2023屆新高考英語寫作精講和模板3建議信-(教案)

專題0L3建議信2023屆新高考英語寫作精講+寫作模板【典題解讀】（2017.北京卷）你的英國朋友Jim所在的學校要組織學生來中國旅行，有兩條線路可以選擇：“長江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim來信希望你能給些建議。請你給他回信。內容包括：1.你建議的線路；.你的理由；.你的祝愿。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于50：.開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。DearJim,Yours,LiHua【解讀】這是一篇應用文寫作之建議信。題干只提供了三個比擬詳實的要點:你的英國朋友Jim要來中國旅游、“長江之行”和“泰山之旅”擇其一給出建議以及你的祝愿。其余的要點（你建議的線路、你建議的理由）都比擬籠統(tǒng)，需要考生將這兩個要點具體化，方能順利完成寫作任務。寫作時，可以運用三段式來表達：第一段：點明寫信之目的（知道你要來中國旅游）；第二段：建議的線路及其理由（相對來說選擇“長江之行”比擬容易寫些）；第三段：你的祝愿。【答案】“長江之行”DearJim,Pmhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou'recomingtoChina.OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai,botharehighlyrecommended.Personally,IpreferthetouralongtheYangtze,thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization.YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.Moreover,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.That'swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzewillbeabetterchoice.Hopeyou'llhaveagoodtimeinChina.Yours,LiHua【答案】“泰山之旅”DearJim,I'mmorethandelightedtoknowthatyouarepayingavisittoChina.AsfarasI'mconcerned,goingtoMountTaiisabetterchoice.Firstofall,thesceneryofMountTaiisextremelybeautiful,whichhasattractednumeroustouristseveryyear.Besides,MountTaiisnotonlyasighttovisit,butalsoboaststraditionalChineseliterature.Manyfamouspoetswrotepoemstopraiseit,manyofwhichhavebeencarvedontherocksalongthepaths.Inaddition,climbingthemountainisnotonlygoodforyourphysicalhealthbutalsobringsyoulotsofcourageandendurance.Afterreachingthetop,youcanenjoythefantasticsunrisetillthemorning.It'ssuchamust-seeplacethatyouwon'tbedisappointedwhenyougothere.Hopemysuggestionswillbeofsomehelp.Wishyouagoodtime.Yours,LiHua【寫作點撥】建議信是向對方提出自己的合理建議的信件。建議信一般分為三類：一是給熟悉的人就有關方面主動提供建議；二是對別人寫信向你求助的回復，就其遇到的某個問題提出看法、建議等；三是寫給某個組織或機構的信，就改進服務等方面提出建議或忠告。建議信要盡量簡潔明確，理由充足，具有合理性和說服性。具體的說：第一段：寫信的背景/原因/目的；第二段：闡述建議內容及理由：第三段：希望自己的建議被采納/對對方有所幫助/表達期望和祝愿?！境Ｓ盟夭摹縔ouhaveaskedmeformyadviceon/withregardtohowto…，andIwilltrytomakesonicsuggestionshere.你關于如何……詢問我的建議，那么我就在這里給出一些建議。I'moveijoyed/verygladtoreceiveyourletter/e-mailaskingfbrmyadviceonhowto...很高興收到你的來信/郵件，信上詢問我關于如何……NowTmwritingtogiveyousomeadvice/suggestions/tipsonhowto...現(xiàn)在，關于如何……的問題，我寫信給你提些建議。I'msorry/feelsorrytohearthatyouarehavingtrouble...andIwouldliketoofferyouthefollowingtips.很遺憾聽說你在……方面有困難，因此我想給你提如下一些建議。Suchproblemsarequitenormal.Perhapsthefollowingsuggestionsarehelpful.這樣的問題是很正常的?？赡芟旅娴慕ㄗh會有一些幫助。Iamwritingtoexpressmyvicws/sharcwithyousomesuggestionsconcerning...我寫信是想表達/與你提供我對……的看法/建議。Itismypleasure/Fmgladtoofferyousomeadvicc/suggestionsonlyfbryourreference.我很高興給您提一些建議，。Youhaveaskedmefbrmyadvicewithregardto...andIwilltrytomakesomeconstructivesuggestions.你就……向我尋求建議，我會盡力提一些建設性的建議。I'mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.我非常樂意提供我的建議供你參考。Iwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.我將盡力在這里提出一些有益的建議。Mysuggestionsareasfollows./Herearcafewsuggestions./Thefollowingaremysuggestions.我的建議如下。Hopemyadvice/suggestionscanbeofsomehelp.Ifthereisanythingelse1coulddo,pleaseletmeknow.希望我的建議能有所幫助。如果還有什么我能做的，請告訴我。Inmyopinion,youhadbetter/youmightaswell/youaresupposedto...在我看來，你最好/不妨/應該……It,sagoodidea/awisechoiceto…這是一個好主意/明智的選擇Ithinkthemostefficientway(ways)is(are)to.…我認為最有效的方法是Itmakessenseto…做有意義。...isalsoagoodchoice,whichwouldhelp也是一個很好的選擇，這將有助于Itwillbemuchmoreconvenientforyouto…做對你來說更方便。Ifsagoodideaforyouto…做對你來說是個好主意。Withallthefactorstakenintoconsideration,I'msureyouwill...Wishyouallthebest!將所有這些因素考慮到，我相信你會……。祝你一切順利！Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful.我希望你會覺得這些建議很有用。Ihopemysuggestionsabovemaybenefityou.我希望我的建議對你有所裨益。Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.我愿意與你討論這個問題，以進一步了解細節(jié)。Hopeyouwillmakesufficientprogressin...soon.希望你能在很快取得長足的進步。Iamfullyconvincedthatusethetips/suggestionsaboveandyouwillgainbenefit.我完全相信，使用上面的技巧/建議，您將受益匪淺。Ibelieveitwouldbebeneficialifyoucouldfollowmysuggestions.我相信如果你能聽從我的建議，那將是非常有益的。I'msureyoucanmakeawisedecision.我相信你會做出明智的決定。Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposais/suggestionspractical/uscful/helpfui.我希望這些建議/意見/看法對你實用/有用/有幫助。Iwillbeglad/wouldappreciateitifyouwill/couldtakemyadvice/suggestionsintoconsideration.如果你能考慮我的建議我將非常高興/我將不勝感激。Iwillbemorethanhappyloseeimprovementsinthisregard.如果這方面有所改善我會很開心的。I'mlookingforwardtoyour...我期待著收至ij你的?！灸０鍢嫿ā磕０逡籌amdelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon（有關內容）.I'mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.（或者：Iamglad/sorrytohearthat（有關內容），and（Astohowto）,Iwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.）Togetstarted/Tobeginwith,youhadbetter/youmightaswell/youarcsupposedto（建議一）.Besides/Additionally/What'smore,it'sagoodidea/awisechoiceto（建議二）.Lastbutnotleast/Moreover/Atlast,Ithinkthemostefficientway（ways）is（are）to（建議三）.Withallthefactorstakenintoconsideration,Tinsureyouwill（成功解決問題）.Wishyouallthebest!（或者：Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismailerwithyoutofurtherdetails.Wishyouallthebest!）（或者：Ihopemysuggestionsabovemaybenefityou.Hopeyouwillmakesufficientprogressin（某方面）soon.Iamlookingforwardto...）Yours,LiHua【模板運用】一（2022?新疆烏魯木齊市八中高三階段練）假如你是李華，剛參加完高考且取得優(yōu)異成績。你的朋友王東今年讀高三感到讀書壓力大，晚上睡不著，寫信向你求助，希望你能給一些建議讓他能夠順利度過高三學習生活。內容包括：1.相信自己的老師，提高課堂聽課效率；2.課后合理安排時間，提高解題效果；3.盡可能抽空鍛煉，樹立信心。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearWangdong,Yours,LihuaYours,LiHua【答案】DearWangdong,IamsorrytohearthatyouaresleeplessunderthestressofstudyinSeniorThree.Iwilltrytomakesomeconducivesuggestionshere.Tobeginwith,youaresupposedtobelieveinyourteachersandimproveyourefficiencyinclass.What'smore,itisagoodideatoarrangeyourtimeproperlyafterschool,whichcanenhancetheeffectivenessofyourproblemsolving.Atlast,Ithinkthemostefficientwaysaretotaketimetoexerciseasmuchaspossibleandtobuildupself-confidence.Hopefully,myadvicecanhelpyou.Lookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Yours,LiHua模板二Dear,Iamdelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon（有關內容）或：Iamhearingabout（有關內容）/1amhearingthat（有關內容）.I'mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Inmyopinion,youaresupposedto（建議）because（理由—）.Additionally,itmakessenseto（理由二）.Moreover,（理由三）isalsoagoodchoice,whichwouldhelp...或：Inmyopinion,youaresupposedto（建議）because（理由一）.Additionally,itwillbemuchmoreconvenientforyouto（理由二）.Therefore,it'sagoodideafbryouto...Iamfullyconvincedthatusethetips/suggestionsaboveandyouwill（以上建議的好處）.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount.或：Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount.Yours,LiHua【模板運用】二（陜西省西安中學2019-2020學年高三上學期期中）假如你是李華，你的外教MrGeller計劃讓8歲的女兒在中國學習一門傳統(tǒng)藝術作為興趣培養(yǎng)，想從書法、剪紙與象棋中選擇，寫郵件尋求你的看法和學習建議。請你給他回一封郵件。內容包括：1.推薦內容及簡要原因；2.切實可行的學習建議；3.祝福與希望。注意：1.詞數(shù)：80詞左右；2.內容應包括以上要點，可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；【答案】DearMrGeller,Iamdelightedtoreceiveyourletteraskingfbrmyadviceonyourplan.I'mmorethangladtooffermyadviceforyourreference.Inmyopinion,youarcsupposedtochooseChinesecalligraphybecauseit'sanaturalcombinationofbeauty,strength,historj,andtechnique.Additionally,aimingatlearningitwell,itmakessensetodevoteherselftolonghoursofpractice.Morcovcr,signingupforacalligraphycourseisalsoagoodchoice,whichwouldhelpherstudyinasystematicway.Iamfullyconvincedthatusethetipsaboveandyouwillgainbenefit.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoaccount.Yours,LiHua【寫作實踐】一（2022?全國高三專題練習）假如你是李華，你的巴基斯坦筆友Muhammad準備明年來你校做交換生，寫信向你咨詢如何學習中文。請你用英語給他回封電子郵件。內容包括：1.寫信的目的；.提出學習中文建議；.期待與祝福。注意：1.寫作詞數(shù)應為80左右；.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。DearMuhammad,Yours,LiHua【答案】DearMuhammad,Iamgladtohearthatyouwillbeanexchangestudentatourschoolnextyear.AstohowtoleamChinese,Iwilltrytomakesonicconducivesuggestionshere.Togetstarted,youmightaswelltakeaChinesecoursetolayasolidfoundation.What'smore,itisawisechoicetopickupproperChineseTVprograms.Moreover,Ithinkthemostefficinetwayistomakefriendswithw