備戰(zhàn)2013高考英語5年真題精選與模擬-專題17-短文改錯(共33頁)

1、精選優(yōu)質(zhì)文檔-傾情為你奉上【2012高考真題精選】（2012·課標全國卷）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and little a

2、ggressive. From the time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my toy. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things did wrong, I got angry and broke it. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see which was happening. When I tear apart my fift

3、h birthday toy train, my father said, “That's it. No more toys to you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I must make my toys to last. My attitude changed from then on.【解析】I learned early in life that I had to be more patient and littl aggressive. From t

4、he time I was about four until I was about six, I destroyed each of my to. I was happy when the toys worked, but when things di wrong, I got angry and broke i. For a while parents bought me new toys. But before long they began to see whic was happening. When I tea apart my fifth birthday toy train,

5、my father said, “That's it. No more toys t you.” My punishment lasted a year. Meanwhile, I found out that with more patience I mus make my toys to'last. My attitude changed from then on.1. littleless考查副詞的用法。根據(jù)句意：我不得不多一些耐心而少一些挑釁性。此處less修飾形容詞。2. toytoys考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)形式。根據(jù)each of 可知，應(yīng)該是“我”的玩具中的每一個，故用

6、復(fù)數(shù)形式toys。3. didwent或者did 后加go考查固定短語的表達法。解題關(guān)鍵：掌握短語go wrong意為：出錯。9. mustcould/might考查情態(tài)動詞。根據(jù)句意：擁有更多的耐心，“我”就可能使玩具使用得更久。10. 去掉last前的to考查不定式作賓語補足語。解題關(guān)鍵：make sb/sth do，此處make作“使”解，其后接不帶to的不定式作賓補。（2012·浙江卷）下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫上該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該

7、詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。Two years before, I traveled to Brazil and I rented for a car. Unfortunate, I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two week. I called my parents, so I did not tell them what had happened. I knew

8、that they will be worried about myself because I was so farther away, and that my mother would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them interested stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.【答案】Two years befor， I travel

9、ed to Brazil and I rented for'a car. Unfortunat， I had an accident and hit another car, and I needed to stay in a hospital for at least two wee. I called my parents, s I did not tell them what had happened. I knew that they wil be worried about mysel because I was so farthe away, and that my mot

10、her would not sleep if she knew. Therefore, I told them intereste stories and how I was enjoying Brazil. As a result, nobody knew truth. I still think that it was the right thing to do.（2011·陜西卷）假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號()，并在其下面寫出該加

11、的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線(_)，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。My father and I stayed at the South Lake Hotel for a week when we visit Beijing last month. It is in the downtown area, but it is easy to go to anywhere from the hotel by public transport.We lived in a comfort

12、ably double­room with a big bath. What I liked best were the free high­speed Internet connection in the room. I checked my email messages every day. I also shared for my friends many photos taking in Beijing. The food was wonderful with reasonable prices, and we enjoyed several local dish.

13、It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of me who is going to Beijing.It is such great hotel that I would recommend it to any friend of m who is going to Beijing.8dishdishes由several修飾，名詞應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)。9such后加asuch修飾的hotel是可數(shù)名詞單數(shù)，需加不定冠詞a。10memine雙重所有格的構(gòu)成是“of 名詞性物主代詞或名詞所有格”。（2012·遼寧卷

14、） 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。Dear Diana，Thank you for the lovely day we have with you. It was so kind for you to let us bring Anne&#

15、39;s friend, Gina. Unfortunate, the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, for a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mile. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unless the road was clear. In the car park he

16、re Gina nearly got knocked over as car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. They finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to home.【解析】Dear Diana，Thank you for the lovely day we hav with you. It was so kind fo you to let us bring Anne's friend, Gina. Unfortunat，

17、 the only problem was the journey home. There had been a terrible accident on the highway and, fo a result, there was a long line of traffic for at least six mil. In the end, we drove to a service station and waited there unles the road was clear. In the car park her Gina nearly got knocked over as

18、car drove out far too quickly from behind a lorry. The finally dropped Gina off at her parents' and made our own way to' home.【2012·四川卷】此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾()；如有錯誤(每行只有一個錯誤)，則按下列情況改正：此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。此

19、行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。Dear Mom，Mothers Day is coming.Im sorry that I am abroad66_and cant send your flowers，so Im writing to you.67_Mom，I know I have never expressed my thank to you68_ before.But on today，at this special time，I just want to tell69_you loudly：I love you ，Mom! T

20、hank you so much by not70_only giving me life, but also teach me how to be a good71_person.Thank you for all you had done for me. Mom，though72_I may often say it, I do love you. Nobody can take your73_part in my heart.Whenever I am，I will always love you.74_Hope you good health and much happiness ev

21、ery day!75_ Your little girl， Jennifer73. may后加not。考查句意銜接。句意為：媽媽，雖然我可能沒有經(jīng)常說，但我確實很愛你。74. Whenever改為Wherever?？疾檫B詞。根據(jù)句意：無論我在哪里，我總是愛你的。75. Hope改為Wish?？疾閯釉~辨析。動詞hope后不能接雙賓語，而wish可以，wish符合語境和語法規(guī)則。（2012·全國卷）此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾()；如有錯誤(每行只有一個錯誤)，則按下列情況改正：此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉，在該行

22、右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。Dear Editor，I'm writing to tell you opinion about water saving.76._Water is important. We, as well as animal, cannot live77._without water and neither agriculture or industry can go78._without it.

23、 Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79._Many countries in the world find we don't have enough water.80._To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all81._out to plant trees though trees will help save water. Next, no82._drinking water should be left running. Third, we should

24、find83._ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84._water for which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.85._Sincerely，Li Hua【解析】Dear Editor，I'm writing to tell youopinion about water saving.76._my_Water is important. We, as well as animal,_cannot live77._animals_witho

25、ut water and neither agriculture or industry can go78._nor_without it. Yet it seemed water is becoming less and less.79._seems_Many countries in the world find we don't have enough water.80._they_To deal with a problem, I think, we should first go all81._the/this/that_out to plant trees though t

26、rees will help save water. Next, no82._because/since/as_drinking water should be left running. Third, we should find83._ways to reuse the water using in washing, especially bath 84._used_water forKG3mm which is quite a lot, and that will save much water.85._for_Sincerely，Li Hua84. usingused根據(jù)后面的in w

27、ashing可知是洗衣服用過的水，所以用used。85. 去掉forwhich指代water，作主語，不需要for。【2011高考真題精選】（2011·全國卷）第二節(jié)短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分)此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行右邊橫線上畫一個勾()；如有錯誤(每行只有一個錯誤)，則按下列情況改正：此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，在該行右邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行右邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原

28、行沒有錯的不要改。Dear George，Its been a week after we left your family and we are now 76._back home. Thank you very much for showing them around 77._your city and providing us for the wonderful meals. After 78. _we said goodbye to you, we went to Washington DC., 79._where we stayed for three days. My brothe

29、r was so much fond 80._of the museums there that he begged my parents to staying 81. _another couple of day. However, my father had to return to 82. _work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday afternoon. It 83. _was really a nice experience. If youd like to make trip to 84. _our city some day, I wi

30、ll be better than happy to be your guide. 85. _Yours，Mike79. 正確80. 去掉much“soadj”為結(jié)果狀語從句，much多余。81. staying改為staybeg sb to do sth央求某人做某事。82. day改為dayscouple是復(fù)數(shù)，所以day加s。83. fly改為flew時態(tài)錯誤，前面使用的過去時，時態(tài)應(yīng)該保持一致。84. 加amake a trip to去旅行。85. better改為moremore than非常。（2011·全國卷）此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如

31、無錯誤，在該行下邊橫線上畫一個勾()；如有錯誤(每行只有一個錯誤)，則按下列情況改正：此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉，在該行下邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，在該行下邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行下邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。One of my unforgettable memory of my school in 76_Xinjiang is that of lunches we brought from our homes. 77._I hold my lunch­box

32、in my hand when I was going to 78_school.The smell from it was very good.Since the lunch 79._bell finally rang，my friends and I met under a tall tree 80_and had our lunches.My best friend Aigulie was used 81_to share her NangNang82._ cake in Xinjiang.I like them very much.Now Aigulie and 83_ I study

33、 at different colleges or we can only see each other 84_ during the summer vacation.I think over her a lot and I miss 85_ the food and the good time we had together.【解析】76. memory memoriesone of后面的名詞要用復(fù)數(shù)形式。77. lunches前加thelunches后面有定語從句修飾，因此為特指。78. hold held本文講述的是過去的事情。79. Since When80. 81. 去掉used前的

34、wasbe used to意思是“習(xí)慣于”，后面跟v.Nang（2011·四川卷）第一節(jié)短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分)此題要求改正所給短文中的錯誤。對標有題號的每一行作出判斷：如無錯誤，在該行下邊橫線上畫一個勾()；如有錯誤(每行只有一個錯誤)，則按下列情況改正：此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉，在該行下邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，在該行下邊橫線上寫出該加的詞。此行錯一個詞：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該行下邊橫線上寫出改正后的詞。注意：原行沒有錯的不要改。Tom was having much troubles g

35、etting up in the 66._morning and was always late with work.His boss wanted to 67._fire him if he didnt start coming on time，but he went to 68._the doctor for a help. The doctor gave him some 69._medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. 70._The man did as told and slept really well，w

36、ake up before 71._the alarm had even gone off.He had time for a properly 72._breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.“Boss，”he 73._said，“that medicine really works！”“Im pleasing to hear 74._it，”said his boss，“but where were you yesterday？” 75._【答案】Tom was having much troubles getting up

37、in the trouble66_morning and was always late with work.His boss wanted to for67_fire him if he didnt start coming on time，but he went to so68_the doctor for a'help. The doctor gave him some aKH169_medicine and told him to take them before he went to bed. it70_The man did as told and slept really

38、 well，wake up before waking71_the alarm had even gone off.He had time for a properlyproper72_breakfast and was still the first reach the factory.“Boss，”heto73_said，“that medicine really works！”“Im pleasing to hear pleased74_it，”said his boss，“but where were you yesterday？” 75_（2011·遼寧卷） 第一節(jié)短文改錯

39、(共10小題；每小題l分，滿分10分)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有l(wèi)0處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線(劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；2只允許修改l0處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。In early January this year，the rate of UFO reports were steady，around three per weeks.When

40、，however，on Monday，January 16，a science fiction film about visitors to outer space was shown on television，there was the immediate increase in reports of sightings from all parts of the States.The commanding officer, Wayne Tyler，who directly responsible for the study of all such reports，decided to m

41、aking his findings known.They wrote an article，which said that all UFO reports could be explained for quite naturally by aircraft movements.Follow this explanation，there was a rapid drop in the number of reported sightings，because the rate remained above the previous level.all UFO reports could be e

42、xplained for'quite naturally by aircraft movements.Follow this explanation，there was a Following rapid drop in the number of reported sightings，because thealthough/though/but/yetrate remained above the previous level.1. were was主語為the rate，因此謂語動詞用單數(shù)。2. weeks week“每周”的表達為per week，此處用單數(shù)形式。3. to fr

43、om表“來自”要用from。4. the an這里泛指量的增長，需使用不定冠詞。immediate讀音為元音音素開頭，故應(yīng)用不定冠詞an。5. who后增加was/ is構(gòu)成結(jié)構(gòu)be responsible for 為負責(zé)。6. making make動詞decide后常跟不定式作賓語，因此用to make結(jié)構(gòu)。7. They He此處指代的是Wayne Tyler這個人，因此用He。8. 去掉forexplain為及物動詞，其后可直接跟賓語(即該被動句的主語all UFO reports)，故去掉for。9. follow following此處是現(xiàn)在分詞短語作伴隨狀語。10. becaus

44、e although/ though/ but/ yet根據(jù)前后兩個句子間的邏輯關(guān)系可知。（2011·全國卷） 假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞。2只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。My summer travel started terribly.I was at the

45、Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou. I was going to visit a friend here and after that I would go to Xiamen for long holiday. I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then I realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily，I had all my money on my pocket，but

46、 the only clothes I had was those I had on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages.When I finally arrived at my friend he lent to me lots of clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last.【答案】My summer travel started terribly.I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buya

47、ticket buying to Hangzhou.I was going to visit a friend here and after that thereI would go to Xiamen forlong holiday. I bought my ticket abut turned around to pick up my bag from the floor and then andI realized that someone had stolen it.Luckily I had all my money on my pocket，but the only clothes

48、 I had was those I in werehad on.It felt very strange to travel without any luggages. luggageWhen I finally arrived at my friend he lent toKG*2 me lots of friends clothes. I feel very happy that I could change my clothes at last. felt（2011·陜西卷）第二節(jié)短文改錯(共10小題；每小題1.5分，滿分15分)假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你

49、修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。增加：在缺詞處加一個漏詞符號()，并在其下面寫出該加的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線(_)，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1. 每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞；2. 只允許修改10處，多者(從第11處起)不計分。Last Sunday morning, when I was having a walk in the park near my home, I came across a crew make a new film with one of my favou

50、rite actor. I didnt have my camera with me at that time，but I rushed back home to get.Unfortunately，by the time I got back，they have finished the scene and the actor couldnt be seen everywhere.I was really disappointing and about to leave when he walked out a building.He was right there in the front

51、 of me！I couldnt believe my lucknot only did I had my photo taken with him，but he signed his name on my shirt!him，but he signed his name on my shirt!makemaking作后置定語，用非謂語動詞，與所修飾詞是主動關(guān)系，故用v（2011·重慶卷）以下標有題號的每一行均有一個錯誤，請找出，并按下列情況改正：此行多一個詞：把多余的詞用斜線()劃掉，在該行下邊橫線上寫出該詞，并也用斜線劃掉。此行缺一個詞：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號()，在該行下邊橫線

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