人教版新課標(biāo)-新題型高三英語(yǔ)三輪復(fù)習(xí)-寫作-讀后續(xù)寫-市級(jí)公開課(共19張PPT)課件

1、 Continuation writing based on mind maps whenwherewhowhathowwhyA storyElements of a storyJaneOne weekend in JulyAfter she climbed to As the night began to fallAt the break of the dayAs she picked her wayA few minutes latera lake in the forestCamp overnight/quarrel /walked away angryno path to follow

2、/ forest far beyond saw nothing/losthelplessIn the darkstop for the nightregretfulwater trickling at the distance/ sound to the streamsaw/drank/ taste berriesstrongerThe trees impossible to see her heard a helicopter happy/excited/ upsetanother helicopter/open area flag yellow blousehopefulJane Tom

3、lake walked climbed at a distance stream to her great joy helicopter yellow blouseDivide the underlined words into different elementsPara. 7:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Para. 8:It was daybreak when she woke up. In para.7, If Jane & Tom still didnt find each other,In pa

4、ra.7, If Jane & Tom finally found each other,Possibility 1Possibility 2 she probably spent another night in the forest.In para.8, Jane was finally rescued. she may spend the second night at home/in the hospital.In para.8, Jane woke up and they shared loving words.Infer the developmentPara. 7:But no

5、more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Possibility 1: If Jane & Tom still didnt find each otherWhat is the darkness like? How did Jane feel/think?What could Jane do? Infer the development(Group Writing)Q2: How did Jane feel/think?(emotion) Q3: What could Jane do? (plot)Q1: What is the

6、darkness like?(setting)upsetclimbed up a tree to flag her yellow blouse but failed.stayed in the forest for another nighttired too dark to see anythingcriedlonelymissed Tomdecided to go out of the forestfell asleepPolish the sentencesJane was lonely.(修辭)2. It was too dark.(增加細(xì)節(jié)描寫)3.Jane was upset bu

7、t decided to go out of the forest.( as 的倒裝句)4.She wanted to climb up a tree to flag her yellow blouse but failed.(非限制性定語(yǔ)從句, turn out, failure)5.Jane was tired and she missed Tom.(動(dòng)詞ing形式做伴隨狀語(yǔ)）6.She cried and fell asleep.（with 的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)）She felt excited.Overwhelmed with excitement, she couldnt help shout

8、ing. Heart brimming with wild excitement, she hugged Tom tightly.Barely can she conceal her excitement, she hugged Tom tightly, as if they had been taken apart for thousands of years.Polish the sentencesPolish the sentences1.Jane was lonely.(修辭)2. It was too dark.(增加細(xì)節(jié)描寫)3.Jane was upset but decided

9、 to go out of the forest.( as 的倒裝句)4.She wanted to climb up a tree to flag her yellow blouse but failed.(非限制性定語(yǔ)從句, turn out, failure) Loneliness flooded over her mind. The sun hid himself behind the mountains, making it hard to see anything in the thick darkness. Upset as she was, Jane was determine

10、d to go out of the forest. She desired to climb up a tree，flagging her yellow blouse，which turned out to be a failure.5.Jane was tired and she missed Tom.(動(dòng)詞ing形式做伴隨狀語(yǔ))6.She cried and fell asleep.（with 的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)） Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing Tom at a distance. She fell asle

11、ep with shining tears in her eyes.時(shí)間先后：later, soon, then, with time going by, eventually, 因果或轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系: consequently, therefore, so, however, instead, whereas(but), suddenly, on the contrary, on the other hand.遞進(jìn)關(guān)系 whats more ,whats worse,并列關(guān)系 Besides, meanwhile, at the same time, in addition, whats more

12、/furthermore, Make paragraphs coherent by using transitional wordsWritingPossible version for Para.7But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. The sun hid himself behind the mountains, making it hard to see anything in the thick darkness. Upset as Jane was, she didnt give up. Instea

13、d, determining to go out of the forest. she climbed up a tree, flagging her yellow blouse, which turned out to be a failure. With time going by, loneliness flooded over her mind. Jane, exhausted and scared, lay down beside a stone, missing her husband Tom. “If only he could be with me.” Jane murmure

14、d. Just at that time, she suddenly realized it was her foolish decision that made herself in trouble. she could not help bursting into tears. Soon Jane fell asleep with shining tears in her eyes.Assessment Criteria for Writing Items （條目）Levels （檔次）Cohesion（與所給短文和段落開頭銜接融合程度） Use of underlined words（下劃線詞匯使用情況） Content（內(nèi)容的豐富性） Accuracy of language（語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯使用的準(zhǔn)確性） Variety of language（語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯使用的豐富性） Coherence（上下文以及語(yǔ)句間的連貫性） Writing Stepsfind elements of the narrative draw the mind mapsummarize the main plot of the story analyze the underlined