2023課標(biāo)版英語(yǔ)高考第一輪專題練習(xí)--第三部分 專題五 短文改錯(cuò)

1、2023課標(biāo)版英語(yǔ)高考第一輪專題練習(xí)第三部分 高考題型突破專題五短文改錯(cuò)題組1 學(xué)校及家庭生活Correction 1 2022山西太原質(zhì)監(jiān)主題:學(xué)校宿舍生活建議用時(shí):8分鐘My life has changed since I become a senior three student. I mean that you live in the school dormitory rather than at home. Honest speaking, my life in the dormitory is colorful and interested. In our spare time,

2、 my roommates and I take in turns to do the cleaning regularly. We clean the floor or take out the garbage twice a day and clean the windows once a week. Sometimes all of us sweep ground around our dormitory together. I do think doing the cleaning are quite meaningful, because what I get is not only

3、 tidy but also friendship and a deep sense of responsibility. I enjoy do the labor in the school dormitory.Correction 2 2022安徽名校聯(lián)盟質(zhì)檢主題:班服設(shè)計(jì)比賽建議用時(shí):8分鐘To make us live a color school life and develop our creativity, our school holds a class uniform design competition the other day. The competition caug

4、ht a great number of students attention. A total of 40 works were received, all of what were submitted through the Internet. There were various style of class uniforms. Some came from the inspiration of nature, and some were reflected class mottoes. According to online voting, the work presenting by

5、 Class 6, Senior 1 gained the most popularity because its unique design. The activity has become the real hit at school and inspired more students to show our talents.Correction 3 2021東北三校聯(lián)考主題:競(jìng)選年級(jí)長(zhǎng)的經(jīng)歷建議用時(shí):8分鐘Last year, I ran for our school's senior three grade president. On the day of the elect

6、ion, I had to give a speech in the front of the entire grade but I would talk about why I would make a good president. When it was my turns to speak, I stood on the stage with butterflies in my stomach and my hands got sweat. Nervous although I was, I explained the reasons why I dreamed being a grad

7、e president. I also talked about the ways I plan to accomplish my goals. Unfortunately, I brought their speech to a nice conclusion. The audience gave me a round of applause and chose me to be grade president. It was one of the most encouraged experiences of my life. Correction 4 2021河南洛陽(yáng)統(tǒng)考主題:教爺爺用手機(jī)

8、建議用時(shí):8分鐘My grandpa likes Peking Opera. In the past, I often saw him watching lots of such program on TV. However, since last year, he had begun to watch Peking Opera shows on the mobile phone. When he got a smartphone send by my father, I got the idea for teaching him how to use it. I instructed her

9、 to turn on the phone and watched the videos of Peking Opera. At the first, he could not follow me, but he listened with great careful. I taught him patiently and he learned use it at last. Now not only can he enjoy the videos, and he can sing Peking Opera well.Correction 5 2021陜西咸陽(yáng)一模主題:優(yōu)秀家風(fēng)的傳承建議用時(shí):

10、8分鐘In China, good family spirits, passing down from one generation to another, have a strong influence on their child. Up till now, my grandfather and father always stressed the importance of honesty, brave, perseverance and diligence. More importantly, they often set good examples to me. And thus I

11、 always follow which they have taught me. For example, be friendly to others and offer a help when others are in need. Beside, I am positive all the time but never stop chasing my goal whenever I come across difficulties. Thanks for those good family spirits, both my life and study runs smoothly.Cor

12、rection 6 2021江西南昌期中主題:父親的建議建議用時(shí):8分鐘The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad.He always gives me some advice,but I seldom took them seriously. One day he was encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and after the competition,I did my best to be fully prep

13、ared.And the moment I stood on the stage,I was such nervous that my mind completely went blankly.The experience of lose a competition was really painful. Then my dad said, "My son,life is like battlefield.You have to lose many time to win the final victory." Thanks to his advice, I never g

14、ive up when I do anything.題組2 個(gè)人經(jīng)歷及夢(mèng)想Correction 7 2022四川成都聯(lián)考主題:助人就是助己建議用時(shí):8分鐘James, an exchange student, is one of my best friend. At the beginning, he asked if I could assist him with what to use chopsticks. I said yes happily but this was a good chance to improving my spoken English as well when I

15、 taught him. So I manage to make myself understood. When she was able to use chopsticks skillfully, I could speak English fluent, which was beyond my expectations.As the old saying goes, "Helping others are helping yourself." This experience not only brings me close friend but also makes m

16、e to realize the meaning of cooperation. Correction 8 2022江西五校聯(lián)考主題:一次不愉快的經(jīng)歷建議用時(shí):8分鐘Today I want to share terrible trip of mine with you. I visited a marine park with my friends yesterday. I am sorry to say that I was disappointed with the service provide by the staff. When I came up to one of the wa

17、itresses to ask the way, he was rather impatient, respond slowly and unwillingly. What's worse, the waitress even laughed to me when I was about to leave. Besides, the steak I was ordered in the restaurant was so tough and salty which I could hardly enjoy it. At that time, the service also makes

18、 other customers disappointed. I sincere hope that the person in charge will take measure to improve the service.Correction 9 2022廣西名校聯(lián)考主題:助人為樂(lè)建議用時(shí):8分鐘On the morning of last Saturday, I got up at six as usual. After a quickly breakfast, I went to the gym to work out. I spent two hours do exercise th

19、ere. Then I took shower in a bathhouse, where is very close to my school. While I was walking on the crowded street, I notice an old lady who didn't look well. When she saw me, she signed to me and asked that I could take her home. At first, I was hesitated for a minute but then decided to give

20、her a hand. About twenty minute later, we arrived at the apartment. She was grateful for me and invited me to her home. I polite refused and left.Correction 10 2021山西太原期末主題:夢(mèng)想當(dāng)醫(yī)生建議用時(shí):8分鐘We are in the last year of high school. It's time for us to have clear future career plan. Since my childhood,

21、 I had been dreaming of becoming a doctor. When known Tu Youyou was awarded the Nobel Prize, I was great inspired by her to learn medicine. Especially this year, the spirit of doctors has hardened our determination to study medicine to save people's lives. It is their wisdom and efforts which ha

22、ve saved tens of thousand of people. Difficult though it is to make my dream to come true, something will stop me achieving it. I will concentrate on my study to get ready to my future major in college.Correction 11 2021江西南昌三模主題:爬長(zhǎng)城建議用時(shí):8分鐘This morning my friends and me got up early to visit the Gre

23、at Wall. Once we got there we began our climb. It started out pretty smooth. By the time we made it to the top we had been sweaty and exhausting. But when the Great Wall appeared in front of us, we couldn't help cry, "What wonderful sight it is! "We shouted," It looked like a huge

24、 snake which spreads through half of the city!" We walked along the Wall for a while after heading back down and making our way back to home. We felt very proud so it's the longest wall and one of the most famous tourist attraction in the world.Correction 12 2021黑龍江大慶實(shí)驗(yàn)中學(xué)考試主題:發(fā)現(xiàn)城市的美建議用時(shí):8分鐘

25、People always say that we lack of the eyes of realizing the beauty in life. I can't agree complete. Last Friday, I wake up very early and decided to take a walk.In the square which many senior citizens were dancing,I found several elders absorbed in feeding birds.Without many cars produce smog o

26、n the street,I realized that the city looked so clean and beautiful. Some coffee shops, which used to be old but shabby,were decorated pretty well and they caught my attention.On both side of the street were big trees covering the whole city,making comfortable to walk in the city.At that moment,I fo

27、und a city was so interesting.How I regret ignore its beauty before!答 案專題五短文改錯(cuò)題組1學(xué)校及家庭生活Correction 1 My life has changed since I becomebecame a senior three student. I mean that youI live in the school dormitory rather than at home. HonestHonestly speaking, my life in the dormitory is colorful and i

28、nterestedinteresting. In our spare time, my roommates and I take turns to do the cleaning regularly. We clean the floor orand take out the garbage twice a day and clean the windows once a week. Sometimes all of us sweep theground around our dormitory together. I do think doing the cleaning areis qui

29、te meaningful, because what I get is not only tidytidiness but also friendship and a deep sense of responsibility. I enjoy dodoing the labor in the school dormitory. 時(shí)態(tài)誤用。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,since在此處引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句,主句用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí),從句一般用一般過(guò)去時(shí),且此處描述的"我成為一名高三學(xué)生"是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情,所以需要將become改為became。人稱代詞誤用。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知,本文講的是作者的生活變化,

30、為第一人稱,所以需要將you改為I。形容詞副詞混用。此處考查固定表達(dá)Honestly speaking,意為"老實(shí)說(shuō)",所以需要將Honest改為Honestly。 形容詞誤用。結(jié)合語(yǔ)境可知,此處形容的是my life in the dormitory,表示"有趣的",要用interesting,所以需要將interested改為interesting。介詞多用。此處考查固定表達(dá)take turns to do sth.,意為"輪流做某事",所以需要去掉turns前面的in。 連詞誤用。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,掃地和倒垃

31、圾形成了并列關(guān)系,所以需要將or改為and。冠詞漏用。ground表"地面"時(shí)常用the ground,且后面有around our dormitory修飾,表特指,所以需要在ground前面加the。謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞誤用。從句的主語(yǔ)是doing the cleaning,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要用單數(shù)形式,所以需要將are改為is。形容詞名詞混用。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此處與后面的名詞friendship形成遞進(jìn)關(guān)系,要用名詞,所以需要將tidy改為tidiness。動(dòng)詞形式誤用。此處考查固定用法enjoy doing sth.,意為"喜歡做某事",所以需要將do改為doing

32、。Correction 2To make us live a colorcolorful school life and develop our creativity, our school holdsheld a class uniform design competition the other day. The competition caught a great number of studentsstudents attention. A total of 40 works were received, all of whatwhich were submitted through

33、the Internet. There were various stylestyles of class uniforms. Some came from the inspiration of nature, and some reflected class mottoes. According to online voting, the work presentingpresented by Class 6, Senior 1 gained the most popularity because of its unique design. The activity has become t

34、hea real hit at school and inspired more students to show ourtheir talents.名詞形容詞混用。此處修飾后面的名詞詞組school life,要用形容詞,所以需要將color改為colorful。時(shí)態(tài)誤用。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此處在句中作謂語(yǔ),根據(jù)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)the other day可知,本句的時(shí)態(tài)為一般過(guò)去時(shí),所以需要將holds改為held。名詞所有格誤用。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此處修飾后面的名詞attention,要用名詞所有格,所以需要將students改為students'。關(guān)系詞誤用。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,本句為非限

35、制性定語(yǔ)從句,修飾先行詞works,關(guān)系詞在介詞of后,所以需要將what改為which?！咀⒁狻縲hat不能引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句。名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用。根據(jù)前面的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞were和形容詞various可知,此處要用名詞復(fù)數(shù),所以需要將style改為styles。語(yǔ)態(tài)誤用。主語(yǔ)some與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞reflected之間為主動(dòng)關(guān)系,所以需要?jiǎng)h除reflected前面的were。非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式誤用。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,present與work構(gòu)成邏輯上的動(dòng)賓關(guān)系,所以需要將presenting改為presented。介詞漏用。because后面接句子,而because of后面接詞或詞組,所以需要在because后

36、面加of。冠詞混用。根據(jù)"活動(dòng)在校園里大獲成功"可知,此處表泛指,且real的發(fā)音以輔音音素開(kāi)頭,所以需要將the改為a。hit"很受歡迎的人(或事物)"。代詞誤用。根據(jù)"激發(fā)更多的學(xué)生展示他們的才藝"可知,此處需要將our改為their。Correction 3Last year, I ran for our school's senior three grade president. On the day of the election, I had to give a speech in front of the ent

37、ire grade butand I would talk about why I would make a good president. When it was my turnsturn to speak, I stood on the stage with butterflies in my stomach and my hands got sweatsweaty. Nervous althoughas/though I was, I explained the reasons why I dreamed of/about being a grade president. I also

38、talked about the ways I planplanned to accomplish my goals. UnfortunatelyFortunately, I brought theirmy speech to a nice conclusion. The audience gave me a round of applause and chose me to be grade president. It was one of the most encouragedencouraging experiences of my life. 冠詞多用。此處表示在整個(gè)年級(jí)的面前,應(yīng)用i

39、n front of, in the front of 表示"在的前部(物體內(nèi)部)"。故刪除front前面的the。連詞誤用。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知,此處表示順承,故將but 改為and。名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用。It is/was sb.'s turn to do sth.為固定用法,表示"輪到某人做某事",故把turns 改為turn。 【拓展】turn作名詞時(shí)的其他常見(jiàn)搭配:take turns to do sth.輪流做某事;in turn依次,輪流,相應(yīng)地。名詞形容詞混用。get是系動(dòng)詞,后接形容詞構(gòu)成系表結(jié)構(gòu),表示"變得",

40、故把sweat改為sweaty。連詞誤用。此處把表語(yǔ)放在句首,采用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句的倒裝結(jié)構(gòu),所以應(yīng)用as/though 引導(dǎo)。故把a(bǔ)lthough 改為as/though?！咀⒁狻縜lthough, though, as, while都可以引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句,但是若引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句為倒裝語(yǔ)序,只能用as或though;不是倒裝語(yǔ)序時(shí),則可用although/though/while,但不能用as。介詞漏用。表示"想象/夢(mèng)想做某事"用固定短語(yǔ)dream of/about doing sth.。此處缺少介詞。故在dreamed 后面添加of/about。 時(shí)態(tài)誤用。分

41、析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,the ways 之后是定語(yǔ)從句,主句時(shí)態(tài)是一般過(guò)去時(shí),此處表示"我計(jì)劃實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)的方法",做計(jì)劃也是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事,時(shí)態(tài)應(yīng)和主句保持一致,故把plan改為 planned。注意plan的過(guò)去式要雙寫n再加-ed。副詞誤用。根據(jù)下文可知,我給我的演講做了一個(gè)不錯(cuò)的總結(jié),所以此處應(yīng)該是"幸運(yùn)的是",故把Unfortunately 改為Fortunately。代詞誤用。根據(jù)上文可知,此處表示"我的演講",所以應(yīng)用代詞my。 故把their改為my。形容詞誤用。 此處修飾后面的experiences, 表示"鼓舞人心的

42、",故應(yīng)用encouraging。encouraged表示"受到鼓舞的",常修飾人。故把encouraged 改為encouraging。Correction 4My grandpa likes Peking Opera. In the past, I often saw him watching lots of such programprograms on TV. However, since last year, he hadhas begun to watch Peking Opera shows on the mobile phone. When he

43、got a smartphone sendsent by my father, I got the idea forof teaching him how to use it. I instructed herhim to turn on the phone and watchedwatch the videos of Peking Opera. At first, he could not follow me, but he listened with great carefulcare/carefulness. I taught him patiently and he learned t

44、o use it at last. Now not only can he enjoy the videos, andbut he can sing Peking Opera well.名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用。program"(電視、廣播)節(jié)目"是一個(gè)可數(shù)名詞,根據(jù)前面的lots of可知,此處要用復(fù)數(shù)形式,所以將program改為programs。時(shí)態(tài)誤用。根據(jù)前面的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)since last year可知,本句要用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí),所以需要將had改為has?！军c(diǎn)撥】現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)和過(guò)去完成時(shí)都表示動(dòng)作發(fā)生在過(guò)去,但是二者的時(shí)間參照點(diǎn)是不一樣的?，F(xiàn)在完成時(shí)的時(shí)間參照點(diǎn)為現(xiàn)在,而過(guò)去完成

45、時(shí)表示"過(guò)去的過(guò)去",因此它的時(shí)間參照點(diǎn)是過(guò)去的某個(gè)時(shí)間點(diǎn)。動(dòng)詞形式誤用。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)并根據(jù)by my father可知,smartphone與send為邏輯上的動(dòng)賓關(guān)系,需用過(guò)去分詞作后置定語(yǔ),所以需要將send改為sent。介詞混用。結(jié)合語(yǔ)境"我有了教他如何使用手機(jī)的想法"可知,此處要用of,所以需要將for改為of。an idea of doing sth.做某事的想法;an idea for doing sth.對(duì)于做某事的想法。人稱代詞混用。結(jié)合語(yǔ)境"我指導(dǎo)他(我的爺爺)開(kāi)機(jī)"可知,此處指的是"我的爺爺"

46、,所以需要將her改為him。動(dòng)詞形式誤用。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,watch與前面的turn on并列,都是"我"指導(dǎo)爺爺做的事情,所以需要將watched改為watch。冠詞多用。此處考查固定表達(dá)at first,意為"起初",所以需要去掉first前面的the。形容詞名詞混用。結(jié)合形容詞great可知,此處要用名詞,所以需要將careful改為care/carefulness。不定式符號(hào)漏用。此處考查固定表達(dá)learn to do sth.,意為"學(xué)會(huì)做某事",所以需要在use前面加to。連詞誤用。此處考查固定表達(dá)"not

47、only.but (also).",意為"不僅而且",所以需要將and改為but。Correction 5In China, good family spirits, passingpassed down from one generation to another, have a strong influence on their childchildren. Up till now, my grandfather and father havealways stressed the importance of honesty, bravebravery, pe

48、rseverance and diligence. More importantly, they often set good examples to me. And thus I always follow whichwhat they have taught me. For example, be friendly to others and offer help when others are in need. BesideBesides, I am positive all the time butand never stop chasing my goal whenever I co

49、me across difficulties. Thanks forto those good family spirits, both my life and study runsrun smoothly.非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式誤用。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,本句的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞是have,此處應(yīng)為非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞,且與其邏輯主語(yǔ)good family spirits之間為動(dòng)賓關(guān)系,所以需要將passing改為passed。名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境"代代相傳的家風(fēng)對(duì)家族的孩子們有強(qiáng)烈的影響"并結(jié)合常識(shí)可知,家族的孩子不止一個(gè),此處要用復(fù)數(shù),所以需要將child改為children。時(shí)態(tài)誤用。根據(jù)本句

50、的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)Up till now可知,本句要用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí),且主語(yǔ)my grandfather and father表復(fù)數(shù)概念,所以需要在always前面加have。 形容詞名詞混用。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此處應(yīng)用名詞形式與前后的名詞并列,所以需要將brave改為bravery。引導(dǎo)詞誤用。分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知,此處引導(dǎo)賓語(yǔ)從句,在從句中作賓語(yǔ),表示"的事情",所以需要將which改為what。冠詞多用。help作"幫助"講時(shí),是不可數(shù)名詞,所以需要將help前面的a刪除。介詞副詞混用。beside意為"在旁邊",besides意為&

51、quot;此外",根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知,此處表遞進(jìn),所以需要將Beside改為Besides。連詞誤用。結(jié)合語(yǔ)境"此外,我一直積極,并且無(wú)論何時(shí)遇到困難,從不會(huì)放棄追逐我的目標(biāo)"可知,前后為遞進(jìn)關(guān)系,所以需要將but改為and。介詞誤用。此處考查固定表達(dá)thanks to,意為"幸虧,由于",所以需要將for改為to。謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞誤用。本句時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),主語(yǔ)both my life and study表復(fù)數(shù)概念,謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞要用復(fù)數(shù)形式,所以需要將runs改為run。【提醒】both.and.連接的名詞短語(yǔ)通常表示復(fù)數(shù)概念,不可誤以為其表示整體。Corre

52、ction 6The best advice I received in my childhood was from my dad.He always givesgave me some advice,but I seldom took themit seriously. One day he encouraged me to participate in a speech competition. So I signed up and afterbefore the competition,I did my best to be fully prepared. AndBut the mome

53、nt I stood on the stage,I was suchso nervous that my mind completely went blanklyblank.The experience of loselosing a competition was really painful. Then my dad said, "My son,life is like a battlefield.You have to lose manytimetimesto win the final victory." Thanks to his advice, I never

54、give up when I do anything.時(shí)態(tài)誤用。縱觀全文可知,文章描述的是過(guò)去的事情,故此處也應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí),故將gives改為gave。代詞誤用。此處指代上文提到的some advice, advice為不可數(shù)名詞,故應(yīng)用it指代。語(yǔ)態(tài)誤用。句子主語(yǔ)he與謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞encourage之間為主動(dòng)關(guān)系,應(yīng)用主動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài),故將was刪除。介詞誤用。根據(jù)后文的"be fully prepared"可知,此處應(yīng)該是在比賽前做準(zhǔn)備,故應(yīng)將after改為before。連詞誤用。上文提到"be fully prepared",下文提到"nervou

55、s",由此可知此處表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系,故應(yīng)用But。形容詞副詞混用。此處修飾形容詞nervous,應(yīng)用副詞so。such修飾名詞。副詞形容詞混用。此處go是系動(dòng)詞,表示"變得",其后應(yīng)跟形容詞作表語(yǔ),故將blankly改為blank。動(dòng)詞形式誤用。介詞of后應(yīng)用動(dòng)詞-ing形式作賓語(yǔ),故將lose改為losing。冠詞漏用。battlefield為可數(shù)名詞,此處泛指"戰(zhàn)場(chǎng)",且battlefield的發(fā)音以輔音音素開(kāi)頭,故應(yīng)用不定冠詞a。名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用。time在此處表示"次數(shù)",為可數(shù)名詞,且其前有修飾可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)的標(biāo)志性詞語(yǔ)m

56、any,故此處應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式times。題組2個(gè)人經(jīng)歷及夢(mèng)想Correction 7James, an exchange student, is one of my best friendfriends. At the beginning, he asked if I could assist him with whathow to use chopsticks. I said yes happily butbecause this was a good chance to improvingimprove my spoken English as well when I taught him.

57、 So I managemanaged to make myself understood. When shehe was able to use chopsticks skillfully, I could speak English fluentfluently, which was beyond my expectations.As the old saying goes, "Helping others areis helping yourself." This experience not only brings me a close friend but als

58、o makes me realize the meaning of cooperation. 名詞單復(fù)數(shù)誤用。one of后接可數(shù)名詞復(fù)數(shù)形式,friend為可數(shù)名詞,故用其復(fù)數(shù)形式。特殊疑問(wèn)詞誤用。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知,該處指"幫助他(學(xué)會(huì))如何使用筷子",故應(yīng)用how+動(dòng)詞不定式。連詞誤用。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知,該句上下文之間為因果關(guān)系,故用because引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句。 非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞形式誤用。該句中的to為動(dòng)詞不定式符號(hào),故其后應(yīng)用動(dòng)詞原形而非動(dòng)詞-ing。時(shí)態(tài)誤用。根據(jù)語(yǔ)境可知,該處陳述的是過(guò)去發(fā)生的事情,故應(yīng)用一般過(guò)去時(shí)。人稱代詞誤用。根據(jù)上文中的"James"

59、;以及"he""him"可知,該處應(yīng)用he。 形容詞副詞混用。該處修飾動(dòng)詞speak,應(yīng)用副詞。謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞誤用。該句主語(yǔ)為動(dòng)詞-ing短語(yǔ)"Helping others",謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞應(yīng)用第三人稱單數(shù)。  冠詞漏用。該處泛指"一位親密的朋友",且close的發(fā)音以輔音音素開(kāi)頭,故用不定冠詞a。不定式符號(hào)多用。make sb. do sth.意為"使某人做某事",其中make后面的不定式短語(yǔ)要省略to,故刪去to。 Correction 8Today I want to share a terrible trip of mine with you. I visited a marine park with my friends yesterday. I am sorry to say that I was disappointed with the service provideprovided by the staff. When I came up to one of the waitresses to ask the way, hesh