投訴信教學(xué)設(shè)計(jì)

英語寫作：投訴信英語寫作：投訴信Writing:aletterofcomplaintWhatisacomplaintletter? （什么是投訴信？）?背景：遇到一些不文明現(xiàn)象、所購商品質(zhì)量差、售后服務(wù)不滿意等情況下向相關(guān)機(jī)構(gòu)或人員寫信，旨在解決問題。?語言：要注意把握分寸，要公平、公正、禮貌。?內(nèi)容：1.表明寫作目的，因何事投訴；2.具體存在的問題；3.希望得到回復(fù)并解決問題。Taskpresentation（任務(wù)呈現(xiàn)）?假如你是學(xué)生會(huì)主席李明，請(qǐng)你代表全校同學(xué)給校長(zhǎng)寫一封信，反映一下你校食堂的幾點(diǎn)問題，以引起學(xué)校重視。問題包括：.菜價(jià)昂貴；2.過于油膩，味道不佳，菜品種類少；3.排隊(duì)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，浪費(fèi)午休時(shí)間。?注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于120;2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Brainstorming （頭腦風(fēng)暴）?Structureofthetext:Paragraph1:Introduceyourselfandexpressthedissatisfactiondirectly.Paragraph2:Describethedetailsofcomplaining.Paragraph3:Expectareplyandexpressgratitude感激）.?Notice:Tense:Presentsimple.Person:Thefirstperson.Keypoints:菜價(jià)；味道、種類；排隊(duì)時(shí)間。Usefulexpressions（詞語、句型儲(chǔ)備）套用句式：.寫作目的：I'mwritingtomakeacomplaintabout….投訴內(nèi)容：Thereasonisthat???Inthefirstplace,…What'smore,…Lastbutnotleast,.希望得到的結(jié)果：Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldkindlyreplyusandgiveasolution.詞語儲(chǔ)備：?代表onbehalfof?抱怨complain?餐廳canteen?對(duì)……不滿bedissatisfiedwith?油膩的greasy?路邊攤stall?對(duì)造成威脅poseathreatto?排隊(duì)waitinline?小憩nap句子儲(chǔ)備：?寫這封信是想代表全校同學(xué)對(duì)餐廳的服務(wù)質(zhì)量提出不滿。myfellowstudents,thepoorserviceofthecanteen.?餐廳食物價(jià)格太高，成為一些同學(xué)的負(fù)擔(dān)。inthecanteenishighitbecomesaburdenforus.?餐廳食物過于油膩，味道不佳，菜品選擇有限。Thefoodinthecanteenisand,andwehave ofdishes.?食物被浪費(fèi)，有些學(xué)生轉(zhuǎn)而購買校外路邊攤食物，對(duì)健康造成威脅。ismuchfoodwasted,manystudentsoutsidethecampus,whichcantoourhealth.?午飯排隊(duì)時(shí)間長(zhǎng)，浪費(fèi)午休時(shí)間，下午上課犯困。Waitinginlineduringlunchforthenapatnoon,inlaterclasses.?我們希望餐廳服務(wù)能得到改善。如能得到您的回復(fù)并給出解決方案，我們將感激不盡!thattheserviceofthecanteencanbeimproved.WewouldreallyifyoucouldkindlyreplyusandCombiningsentences（連接句子）A.Asaconsequence B.LastbutnotleastC.Basically D.AllinallE.What'smore F.Inthefirstplace,therearethreeaspectsthatwearedissatisfiedwith.,thepriceofthefoodinthecanteenissohighthatitbecomesaburdenforus.,thefoodinthecanteenisrathergreasyandtastesbad,andwehavelimitedchoicesofdishes.,notonlyismuchfoodwasted,butalsomanystudentsturntostallsoutsidethecampus,whichcanposeathreattoourhealth.,waitinginlineduringlunchresultsindecreasedtimeforthenapatnoon,makingussleepyinlaterclasses.,itisourhopethattheserviceofthecanteencanbeimproved.Wewouldreallyappreciateitifyoucouldkindlyreplyusandgivesolutions.范文:DearPrincipal,I'mLiMing,presidentoftheStudentUnion.Onbehalfofmyfellowstudents,Iwritingtocomplainaboutthepoorserviceofthecanteen.Thedetailsareasfollows:Basically,therearethreeaspectsthatwearedissatisfiedwith.Inthefirstplace,thepriceofthefoodinthecanteenissohighthatitbecomesaburdenforus.Whatthefoodinthecanteenisrathergreasyandtastesbad,andwehavelimitedchoicesofdishes.Asaconsequence,notonlyismuchfoodwasted,butalsomanystudentsturntostallsoutsidethecampus,whichcanposeathreattoourhealth.Lastbutnotleast,waitinginlineduringlunchresultsindecreasedtimeforthenapatnoon,makingussleepyinlaterclasses.Allinall,itisourhopethattheserviceofthecanteencanbeimproved.Wewouldreallyappreciateitifyoucouldkindlyreplyusandgivesolutions.Bestwishes!Sincerely,LiMingPractice（實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練）假如你是紅星中學(xué)生李明，發(fā)現(xiàn)晚自習(xí)下課后校門前擁堵現(xiàn)象十分嚴(yán)重， 給同學(xué)和外部車輛造成很大不便。請(qǐng)就此向校長(zhǎng)寫一封抱怨信。要點(diǎn)如下：.車輛擁堵，給公共交通帶來不便；.道路狹窄，不利于學(xué)生安全；.等待浪費(fèi)時(shí)間。注意：1.詞數(shù)不少于120;2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；3.可適當(dāng)增加情節(jié)，以使行文連貫。Structureofthetext:Paragraph1:Introduceyourselfandexpressthedissatisfactiondirectly.Paragraph2:Describethedetailsofcomplaining.Paragraph3:Expectareplyandexpressgratitude感激）.Notice:

Tense:Presentsimple.Person:Thefirstperson.Keypoints:擁堵造成不便；路窄不利安全；排隊(duì)浪費(fèi)時(shí)間。'Usefulexpressions:晚自習(xí)'Usefulexpressions:晚自習(xí)交通/車輛擁堵道路狹窄造成不便公共交通現(xiàn)象traffic/vehiclejamnarrowroadscause;resultin;leadto;asaresultconsequently;asaconsequenceinconveniencepublictransportationphenomenon?連接詞：表起始：firstofall;inthefirstplace;firstandforemost.表遞進(jìn)：furthermore;what's