高中英語寫作技巧及要領(lǐng)

1、抄改連擴抓審書面表達書面表達六步法書面表達六步法書面表達六步法一、審題抄改連擴抓書面表達3 3 審審: : 審文體審文體 審要求審要求 審人稱審人稱2007浙江浙江高考高考在英語課堂上，你喜歡老師授課時只用在英語課堂上，你喜歡老師授課時只用英語還是英語、漢語兼用。請你圍繞英語還是英語、漢語兼用。請你圍繞“ “ How do you prefer your English classes to be taught? In English only , or in both English and Chinese? ” ” 這個問題，參考這個問題，參考所給要點，選擇一種授課形式，寫一篇英所給要點，

2、選擇一種授課形式，寫一篇英語短文語短文授課形式一：授課形式一： 只用英語只用英語授課形式二：授課形式二： 英語、漢語兼用英語、漢語兼用優(yōu)點：有助于提高優(yōu)點：有助于提高 聽說能力等聽說能力等缺憾：不易聽懂缺憾：不易聽懂 等等結(jié)論：結(jié)論：優(yōu)點：易于理解等優(yōu)點：易于理解等缺憾：英語氛圍不濃缺憾：英語氛圍不濃 等等結(jié)論：結(jié)論：注意：注意：1.1.詞數(shù)詞數(shù)100-120, 100-120, 短文開頭已給出短文開頭已給出( (不計詞數(shù)不計詞數(shù)). ). 2. 2.參考詞匯參考詞匯: atmosphere : atmosphere 氛圍氛圍I prefer my English classes to be

3、taught in I prefer my English classes to be taught in 審文體：審文體： 審要求：審要求： 審人稱：審人稱：議論文議論文根據(jù)所給要點，選擇一種授課形式提論點，根據(jù)所給要點，選擇一種授課形式提論點，論據(jù)，論證過程論據(jù)，論證過程第一人稱第一人稱某考生某考生 I prefer my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese. Now in our English classes, with how to be taught we have two choices: In Eng

4、lish only, or in both English and Chinese, and its all has its advantages and disadvantages. If in English only, can make our listening and speaking more good, and what worse, we will hard to understand our class. But if in both English and Chinese, also understand will be more easily, the English a

5、tmosphere is less than in English only. In my opinion, we study English to understand it is the most important. After we study and understand it good, listening or speaking will be easy. So I think my English classes to be taught in both English and Chinese will be more better.書面表達六步法二、抓要點確定主要行為What

6、 happened?抄改連擴審書面表達 時下，各類電視節(jié)目廣泛使用短信參與方式，對此時下，各類電視節(jié)目廣泛使用短信參與方式，對此人們評價不一。請你對此現(xiàn)象向人們評價不一。請你對此現(xiàn)象向21st Century 21st Century 投稿，投稿，談談個人看法：談談個人看法： 態(tài)度一態(tài)度一 態(tài)度二態(tài)度二 你的觀點你的觀點給觀眾提供了更多的給觀眾提供了更多的參與機會參與機會 控制不當，節(jié)目品位控制不當，節(jié)目品位無法保證無法保證 ？ 給媒體帶來更多收益給媒體帶來更多收益 短信費用過高，觀眾短信費用過高，觀眾易生反感易生反感 迎合年輕人對新事物迎合年輕人對新事物的追求的追求 沉溺于此，浪費精力沉溺于

7、此，浪費精力 要求要求:1:1詞數(shù)：詞數(shù)：120120詞左右。詞左右。 2 2可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫可根據(jù)內(nèi)容要點適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫. . Practice: 1. 提供機會提供機會2. 帶來收益帶來收益3. 迎合追求迎合追求4. 保證品位保證品位5. 產(chǎn)生反感產(chǎn)生反感6. 浪費精力浪費精力7. 你的觀點你的觀點 offer chances bring in profits / benefit from appeal to the needs of ensure the taste feel bad / bored / annoyed waste time and e

8、nergy take a critical attitude 列出要點書面表達六步法三、擴展成句形成基本語義單位Who did what?抄改連抓審書面表達 1 offer chances Audiences are offered more chances to participate in the live programs. 2 bring in profits / benefit from They bring in profits to the mass media. 3 appeal to the needs of They appeal to the needs of the y

9、oung people. In my opinion we should take a critical attitude towards short messages. 書面表達六步法四、連句成文正確使用過渡詞，使行文流暢。并注意段與段的銜接。 抄改擴抓審書面表達a. 表示列舉和順序用表示列舉和順序用 firstly, secondly, last, then, finally, next, such as，after that b. 表示意義增補和引申用表示意義增補和引申用also, besides, above all, whats more / whats worse c. 表示結(jié)果用

10、表示結(jié)果用 so, therefore, as a result, sothatd. 表示意義轉(zhuǎn)折用表示意義轉(zhuǎn)折用 instead, however, bute. 表示解釋說明用表示解釋說明用 in other words, that is to sayf. 表示概括和總結(jié)用表示概括和總結(jié)用 in one/a word, in all, as we knowg. 表示時間順序用表示時間順序用 now, at first, when, afterh. 表示并列關(guān)系用表示并列關(guān)系用 or, and, also, too, i. 表示條件關(guān)系用表示條件關(guān)系用 as (so) long as, if,

11、 unless j. 表示舉例用表示舉例用 for example, for instance, such ask. 表示讓步關(guān)系用表示讓步關(guān)系用 though, even if , however, as 1.過好行文邏輯關(guān)過好行文邏輯關(guān)A passage without connectorsDefenders hold the view that short messages offer the audiences more chances to participate in the live programsThe mass media benefit a lot from them.T

12、hey appeal to the need of the young people A passage with connectorsDefenders hold the view that short messages offer the audiences more chances to participate in the live programsIn this way, the mass media benefit a lotfrom themOn the other hand, they appealto the need of the young people Practice

13、: Try to improve the passage below.Critics accuse that if the short messagesare out of control, we cannot ensure thetaste of the programs. The expenses may make audiences feel badsome teenagersare addicted to them and too much timeand energy are wasted Critics accuse that if the short messagesare ou

14、t of control, we cannot ensure thetaste of the programs. Whats more, theexpenses may make audiences feel badTo make matters worse, some teenagersare so addicted to them that too much timeand energy are wastedOne possible version: At present, short messages are widely involved in various TV programs.

15、 People react to them in different ways Defenders hold the view that short messages offer the audiences more chances to participate in the live programsIn this way, the mass media benefit a lot from themOn the other hand, they appeal to the need of the young people Critics accuse that if the short m

16、essages are out of control, we cannot ensure the taste of the programs. Whats more, the expenses may make audiences feel badTo make matters worse, some teenagers are so addicted to them that too much time and energy are wasted As far as I am concerned, the short message is typical of information tec

17、hnology, but it is a powerful tool that needs to be used with care2.2.用活語言，準確生動用活語言，準確生動 使用常用高級語法:非謂語動詞，with復合結(jié)構(gòu)，虛擬語氣，強調(diào)句，倒裝句，感嘆句，定語從句，狀語從句等The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.a. The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. (so that/sothat/suchthat)Not only is he a famous s

18、inger but also he has written some interesting books.b. He is a famous singer. He has also written some interesting books. (not onlybut also)c. My brother was riding a bike. I sat on the seat behind him. (with sb. doing) My brother was riding a bike with me sitting on the seat behind him.Not having

19、received his letter he decided to write to her again.d. He hadnt received a letter . He decided to write to her again. (not having done)e. We are glad to see such great changes in our school life. ( how )How glad we are to see such great changes in our school life. 一篇檔次較高、得分較多的書面表達，一篇檔次較高、得分較多的書面表達，

20、給閱卷老師的印象應該是：給閱卷老師的印象應該是： 語意要合情合理，過渡自然；語意要合情合理，過渡自然； 語句要有簡有繁，隨語句要有簡有繁，隨“意意”而安；而安； 語法要結(jié)構(gòu)正確，無懈可擊；語法要結(jié)構(gòu)正確，無懈可擊； 語言要地道流暢，書寫規(guī)范。語言要地道流暢，書寫規(guī)范。 目前，許多學校對學生采取封閉式管理，學生對此看法不一。目前，許多學校對學生采取封閉式管理，學生對此看法不一。請根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇英語短文，談談自己的看法。請根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，寫一篇英語短文，談談自己的看法。 有的同學認為有的同學認為 有的同學認為有的同學認為 學校限制我們的自由；學學校限制我們的自由；學生和社會接觸

21、少；學生的生和社會接觸少；學生的興趣和愛好不能得到充分興趣和愛好不能得到充分的發(fā)展。因此的發(fā)展。因此 學校是學習知識的地方：學學校是學習知識的地方：學生應該安心在學校里學習；生應該安心在學校里學習；學生缺乏自覺性，離開了老學生缺乏自覺性，離開了老師，可能會師，可能會 你的看法：你的看法： 注意：注意：1. 1. 字數(shù)字數(shù)120120左右左右; ; 不要逐字翻譯。不要逐字翻譯。2. 2. 短文開頭已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。短文開頭已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。 Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long Pract

22、ice Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long. Students have different opinions about it. Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society. They are not able to fully develop their interests and hobbies. Therefore, they have lost interest in their studies. Some others think school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons. Some students lack the ability to control thems