高三英語教師公開課改錯

1、英語高考專題復習英語高考專題復習短短 文文 改改 錯錯Warming upCorrect following words.In the other handBe responsible with sb/sthBe opposed for sthLarge quantity ofHave an effect in sbLose the heartMake a great progressThe accident was happenedIn hurryConvince sb sthAt sight ofA lot of equipments General speakingAs soon as

2、possiblyonfortoquantitiesonthethea awaswas a oftheequipmentGenerallypossibleWhats the main trouble when correcting a composition?1. 看不出句子有錯，越讀越覺得對?？床怀鼍渥佑绣e，越讀越覺得對。2. 看出句子出錯的地方看出句子出錯的地方, 但無法改正。但無法改正。3. 知道改正句子錯誤的地方知道改正句子錯誤的地方, 但答案不正確。但答案不正確。新版新版：假如英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌：假如英語課上老師要求同學們交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的

3、作文。文中共有寫的作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除處語言錯誤，要求你在錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。或修改某個單詞。 增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（），并在其下面寫上修改后的詞。），并在其下面寫上修改后的詞。刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（ ）劃掉）劃掉修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。注意：注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞；每處錯誤及其修改均限一詞； 2.只允許修改只允許修改10處，多者（處，多者（從第從第11處起處起）不計分）不計分 并不

4、是每一個句子都有錯，有些句子并并不是每一個句子都有錯，有些句子并非只有一處錯誤。非只有一處錯誤。Obey the rules of correctionI love camping .ItI love camping .Its my favourite way to spent the summer s my favourite way to spent the summer vacation. Last year,vacation. Last year,my family and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of my fami

5、ly and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the most excited the most excited experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and went on a long experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and went on a long walk walk every day . We cook over a fire and the food tasted wonderfully. e

6、very day . We cook over a fire and the food tasted wonderfully. For a For a whole Week , I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. whole Week , I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night , I At night , I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt so peaceful. It

7、heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt so peaceful. It doesdoest cost t cost many to camp, and what I believe itmany to camp, and what I believe its the best way to get close s the best way to get close nature and nature and enjoy its beauty.enjoy its beauty.spendexcitingevercookedwon

8、derfultreesandmuchtoI I love camping .itlove camping .its my favourite way to spent the summer vacation. Last year,s my favourite way to spent the summer vacation. Last year,my familyand I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the most excited my familyand I went camping in the countryside.

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10、onderfully. For a whole Week , I saw lonely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night , I whole Week , I saw lonely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night , I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt so peaceful. It doesheard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt

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12、代詞代詞介詞介詞近近5年高考短文改錯考點年高考短文改錯考點分布統(tǒng)計表分布統(tǒng)計表動動詞詞連連詞詞代代詞詞介介詞詞形容形容詞詞副詞副詞名名詞詞冠詞冠詞2015（全國卷）（全國卷） 31112112014 (全國卷）全國卷）31112112013 (全國卷）全國卷）3111121 合計合計9333543近近5年高考短文改錯考點分布統(tǒng)計表年高考短文改錯考點分布統(tǒng)計表項目項目年份年份一、動詞形一、動詞形2008浙江卷浙江卷 Last winter vacation, some of my classmates decide to travel with their friends , while I c

13、hose to take a part-time job.2006安徽卷：安徽卷：Anyone can borrow books if he or she wish. decidedwishes2006安徽卷：安徽卷： You can sit at the desk and read the daily newspapers, magazines and the other books, but you are not permit to take them out. 2006天津卷：天津卷： Today, I got a letter that said I had been admitti

14、ng to a college. permittedadmitted語態(tài)：主要看句子的主語和謂語之間是主動還是被動語態(tài)：主要看句子的主語和謂語之間是主動還是被動關系，還要注意語態(tài)的構成形式、有些不能使用被動關系，還要注意語態(tài)的構成形式、有些不能使用被動語態(tài)的動詞以及主動形式表被動的情況。語態(tài)的動詞以及主動形式表被動的情況。2014全國卷全國卷II： My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of 2015浙江卷：浙江卷： In the morning, it was full of students exercisi

15、ng. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. looksis2015全國卷全國卷I： Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very 2015陜西卷：陜西卷： I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.to二、名詞數二、名詞數 指指名詞單、復數形式名詞單、復數形式的用法錯誤、的用法錯誤、a/an2006

16、浙江卷：浙江卷：Your knowledges of Greece can help the whole class.2008浙江卷：浙江卷：I learned from my teacher that a nearby company was looking for students with good handwriting to write addresses on envelope. envelopesknowledge 2006福建卷福建卷： If you have interests in it, reply to me soon. 學生版：學生版：Most of the stud

17、ents in our class are now making rapid progresses 2006重慶卷：重慶卷： In summer, the sea under the blue skies is even more beautiful. progressskyinterest2015陜西：陜西：Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on.steps三、還要注意形和副三、還要注意形和副 注意注意形容詞和副詞形容詞和副詞在句子中的作用和具體用在句子中的作用和具體用法。這也是高考短文改錯題的?？键c。法。這也是高考短文改

18、錯題的?？键c。2007浙江卷：浙江卷：I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. 學生版：學生版：We should work hardly to achieve our udhard 2006湖北卷：湖北卷： A helping hand is always stronger enough to lift you up. 2006遼寧卷：遼寧卷： She was usual patient with her students and never made

19、them disappointed. strongusually2015浙江：浙江： On the left hand side of the class, I can easy see the football field. 2015陜西卷：陜西卷： My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decided to ask her for help.1 系動詞后用形容詞（如系動詞后用形容詞（如am/is/are/was/were/become/go/smell/feel）2 形容詞修飾名詞，副詞修飾動詞，形容詞。形容詞修飾名詞，副詞

20、修飾動詞，形容詞。easilybest四、非謂語，細辨別四、非謂語，細辨別 這是考查最多的錯誤形式之一。主要有這是考查最多的錯誤形式之一。主要有現現在分詞、過去分詞，動名詞在分詞、過去分詞，動名詞和和不定式不定式錯誤。錯誤。NMET 2003: Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express myself in simple English.2007寧夏卷：寧夏卷：Li Meng came see me every day. talkingto2008浙江卷：浙江卷： It is one of

21、 the funniest things finding on the Internet so far this year.學生版：學生版： The big fire burned hundreds of houses, made hundreds of families homeless.makingfound 人稱代詞，物主代詞的使用人稱代詞，物主代詞的使用反身代詞反身代詞oneself 的使用的使用人稱代詞的主格和賓格人稱代詞的主格和賓格不定代詞的使用不定代詞的使用Both,all,either,neither,none的使用的使用.6. Whose 和和whos， its和和 its的

22、區(qū)別的區(qū)別五五、 代詞代詞格，格，細領悟細領悟（ 2007全國全國I） I was only about six when he held his hand out to me. I took it in me and we walked.mine2007陜西：陜西： Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!myself學生版：學生版：We must try ours best to overcome all difficulties to solve this particular problems.ourour 2015浙

23、江 Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. 2014陜西 jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the arrows hit the target.itNoneNone 主要考查習慣搭配方面的基礎知識，其主要考查習慣搭配方面的基礎知識，其錯誤表現形式主要有三種：錯誤表現形式主要有三種：多詞、少詞和搭多詞、少詞和搭配錯誤。配錯誤。 catch a sight of lose the heart in hurry

24、in Sunday afternoon express us such many peopleaonourselvesso六、習慣用法要記住六、習慣用法要記住 2007浙江卷：浙江卷：So I didnt lose my heart and kept running. 學生版：學生版：Because the help you gave me that summer, My life changed. 2006福建卷：福建卷： It is so a beautiful place! ofsuch七、句子成分多分析七、句子成分多分析 不同的句子成分要用不同的詞類；不同的語境要不同的句子成分要用不同

25、的詞類；不同的語境要選擇不同的詞語。只有對句子結構和成分作細致的分選擇不同的詞語。只有對句子結構和成分作細致的分析，才能找出用詞不當的錯誤。析，才能找出用詞不當的錯誤。NMET 2004 : I dont know that they dont like to talk with me. 2007天津卷：天津卷：I was lucky enough to have a teacher which didnt take my bad grades as a judgement of my abilities, but whywho / that八、邏輯錯誤須關注八、邏輯錯誤須關注 與句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，屬與句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，屬于邏輯性錯誤，如稱謂上的于邏輯性錯誤，如稱謂上的張冠李戴張冠李戴。20