is not only the first Chinese to go to space but also one o

14、f the greatest astronauts in the world.I have long been interested in space exploration and I believe I could learn a great deal from him about it. If I could interview him,I would ask him what made him an astronaut and how he was trained.I would also like to know how he felt in space and whether sp

15、ace travel is such great fun as I have read.Finally,I would like to ask a few questions about his personal life,which must be very interesting. Writing 1(2015陜西)假定你是李華,在校報(bào)英語專欄看到了學(xué)?！坝⒄Z文化節(jié)”的一則招募啟事。請(qǐng)閱讀啟事,并根據(jù)寫作要點(diǎn)和寫作要求寫一封應(yīng)征郵件。Volunteers WantedOur annual English Festival,which will be held on June 1517,20

16、15,is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show,Speech Contest,and English Debate.If you are interested,please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms Chen at chenlaoshi.寫作要點(diǎn):1.表達(dá)寫信意圖:2.陳述應(yīng)征目的;3.說明應(yīng)征條件(性格、能力等)。寫作要求:1.郵件詞數(shù)不少于100;2.開頭和結(jié)尾部分已寫好,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù);

17、3.可根據(jù)情況增加細(xì)節(jié),使行文連貫;4.不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。Dear Ms Chen,I􀆳m Li Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.  Looking forward to your reply.Yours truly,Li Hua答案寫作提示1.本題為提綱類作文,在寫作時(shí)主要使用第一人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要包括一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):(1)表達(dá)寫信意圖;(2)陳述應(yīng)征目的;(3)說明應(yīng)征條件(性格、能力等)。One possible version:Dear Ms Chen, I􀆳m L

18、i Hua,a student from Class 2,Grade 3.I􀆳m writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer. I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because,by offering my service,I will be able to improve my organisational ability,communication skills as well as my confidence in speak

19、ing English in public.As an outgoing girl,I get along well with my classmates.Besides,I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.Successfully,I have lent a helping hand to her in several English activities of my class,which have been appreciated by bot

20、h teachers and my classmates.I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations.I will be grateful if you could give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li Hua Writing 1(2015四川)假如你是李夏。你看到美國留學(xué)生Sharon在網(wǎng)上發(fā)帖,希望有人能幫助她提高普通話(Mandarin)水平,她可以教英語作為回報(bào)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)

21、以下提示用英語給她寫一封電子郵件。1.表達(dá)給她提供幫助的意愿;2.說明你能勝任輔導(dǎo)的理由;3.給出講好普通話的兩點(diǎn)建議;4.提出你學(xué)習(xí)英語的具體需求。注意:1.詞數(shù)120左右,開頭語已為你寫好;2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;3.文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱。Hi,Sharon,This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. Li Xia答案寫作提示1.本文為提綱類作文,在寫作時(shí)使用第一人稱,時(shí)態(tài)主要包括一般過去時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)。2.內(nèi)容要點(diǎn):(1)向Sharon表達(dá)

22、幫助她學(xué)習(xí)普通話的意愿;(2)說明自己能勝任的理由;(3)給出講好普通話的兩點(diǎn)建議;(4)提出自己學(xué)習(xí)英語的具體需求。One possible version:Hi,Sharon,This is Li Xia.I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin.I am more than willing to lend a helping hand to you. I am convinced I can perfectly live up to your expectation.I have such a

23、 good command of Mandarin that not only was I elected the broadcaster of the radio station of our school,but I also won the second prize in the Mandarin Contest held in our city last year.When it comes to improving Mandarin,my advice is that you should listen to Mandarin every day and practice speak

24、ing it whenever possible.Just as the saying goes,practice makes perfect.By the way,I do hope you can help me improve my English writing ability,especially the proper use of vocabulary and some important grammar.Looking forward to your reply.Yours faithfully,Li Xia  考點(diǎn)二圖表類Correction 1(2015北京,書面一)假設(shè)你是紅星中學(xué)高三學(xué)生李華,請(qǐng)給你的美國朋友Jim寫一封郵件,告訴他你打算參加龍舟訓(xùn)練營,希望他一起參加。郵件的內(nèi)容包括:1.介紹訓(xùn)練營的相關(guān)內(nèi)容(例如:時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、參加者等);2.說明你打算參加的原因;3.詢問對(duì)方的意向。注意: 1.詞數(shù)不少于50;2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出, 不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。提示詞:龍舟訓(xùn)練營Dragon Boat Training CampDear Jim, Yours,Li Hua答案寫作提示本文為提綱類作文,在寫作時(shí)應(yīng)主要使用第一人稱和第二人稱,時(shí)態(tài)包括一般將來時(shí)、一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)。參考詞匯:summer holiday暑假One possible vers