高考書(shū)面表達(dá)—邀請(qǐng)信（課堂PPT）

1、1高考書(shū)面表達(dá)高考書(shū)面表達(dá)邀請(qǐng)信邀請(qǐng)信A Letter of Invitation2一、觀察學(xué)習(xí)并思考：一、觀察學(xué)習(xí)并思考：如何寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)信？如何寫(xiě)一封邀請(qǐng)信？ 段落結(jié)構(gòu)？段落結(jié)構(gòu)？ 內(nèi)容構(gòu)成？?jī)?nèi)容構(gòu)成？ 語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用？語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用？ 連貫性？連貫性？ 語(yǔ)氣與得體性？語(yǔ)氣與得體性？(上級(jí)，長(zhǎng)輩，朋友間？上級(jí)，長(zhǎng)輩，朋友間？) 增分亮點(diǎn)？增分亮點(diǎn)？3 假設(shè)你是李華，暑假通常你會(huì)和假設(shè)你是李華，暑假通常你會(huì)和Lisa一起去度假。今一起去度假。今年你們打算邀請(qǐng)?jiān)诒本W(xué)習(xí)的美國(guó)朋友年你們打算邀請(qǐng)?jiān)诒本W(xué)習(xí)的美國(guó)朋友Ben和你們?nèi)ズ：湍銈內(nèi)ズＤ先齺喍燃佟Ｕ?qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封南三亞度假。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的要點(diǎn)寫(xiě)一封e

2、mail向向Ben發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)。要點(diǎn)：要點(diǎn)：1海南三亞度假兩周；海南三亞度假兩周；2.參加一周的潛水課程；參加一周的潛水課程；3周四周四之前回復(fù)是否加入；之前回復(fù)是否加入； 4Lisa負(fù)責(zé)預(yù)訂航班和酒店。負(fù)責(zé)預(yù)訂航班和酒店。注意：注意：1詞數(shù)為詞數(shù)為100左右；左右；2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫(xiě)好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Dear Ben， Time goes fast. Another summer is coming again._ Yours， Li Hua4Dear Ben， Time go

3、es fast. Another summer is coming again. Lisa and I will go on vacation as usual. We always want to go to Sanya in Hainan Province and have planned to spend two weeks there. We would be delighted if you could join us on this trip. The first week we will take a diving course. Just imagine swimming un

4、der water with the fishes! I cant wait! Dont worry about the details, as Lisa will take care of booking the plane tickets and reserving the hotel. If you want to participate then I need you to reply by Thursday. We hope you decide to come along. It will be wonderful to see you again and we will have

5、 a great time. Yours, Li Hua5假如你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你校將舉辦一次英語(yǔ)假如你是育才中學(xué)學(xué)生會(huì)主席李華，你校將舉辦一次英語(yǔ)演講比賽，演講比賽，希望附近某大學(xué)外籍教師希望附近某大學(xué)外籍教師Smith 女士來(lái)做評(píng)委。女士來(lái)做評(píng)委。請(qǐng)參照以下比賽通知給她寫(xiě)一封信。請(qǐng)參照以下比賽通知給她寫(xiě)一封信。 英語(yǔ)演講比賽英語(yǔ)演講比賽 主題：人與自然主題：人與自然 時(shí)間：時(shí)間：6月月15日下午日下午2：00-5：00 地點(diǎn)：地點(diǎn)：501教室教室 賽選手：賽選手：10名學(xué)生名學(xué)生 聯(lián)系人：李華（電話：聯(lián)系人：李華（電話：44876655）Dear Ms.Smith, I am L

6、ihua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School. _ Best wishes to you. Li Hua6Dear Ms.Smith, I am Lihua, the leader of the Students Union of Yucai Middle School. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for our English Speech Contest and be a judge. The contest, the theme of which

7、is “Man and Nature”, will be held in the Room 501 from 2：00 to 5：00 on the afternoon of June 15. Whats more, there will be ten students taking part in it. I am sure that it will be a great success if you can give us some precious remarks. I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. My t

8、elephone number is 44876655. I am looking forward to your reply. Best wishes. Li Hua 7邀請(qǐng)信是邀請(qǐng)收信人參加某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的書(shū)信邀請(qǐng)信是邀請(qǐng)收信人參加某項(xiàng)活動(dòng)的書(shū)信，包含以下幾個(gè)，包含以下幾個(gè)方面：方面：1. 邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方參加活動(dòng)邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方參加活動(dòng)(內(nèi)容、時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)內(nèi)容、時(shí)間和地點(diǎn))；2. 與該活動(dòng)有關(guān)的注意事項(xiàng)；與該活動(dòng)有關(guān)的注意事項(xiàng)；3. 期待對(duì)方接受邀請(qǐng)，并可表示感謝。期待對(duì)方接受邀請(qǐng)，并可表示感謝。8提煉邀請(qǐng)信格式模板：提煉邀請(qǐng)信格式模板：Dear _， How is everything with you? I

9、 am writing to tell you that there will be a _ (內(nèi)容內(nèi)容) at/in _ (地點(diǎn)地點(diǎn)) on _ (時(shí)間時(shí)間). We would be honored/delighted to have you there with us. The _(activity) will start at _ (具體時(shí)間具體時(shí)間). This will be followed by a _ (進(jìn)一步的安排進(jìn)一步的安排)At around _ (時(shí)間時(shí)間), _ (另一個(gè)安排另一個(gè)安排) Ring me up and tell me whether you will

10、 come or not, will you? My phone number is _I really hope you can make it. Looking forward to _ Yours sincerely， Li Ming 9 詞句模板詞句模板 1段首常用語(yǔ)：段首常用語(yǔ)：(1) I am writing to invite you to(2) I think it would be a great idea if you could participate in(3) I wonder if you can come(4) How would you like to join

11、 us in？102段尾常用語(yǔ)：段尾常用語(yǔ)：(1)Would you please drop me a line(寫(xiě)信給我寫(xiě)信給我) to let me know if you can come to？(2)My family and I would feel much honored if you could come.(3)We would be looking forward to your coming with great pleasure.(4)I would like to meet you there and please let me know your decision s

12、oon.11第二節(jié)書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分第二節(jié)書(shū)面表達(dá)（滿(mǎn)分25分）分）假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂(lè)部（假定你是李華，你校攝影俱樂(lè)部（photography club）將）將舉辦國(guó)際中學(xué)攝影展。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友舉辦國(guó)際中學(xué)攝影展。請(qǐng)給你的英國(guó)朋友Peter寫(xiě)封信。寫(xiě)封信。請(qǐng)他提供作品。信的內(nèi)容包括：請(qǐng)他提供作品。信的內(nèi)容包括： 1主題：環(huán)境保護(hù)；主題：環(huán)境保護(hù)； 2展覽時(shí)間；展覽時(shí)間； 3投稿郵箱：投稿郵箱：.注意：注意： 1詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100左右；左右； 2可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?？梢赃m當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。 二、修改提升自己的作文二、修改提升自己的作文121、認(rèn)真審題，確立話題，歸納要點(diǎn)、認(rèn)

13、真審題，確立話題，歸納要點(diǎn)主題：主題：切中題意，切忌跑題切中題意，切忌跑題層次：層次：一般是三大層次，忌一般是三大層次，忌“擠牙膏擠牙膏”式，想到哪兒式，想到哪兒寫(xiě)到哪兒，缺乏全局觀念。寫(xiě)到哪兒，缺乏全局觀念。格式格式:人稱(chēng)人稱(chēng):時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)：文字提綱式作文寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：文字提綱式作文寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)：“邀請(qǐng)外國(guó)朋友參加攝影展邀請(qǐng)外國(guó)朋友參加攝影展”發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)注意事項(xiàng)注意事項(xiàng)希望接受邀請(qǐng)并感謝希望接受邀請(qǐng)并感謝書(shū)信書(shū)信不要寫(xiě)成不要寫(xiě)成“求助信求助信”第一第二人稱(chēng)第一第二人稱(chēng)將來(lái)時(shí)為主將來(lái)時(shí)為主132. 理順要點(diǎn)，增加細(xì)節(jié)，連貫表達(dá)理順要點(diǎn)，增加細(xì)節(jié)，連貫表達(dá)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)： 為什么發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)？

14、為什么發(fā)出邀請(qǐng)？作品優(yōu)秀作品優(yōu)秀呼吁環(huán)保呼吁環(huán)保有機(jī)會(huì)與更多的攝影愛(ài)好者交流學(xué)習(xí)有機(jī)會(huì)與更多的攝影愛(ài)好者交流學(xué)習(xí)理順要點(diǎn)：理順要點(diǎn)：簡(jiǎn)單引出有攝影展簡(jiǎn)單引出有攝影展-邀請(qǐng)參展邀請(qǐng)參展為什么為什么邀請(qǐng)邀請(qǐng)注意事項(xiàng)注意事項(xiàng)-希望接受邀請(qǐng)希望接受邀請(qǐng)發(fā)揮有度：發(fā)揮有度：圍繞主題，切忌游離主題的任意發(fā)揮圍繞主題，切忌游離主題的任意發(fā)揮注意字?jǐn)?shù)注意字?jǐn)?shù)143. 化解難點(diǎn)，靈活表達(dá)化解難點(diǎn)，靈活表達(dá)4. 錯(cuò)落有致，多用短語(yǔ)句型，錯(cuò)落有致，多用短語(yǔ)句型， 連接恰當(dāng)連接恰當(dāng)遇到難以表述的內(nèi)容，從另一個(gè)角度運(yùn)用自己學(xué)過(guò)的熟遇到難以表述的內(nèi)容，從另一個(gè)角度運(yùn)用自己學(xué)過(guò)的熟悉的知識(shí)去靈活表達(dá)，同樣能寫(xiě)出想要表達(dá)的內(nèi)

15、容。悉的知識(shí)去靈活表達(dá)，同樣能寫(xiě)出想要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容。 投稿截止日期：投稿截止日期：send tobefore錯(cuò)落有致錯(cuò)落有致: 句型多變，簡(jiǎn)單句并列句復(fù)合句交叉使用；句型多變，簡(jiǎn)單句并列句復(fù)合句交叉使用；使用高級(jí)框架結(jié)構(gòu)的句子。使用高級(jí)框架結(jié)構(gòu)的句子。連接恰當(dāng)連接恰當(dāng): 使用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞、過(guò)渡句等。使用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞、過(guò)渡句等。提供作品：提供作品： take part in/ participate in 此文主體段落使用此文主體段落使用 first, second, third15簡(jiǎn)單引出有攝影展簡(jiǎn)單引出有攝影展-邀請(qǐng)參展邀請(qǐng)參展為什么邀請(qǐng)為什么邀請(qǐng)注意事項(xiàng)注意事項(xiàng)-希望接受邀請(qǐng)希望接受邀請(qǐng)簡(jiǎn)單

16、引出有攝影展簡(jiǎn)單引出有攝影展will hold an International High School student Photography Showwill be held by邀請(qǐng)參展邀請(qǐng)參展invite sb. to do take part in/ participate insubmit/hand in some works for the show/exhibitionKnowing that you are interested in/fond of taking photos, I am writing toWhen I learned the news that, you

17、 are the very person to come into my mind.16為什么邀請(qǐng)為什么邀請(qǐng)impress sb. deeplyleave a deep impression on sb.作品優(yōu)秀作品優(yōu)秀I bet that the visitors will be amazed at your distinguished works.I have never seen a more outstanding photographer than you.I have never seen more impressive photos than yours.have a talen

18、t fora talented/gifted amateur photographer17呼吁環(huán)保呼吁環(huán)保motivate/encourage sb. to doappeal to sb. to dohave some good influence onYour works are bound to arouse/strengthen peoples awareness of environmental protection.take actions to protect our environment18注意事項(xiàng)注意事項(xiàng)The exhibition will start on, lastin

19、gdays.You are expected to hand in your photos before/withinsendtoYou can submit your entries(參賽作品參賽作品) by email and our e-mail address is 希望接受邀請(qǐng)希望接受邀請(qǐng)5. 查漏補(bǔ)缺，修正錯(cuò)誤，謄寫(xiě)清楚查漏補(bǔ)缺，修正錯(cuò)誤，謄寫(xiě)清楚We are looking forward to seeing your distinguished works.I would like to meet you at the exhibition and please let me k