高分作文技巧指導----丑小鴨變白天鵝魔法一：

1、.高分作文技巧指導 -丑小鴨變白天鵝魔法一：適當運用高級詞匯在寫作中“較高級詞匯”的使用主要是指使用大綱上沒有的詞語、使用通過構(gòu)詞法變化來的新詞、使用同(近)義詞或反義詞等來代替常見詞語。在造句時,“較高級詞匯”如能運用貼切自然，哪怕整篇文章只用上一個，也會使你的作文顯示出與眾不同。1.我對英語非常感興趣。Im very interested in English.Im quite / extremely interested in English 2. 我們的校園位于市中心。Our school is in the center of the city. Our school is loca

2、ted in the center of the cityOur campus situates in the center of the city3.放學后，我們有很多作業(yè)要做。After school, we have a lot of homework to do.After school, we have endless homework to do.4) 我們可以得到社會及工作經(jīng)驗。We can get some working and social experience We can abtain some working as well as social experience5

3、 洗澡間和廚房都很好。The bathroom and the kitchen are good.The bathroom and the kitchen are well-furnished6. 大部分學生認為應(yīng)當學好英語。Most of the students think it is necessary to study EnglishThe majority of the students hold the view that it is necessary to master English.高分作文技巧指導 -丑小鴨變白天鵝魔法二：恰當運用漂亮句型在造句時,既要使句子生動，又要使其

4、簡明扼要。.使用一些強勢句式，如強調(diào)句、感嘆句、倒裝句等，增強語句的表現(xiàn)力。使用漂亮句型，特別是打破漢語句子結(jié)構(gòu)的束縛而重組的句子會成為得分亮點。1My brother is a college student, and he is glad to help others. My brother who is a college student is glad to help others. （使用定語從句） My brother, who is a college student, is glad to help others. My brother, a college student,

5、is glad to help others. （使用同位語）2. 我們應(yīng)當盡力幫助他。 We should try our best to help him We should spare no effort to help him We should help him as far as we can. We should do whatever we can to help him.實戰(zhàn)訓練：1. To his surprise, the little girl knows so much about it. （使用名詞性從句）2. Though he is young, he know

6、s a lot.3. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用強調(diào)句型) 4. I passed the exam because of your help.(用虛擬語氣）5. She entered the room and many students followed her. (使用過去分詞)6. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)7. I wont believe what h

7、e says. （使用狀語從句） 8. If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. （用并列句）9As soon as he arrived ,he began to work. (使用倒裝句)10 If you work hard , you will make greater progress (使用the more the more的句型)參考答案：1. What makes him surprised is that the little girl knows so much about it.It surprises him th

8、at the little girl knows so much about it.2. Young as he is , he knows a lot.3. It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened4. But for for your help, I wouldnt have passed the exam.Without your help, I wouldnt have passed the exam.If it had not been for your

9、help, I would have failed in the exam.5. She entered the room ,followed by many students.6. They went back to school singing and laughing.7. Whatever he says, I wont believe him.8. Study hard and you will make rapid progress.9. No sooner had he arrived than he began to work Hardly had he he arrived

10、when he began to work.10. The harder you work., the greater progress you will make.高分作文技巧指導 -丑小鴨變白天鵝魔法三：準確運用過渡詞、過渡句在寫作中，我們可按時間、空間或其它邏輯順序來安排各要點的運用，過渡詞的準確運用加強了句子之間、段落之間的聯(lián)系，使文章表達連貫，渾然一體。同時為使主題突出,結(jié)構(gòu)嚴謹，我們應(yīng)注意學習和使用過渡句，使文章全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，表達嚴謹?shù)取?表遞進：and; then ; besides; whats more; in addiction ; besides furthermore;

11、 moreover ;2表轉(zhuǎn)折：but; however; though; or else; otherwise ; on the contrary; while; after all等3表總結(jié)：finally; at last; in brief; in a word; in all; generally speaking等4表描述：for example; for instance; actually; in fact; as a matter of fact;in other words 等5. 表推理：as a result; therefore; thus; on account o

12、f等6. 表強調(diào)：indeed; certainly; surely; above all等7. 表對比：in the same way; similarly; just as; on the one hand , instead等8. 表目的：for this reason; for the purpose of; so as to; so that 等邏輯角度合適的過渡性詞匯時間順序first, second, then, finally/at last , soon， immediately, suddenly空間順序here, there, on one sideon the othe

13、r side,in front of, at the back of, next to對稱for one thing, for another thing; on one hand, on the other hand因果because, since, as, thanks to, as a result (of)條件as long as, so long as, on condition that, if, unless讓步though, as, even if/though, whether, who (what, when, where)ever遞進whats more, besides

14、, to make matters worse, whats worse過渡性插入語I think, Im afraid, you know, As we all know實戰(zhàn)訓練一：用適當?shù)倪^渡詞填空，使短文通順連貫：_( 目前)it is usual for us students to find part-time jobs in the holidays. Last summer, I worked as a waiter in a restaurant, and I learned a lot. _(首先), it was the first time for me to earn

15、money on my own, so I felt extremely excited. Now I can buy what I want without asking my parents for money as before. _(7第二), during the period I learned_(不僅) the value of money _(而且) the way to get along with others. _(第三), I gained some working experience _(和) social experience, which I found a g

16、ood preparation for the world outside school. It was useful to my future work. _(總之), I had a wonderful vacation.實戰(zhàn)訓練二：用適當?shù)倪^渡詞，過渡句使短文通順連貫：_( 引出話題的過渡詞), more and more college students, in recent years, are finding it difficult to find jobs in big cities. Why it is difficult for college students to fi

17、nd jobs? _(過渡句原因有如下幾條)_( 原因一)，many graduates are looking forward to find jobs in big cities, not willing to work in the countryside. _（原因二）, some college students pursue too high goals and are too particular about such factors as working conditions, salary, and so on. _（原因三）, there are not enough op

18、portunities to satisfy most of the hunters in big cities while in the countryside talented people are badly needed and a lot of posts are waiting for us._(事實上), Rural areas are a vast world, where you can put your abilities to good use and youll be able to make greater contributions to the building

19、of new countryside. _（總結(jié)或表明觀點） college students should have the right attitude towards themselves and the job. I believe we can have as bright a future in the country as we have in the city.高分作文技巧指導 -丑小鴨變白天鵝魔法四：靈活擴展句子1北京很美 Beijing is beautiful. Beijing is so beautiful that many people come here. Bei

20、jing is so beautiful that many people come here every year. Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year. Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people come here every year from all around the world. Beijing is so beautiful that thousands of people, no matter young or old

21、, men or women, come here every year from all around the world.” Beijing is so beautiful that it attracts visitors from both home and abroad every year.2. 我們該保護環(huán)境 We should protect our environment . We should take action to protect our environment . We should take action to protect our environment t

22、o save the earth. We should take action to protect our environment instead of polluting the earth. Saving the earth is saving ourselves. It is time for us to take action to protect our environment。 As middle school students, what we should do is to spare no effort to protect our environment. 3. 塑料袋引

23、起白色污染 plastic bags will cause (result in,或 lead to) white pollution。 Too much use of plastic bags will cause serious white pollution . More and more plastic bags are used by people every day,which will cause serious white pollution.With the improvement of peoples living standard, more and more plast

24、ic bags are used by people every day,which will cause serious white pollution. As is known to us all, too much use of plastic bags will cause serious white pollution It is reported that the problem of “white pollution” caused by using plastic bags is becoming increasingly serious in the world.4中國人有必

25、要過洋節(jié)日嗎？ Is there any need for Chinese people to celebrate western festivals? Recently there has been a heated discussion about whether there is any need for Chinese people to celebrate western festivals. As for the question whether there is any need for Chinese people to celebrate western festivals,

26、 different people have different opinions. Just as the saying goes, So many people, so many minds. As for the question whether there is any need for Chinese people to celebrate western festivals, different people have different answers With the development of economy and the improvement of peoples l

27、iving conditions, more and more Chinese people like to celebrate western festivals .As for the question whether there is any need for Chinese people to celebrate western festivals, different people have different opinions. As we can see, with the development of economy and the improvement of peoples

28、 living conditions, more and more Chinese people like to celebrate western festivals .As for the question whether there is any need for Chinese people to celebrate western festivals, different people have different opinions.實戰(zhàn)練習1. 兼職工作會影響學生的學業(yè)嗎？Will part-time jobs influence the studies of students ？ 對于兼職工作是否會影響學生的學業(yè)的問題，不同的人有不同的觀點。_ 俗話說，“凡事都有兩面性”。對于兼職工作是否會影響學生的學業(yè)的問題，不同的人有不同的說法。（恰當使用諺語）_2 . 一份適當?shù)臉I(yè)余工作并不會占用學生太多的時間A proper part-time job does not occupy students too much time. 絕大部分人認為，一份適當?shù)臉I(yè)余工作并不會占用學生太多的時間._ 通過上面的討論，我們不難得出結(jié)論：一份適當?shù)臉I(yè)余工作并不會占用學生太多的時間_ 通過上面的討論，我們不難得出結(jié)論：一份適當?shù)臉I(yè)余工作并不會占用學生太多的時間，事實上，把