高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫技巧(以浙江高考題為例)(共25張)課件

1、讀后續(xù)寫Continuation Writing讀后續(xù)寫Continuation Writing目錄contents01 要求說明02 Thorough reading03 Logical plotting04Vivid writing目錄01 要求說明02 Thorough reading0301要求說明01要求說明01要求說明字?jǐn)?shù)續(xù)寫內(nèi)容為150詞左右材料350詞以內(nèi)要求1.原文提供10處左右的標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)，所續(xù)寫內(nèi)容應(yīng)使用5處以上這些詞語(yǔ)。2.兩段，每段的開頭語(yǔ)已經(jīng)給出體裁記敘文故事類邏輯性較強(qiáng)01要求說明字?jǐn)?shù)材料要求體裁01寫作要求融洽度高銜接合理5個(gè)以上關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)法&詞匯豐富&

2、準(zhǔn)確結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊150字左右01寫作要求融洽度高銜接合理5個(gè)以上關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)法&詞匯結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊02Thorough reading02Thorough reading02Thorough reading1. Why did the young man look worried?2. What happened? But everyone had a different answer.3. Why did he start to run?原文信息02Thorough reading1. Why did t02Thorough readingWhy did Arthur run so fast? 續(xù)寫第一段

3、續(xù)寫第二段How did he get to the Police station?What did he say to the taxi driver? What did he say to the police?What were the reactions of the police?鎖定信息要點(diǎn)。言之有物，增加細(xì)節(jié)描寫（內(nèi)心情感/態(tài)度/表情描述/動(dòng)作描寫等）02Thorough readingWhy did Arth02Thorough readingwhowhenwherewhatwhyArthur, a young manOne day when Arthur was on the

4、 way to work. Park Avenue near the First National BankArthur helped a young man to carry a suitcase; A bank robbery happened; Arthur thought the young woman mistook him as the bank thief and started to run.The young man couldnt get the car moving; a bank robbery just happened and he was carrying a s

5、uitcase.content02Thorough readingwhowhenwhere02Thorough readingClassify the 10 underlined words and phrases.Park Avenuethe young mansuitcasesin the back seatloud noise of an alarmthe bankrobberythe shoutspeoplethe bank thiefWhenWhereWhoWhatWhyHow 02Thorough readingClassify the03Logical plotting03Log

6、ical plotting03Logical plottingAs he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ”Para 1Para 2Tip1The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and ArthurTip2Focus on the given sentence of para2 first. Because some information in it must be mentioned in para 1.Make use of

7、 the key words in the given sentences to infer more information.03Logical plottingAs he was ru03Logical plottingAs he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ”Para 1Para 2The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and ArthurArthurthe young manthe taxi driverpurpose

8、dialoguefeelingsdestinationArthurthe policemanthe real robberdialogueresponsetruth03Logical plottingAs he was ru03Logical plottingWhat kind of ending would you prefer for this story?A funny thing happened to Arthur when he was on the way to work one day. surprising interestingTip3Sometimes, the gene

9、ral key word can guide us to imagine reasonably.03Logical plottingWhat kind of03Logical plottingpara1para2 設(shè)計(jì)考慮Arthur 在聽到年輕人喊叫時(shí)的心理活動(dòng)和可能做出的動(dòng)作?？紤]抵達(dá)警察局后Arthur 和警察的語(yǔ)言交流以及隨后警察的行動(dòng)。設(shè)計(jì)的關(guān)鍵在于搭建本段與前文、后文的橋梁，特別注意動(dòng)作描寫、語(yǔ)言描寫、心理描寫03Logical plottingpara1para2 03Logical plottingBe well connected to the given passagean

10、d the beginnings of the two paragraphs.self-evaluation (plot)Be well organized with at least 5 of the 10 given underlined words.Make sure the story develops logically and reasonably.Never ignore the basic tone of the blems?03Logical plottingBe well conn04Vivid writing04Vivid writing04Vivi

11、d writingtip3tip1tip2Using linking words effectively.Adding some details reasonably.Using different sentence structures.04Vivid writingUsing linking wPara1: As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop! ” “Give my suitcase back to me!” Hearing this, Arthur immediately r

12、ealized that the young man was the bank thief. So he continued running until he stopped a taxi. Then he quickly got into it and sat in the back seat. Out of breath, Arthur said to the taxi driver, “Please go to the Police Station as soon as possible. I have a robbery to report to the policeman.” The

13、 moment the taxi driver got the request, he drove straight to the police station without hesitation.add some detailsUse different structures Proper linking wordsLanguage appreciationThe taxi raced away like the wind.Para1:add some detailsUse diff The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and A

14、rthur ran into it, shouting, “There is a bank robbery and I know who the bank thief is.” On hearing Arthurs story, the policeman decided to head for the bank to investigate the case. However, Just at that moment, the young man came to the police station in a hurry. Out of breath, He told the whole s

15、tory. As a matter of fact, he was not the bank thief and what in the suitcase were only some clothes. How embarrassed Arthur was when he learned the truth!add some detailsProper linking wordsUse different structures The taxi stopped in fronpara1As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting

16、behind, “Stop, stop!” At that time, Arthur felt not only nervous but also frightened. Suddenly, he suspected that the young man was probably the one who organized the robbery. So he ran even faster on Park Avenue until he caught sight of a taxi. He stopped it and said loudly to the driver, “Take me

17、to the nearest police station immediately! The man behind is the bank thief! Quick! Quick!” So quickly did the taxi run that it disappeared like wind.para1Para 2 version 1The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur told the police what had happened. Obviously, the police had already g

18、ot some relevant information. Opening the suitcase, they found a large sum of money inside. Then the police asked Arthur to offer concrete characteristic about the young man, with which the robbery was caught and the other suitcase was got back. The bank thanked Arthur a lot and presented him with a

19、n award. It was his quick thinking and brave actions that helped catch the bank thief.Para 2 version 1Para 2 version 2The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthur rushed in, telling a policeman what had happened. Then the suitcase was opened, but to their surprise, what they saw was no

20、t money but a camera and some notebooks in it. Just at that moment, the young man arrived in a hurry. He explained that as a journalist he was going to interview a famous writer. Later, the policeman learnt from the bank that there was no robbery but a film was being made. How funny!Para 2 version 2

21、As he was running, Arthur heard the young man shouting behind, “Stop, stop!” Thinking of the way the young man had behaved, he realizedthe young man might bethe bank robber. So Arthur ran faster and stopped a taxi. The moment he got into the taxi, he told the driver the man shouting behind wasthe bank thiefand asked him to drive to the nearest police station. The driver followed what Arthur said and drove away.The taxi stopped in front of the Police Station and Arthu