新高考英語作文寫作指導與解讀——熱點寫作話題：網(wǎng)絡購物(以蘇北七市三模為例)

1、新高考英語作文寫作指導與解讀熱點寫作話題：網(wǎng)絡購物（以蘇北七市三模為例）南通和蘇北等七市聯(lián)考的英語考試的寫作，是關于外賣。這屬于比較流行的社會現(xiàn)象，和往年的網(wǎng)絡投票，網(wǎng)絡購物排名等都是一類的，很接近考試了。前幾天我剛結(jié)束了高考最后一講，基本也講到了此類作文的寫法。今天我繼續(xù)寫一下。請閱讀下面有關中國在線外賣現(xiàn)狀調(diào)查的柱狀圖及相關文字, 詞左右的文章。J=e 呂一匚-5=Jm!匸5作文題并按照要求用英語寫一篇150The scale of con sumers of fast food delivery service in Chi naThe fast food delivery servic

2、e ， which depends on the already-existing restaurants ， can cover a larger place with more customers without taking the seats of restaurants. Under the current economic and market condition ，the fast food delivery service has been the new battlefield of the fast food giants in China. Even MacDonald&

3、#39;s and KFC ， the two international fast food giants are fighting aga inst each other for more market share in Chin a's fast food delivery in dustry.However， Ji ng Lin bo, Deputy Director of the In stitute of Finance and Trade Economics，the Chinese Academy of Social Scienee thought that the fa

4、st food delivery is the new growth point of fast food en terprises. But the fast food en terprises should have certa in comprehe nsive stre ngths to do this service ， which is thought to be different from the traditional food industry in some aspects.Besides，with the development of the new industry，

5、 there also emerge problems. And some observers have give n their warnin gs. They warn that if the fast food en terprises take no no tice of the hidden problems ， they will lose the customers in the competitive market gradually.【寫作內(nèi)容】用約30個單詞概述上述信息的主要內(nèi)容；22結(jié)合上述信息，簡要分析外賣盛行的主要原因;3請從消費者角度談談你對外賣的看法及建議，用2-

6、3個理由支撐你的觀點。寫作指導一、如何寫概括：由于這是概括信息，因此無需詳細描述圖表，只要反映一個問題即可。要點：1. The nu mber of con sumers in crease from 2011 to 2018.2. The fast food delivery service has attracting many giants in China.3. There are some hidde n problems.聯(lián)句：With the number of consumers climbing dramatically from 2011 to 2018， the fast

7、 food deliveryservice has attracted many gia nts in China. But some hidde n problems can't be igno red. （ 30wds）寫作秘訣：目前的文章概括基本分兩類：新事物流行（一般好的方面）；消極現(xiàn)象流行。因此概括就是：現(xiàn)象流行+ 評論（人們歡迎或人們反對或二者兼有）記住這些結(jié)構：with popular; despite the disadvantages/advantages; raise doubts二、如何寫正文第一個寫作要求：寫外賣流行的原因根據(jù)最近三年的作文規(guī)律，原因等一定先從材

8、料中找，我們不難找到以下的：the already-existing restaurants , without taking the seats of restaurants（總結(jié)：節(jié)約時間，提高效率）fighti ng aga inst each other for more market share in Chin a's fast food delivery in dustry（總結(jié)：競爭激烈?guī)淼馁|(zhì)量和服務提高）第二個寫作要求：談看法和建議：the fast food en terprises should have certa in comprehe nsive stre

9、ngthsthe hidde n problems（總結(jié)：小公司沒有優(yōu)勢，推論：可能犧牲質(zhì)量，低價；其它問題：污染）另外：由于要求是說從消費者角度考慮，所以寫的時候要把consumers突出一點。Two reas ons give rise to the flourish ing in dustry. First, such service saves con sumers the trouble of freque nti ng some restaura nts, thus promoti ng their efficie ncy to a big exte nt. Besides, he

10、ated competitions oblige corporations to better delivery service with low price, such as online tech no logy, which gains them in creas ing popularity.Person ally the new in dustry should be advocated but problems like food quality and possible pollution should be addressed. First, enterprises must

11、be subjected to strict supervision and, if they provide un healthy food, severe puni shme nt. Besides, give n the alarm ing pollutio n caused by the plastic package, we consumers should give high credit to those who use recycling paper as an alter native. By doing so, the fast food delivery service

12、can run on the right track.（120 wds）閃光詞匯：give rise to 引起flourishing 繁榮的save consumers the trouble 省去了消費者的麻煩frequent some restaurants 經(jīng)常去一些飯店promote their efficiency 提高效率to a big extent在很大程度上oblige corporations to 迫使企業(yè)做better delivery service 提高服務gain them increasing popularity 使他們越來越受歡迎be subjected

13、to strict supervision 接受嚴格的監(jiān)督given the alarming pollution 考慮至U驚人的污染give high credit to 高度贊揚或新任as an alter native 作為替代run on the right track 正常運行官方范文：The nu mber of the con sumers of the fast food delivery service has in creased steadily from2011 to 2018. However, there may exist some potential probl

14、ems with the new industry.A nu mber of factors con tribute to the in crease. Not only can good quality and reas on able prices of fresh food be guara nteed to some exte nt but the service can also ben efit those who are too busy to prepare meals themselves. What's more, the developme nt of the Internet has made it easy to decide on their favorite food and place orders, which is both time-saving and economical.As a consumer, I' m convincedstlhood delivery service will witness a con