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1、Welcome to our class!2021/8/6 星期五1高考英語作文Revision 2021/8/6 星期五2考生應(yīng)能：(1)準確使用語法和詞匯；(2)使用一定的句型、詞匯，清楚、連貫地表 達自己的意思。 根據(jù)高考英語大綱：根據(jù)所給情景,用英語寫一篇約100個單詞左右的短文.情景包括目的,對象,時間,地點,內(nèi)容等.提供情景的形式有圖畫、圖表、提綱等2021/8/6 星期五3Step1 仔細審題 體裁與格式 人 稱 基本時態(tài) Step2. 理清要點列出文章要點，以避免遺漏內(nèi)容。Step3. 譯寫單句將所列要點用貼切地道的英語句子表達出來，要注意：選用自己有把握的詞匯和句型，切忌中式

2、英語。Step4. 連句成篇選用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)聯(lián)詞，將單句有機的串聯(lián)起來。切忌句子的簡單羅列！Step5. 檢查潤色檢查修改：格式、內(nèi)容、語言、語法錯誤 加工潤色： 使用一些高級詞匯來替換普通詞匯； 使用不同句式 調(diào)整布局Step6. 定稿謄寫 將寫好的作文抄寫在指定的區(qū)域內(nèi)，字跡 要工整，書寫要規(guī)范，注意字母大小寫以及 標點符號等。高考英語作文“六步法”2021/8/6 星期五4評分原則（以25分作文為例）1. 根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語言初步確定檔次,衡量調(diào)整后,最后給分.第5檔(2125分) 第4檔(1620分) 第3檔(1115分) 第2檔(610分) 第1檔(15分)2. 詞數(shù)少于80和多于120

3、的,從總分中減去 2分.3. 評分的主要內(nèi)容:內(nèi)容要點,應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準確性,上下文的連貫性.4. 拼寫和標點符號是語言準確性的一個方面.5. 書寫較差,以至影響交際,將分數(shù)降低一個檔次.2021/8/6 星期五5完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)覆蓋所有的內(nèi)容要點應(yīng)用了較多的語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯語法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面有些許錯誤,但為盡量使用較復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)或較高級詞匯所致,具備較強的語言應(yīng)用能力有效地使用了語句間的連接成分,使文章結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,達到預(yù)期的寫作目的.第5檔(2125分)2021/8/6 星期五6提高文采策略2021/8/6 星期五7設(shè)計別具一格的主題句e.g. （NMET 2004 北京 春 Chan

4、ges in our life）在過去的大約二十年中，我們的生活發(fā)生了很大的變化。Our life has changed greatly in the past twenty years or so.Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.A good beginning is half done. 布局謀篇別出心裁2021/8/6 星期五8運用不同的句式評分原則：3. 評分的主要內(nèi)容: 內(nèi)容要點, 應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準確性 上下文的連貫性.2021/8/6 星期五9簡單

5、句： S + be + Predicative(表語） S + vi. + (Adverbial)(狀語） S + vt. + Object (賓語） S + vt. + I.O.(間賓） + D.O. （直賓） S + vt. + O + O.C.（賓語補足語）并列句：I have got a cold, so Im going to bed.Some people love dogs, while others hate them.2021/8/6 星期五10復(fù)合句名詞性從句形容詞性從句副詞性從句主語從句表語從句賓語從句同位語從句定語從句狀語從句倒裝句強調(diào)句感嘆句There be 句型 2

6、021/8/6 星期五11She knows English well and it can help her in learning French. (并列句）She knows English well, which can help her in learning French.Her knowing English well can help her in learning French.That she knows English well can help her in learning French.2021/8/6 星期五12適當(dāng)添加信息語篇中可適當(dāng)添加信息，使文章充滿創(chuàng)新精神

7、。寫作時不必拘泥于文字限制而不敢越雷池一步。如寫信時可加適當(dāng)?shù)膯柡蛘Z或結(jié)束語；議論文中在結(jié)尾處對自己的觀點進行總結(jié)等。但是，切忌過多地添加與文章無關(guān)的信息。Im looking forward to hearing from you!2021/8/6 星期五13詞匯選擇標新立異詞匯選擇體現(xiàn)了作者的詞匯能力和英語的整體水平，歷屆高考高分作文都得益于高級詞匯的選擇和正確應(yīng)用。所謂高級詞匯并不是越難越好，越長越好，其主要是指那些表達地道而不易被大部分考生想到用的表達方式，如復(fù)合詞，介詞結(jié)構(gòu)等。我很高興提供幫助。I would be very glad to help you.I would be m

8、ore than glad to help you. 我的家鄉(xiāng)正在建設(shè)一條新鐵路。A new railway is being built in my hometown.A new railway is under construction in my hometown.2021/8/6 星期五14連接詞語承上啟下3. 評分的主要內(nèi)容:內(nèi)容要點,應(yīng)用詞匯和語法結(jié)構(gòu)的數(shù)量和準確性,上下文的連貫性.考生應(yīng)根據(jù)內(nèi)容，按照時間先后、空間順序、邏輯關(guān)系、前因后果等，弄清所寫內(nèi)容之間的關(guān)系，適當(dāng)加以調(diào)整，然后加入適當(dāng)?shù)倪^渡詞，串句成文，從而使文章前后過渡自然，環(huán)環(huán)相扣，層次清晰，邏輯分明。注意：不可濫用，

9、以致喧賓奪主。2021/8/6 星期五15e.g. （NMET 2002 討論：公園要不要收門票）Charging entrances fees will no doubt keep some people away. Whats more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls (依據(jù)前后關(guān)系，本句運用了表示遞進關(guān)系的whats more，從而進一步闡述自己的理由。）On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to

10、pay gardenersand other workers（本句運用了表示承上啟下的on the other hand, 從而使所寫內(nèi)容過渡自然， 段落劃分得當(dāng)，層次分明。）你能給出其他的常用的連接詞嗎？2021/8/6 星期五16要點表達揚長避短在寫作過程中，常常遇到個別詞語或句型不會表達或不熟悉，這時不能生搬硬套，應(yīng)盡量采用化長為短，作些解釋或?qū)ふ乙馑枷嘟淖约菏煜さ脑~語或句型來代替等方法解決問題。e.g. 公園是公眾休閑的地方。休閑_?我們可以這樣處理：A park is a place where people can rest and enjoy themselves. 2021/

11、8/6 星期五17積累詞匯促進寫作近義詞重要句型固定搭配和習(xí)語e.g. 有志者事竟成。Where there is a will, there is a way.趁熱打鐵。Strike while the iron is hot.沒有付出，就沒有收獲。No pains, no gains.Many drops make a shower.2021/8/6 星期五18提高文采策略 布局謀篇別出心裁 設(shè)計別具一格的主題句； 運用不同的句式； 適當(dāng)添加信息。 詞匯選擇標新立異 連接詞語承上啟下 要點表達揚長避短 積累詞匯促進寫作2021/8/6 星期五19(NMET 2004 浙江) 書面表達(滿分

12、25分)假設(shè)你是李越,離的加拿大筆友Steve來信說,他和他的一些同學(xué)正在學(xué)中文,請你推薦兩本學(xué)中文的詞典.根據(jù)下表提供的信息,請你給他寫一封回信.范文賞析：2021/8/6 星期五20參考詞匯: 推薦 recommend (V.) 英漢/漢英詞典 The English-Chinese / Chinese-English Dictionary (ECCED) 新華字典 Xinhua Dictionary (XD)注意: 詞數(shù): 100左右Dear Steve,_ Yours, Li Yue 2021/8/6 星期五21Dear Steve, Thank you very much for y

13、our last letter which asked me something about how to choose a dictionary for learning Chinese. Here I strongly recommend you the following two which may be useful to you. One of them is the The English-Chinese / Chinese-English Dictionary (ECCED) which will cost you 52 yuan. There are some 18,000 E

14、nglish words and 20,000 Chinesewords in it. As it has lots of examples showing how to use the words, it will be much valuable for the beginners like you. Dear Steve, Thank you very much for your last letter which asked me something about how to choose a dictionary for learning Chinese. Here I strong

15、ly recommend you the following two which may be useful to you. One of them is the The English-Chinese / Chinese-English Dictionary (ECCED) which will cost you 52 yuan. There are some 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinesewords in it. As it has lots of examples showing how to use the words, it will

16、be much valuable for the beginners like you. which askedme something about how to choose a dictionary for learningChinese.which may be useful to you.which will cost you 52 yuan.There are some 18,000 English words and 20,000 Chinesewords in it.As it has lots of examples showing how to usethe words,20

17、21/8/6 星期五22 The other one, Xinhua Dictionary (XD) , which charges you only 11 yuan and has a collection of 10,000 Chinese words. It is the most commonly used one in China. If you need my help with your Chinese write to me. I m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li YueThe other one,2021/8/6 星期五23

18、分析： 這篇文章屬于第_檔次， 可得_分。內(nèi)容：語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯：高級詞匯：五24這篇文章共5個自然段，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，覆蓋了題目中的所有內(nèi)容并且根據(jù)材料適當(dāng)添加了信息（最后兩段）；共使用了9個句子，其中使用了4個定語從句，1 個狀語從句，1個there be 句型strongly, charge, a collection of, the most commonly used, look forward to2021/8/6 星期五24 假設(shè)你是王小明，請根據(jù)你校美化校園的規(guī)劃，用英語給你在美國的筆友Peter寫一封短信，介紹該規(guī)劃。短信的主要內(nèi)容如下：規(guī)劃目的美化校園，凈化空氣創(chuàng)造良好學(xué)習(xí)生活環(huán)境

19、規(guī)劃內(nèi)容種植花草樹木建一個植物園，供參觀實踐建一個小花園，供休息、讀書建幾座名人雕塑，激勵師生改寫練習(xí)：（NMET 2004 福建）2021/8/6 星期五25注意：短信的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好， 不計入總詞數(shù)。2.詞數(shù)100左右。3.參考詞匯： 雕塑：statue（n.） 植物園：botanical garden（n.）Dear Peter,I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program._Welcome to our school if you have any chance. Yours, Wang

20、 Xiaoming2021/8/6 星期五26Dear Peter, Id like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program. We worked out the program in order to makeour school more beautiful,make the air cleaner andfresher and make our school become a better environment for our study and life. Here are the contents of th

21、e program. We willplant many trees,flowers and grass in our school.We will also build a botanical garden to visit and practise in. We are going to build a small garden.There we can rest and read books. We will build some statues of famous people to encourage teachers and students to work hard,too. Welcome to our school if you have any chance. Yours, Wang Xiaoming2021/8/6 星期五27Dear Peter, Id like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program. The purposes of the program are to make our school more beautiful, to make the air cleaner and