高中英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫積累素材積累一

完好版高中英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫積累素材積累一完好版高中英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫積累素材積累一完好版高中英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫積累素材積累一續(xù)寫積累姓名：______________班級(jí)：_______________一、環(huán)境描述的素材環(huán)境描述分為客觀和主觀兩種角度：客觀為從環(huán)境事物自己下手，主觀那么從觀察者角度描寫。平時(shí)在描述時(shí)主客觀交替進(jìn)行，主觀描述比重稍大。客觀環(huán)境描述：Part1環(huán)境描述的adj要求：有聲，有色，有質(zhì)感，有味道thebluesky(藍(lán)天〕thesongsofbirds〔鳥(niǎo)鳴〕thethunderingclouds〔電光閃雷鳴〕thefragileflowers(嬌貴的花〕;〔thedark,rainingevening雨夜交加的夜晚〕thegreengrass〔青草〕thefragrantroses〔明媚的玫瑰〕;thesetting/risingsun(斜陽(yáng)/漸漸升起的太陽(yáng)〕?Part2環(huán)境描述的verb〔vi&vt〕要求一)．Wind〔blow/click/howl/wail/roar〕1.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain,一?陣風(fēng)吹，吹起了彎柳的低垂枝條，就像卷起的窗簾。2.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.風(fēng)，輕柔卻寒冷，輕點(diǎn)著樹(shù)枝，攪動(dòng)著斜坡下的灌木叢。3.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthequietpark涼.爽的細(xì)風(fēng)吹拂著沉靜的公園。4.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.(冷風(fēng)吹拂過(guò)我的頭發(fā)〕Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift.〔今日正是放風(fēng)箏的晴日氣，激烈的風(fēng)力帶動(dòng)了風(fēng)箏的上升。〕二)．Water(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)聲音：1.Atonepoint,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某處，潺潺的的水聲在山谷中奏響。顏色2.Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.水是深藍(lán)色的，陽(yáng)光在透明的玻璃表面閃閃發(fā)光。3.Alittlewayoffwasasmallbrook,rushingandsparklingalongbetweengreenbank.離此不遠(yuǎn),有一條小溪，在綠色的河岸間奔跑閃爍。4.Itmurmuredinasoftvoicelikealittleinnocentgirlwhisperedtoherlovingmother.憂如它在溫柔低語(yǔ)，就一位天真少女對(duì)著她那慈祥的母親細(xì)細(xì)私語(yǔ)。(action,sound,colour)三)．Sky(stand/appear/turn)1.Theskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.天空是濃濃的灰色，伴著擁擠的朵朵云2.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar藍(lán)藍(lán)的天空高高聳立1主觀環(huán)境描述：1.Sbfoundsthadj/doing/done某人發(fā)現(xiàn)某物〔狀態(tài)/動(dòng)作/被〕...2.Sbsaw/heard/felt/smeltsthdoing/done某人看到/聽(tīng)到/感覺(jué)/聞到某物〔狀態(tài)/動(dòng)作/被〕3.Itwassoadjthatwefind/feel它是這樣....致使于4.Sthkeptsbspellbound/amazed/光景使我這樣陶醉/驚訝/sthheldsbentirelyintheirpower光景讓我完好驚呆了5.Itlooked/seemed/appeared/feltlike光景看起來(lái)像??二、場(chǎng)景描述的素材〔來(lái)自原著：追風(fēng)箏的人〕1.Atleasttwodozenkitesalreadyhunginthesky,likepapersharksroamingforprey.Withinanhour,thenumberdoubled,andred,blue,andyellowkitesglidedandspuninthesky.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift,makethesweepseasier.〔放風(fēng)箏的場(chǎng)景描述，從各個(gè)角度，立體描述〕空中已經(jīng)掛著最少二十來(lái)只風(fēng)箏，仿佛紙制的鯊魚(yú)，巡游搜獵食品。不到一個(gè)鐘頭，這個(gè)數(shù)字翻了一番，紅色的、藍(lán)色的、黃色的風(fēng)箏在蒼穹來(lái)回飛舞，熠熠生輝。寒冷的細(xì)風(fēng)吹過(guò)我的頭發(fā)。這風(fēng)正合適放風(fēng)箏，風(fēng)速不大，恰好能讓風(fēng)箏飄浮起來(lái)，也便于控制。2.Thewaterwasadeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.湖水澄藍(lán)，波平如鏡，陽(yáng)光照在湖上熠熠生輝。3.ThenIglancedupandsawapairofkites,redwithlongbluetails,soaringinthesky.Theydancedhighabovethetreesonthewestendofthepark,overthewindmills,floatingsidebysidelikeapairofeyeslookingdownonSanFrancisco,thecityInowcallhome.〔場(chǎng)景、比喻〕我抬初步，看見(jiàn)兩只紅色的風(fēng)箏，帶著長(zhǎng)長(zhǎng)的藍(lán)色尾巴，在天空中漸漸升起。它們飛舞著，飛越公園西邊的樹(shù)林，飛越風(fēng)車，并排飄浮著，仿佛一雙眼睛俯視著舊金山，這個(gè)我現(xiàn)在看作家園的城市。4.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar,thesunlikeabrandingironsearingthebackofyourneck.CreekswhereHassanandIskippedstonesallspringturneddry,andrickshawsstirreddustwhentheysputteredby〔.場(chǎng)景、比喻〕天空一碧如洗，陽(yáng)光像烙鐵般灼痛后頸。整個(gè)春天我和哈桑在溪流取水漂，到了夏天它們也枯竭了。黃包車嗒嗒走過(guò)，揚(yáng)起陣陣灰塵。5.Somewhere,abranchsnapped,anowlhooted.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.Andfrombelow,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某個(gè)地方傳來(lái)樹(shù)枝劈啪作響的聲音，還有貓頭鷹的叫聲。寒風(fēng)輕輕拂動(dòng)樹(shù)枝，吹過(guò)山坡上的灌木叢。而下面，水流在山谷淌動(dòng)，傳來(lái)陣陣稍微的聲音。26.Bythreeo'clock,therainhadstoppedandtheskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthepark〔.天氣〕到三點(diǎn)時(shí)，雨停了，鉛灰色的天空陰云密布，一陣寒風(fēng)吹過(guò)公園。7.Thesunwasbeginningtoset,glitteringredthroughthecracksbetweentheramshacklebuildings.〔情形〕太陽(yáng)開(kāi)始下山，那些岌岌可危的房子的裂縫中，溢出閃閃的紅色斜暉。三、描述時(shí)間，動(dòng)作，心理和感情一)、感情好詞：1.喜樂(lè)①Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她臉上的笑容像鉆石相同閃閃發(fā)光。②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface他.臉上露出了一種理解的微笑。

③Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一陣激動(dòng)聲穿過(guò)他們。④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑聲在房間里繚繞。⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛閃爍著快樂(lè)。⑥Awildgaiety〔快樂(lè)〕tookholdofher.一種瘋狂的快樂(lè)控制了她。⑦Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石相同閃閃發(fā)光，嘴角保持著牢固的微笑。⑧Iwaswildwithjoy.我欣喜假設(shè)狂。⑨Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我快樂(lè)得難以形容。⑩Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她臉上帶著燦爛的笑容。?Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑容照亮了整個(gè)房間。?Sheshedtearsofjoy.她快樂(lè)得流下了眼淚。?Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.她的眼睛閃著鉆石般的光輝。?Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢著幸福。?Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅。?Joywelledupinsideher.她心中涌起歡樂(lè)。?Iwasfloatingonair.我飄揚(yáng)在空中。?Amusementgleamedinhiseyes.他眼睛顯露出快樂(lè)的神情。2.氣憤：①Iwasseizedbyanger我.充滿了氣憤。②Hewasfumingwithrage.他氣得雷霆之怒。③Hisangerboiledover.他的氣憤爆發(fā)了。④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他幾乎控制不住怒火。⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充滿著怒火。⑥Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的聲音因氣憤而顫抖。

⑦Hegavemealookofburninganger.他氣憤地看了我一眼。⑧Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼熱的目光怒目著我。⑨Heflaredupattheword.他一聽(tīng)到這個(gè)字就勃然大怒。

⑩Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他氣得神情陰沉。3.悲傷煩惱①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他靜靜地站著，眼淚順著面頰流了下來(lái)。3②IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我飄揚(yáng)在悲傷的海洋里。③Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftear她s.的手在顫抖。她快要哭了。④Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwi聽(tīng)ne到.這個(gè)信息，他絕望地把悲傷淹沒(méi)在酒里。⑤Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom她.突然哭了起來(lái)，跑出了房間。⑥Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhand她s.掩面哭泣。⑦Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼淚。/我的眼里充滿了淚水。⑧Afrown〔皺眉〕nowstoodonhisface.他皺起了眉頭。⑨Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他們坐在那處，帶著一臉愁悶。⑩Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.這信息使他臉上蒙上了一層陰影。?Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen...他盡是悲傷???Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他們陶醉在沉痛之中。?Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.這些日子他情緒低落。4.害怕：①Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)身來(lái)，眼里充滿了害怕。②Fearslowlycreepsuponher.害怕慢慢地延長(zhǎng)到她身上。

③Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...她感覺(jué)害怕??④Shewaschokedbyfear.她因害怕而窒息。⑤Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied她.神情蒼白地站在那處，舌頭打結(jié)。⑥Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中涌起一陣害怕。/害怕淹沒(méi)了他。⑦Herheartbeatso