備戰(zhàn)2023年新高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫高分必備攻略（全國(guó)通用）

1、讀后續(xù)寫高分技能（五） 生動(dòng)的對(duì)話描寫（1）對(duì)話描寫為推動(dòng)故事情節(jié)服務(wù)，是情節(jié)發(fā)展的一個(gè)環(huán)節(jié)，每段出現(xiàn)一兩句即可，不宜過(guò)多；（2）對(duì)話描寫要體現(xiàn)真情實(shí)感；（3）對(duì)話描寫不宜過(guò)長(zhǎng)，側(cè)重口語(yǔ)化詞匯，避開生僻詞匯；（4）對(duì)話描寫盡可能結(jié)合動(dòng)作描寫或情感描寫，增強(qiáng)畫面感；（5）對(duì)話描寫中可以用感嘆詞表示說(shuō)話人的喜、怒、哀、樂(lè)等情緒。一、對(duì)話描寫的基本原則句型1：“.,” he said,（sth) doing. （sth) doing，he said, “.”say后接doing/done/獨(dú)立主格作狀語(yǔ)，結(jié)合動(dòng)作描寫，增強(qiáng)畫面感。 （1) “Ill get us some coffee,” she

2、said,_(head)for the kitchen.“我去給我們拿點(diǎn)咖啡” 她說(shuō)著朝廚房走去。（2）Glaringat me with his frightening eyes ,he yelled, “Youre such an idiot.”heading二、對(duì)話描寫常用句型(3) “Thats nice,” Alex said quietly,focusing on his plate.(4) “Why did they have to kill the dog?” she said, with her eyes full of tears. 句型2：“.,” he saidas/w

3、hen/before/as if. say后接狀語(yǔ)從句，增加了動(dòng)作等細(xì)節(jié)描寫。例如：1) “Watch out!” she shouted_the car started to move.“當(dāng)心!” 當(dāng)汽車開始移動(dòng)時(shí)，她喊道。as2) “Dear me! I wish I hadnt cried so much before,” said Alice as she swam about the lake, trying to find her way out.當(dāng)愛麗絲在湖里到處游，設(shè)法找到出路時(shí)，她說(shuō)道, “天哪！但愿我以前沒(méi)有哭得那么兇就好了。”句型3： “.,” he said,and(t

4、hen he) did. say后接并列謂語(yǔ)或接并列句，增加了動(dòng)作描寫。例如：(1) “Yes, I think so,” he said reluctantly,_left the study.“是的，我想是的,” 他不情愿地說(shuō)，然后離開了書房。and(2) “Drive safely,” he said, and waved goodbye. “小心開車,” 他說(shuō)著揮手告別。句型4：.did.,did,andsaid, “.” say前有系列動(dòng)作，構(gòu)成并列謂語(yǔ)，引號(hào)內(nèi)首字母大寫。例如： 1) Hepaused,lookedstraight into her eyes,andsaidin a

5、 quiet voice, “Thats true.”他停下來(lái)，直視著她的眼睛，平靜地說(shuō): “那是真的。”2) He grinned, waved, and said, “Hi!”他咧嘴笑了笑，揮揮手說(shuō): “嗨!”3) A large middle-aged lady patted me on the back and said, “Nice to see you again.”一位身材高大的中年女士拍了拍我的后背說(shuō): “很高興再次見到你?！本湫?：“.,” he said +副詞或短語(yǔ). say后接方式狀語(yǔ)，說(shuō)明說(shuō)話的方式，說(shuō)得更具體。例如： 1)“Of course,” Nancy rep

6、lied with a smile. “當(dāng)然,” 南希笑著回答。2)“Im sorry,” she said with a sigh. “對(duì)不起,” 她嘆了口氣說(shuō)。3) “Thank you, sir,” whispered Paul gratefully. “謝謝，先生,” Paul滿心感激地嘟噥著。句型6： “.” +動(dòng)作描寫的句子 不出現(xiàn)say對(duì)話標(biāo)志。例如： 1) “I dont believe you any more.” He turned around, slammed the door and stormed out.“我再也不相信你了。” 他轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)身，砰的一聲關(guān)上門，沖了出去。

7、2) “I was attacked by a wolf and I thought I would never see you again.” Mac hugged them and burst out crying.我被狼襲擊了，我以為再也見不到你了。” 麥克抱著他們，大哭起來(lái)。1.對(duì)話標(biāo)簽在前She said,“I would like to go with you, but I havent finished my homework.”2.對(duì)話標(biāo)簽在后“I would like to go with you, but I havent finished my homework.”She

8、 said.三、對(duì)話標(biāo)簽的三個(gè)位置3.對(duì)話標(biāo)簽在句子中間“I would like to go with you,”she said, “but I havent finished my homework.”注意：對(duì)話標(biāo)簽在后或者在句子中間時(shí)（第2,3種情況），如果主語(yǔ)是名詞，則可倒裝也可不倒裝。而代詞不可以倒裝，said she是錯(cuò)誤的?！癐 would like to go with you, but I havent finished my homework.”said Emily（或者Emily said.）“I would like to go with you,”said Emil

9、y/ Emily said, “but I havent finished my homework.”1.廢話連篇，對(duì)情節(jié)發(fā)展和刻畫人物沒(méi)有幫助。“Hey, how are you?” “Im fine, how are you?”“How is the weather?” “Terrific! Nice day for a walk, isnt it?”四、對(duì)話描寫常見“四大錯(cuò)誤2.追求花哨，過(guò)度使用對(duì)話標(biāo)簽“That is fantastic news,” he said happily.此句中完全沒(méi)有必要加上一個(gè)happily來(lái)表達(dá)說(shuō)的方式，因?yàn)榫渲械膄antastic一詞足以說(shuō)明說(shuō)話人

10、了表情，過(guò)度強(qiáng)調(diào)會(huì)讓讀者的注意力集中在“說(shuō)話的方式”而不是“說(shuō)話的內(nèi)容”。建議改為：“That is fantastic news！” he said/screamed/exclaimed. 一個(gè)感嘆號(hào)和一個(gè)fantastic已經(jīng)足以讓讀者想象當(dāng)時(shí)的情景。適當(dāng)?shù)摹八囆g(shù)留白”也是需要的，這樣會(huì)留給讀者想象的空間。還有一種避免過(guò)度的dialogue tags的方法是運(yùn)用“動(dòng)作描寫”，尤其是表情上動(dòng)作來(lái)取而代之。如：Her eyes reflected the candlelight as she smiled at her son.“Everyone is unique. Just follow

11、your heart and be yourself!”當(dāng)她對(duì)兒子微笑時(shí)，她的眼睛反射著燭光。 “每個(gè)人都是獨(dú)一無(wú)二的。 只要跟隨你的心，做你自己！”3用詞不當(dāng)，錯(cuò)誤使用對(duì)話標(biāo)簽I cant believe it, Emma gasped. (gasp意思為“喘氣”)Thats funny, Henry chuckled. (chuckled.意思為“輕笑”)評(píng)析：以上兩句話也是在大量的學(xué)生習(xí)作中發(fā)現(xiàn)的。這里把動(dòng)作描寫和動(dòng)作標(biāo)簽混淆了，試想誰(shuí)能gasp（喘息）、chuckle（輕笑）出一句話？除非他或她有特異功能。（Question tag+分詞做伴隨狀況）請(qǐng)?zhí)貏e關(guān)注以上對(duì)話的標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)。糾正方

12、法如下：I cant believe it, Emmasaid with a gasp.（對(duì)話標(biāo)簽Emma said+ with介詞短語(yǔ)）Emma gasped.I cant believe it.（動(dòng)作描寫+句號(hào)）I cant believe it.Emma gasped.（對(duì)話句+動(dòng)作描寫,注意對(duì)話句式句號(hào)）Thats funny!Henrychuckled.（感嘆句結(jié)束+動(dòng)作描寫）Thats funny, Henrysaid, chuckling.4.對(duì)話標(biāo)簽多此一舉：對(duì)話對(duì)象十分明確，仍使用對(duì)話標(biāo)簽“I told you already,” I said, glaring.評(píng)析：此句貌

13、似豪華，其實(shí)對(duì)話中的主語(yǔ)“I”已經(jīng)清晰地說(shuō)明了說(shuō)話者，完全沒(méi)有必要用對(duì)話標(biāo)簽“I said”來(lái)說(shuō)說(shuō)話對(duì)象。糾正方法：加上一點(diǎn)動(dòng)作描寫就可以避免這種錯(cuò)誤，并且提升語(yǔ)言的生動(dòng)性。I glared at him.“I told you already.”第一種：加語(yǔ)氣“I would love to,” said Emilyin a pleasant tone.“我很樂(lè)意這樣做，”艾米麗用一種愉快的語(yǔ)氣說(shuō)。這里用到了“in a pleasant tone.”，即“用一種愉快的語(yǔ)氣”，基本結(jié)構(gòu)為：in a/an+形容詞+tone如：in apleasant愉悅的/firm堅(jiān)定的/rude粗魯?shù)?sad

14、悲傷的tone也可以用in a tone of +名詞的搭配如：in a tone ofsurprise用一種驚訝的語(yǔ)氣 in a tone of curiosity用一種好奇的語(yǔ)氣in a tone of impatience用一種不耐煩的語(yǔ)氣 in a tone of command用一種命令的語(yǔ)氣五、如何讓對(duì)話更生動(dòng)第二種：加嗓音“I didnt mean to,” she murmuredin a low voice.“我不是故意的，”她低聲說(shuō)。這里用到了“in a low voice”，即“小聲地說(shuō)道”或者“用一種.聲音”，基本結(jié)構(gòu)是：in a/an+形容詞+voice如：in ahigh /low / sweet/loud/soft /weakvoice 用一個(gè)高/低/甜/響亮/軟/弱的聲音第三種：加情感“I.I. dont think Im right for the part,”I repliedwith embarrassment.“我.我.認(rèn)為我不適合這個(gè)角色，”我尷尬地回答。這里用到了“with embarr