最新四級(jí)作文亮點(diǎn)句

1、四級(jí)作文在追求明白、通順、完整的同時(shí)，還要力求語言的生動(dòng)、形象、讓開頭結(jié)尾更新穎脫俗，為作文增色，取得高分。(1詞匯選擇標(biāo)新立異1 盡量使用同義詞避免簡單重復(fù)。在使用同義詞的時(shí)候需要考生在選詞時(shí)斟酌其含義的微妙差別，辨析同義詞在具體語境中的不同用法。如“認(rèn)為”可用harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that等; “好的”可用conducive /beneficial/advantageo

2、us等。但要注意詞匯的準(zhǔn)確性，即必須還要考慮適合的語境。比如形容眼睛“大”, 很顯然，great, large, huge, vast, titanic, enormous 這些“大”都是不恰當(dāng)?shù)?，而只能使用big 。2 盡量使用詞性變化來豐富自己的表達(dá)手段。如to voice some different opinions 替代to give/express some different opinions; todouble/triple 替代twice or three times;3 盡量使用派生形式來點(diǎn)綴文章亮點(diǎn)。如be indicative of ,be suggestive of

3、,be fearful of 替代indicate, suggest ,fear; it is of great importance/ help/ use/ significance 替代 it is very important/ significant/ helpful/ useful; not unnecessary/ notunimportant 。(2開頭結(jié)尾新穎脫俗文章的開篇方法多種多樣，大家必須根據(jù)文章的題材、體裁、讀者等來加以選擇。作文常見的開頭形式大致有以下幾種：開門見山, 直入主題開始段可用簡潔的語言直陳主題思想，既可以吸引讀者的注意力，又可以避免跑題。例如：主題：Eut

4、hanasia(安樂死It has been said that euthanasia is quietly being practiced in some urban areas of China, despite a lack of legal protection for the death option. In my opinion, it is right to exercise mercy killing.該段第一句引入安樂死這一討論的主題，第二句接著直接陳述作者對(duì)安樂死的看法。從這個(gè)開始段不難看出，全文將闡述“為什么實(shí)行安樂死是對(duì)的”。以問句形式開頭, 點(diǎn)明主題文章的開頭還可用設(shè)

5、問的方式點(diǎn)明主題，提示全文內(nèi)容，激發(fā)讀者讀下去，探個(gè)究竟。例如：主題：Water ShortageChina, a country blessed with a great number of rivers, has abundant water resources. However, China s many cities are going thirsty. What has the shortage?本段第一句說中國水資源豐富，第二句指出中國許多城市卻缺水，第三句提出了讀者心中的疑問：是什么原因?qū)е氯彼? 從而激發(fā)讀者的興趣，吸引讀者讀下去，尋找問題的答案。引用名言、諺語，點(diǎn)明主題開始

6、段還可以巧妙引用與主題相關(guān)的名言、常用習(xí)語、諺語、格言等，既可增強(qiáng)文章的感染力，也可點(diǎn)題或表明作者的觀點(diǎn)。例如：A proverb says, “You are only young once.” (適用于已記住的名言It goes without saying that we cannot be young forever.(適用于自編名言Just as the saying goes, “ so many people, somany minds ”, it is quite understandable that views on this issue vary from person

7、to person. To this issue, different people come up with various attitudes.引用名言，使文章很自然進(jìn)入主題，同時(shí)也增強(qiáng)了文章的感染力。運(yùn)用數(shù)字統(tǒng)計(jì)原則上在議論文當(dāng)中不應(yīng)該出現(xiàn)虛假數(shù)字，可是在考試的時(shí)候可以編造數(shù)字。例如：According to a recent survey, about 78.9% of the college students wanted to further their study after their graduation.A recent statistics shows that tens

8、 of billions ofpounds is spent on cigarettes every year in our country.It is estimated that tens of billions of pounds is spent on cigarettes every year in our country, which is a huge waste.文章開頭使用數(shù)字，這樣吸引讀者的注意，并且是描寫顯得生動(dòng)有力。(3 結(jié)尾段(Concluding Paragraph結(jié)尾段同開篇一樣重要。結(jié)尾段對(duì)全文要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行概括總結(jié)、表達(dá)作者的目的，以求留給讀者一個(gè)深刻完整的印象，增

9、強(qiáng)文章的效果。文章結(jié)尾的形式常見的有以下幾種:總結(jié)全文, 得出結(jié)論結(jié)尾段可用總結(jié)全文的方式強(qiáng)調(diào)、概括全文的主要內(nèi)容，加深讀者對(duì)全文的深刻了解與認(rèn)識(shí)。例如：主題：Physical exerciseIn a word, I benefit a lot from doing physical exercise. I seldom get sick but feel vigorous even after a whole days work. I shall keep up doing physicalexercise so as to live happily and fruitfully.本段總結(jié)

10、了全文，加深讀者對(duì)“體育鍛煉有益于健康”這一主題的認(rèn)識(shí)。建議與結(jié)論文章的結(jié)尾常結(jié)合兩種寫法。有的先提出建議或解決辦法，再做結(jié)論。有的則先做出結(jié)論，再提出建議，例如：主題：Shortage of natural resources(自然資源短缺The prolonged (sustained development of human society proves that population and economic and social progress eventually cannot be achieved without natural resources. To save thel

11、imited resources, we must take some measures to handle appropriately the relationship between the population and resources.該段首先進(jìn)行總結(jié)：人類社會(huì)持續(xù)的發(fā)展證明，如果沒有自然資源，人口的繁衍、經(jīng)濟(jì)和社會(huì)的發(fā)展最終都是不可能的。作者接著建議，為了節(jié)約有限的資源，我們必須采取一些措施，正確處理人口與資源的關(guān)系。提醒讀者事物的兩面性文章的結(jié)尾還可以以轉(zhuǎn)折的形式，提醒讀者任何事物都有兩面性，從而認(rèn)識(shí)到其不足或負(fù)面的影響。例如：主題：Solar Energy(太陽能However

12、, solar energy has its disadvantages. One is that it is still very expensive for widespread practical use. Besides, solar systems would not work in cloudy or rainy days as well as at night. But in sunny areas, solar energy could help solve the energy crisis.該段指出了太陽能的兩個(gè)缺點(diǎn)：一、太貴; 二、太陽能系統(tǒng)在陰雨天和晚上無法工作，從而讓

13、人們更全面地了解太陽能。值得注意的是，在指出某一事物的另一面時(shí)，不能用太多筆墨，否則會(huì)喧賓奪主，淡化主題思想。主題：Computers As a classic proverb goes that no garden has no weeds. Computers do play a positive role in thedevelopment of people lives, despite a slice of unfavorable impacts. We should, therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opp

14、osite facet.(4巧妙運(yùn)用名言警句結(jié)尾段：用名言警句收尾，意在引申文章內(nèi)涵，充分表明考生自己的觀點(diǎn)，極具說服力，收到“言有盡而意無窮”的效果，起到了畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。例如：Therefore, we should never underestimate our own ability but should believe in the proverb: “Where there is a will, there is a way.”Confidence is a must for success4 四級(jí)考試詞匯不足采取措施：在四級(jí)作文寫作過程中，很多考生往往有很多話要說，但是詞匯量不足

15、無法完整表達(dá)自己的意思。為了應(yīng)付這種情況，我們總結(jié)簡便易行的應(yīng)急措施：試用籠統(tǒng)詞英語中有些具體詞音節(jié)較多，使用頻率不高，容易遺忘，而英語中籠統(tǒng)詞有have, take 等，它的意義廣泛，搭配性強(qiáng)，構(gòu)成詞組后可以替代眾多具體動(dòng)詞，大致表達(dá)意思。例如：這個(gè)男孩跟他爸爸長得很像。The boy resembles his father.分析：這個(gè)句子中，如果考生想不起resemble這個(gè)單詞時(shí)，用take after 代替。如：The boy takes after his father.其效果及表達(dá)的意義決不亞于第一句。這樣的例子還很多。如：I experienced a terrible har

16、d time.= I had a terrible hard time.I will preside over the meeting.= I will take the meeting.聯(lián)想有關(guān)詞匯當(dāng)遺忘單詞時(shí)，發(fā)揮想象力，想出一切與之有關(guān)的單詞，多角度地運(yùn)用語言。一般情況下，聯(lián)想可按下列思路進(jìn)行：1聯(lián)想同義詞;2聯(lián)想反義詞。英語語言中眾多的同義詞在許多情況下是可以通用的。但也要注意英語同義詞并不是完全對(duì)等，要根據(jù)具體語境選擇同義詞。The driver stepped on the gas and accelerated the car.分析：accelerate 使用頻率不太高，很容易遺

17、忘。而其同義詞quicken; speed up 卻很容易記。以后者取代前者絲毫不影響原句的意義。再如：the prevailing economic conditions inNorthern Ireland= the current economic conditions in Northern Ireland同樣，用其反義詞來取代某一遺忘了的詞也是可行的，例如：He is stubborn.= He is not tame.She is talkative.= She is never quiet.試用解釋性語句解釋性語句能幫助我們巧妙地避開一些大詞，難詞，又能使意思表達(dá)流暢。英語當(dāng)中多功能解釋性語句，就可以起到這一作用。例如：He is a dumb.= He is a person who can not speak.I ve nev