讀后續(xù)寫：憤怒課件-高考英語作文專題寫作

憤怒必背好詞名詞／動(dòng)詞

rage,anger(v.&n.),annoy(v.),annoyance,fury,stamp(跺腳),frown(皺眉)形容詞/副詞angry,cross,annoyed,furious,mad,cross,angrily,crossly,furiously,madly滿分短語①glareatsb.／starehardat怒視 ②flushwithanger／flushangrily氣得漲紅臉 ③flyintoarage勃然大怒④explode/burnwithanger/burstintoanger勃然大怒 ⑤hittheceiling／roof勃然大怒 ⑥tremblewithanger氣得發(fā)抖 ⑦bered-cheekedwithanger／go／turnredwithanger氣得滿臉通紅 ⑧beseizedbyanger充滿憤怒 ⑨sb.＇sfacefalls／darkens臉沉／黑了下來 ⑩alookofburninganger 憤怒的一眼 ?bebesidehimselfwithanger他怒不可遏 ?inatemper生氣必背好句（肢體）動(dòng)作／語言描寫十情感詞匯1.Shestoodup,wrappinghercoataroundherangrily/crossly,stormedoutoftheroom,andslammedthedoorangrily/furiouslybehindher.她站了起來，怒氣沖沖地穿上大衣，沖出房間，憤然摔門而去。2.Jancouldhardlycontainherrage/anger,slammingherfistonthedeskinanger.簡無法抑制她的憤怒，憤怒地用拳頭猛捶桌子。3.Filledwithanger/rage,Pollypushedbackherchairandstoodupfromthetable.波莉怒火中燒，一把推開椅子，從桌子旁邊站了起來。4.“Stopit!”Jessyshoutedfuriously/angrily.Herteethlockedtogetherinanger.“住手！”杰西怒喝道。她氣得咬牙切齒。5.Boiling/Filledwithrage,Tomshookhisfistatme,androared,“Howdareyou!”湯姆怒火中燒，對我揮舞著拳頭吼道：“你怎么敢！”6.Shethrewtheinvitationonthetablewithannoyance,murmuring,“Whatdoyouwantmetodowiththat?”她惱怒地把請?zhí)拥阶雷由希炖镟洁熘骸澳阋夷盟趺崔k？”7.Hewastongue-tiedwithanger,unabletoutterasingleword.Hishandstrembled.他氣得張口結(jié)舌，一句話也說不出來，兩只手直顫抖。8.HelistenedtoFaginforawhile,frowningheavily.“Itwasbadlyplanned.”hesaidangrily.他緊皺著眉頭聽著費(fèi)金說了一會(huì)兒，然后氣憤地說：“你們的計(jì)劃糟透了?！鄙駪B(tài)描寫＋情感詞匯1.Andy'smouthwasshuttight.Asheglaredather,hisfacewascloudedwithanger.安迪的嘴緊閉著。他瞪著她，怒容滿面。2.Shecollapsedonachair,hercheeksturningnowwhitewithanger,nowredwithshame.她倒在椅子上，兩頰一時(shí)氣得煞白，一時(shí)羞惱得通紅。3.Shelookedathimwitheyesflashingangrily/withanger.Shelookedasifsheweregoingtoburst.她憤怒地看著他。她看上去快要?dú)庹恕?.Herfaceturnedpale.Shestoodspeechless.Thensuddenlybloodrushedtohercheeks/face;hervoicetrembledwithrage.她的臉變得蒼白，站在那里說不出話來。然后，血突然涌上她的臉（頰），她的聲音憤怒而顫抖。5.Sarahcameforwardwithatightandangryface.薩拉走上前來，緊繃著臉，怒氣沖沖。6.Herfacehadturnedthecolorofmoltenlavaandhereyeswereglitteringwithfury.她那張臉正在變成巖漿的顏色，雙眸閃著怒火。7.Hisangerboiledover/Angerboiledoverinsidehim,andhischeeksflamedanangryred/hisfaceflamedwithanger.他怒火中燒，氣得面紅耳赤。借用修辭手法或無靈主語句1.Alicelookedup,andtherestoodtheQueeninfrontofthem,withherarmsfolded,frowninglikeathunderstorm.（比喻）愛麗絲抬起頭來，發(fā)現(xiàn)王后站在她們面前，交叉著胳膊，臉色陰沉得像大雷雨天一樣。2.Hercolorcameup.andaheavyragecameoverherlikeadarkcloud.（比喻）她臉色突變，一股怒火像烏云一樣籠罩著她的臉。3.Histeethwerechattering,andwithunstoppablerageinhiseyes，hewaslikeanangrylion.（比喻）他的牙齒咬得咯咯作響，眼里閃著一股無法遏制的怒火，好似一頭被激怒的獅子。4．Herragesweptthroughherlikeatidalwave．（無靈主語句）她的憤怒像潮水一樣席卷了她。5.Hetrembledwithangerfromheadtofoot.Heroaredinhisheartlikealion.（夸張十比喻）他氣得渾身發(fā)抖。他在心里像獅子一樣怒吼著。6.Hegraspedtheletterinbothhands,aburstofrageburning

inhisheart.Thenhefelthewasbreathingfireandfury.（夸張）他雙手抓著那封信，一股怒火在心中燃燒。然后他感覺他連呼吸都噴著怒火。7.Hesprangupinafury.Andthenthefierce,buriedangersurgedupintohisthroat.（無靈主語句）他勃然大怒，跳了起來。然后，埋藏在心頭的滿腔怒火直沖到他的喉嚨里來。8.Starbuck'seyeswereflashingfire,buthemanagedtocalmhimselfdown.斯坦伯克的雙眸噴火，但他設(shè)法使自己平靜下來。（《白鯨》）練能生巧1．利用并仿效滿分素材補(bǔ)全以下各句，并背誦1．麗薩氣得臉色發(fā)白，身體顫抖。2．我勃然大怒，跳了起來，我的聲音因憤怒而顫抖。3．知道花瓶打破了，他怒火中燒。4．薩莉?qū)⒆觽兡敲闯臭[非常生氣。她憤怒地用拳頭猛捶桌子。Sallywasmadatthechildrenformakingsomuchnoise,Lisawent/turnedwhite/pale,tremblingwithanger.Isprangupinafury,andmyvoicetrembledwithanger.Hisangerboiledover/Angerboiledoverinsidehimwhenhefoundoutabout,thebrokenvase.slammingherfistonthetableinanger5．她太氣憤了，感到血液涌上了臉。

（倒裝）6．他怒不可遏，像一頭憤怒的野獸狠狠地盯著瑪麗。7．那男孩緊繃著臉走上前，惱怒地把書扔在地上。Soangrywasshethatshecouldfeelthebloodrushtoherface.Hewasbesidehimselfwithanger,andhestaredatMarylikeanangrybeast.Theboycameforwardwithatightface,andthrewthebookonthegroundwithannoyance.II.按要求完成以下各題1．看到破碎的窗戶，女士很生氣。（1）先嘗試用概括描述，將意思表達(dá)清楚。（2）在概括描述的基礎(chǔ)上增加細(xì)節(jié)描述，注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。① （臉色發(fā)白，身體顫抖）② （滿腔憤怒，說不出話）③ （嘴緊閉著，怒容滿面）Atthesightofthebrokenwindow,theladyfeltveryangry/furious.Atthesightofthebrokenwindow,theladywent/turnedwhite/pale,tremblingwithanger.Attheigltofthebrokenwindow,theladywasboiling/filledwithanger,unabletoutterasingleword.Atthesightofthebrokenwindow,thelady'smouthwasshuttight,andherfacewascloudedwithanger.2．根據(jù)所給情節(jié)，用一句話續(xù)寫，描寫“我”最喜歡的鞋子被毀時(shí)的憤怒。注意邏輯關(guān)系以及語意的合理。Icouldnotbelievethatmyroommateupsetacupofchocolateonmyfavoriteshoes.Theywereruined!① （動(dòng)作描寫十情感詞匯）② （動(dòng)作描寫＋情感詞匯）③ （無靈主語句十比喻）④ （神態(tài)描寫）IwasseizedbysuchangerthatIstormedoutoftheroom,slammingthedoorangrilybehindme.Boiling/Filledwithrage,Ishookmyfistathim.Myragesweptthroughmelikeatidalwave.Myangerboiledover/Angerboiledoverinsideme,andmycheeksflamedanangryred/myfaceflamedwithanger.II.續(xù)寫微作文請根據(jù)所給情節(jié)，嘗試?yán)m(xù)寫一個(gè)父親發(fā)怒的情節(jié)。利用動(dòng)作、神態(tài)和語言描寫等表現(xiàn)人物的憤怒。描寫中可適當(dāng)添加對“我”的緊張害怕的描寫。（詞數(shù)80左右）Neverhadmyfatherbeensofuriousinallhislifeaboutmybehaviorattheparty.Histeethwerechattering,andwithunstoppablerageinhiseyes,hewaslikeanangrylion.Hewentpurplewithange