語(yǔ)法改錯(cuò)練習(xí)答案

1、參照答案1.Schoolsshouldrewardtopstudentswhohavehighestscore.講解：最高等前面需要冠詞the改：Schoolsshouldrewardtopstudentswhohavethehighestscore.Iftheyspendtoomuchtimeonhousework,theymaynothaveenoughtimetodotheirwork,inthatcase,theymayperformpoorlyintheworkplace.講解：獨(dú)立的句子之間相連，需要有連詞。改：Iftheyspendtoomuchtimeonhousework,t

2、heymaynothaveenoughtimetodotheirwork,andinthatcase,theymayperformpoorlyintheworkplace.Weencouragementosharehouseworkwithwomen,itdoesnotmeanthathouseworkshouldbeallocatedtohusbandandwifeequally.講解：獨(dú)立的句子之間相連，需要有連詞。改：Weencouragementosharehouseworkwithwomen,butitdoesnotmeanthathouseworkshouldbeallocated

3、tohusbandandwifeequally.4.Thereareanincreasingnumberofpeoplechoosetospendholidaysoverseas.講解：therebe句型本身就是完滿的句子，不能夠再出現(xiàn)其他謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，需要使用定語(yǔ)從句也許分詞來(lái)修飾名詞people改：Thereareanincreasingnumberofpeoplewhochoosetospendholidaysoverseas.改：Thereareanincreasingnumberofpeoplechoosingtospendholidaysoverseas.5.Thepercentage

4、ofpeopletraveledbybikeoronfootdecreasedsignificantly.講解：句子里面不能夠出現(xiàn)兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞travelled和decreased，若是有兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，能夠做成從句，也許使用分詞。改：Thepercentageofpeoplewhotraveledbybikeoronfootdecreasedsignificantly.改：Thepercentageofpeopletravellingbybikeoronfootdecreasedsignificantly.Comparingwithfossilfuels,nuclearpowercanprov

5、idemoreenergyanditdoesnotproducecarbondioxide.改：Comparedwithfossilfuels,nuclearpowercanprovidemoreenergyanditdoesnotproducecarbondioxide.Forthosestudentswhodonothaveself-controlprobablywillmimicthosewrongbehaviorfromTVprograms.講解：加了for今后變成了介詞短語(yǔ)，變成了句子的狀語(yǔ)，以致這句話沒(méi)有了主語(yǔ)。介詞短語(yǔ)不能夠作為句子主語(yǔ)。改：Thosestudentswhodon

6、othaveself-controlprobablywillmimicthosewrongbehaviorfromTVprograms.Ifthehouseholdtaskscouldbedividedaccordingtothefamilyssituationwouldbebetter.講解：有一個(gè)條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句卻沒(méi)有主語(yǔ)。改：Ifthehouseholdtaskscouldbedividedaccordingtothefamilyssituation,itwouldbebetter.9.Parentsbuyalargequantityoftoysmaydistractchildrenf

7、romtheirstudy.講解：不能夠拿一個(gè)句子去當(dāng)另一個(gè)句子的主語(yǔ)。改：Ifparentsbuyalargequantityoftoys,itmaydistractchildrenfromtheirstudy.Somescenicspotsaresopopularthateveryyearthenumberoftouristswhoaccommodateexceedstheirrealcapacity.講解：accommodate是“款待”和“容納”，這個(gè)詞的主語(yǔ)應(yīng)該是旅游景點(diǎn)scenicspots，而不是游客。所以加了個(gè)they，這個(gè)they表示scenicspots改：Somescen

8、icspotsaresopopularthateveryyearthenumberoftouristswhotheyaccommodateexceedstheirrealcapacity.11.ThetimewhichspendsinwatchingTVshouldbecontrolledstrictly.講解：定語(yǔ)從句的主語(yǔ)which，指代time，時(shí)間“被花在看電視上”，是被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。也許干脆把定語(yǔ)從句修飾time改成過(guò)去分詞修飾time改：ThetimewhichisspentinwatchingTVshouldbecontrolledstrictly.改：Thetimespentinwa

9、tchingTVshouldbecontrolledstrictly.Usingfossilfuelswillproducecarbondioxide,whichisakindofgreenhousegascausesglobalwarming.講解：定語(yǔ)從句里面出現(xiàn)了兩個(gè)謂語(yǔ)：is和cause，所今后邊用了定語(yǔ)從句that來(lái)修飾greenhousegas改：Usingfossilfuelswillproducecarbondioxide,whichisakindofgreenhousegasthatcausesglobalwarming.Manyyoungpeoplemovefromrura

10、lareastocities,whichtherearemoreeducationalresourcesandjobopportunities.講解：which叫作關(guān)系代詞，在定語(yǔ)從句里面擔(dān)當(dāng)主語(yǔ)也許賓語(yǔ)。這句話的定語(yǔ)從句therearemorejobopportunities已經(jīng)是完滿的句子，所以把which改成where，where是關(guān)系副詞，等于inwhich，在從句里面作為狀語(yǔ)。改：Manyyoungpeoplemovefromruralareastocities,wheretherearemoreeducationalresourcesandjobopportunities.14.M

11、anyyoungpeoplemovefromruralareastocities,wherehavemoreeducationalresourcesandjobopportunities.講解：這里的定語(yǔ)從句需要一個(gè)主語(yǔ)，而不是狀語(yǔ)，所以需要使用which，關(guān)系代詞作為定語(yǔ)從句的主語(yǔ)。改：Manyyoungpeoplemovefromruralareastocities,whichhavemoreeducationalresourcesandjobopportunities.15.Manypeopledonotunderstandthathowimportantitistoprotectwil

12、danimals.講解：使用帶疑問(wèn)詞how的賓語(yǔ)從句，不需要that。使用一般的賓語(yǔ)從句，就把疑問(wèn)詞how去掉。改：Manypeopledonotunderstandhowimportantitistoprotectwildanimals.understandthatitisimportanttoprotectwildanimals.改：Manypeopledonot16.ThenumberofAustraliantouristsincreasedto20thousands.講解：hundred，thousand，million這樣的單詞，前面有數(shù)字的時(shí)候，改：ThenumberofAustr

13、aliantouristsincreasedto20thousand.依舊使用其單數(shù)形式。Itseemsreasonableforgovernmenttorestricttheuseoffreshwatertoprotecttheenvironment.講解：government是可數(shù)名詞，單數(shù)形式的前面需要冠詞the改：Itseemsreasonableforthegovernmenttorestricttheuseoffreshwatertoprotecttheenvironment.18.Whentheriverpolluted,fisheswoulddie講解：這里的污染是指河流被污染

14、，需要使用被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)。改：Whentheriverispolluted,fisheswoulddie19.Asthegovernmentsmoneyislimited,whichisexpectedtobespentonmedicalservices,transportandsoon.講解：這句話里面有原因狀語(yǔ)從句，有定語(yǔ)從句，卻沒(méi)有主句。改：Asthegovernmentsmoneyislimited,itisexpectedtobespentonmedicalservices,transportandsoon.改：Thegovernmentsmoneyislimited,whichisexp

15、ectedtobespentonmedicalservices,transportandsoon.Bycontrast,althoughthesalesofapplesintheUKincreasedslightlyfromonemillionto5.5millionpoundsin2004.講解：這句話只寫(xiě)了退步狀語(yǔ)從句，卻沒(méi)有主句改：Bycontrast,thesalesofapplesintheUKincreasedslightlyfromonemillionto5.5millionpoundsin2004.Toomuchhomeworkmakesstudentsstressfuland

16、tired.講解：stressful是修飾“造成壓力的事物”，而修飾“人的壓力大”應(yīng)該使用stressed。比方tired修飾人，而tiring修飾事物。改：Toomuchhomeworkmakesstudentsstressedandtired.22.StudentswhorarelywatchTVmaybelimitedtogainknowledge.講解：知識(shí)面碰到限制，沒(méi)有belimitedtodosth.這樣的句型，這是屬于依照自己的中式思想一想法造出來(lái)的句子。改：StudentswhorarelywatchTVmaybelimitedintheirknowledge.Student

17、sareeasiertofindjobsaftergraduationiftheydosomepart-timejobsintheuniversity.講解：這種句式屬于典型的中式思想造句。改：改：Studentsaremorelikelytofindjobsaftergraduationiftheydosomepart-timejobsintheuniversity.Itiseasierforstudentstofindjobsaftergraduationiftheydosomepart-timejobsintheuniversity.24.Takingpartinsportsactivi

18、tiesinsparetimecandeclinethestressatwork.講解：decline是不及物動(dòng)詞，這里需要使用及物動(dòng)詞reduce改：Takingpartinsportsactivitiesinsparetimecanreducethestressatwork25.Manyyoungpeopledecidemovetocitiestolookforbetterjobs.講解：decide作動(dòng)詞的用法是decidetodosth.這些動(dòng)詞用法在福利課句法錄屏里面有過(guò)總結(jié)。改：Manyyoungpeopledecidetomovetocitiestolookforbetterjo

19、bs.Ifcriminalscouldreceiveeducationandtraininginprison,theywouldavoidtocommitcrimesagainaftertheyarereleased.講解：avoid作動(dòng)詞的用法是avoiddoingsth.這些動(dòng)詞用法在福利課句法錄屏里面有過(guò)總結(jié)。改：Ifcriminalscouldreceiveeducationandtraininginprison,theywouldavoidcommittingcrimesagainaftertheyarereleased.27.Astherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,peopleslivingstandardhasimproved.講解：As表示“因?yàn)椤?，是連詞，后邊要接句子，若是后邊接名詞，應(yīng)該使用介詞dueto，也許becauseof。改：Duetotherapiddevelopmentofeconomy,peopleslivingstandardhasimproved.Childrenwholackofparentsloveandcaremaybecomesensitiveandin