牛津深圳版九年級下冊英語課件 Unit 6 課時5 Writing

1、課時5 Writing Unit 6 Caring for your health本單元的話題為“健康問題和建議”，該話題常見的命題方式為要求學(xué)生學(xué)會描述現(xiàn)實(shí)生活中的健康問題，并給出解決問題的方案。牛津滬教版九年級下pressure, short-sighted, habit, snack, healthy單 詞： get fatter and fatter, relax themselves, make a balance, study habits, do exercise短 語： 1. They have too much homework to do.2. I think they n

2、eed to find time to relax themselves.3. Whats more, 8 percent of the students get fatter and fatter.句 型：最近，你們學(xué)校就學(xué)生的健康狀況做了問卷調(diào)查，下面是調(diào)查中發(fā)現(xiàn)的主要問題及其成因。請你根據(jù)表格中的內(nèi)容提示用英語寫一篇短文，對此次問卷調(diào)查的結(jié)果作一點(diǎn)兒說明。要求：1. 80 詞以上（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2. 須補(bǔ)充完整表格中未給出的內(nèi)容；3. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。參考詞匯：short-sighted 近視的Recently, our school has done a survey a

3、bout the students health. Here are the main problems.問題成因建議壓力太大(75%)作業(yè)太多，沒有足夠的時間做自己喜歡的事情找時間放松眼睛近視(65%)學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣不好，看電視太多變胖(8%)【審題指導(dǎo)】體裁說明文人稱問卷調(diào)查以第三人稱為主，談?wù)撟约河^點(diǎn)用第一人稱時態(tài)提建議以一般現(xiàn)在時為主【思路構(gòu)建】Recently, our school has done a survey about the students health. Here are the main problems. 75 percent of the students are

4、under too much pressure. They have too much homework to do and dont have enough time to do what they enjoy doing. I think they need to find time to relax themselves and try to make a balance between study and rest. 【范文賞析】65 percent of the students watch too much TV in their daily life, and they also

5、 dont have good study habits, so they are short-sighted. I think they should do homework or read books in a correct way, and spend less time on TV or cellphones. Whats more, 8 percent of the students get fatter and fatter because they eat lots of snacks and hardly do exercise. In my opinion, its bet

6、ter for them to have more healthy food and do exercise every day.In a word, its important for you to have a healthy living habit. 點(diǎn)評：本篇作文用三段式的寫法，第一段，先描述情況，引出話題；第二段，具體寫有哪些問題，以及提出的建議；第三段，總結(jié)要養(yǎng)成良好的生活習(xí)慣。本文時態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時為主，使用了一些高級詞匯、短語和句型， 如under too much pressure, relax themselves, make a balance between study

7、 and rest, spend less time on, get fatter and fatter 等提高了文章檔次。Whats more, In my opinion 的使用使文章表達(dá)自然、流暢?，F(xiàn)在，有的同學(xué)不吃早飯就去上學(xué)。請針對這種現(xiàn)象寫一篇短文。內(nèi)容：1學(xué)生不吃早飯的原因；2不吃早飯對學(xué)生的影響（至少兩個方面）；3你認(rèn)為應(yīng)該如何合理安排早餐？要求：80-100 詞。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Some of us go to school without having breakfast._Some of us go to school without having breakf

8、ast. One reason is that they may not feel like eating anything early in the morning. Another reason could be that they dont think the food is delicious.But going to school without eating breakfast has some bad effects on them. If they dont have breakfast, theyll get hungry during the classes, so they wont listen to the teacher carefully. _Even worse, itll be bad for their health. A growing child needs enough nutrition.Breakfast provides the energy our body needs. I really hope everyone can