考研英語-黃濤-啟航教育

SectionIV作文考點及復習技巧.英漢思維習慣（直截了當direct=callaspadeaspade；indirect轉彎抹角）.寫作的現(xiàn)實與矛盾（wordless,incorrect）.寫作的“四化”：①語言準確化（accuracy） ②語言多樣化（variety）③結構清晰化（clarity ④內容簡單化（simplicity）.寫作的九條原則：①語言第一（準確度、廣度、難度、亮度）②結構第二（關聯(lián)詞）③內容第三（要一致）④審題看圖要認真⑤文體要統(tǒng)一 ⑥主題要突出⑦方式要多樣化 ⑧首尾要照應⑨考點要覆全第一節(jié)高分詞匯變化與替換Moreandmoreyoungpeoplefinditmoreandmoredifficulttoadapttothefiercecompetition.Moreandmorechildrenlikesurfingtheinternet.Teenagers'surfingtheinternetisontheincrease/rise/drop/decline/.Thenumberofteenagers*surfingtheinternetisontherise.Amoreandmoreharmoniousclimateisneededwiththedevelopmentofsociety.Thereisagrowingneed/demandforanincreasingharmoniousclimateasoursocietyadvances.Mostpeoplerealizethateverycitizenshouldhaveanequalchancetobeeducated.Thevast/overwhclmingmajorityoffolksareawarethateverycitizenshouldhaveanequalchancetobeeducated.Peoplebegantodiscusstheissueofmiddleschoolstudentsstudyingabroad.Aspiriteddiscussionhassprungupwithregardto/asto/concemingtheissueofmiddleschoolstudentsstudyingabroad.firmlysupportthisideathatweshouldmakefriendswithourneighbors.Iamfirmlysupportiveofthisideathatweshouldbeongoodtermswithourneighbors.Somepeopleoftenthinkeverybodyshouldhaveasenseofresponsibility.Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthateverybodyshouldhaveasenseofresponsibility.Whenwetalkaboutwhethercollegestudentsshouldbeinvolvedinbusinessactivities,differentpeoplehavedifferentideas.一談到大學生是否應該參加商業(yè)活動的問題，不同的人持有不同的觀點。Whenitcomestowhethercollegestudentsshouldbeinvolvedinbusinessactivities,ideas/opinionsvaryfrompersontoperson.Thispicturehasadeepmeaningandindicatesadeepsocialphenomenontoo.Thiscartoon/drawingbearsaexplicitmeaningandisindicativeofaprofoundsocialphenomenonaswell.Ithinkweshouldencouragechildrentofacesomehardship.Onlylikethis,theyareabletofacetheproblemtheywillmeetintheirlives.-12Inmypersonalsense,childrenareencouragedtogothroughsomehardship.Onlyinthismanner,aretheycapableoffacingtheproblemtheywillconfrontintheirlives.Wecanseefromthepicturethattherunnerreachesthefinishinglineandstartstowardsanewgoalagain.Ascanbeseenfromthepicture/isdepictedinthedrawing,therunner...lineandstrivesforthenextgoaloncemore.Nowadays,thetrendofbecomingoldappearstobethebiggestproblem.Currently,anagingpopulationhasbecomeaharsh/severeprobleminChina.SoIamfullofthanksforyourtimelyhelp.ConsequentlyIamdeeplyobligedtoyouforyourtimelyhelp.Inoursociety,somepeoplethinksupportingoldmenisnotasimportantasbefore.Inourfast-developingcommunity,someindividualscontendthatsupportingtheoldisnolongerregardedasmomentousasbefore.Theythinktheydon'twanttolookaftertheirparentsforhavingnotime.Theyoungstersmaintainthattheyareunwillingtolookaftertheirparentsforlackoftime.Therewerenoourparents.Then,wehavenochancetoliveinthisworld.Butfbr/Withoutourparents,wewouldhavenochancetocometotheworld.更多有關作文高分詞匯的資料可登陸我博客在“博文”里去找：/huangtaokaoyan第二節(jié)作文典型錯誤分析一.謂語動詞（時態(tài)錯誤）Wecollegestudentshadenoughtimetotakepart-timejobs,nomatterhowbusywewere.Theyoungpeoplearefacingwithtoomanytemptationsnowadays.Hisfaultissatisfywiththepastsuccessandpaylittleattentiontothepresentchallenge.TheimportanceofculturalcommunicationjustletmoreforeignersknowChina.二.主謂一致和代詞（指代錯誤）EveryaspectoftheChineseliveshavechangedinthepastdecade.Oneoftheseriousproblemshumanbeingsarefacedwitharewatershortage.Gettingupearlybenefitusinmorethanoneway.shallmeetwithlotsofdifficulties,but1thinkIcanovercomeit.三.邏輯主語與后面的主語不一致錯誤Attheageofsix,myfatherbegantogivemeEnglishlessons.Sotosolvethisproblem,itneedseveryonetomakegreateffort.Comparedthetwopictureswecanconcludethattheflowersinagreen-housearetooweaktobearharshenvironment.Confrontedthissituation,weshoulddeveloparationalattitudetowardsit.四.平行結構錯誤Ayoungfolkshouldstrikeabalancebetweenbeinghimselfandtofollowthecult.-13Nowadayspeoplenotonlyeatenough,butalsoeatbetter.HisspokenEnglishisbetterthanallhisclassmates.五.名詞錯誤Collegestudentisconfrontedwithvariousstressandtension.Internetprovidesuswithmanyusefulinfbnnations.六.連接詞語錯誤Becausesomecollegegraduatescouldnotfindabetterjob,sotheydecidedtocontinuetopursueaseconddegree.Althoughanopportunityisrare,butwemuststrivetoseizeit.Thereis,asisvividlyillustratedinthispicture,ayoungmanisaskinghisbarbertocuthishairinDavidBeckham'sstyle.Chinaopenedthedoortotheoutsideworld,moreandmorepeoplevisitChinaandbecomeinterestedinChineseculture.Asthesayinggoes,“timeismoney.^^Inmypersonalsense,timeisevenmorepreciousthanmoney.Whenmoneyisspent,wecanearnitback.Whentimeisgone,itwillneverreturn.Thisisthereasonwhywemustvalueourtime.七.拼寫、表達、搭配錯誤Westudentsshouldleam/studyasmuchknowledgeaspossible.Inordertoserveforthepeoplewellinthefuture,Ishouldstudyhardnow.TVnowplaysanimportantroleinourdailylife.Becausewecannotlivewithoutit.Thefishingshipsaremanymorein1995thanin1990Mysolutionstothisproblemhaveseveralways.Whenoldproblemsaresolved,newproblemswillrise.I'mdeterminedtostudymuchmoreharderthanlastterm.Inthepasttwodecades,ourcountryhastakenplacegreatchanges.九.詞性錯誤WeshoulddevelopChina'seconomic,andleadourcountrytoarich,strongnation.Ourworldwillbrightifeveryoneshowslovetoothers.Theincreasingpopulationeffectsonourenvironment.十.句子成分錯誤Peoplethinkgotothemoviewillcostalotofmoney.ThepictureshowsanAmericangirlwhowearingthetraditionalChinesecostume.Thebestwayshowloveistohelpthoseneedhelpintheirlife.Asitisuniversallyacknowledged,knowledgeispower.Moreandmorepeopledeeplybelievesmokingdoesharmtohealth,wastesmoney.十一.標點符號錯誤39.1won'tlosemyheart,instead,I'llstudyharder.40.1candowhateverIlikeinthelibrary.Forexample:reading,traveling,ordoingexercises.-14-第三節(jié)作文經(jīng)典句型練習一.It+被動語態(tài)4-that....人們普遍認為，廣泛的文化交流在許多方面對各國人民有好處。thatextensiveculturalexchangedoesgoodtopeopleformvariousnationsinmanyways..人們通常認為，一個人如果沒有在現(xiàn)實生活中經(jīng)歷逆境和困難，他意志就決不能變得足夠堅強。Itisgenerallyacceptedthatwithoutexperiencinghardshipsanddifficultiesinreallifeonecanneverbecomestrong-mindedenough..人們必須承認，就青少年來說，一個充滿競爭的環(huán)境對于生活技能的鍛煉來說是必要的。Itmustbeadmittedthatacompetitiveenvironmentisnecessaryfbrthepracticeoflifeskillsonthesideofteenagers..不可否認的是，旅游業(yè)的過度發(fā)展可能會破壞某些風景區(qū)的生態(tài)平衡。Itcannotbedeniedthattheovergrowthoftourismmaydisturbtheecologicalbalanceofsomescenicresorts..眾所周知，體育鍛煉能夠提高和增進我們的身心健康。Itiswellknowntousallthatphysicalexercisescanimproveandenrichourphysicalandmentalwell-being.二Itis+形容詞+that....顯而易見/不言而喻/毫無疑問，這種情況是直接由于過度的緊張和壓力而造成的。 thatthesituationiscauseddirectlybyexcessivetensionaswellasstress..人們對這個有爭議的問題持不同的態(tài)度，這是可以理解的/不可避免的。Itiscomprehensible/understandable(inevitable)thatpeople'sattitudesaredivergent/differentonthiscontroversialissue..很難想象/相信我們年輕人竟然如此沉溺于這個虛擬的網(wǎng)絡世界里。Itisunimaginable(incredible/unbelievable)thatweyoungstersshouldbemuchaddictedtothevirtualnetworld.三.Itis+形容詞+forsb.(sth.)todosth..大家積極參加體育鍛煉非常而要。因為體育鍛煉不僅我們的身體有好處，而且對我們的心理和性格也有好處。Itisobvious(self-evident,clear,undeniable,apparent),fbrtheywilldogoodnotonlytoourbodybutalsotoourmindandpersonality..現(xiàn)在大學生畢業(yè)時很難找到一個理想的工作，特別是那些學基礎課程專業(yè)的學生，比如歷史和數(shù)學。 uponhisgraduation,especiallythosemajoringinfundamentalcoursessuchashistoryandmathematics.-15-.現(xiàn)在非常迫切需要采取緊急措施來控制非法毒品在青少年中大幅度蔓延。Itishighlyimperativethaturgentmeasuresshouldbedonetocontrolthewidespreaduseofillegaldrugsamongteenagers.四.as/alongwith/Coupledwith“隨著”句型.隨著經(jīng)濟的快速發(fā)展，中國人民的生活標準-經(jīng)大大提高，許多家庭能夠買得起房子和汽車。Alongwiththerapidgrowthofeconomy,thelivingstandardsoftheChinesepeoplehavebeengreatlyimproved.Housesandcarsarewithineasyreachof（買得起）manyfamilies..隨著每年培養(yǎng)的大學生越來越多，求職市場的情況正變得愈加嚴峻。 eachyear,thesituationinthejobmarketisgettingtighterandtighter..隨著工業(yè)和農(nóng)業(yè)的不斷進步，缺水的問題也將越嚴重。Asindustryandagricultureadvances,theproblemofwatershortagewillbethemoreserious..隨著中國進一步開放和擴大與其它國家的教育交流，出國留學在中學生中正越來越流行。AsChinaopensfurthertotheoutsideworldandincreasesitseducationalexchangewithothercountries,goingabroadtostudyisincreasinglyfashionableamongmiddleschoolstudents.五.Therebe句型.在過去十年里，年輕已婚夫婦想生孩子的數(shù)量已出現(xiàn)了明顯的下降趨勢。Inthepasttenyearstherehasbeenamarkeddeclineinthenumberofyoungmarriedcoupleswhowanttohavechildren..近來，關于是否要克隆人類出現(xiàn)了熱烈的討論/辯論。Inrecentyears,therehasbeenaheated/spiriteddebate/controversyconcerningwhetherhumanbeingsshouldbecloned..現(xiàn)在仍然有許多孩子因為貧困而不能上學。Therearestillquiteanumberofchildrenwhocannotaffordtogotoschoolbecauseofpoverty.19.隨著因特網(wǎng)業(yè)的發(fā)展，越來越多的人會上網(wǎng)沖浪。AstheInternetindustrydevelops,therewillbeanincreasingnumberoffolkssurfingontheweb.20.現(xiàn)在人們對孩子不得不要承受的學習和心理上的沉重負擔表現(xiàn)出越來越多的擔憂。 ,bothacademicandpsychological,whichourchildrenhavetobear.六.表示“使 變得…”的句型make+賓語+形容詞make+形容詞+fbrsb.todosth..信息技術的廣泛引用會使我們的工作和生活更加方便和豐富。Thewidespreadintroductionofmodeminformationtechnologywillmakeourworkandlifemoreconvenientandcolorful..最重要的是，我們應該不斷地加強我們的環(huán)保意識，使我們的世界成為適合人類居住-16-的美好家園。Mostimportantly,weshouldincreasinglyheightenourenvironmentalawarenessand.現(xiàn)代交通意味著讓人們出門旅行更加快捷、方便和舒適。Modemtransportationmeansmakingithighlyfast,convenientandcomfortableforpeopletotravelfarawayfromhome..先進的醫(yī)學科技使得人類的壽命更長，遭受各種疾病越少。Advancedmedicalsciencehasmadeitpossibleforhumanbeingstoleadamuch...七.sothat（以便）/so…that（如此…以致）句型25.青少年是如此喜歡時裝以至他們花大量錢來買時髦的衣服。Teenagersaresokeenaboutfashionsthattheyspendlargeamountsofmoneyonfashionableclothes.26.我們青年人應該學會以恰當?shù)姆绞絹頊p輕壓力以便我們能夠更好地適應這個競爭社會。 wecanbetteradapttothecompetitivesociety.八.非限制性定語從句27.有些人可能沉溺于網(wǎng)上沖浪，這會危害他們的身心健康。Somepeoplemaybeaddictedtonetsurfing,whichimpairstheirphysicalandmentalhealth..越來越高的離婚率將引發(fā)一系列的問題，這已受到大眾的極大關注。Theincreasinglyhighdivorceratewillcauseaseriesofproblems,which.九.用分詞結構擴展內容.由于人們沒有意識到地球上的水資源是有限的，因此人們每天浪費了大量的水。People, arelimited,wasteagreatamountofwatereveryday..公民有權利知道真相和約束名人，從而形成一種公眾輿論。Citizenshavetherighttoknowthetruthandsupervisethecelebrity,thusformingapublicopinion..由于父母親對孩子寄予極大希望，所以當他們得知其孩子考試不及格時，他們再也抑制不住自己極度的失望和生氣了。Havingplacedgreatexpectationsontheirson,theycouldn'tholdbackhugedisappointmentandangerwhentheylearnttheirson'sfailuretopassthetest.32.隨著生活水平的提高，越來越多的人們開始購買汽車來滿足工作和生活的需要，也就惡化了交通問題。,agrowingnumberoffolksbegintobuycarstomeettheneedsofworkandlife,therebyworseningthetrafficproblems.-17-十.結論句型.只要我們采取有效的措施，由老齡化社會所引發(fā)的問題將會減少到最小程度。Aslongaswetakeeffectivemeasures,theproblemscausedbytheagedsocietywillbereducedtothesmallestextent..只要我們馬上明智地采取行動，我們一定能夠解決當前的這個緊迫的問題。,weareboundtosolvethepresentsevereproblem..只要政府和個人做出努力，就一定能找到一個解決這個問題的方法。Aslongasthegovernmentandindividualsstrivehard,therewillcertainlybeawaytosolvethisproblem..從提供的所有證據(jù)來看，我們可以穩(wěn)妥地得出如下結論，體育鍛煉對青少年的心理和智力的發(fā)展都有益。Judgingfromallevidenceoffered,wecansafelycometotheconclusionthatphysicalexercisesarebeneficialtothepsychologicalandintellectualgrowthofteenagers..簡而言之，在優(yōu)先考慮發(fā)展經(jīng)濟的時候，應該做出大的努力來加強倫理和道德教育。Inshort(Inaword/Allinall/Tosumup),greateffortsshouldbemadetoenhanceethicandmoraleducationwhenhighpriorityisgiventotheeconomicdevelopment..只有當這些措施付諸實踐的時候，缺水的問題才能得到解海Itisonlywhenthesemeasuresareputintopracticethattheshortageofwatercanbesolved..只仃當這個問題得到有效地解決時，我們才能維持?個穩(wěn)定和諧的社會。Onlywhenthisproblemissolvedeffectivelycanwemaintainastableandharmonioussociety..如果各行各業(yè)的人們足夠關注這個問題，我們城市的生活將一定更加莢好。 ,ourlifeinthecitywillcertainlybemoreenjoyable.第四節(jié)寫作基本功句30一.主語.找到問題出現(xiàn)的原因將會大大地幫助你減少壓力和緊張。willgreatlyhelpyoureducestressaswellastension..很難想象沒有因特網(wǎng)我們的生活會是什么樣子。Itisdifficulttoimaginewhatlifewouldbelikewithouttheinternet..鼓勵大學畢業(yè)生去西部工作是一個明智的決策。ItisawisedecisiontoencouragecollegestudentstoworkinwestChina..從他的行為中可以清楚看到，他不講道德。hehasnomorality..最重要的是我們應該意識到這個問題的嚴重性。weshouldbeawareoftheseriousnessofthisproblem..越來越多的國家歡迎不同的文化證明了我的觀點。Thefactprovesouropinionthatanincreasingnumberofcountrieswelcomedifferentcultures..大學生是否應該參加社交活動是個有爭議的話題。collegestudentsshouldparticipateinbusinessactivities.二、謂語.我們年輕人應該行為舉止恰當，有禮貌。Weyouthsshouldconductourselvesproperlyandhavegoodmanners..這些行為應該受到道德和輿論的譴責。moralityandpublicopinions..應該采取有效的措施來阻止這種不良現(xiàn)象的發(fā)生。三、賓語.政府應該在這個問題的解決中扮演重耍的角色。.人們深信，學校應該減輕壓力，家庭應該重建和諧，政府應該加大投入。Folksareconvincedthatschoolsshouldreducepressure,thatfamiliesshouldrebuildharmonyandthattheadministrationshouldincreasefinancialinvestment..這對于開闊人們的眼界是很有好處的。Itisbeneficialforbroadeningpeople,shorizon/vision..現(xiàn)在許多人無視公共規(guī)章，我們應向公眾呼吁樹立公德心。Currentlyanincreasingnumberoffolksdisregardpublicrules/regulations.四、表語.我認為這個事實是不言而喻的。.這些措施似乎很合理。五、定語.有很多因素導致了這個問題。.良好的社會風氣能促進家庭的和諧及社會的進步。Favorablepublicmoralclimatecanenhancetheharmonyoffamiliesaswellasthesocialadvance..大學應該提供實踐課程，這對社會有利。Collegesoughttoprovidepracticalcourses,whichisconducivetothewholesociety..性別歧視是現(xiàn)代社會的恥辱，我們每個人都有責任解決它。Sexdiscriminationisashameformodemsociety,whichallofusareduty-boundtoeliminate.六、狀語.有了堅定的決心，人就能夠克服他所遇到的任何困境和危險。Withastrongdetermination,oneisabletoovercomewhateverhardshipsanddangershemayencounter..沒有他無私的幫助，她不可能度過這次難關。Withouthisselflessassistance,shewouldn'thavepulledthroughthisdifficulty..遠離親人朋友，人會覺得孤獨。Livingforfromrelativesandfriends,peoplewillfeellonely..面對這個問題，我們應該努力找到解決它的辦法。七、補語.觀念的不同使他很難理解他父母親。Differentviewsmakeitdifficultforhimtounderstandhisparents..我們發(fā)現(xiàn)樹立正確的人生觀對大學生來說是非常重要的。.大家的無私照顧和關心使她的生活充滿了陽光。Everyone'sselflesscareandattentionmakesherlifefullofsunlight.八、情態(tài)動詞.我們應該努力維護公共道德，改進社會風氣。.我們必須努力抓住和充分利用生活中的每一個機會來提高自己。Wemuststrivetoseizeandmakefulluseofeveryopportunityinlifetoimproveourselves..我們應教育公眾樹立正確的時間觀念。九、作文常用句子的寫法：主謂賓：Everyonedreamsofattainingsuccessinhiscareer.主系表：Inthatway,competitioncanbecomeasensibleandpositivething.主謂狀：Weshouldconfronthardshipsfearlesslyandstrivetoovercomethem.主謂賓（賓補）Somestudentsholditasensiblechoicetotakearationalattitude.并歹峋：Peoplehavedifferentproblemsandconsequentlythecausesforstressandtensionaredifferent.⑥主從復合句，（主語、狀語、定語從句、同謂語從句），要掌握連接詞的運用⑦句子的構成（DIY+Enhancement）第五節(jié)考研作文常用九大句式.主動和被動句靈活運用目前，世界正在面臨著的問題Currently/Atpresent,oneofthepressingproblemsfacingournation/worldtodayis.-20-Itcanbeeasilyseenfromthepicturethat（后接句子）Agreatdealofdueattentionshouldbepaidto+N....（應當大量適當?shù)亟暎?Therebe結構和Itis放在句苜的形式Thereareanincreasingnumberoffolkswho（后接定語從句）人們慢慢認識到—.Thereisagrowingworldwideawarenessof+N.Itismostlikelythatthedrawerintendsnotonlytoinformusoftheobviousfactbutalsotosetusthinkingwhatisimpliedinthiscartoon..同位語的設置Courage,anindispensablequalityforaperson,canhelpusovercomeanytroubleonthewaytosuccess..疑問句形式Whyistheresuchatrend?Whyistheresuchaphenomenon?.倒裝句形式Simplydrawnasthiscartoonappearstobe,yetitconveysaprofoundimplication..強調句形式Itisthisthought-provokingdrawingthatmakesmeawareofitsrealisticsignificancetoourdailylifeandwork..從句形式Howimpressivethecartoonisindescribingoneofthemostwidespread/prevalentsocialphenomenonconcerning/withregardto8.虛擬語氣如果沒有希望工程，那些孩子將永遠不會學到寶貴的知識。IftherewerenoProjectHope,thosechildrenwouldn'tacquirevaluableknowledge.如果情況繼續(xù)惡化下去，我們將付出更加昂貴的代價。Ifthesituationcontinuedtodeteriorate,wewouldpayamuchhigherpriceforit..引用名人名言 ,courageisthemotherofsuccess.Astheoldsayinggoes,everylifehasitsrosesandthorns.（生活有甜也有苦。）第六節(jié)PartB圖畫作文高分策略一.描述圖畫段落.描述圖畫開始句Asisapparently/vividly/ridiculously/interestinglyshown/depicted/drawninthepicture/cartoon/drawing/photograph,（后接完整單獨句子描寫圖畫）-21-.開始真正描寫圖畫如圖所示，介詞+動詞謂語+主語，+非謂語動詞，+with伴隨結構。在圖畫中央有，它，周圍有.（可以使用倒裝，主語與前文一致，可使用非限定性定語從句或者現(xiàn)在分詞，介詞做伴隨結構）2001年考研真題大作文圖片如圖所示，黑暗中有一盞小小的油燈，它向周圍散發(fā)著光亮。Asisshowninthecartoon,inthedarknesshappilystandsanoillamp,spreadingbrightnessarounditself.JustasanoldArabproverbsays,loveisjustlikeanoillamp,beingbrighterinthedarkerplaces./JustasanoldArabproverbsays,wherethereislove,thereishope.2006年考研真題大作文圖片如圖所示，在椅子上有一個年輕人，希望理發(fā)師把自己的頭發(fā)理成貝克漢姆的樣子。Asisvividlydrawninthepicture, ,likeDavidBeckham.-22-2002年考研真題大作文圖片照片中央站著一位美麗的美國女孩，她穿著傳統(tǒng)的中國服飾，佩戴著各種各樣的飾物，臉上洋溢著燦爛的笑容。Asisvividlyshowninthephoto,,(whois)dressedinChinesetraditionalclothes,,.2005年考研真題大作文圖片圖畫中央躺著一位老年人，蜷縮著像一個皮球，他被四個子女趕出門外；而四個子女各向把守著自己家的大門，拒絕接納老人。Asisironicallydepictedinthedrawing,inthemiddleofthepictureliesanoldman.Hecroucheslikeafootball,whoisrejectedbyhissonsanddaughter.Theyareguardingtheirhomesrespectivelyandrefusingtotakecareoftheirfather.應改為卜面高分句型：2003年考研真題大作文圖片如圖所示，溫室里有一朵柔嫩的小花，長的很茂盛，而溫室為它遮風擋雨.當小花從溫室中搬出來的時候，它無法抵抗風雨的侵蝕，很快就枯萎了，任由它的花葉隨風飄零。Asisvividlydepicted,,growingvigorously,withtheshelterprotectingitfromthebrushofthestorm.Whenremovedoutoftheprotection,theflowercannotstandthestormandquickly,withitsleavesfallinginthewind.-23-2004年考研真題大作文圖片操場上有一個小伙子在跑步，向著終點沖刺。然而，終點又被命名為起點。盡管他已經(jīng)很累了，臉上大汗淋漓，但是他還是在樂觀地奮力繼續(xù)跑卜去。Asisshowninthecartoon,,,whichisdefinedasanotherstartingpoint.,,heisstrivingtocontinuehisjoumeyoptimistically.第七節(jié)圖畫作文精彩段落（極力推薦）一.起始段.圖畫/圖表描述段Asisshowninthepicture,themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthat（從句）....Itismostlikelythatthedrawerintendsnotonlytoinformusofthefactbutalsotosetusthinkingaboutitspracticalsignificance.（描述圖畫）⑵盡管這幅圖畫看似設計簡單，但其寓意卻是非常深奧的。作者真實目的不是這副畫本身，而是要引導我們去探求在它背后究竟隱臧著什么。Simplydesignedasthedrawingseemstobe,thesymbolicmeaningisasdeepasoceans.Theauthor'srealpurposeisnotthedrawingitself,buttoleadustofindwhathidesbehindtheiceburg.Itseemstomethatthecartoonistissendingamessageabouttheimportance/necessityof.Thisdrawingisattractingourattentiontothissocialissuethat.Asisvividlydepictedintheabovepicture,thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningsubtlyconveyedshouldbegivendeepconsideration.2.熱點話題引出段Inrecentyearsthephenomenonthat（后接從句）現(xiàn)象，whichhasarousedgreatconcerninvarioussections,shouldbecondemnedseverelyormadeillegal.Thisissuehasbroughtaboutlotsofdirectorindirectinfluences/effects/impactsonoursociallife,noneofwhichishamilcss.（反面話題）-24-Perhapsthemostthought-provokingphenomenonconfrontingthenationnowadaysis(名i^l)..whichispervasiveinallwalksoflives.(中性話題)(7)(名詞)….issowidespreadthatwecanwitnessthepositiveeffectsofthisissueeverywhere/itremainsamongthemostprevalentsocialissuesinthepastdecades. (正面話題)(名詞)asatraditionalvirtuethathasbeenhighlyvalued/treasuredbyChinesepeopleforthousandsofyears,seemstobeignoredanddiscardedinthesedecades. (反面話題)二、拓展段1.利弊說明段Acomparativeanalysisofthepositiveandnegativeaspectsof(名詞)willperhapsprovideuswithabettersenseoftheeventualimpactof.Advantagesanddisadvantagesarethebasicdualconceptsofnearlyeverythinginourlife.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatforeveryadvantagetherewillbeadisadvantage.Anadvantageforonegroupmightprovedisadvantagetoothers.2.意義闡釋段(引申/象征)Simplydesignedasthepictureis,thesymbolicmeaningitconveysisdeepandprofound.Itis,mostlikely,thatthedrawerintendsnotonlytopresentthefacttousbutalsotosetusthinkingaboutitssocialsignificance.Aftercarefulthinkingandreflection,wecometounderstandtheenlighteningpicture/wiseremarkstepbystep.Icontendthatthisthought-provokingpictureconveystwolayersofmeanings.ItgoeswithoutsayingthatthedrawingsaimatrevealingaprevailingandseriousprobleminChina/inthecontemporarycommunity.(14)Symbolically,thedelicateflowerisnaturallyassociatedwiththeyouths,overprotectedbytheirparents,withthegreenhouseprotectingthemfrombrushofstorms,whichepitomizes/symbolizestheintensecompetitionintherealworld.對比段Whenitcomesto,somepeoplemaintainthat.Otherscontendthattheoppositeistrue.Thereisprobablysometruthtobotharguments,but.Generallyspeaking,differentpeoplealwayshavedifferentviewstowardsthesamequestion,notbecausethequestioniscomplicated,butbecauseofthediversityofthoughts.Peoplehavedifferenthabitsofthinking,differentpositionsandsoon.4?原因列舉段Ignoringcauseandeffectisexactlythesamethingasfailingtolookbothwayswhencrossingabusyinteraction.Thus,itisessentialtoexamineeveryangleinordertofullyunderstandthenatureofaperplexingproblem.Thereasonfor...arebothcomplicatedandvaried.Ideemthephenomenonresultsfrom_and.However,themainreasonisquitelikely+N.Thefollowingcanbethecombinationoffactorsgivingrisetothisissue.-25-(20)很明顯，有很多復雜的原因導致這個現(xiàn)象的發(fā)生，而下面的是最有代表性的。Apparently,avarietyofcomplicatedfactorscontributetothephenomenon,withthefollowingonebeingtheforemost.(21)除了下面的原因，沒有更好的了。為這樣一個復雜的現(xiàn)象給出原因不是一個簡單的事情。Icanthinkofnobetterreasonsforthephenomenonotherthanthefollowingtwo.Itisnosimplejobtoinducereasonsforthiscomplicatedphenomenon.Myfirstconsiderationis./Themainreason,inmypersonalsense,liesin+N./isalwaysthetopofthelistofmyarguments.Nconstitutesanothercauseofthisproblem./Anadditionalfactorrestswith.Anequallyessentialcausethatdeservesourattentionis+N.5.舉例論證段Lookingaround,wemayfindexamplestoonumeroustolist.Athinghappeningaroundusmayserveasatypicalexample.Thelistofsuchinstancescangoonandon,andIcan'tthinkofbetterillustrationsthanthefollowingexamplewhichwillbesufficienttoprovetheabovefact/phenomcnon.(24)我們人類歷史上與這個話題相關的例子有很多，在我所聽到的，看到的，經(jīng)歷過的所有和這個話題相關的例子之中，最有說服力的是,除了這個例子，我再也找不到更有說服力的了。(45字)Ourhumanhistoryhasbeenfilledwithavarietyofexamplesof+(考試話題).Amongallthetouchinginstancesrelatingto+(考試話題)thatIhaveheard,noticed,andexperienced,themostimpressiveoneis+名詞.1cannolongerthinkofbetterexamplesotherthan+N(名詞).Accordingtoarecentinvestigation,thereareanincreasingnumberoffolkswhosharetheconcernabouttheproblemof whichisanissuethatdeservespublic,professionalandpoliticalattentionnotonlybycityresidentsbutalsobyfarmers.6.分層論述段Tosolvethisissue/problemisatwo-wayoperation.Foronething,individualsshouldenhancetheconsciousnessof.Foranother,legislativestepsneedtobeintroducedtocontrol/restrain/stimulate/encouragethisphenomenon.Thepainterwantstotellusthat,justlikerunning,whateverwedo,weshouldn'tstopmakingprogress.Forastart,itappliestoindividuals.Insucharat-racesociety,everyonewantstomoveahead,notfallingbehindothers.Moreover,corporationsandorganizationsshouldalsoembracetheview.Inaddition,thesocietyasawhole,should....7.邏輯正反說明法Ifoneknowsmuchinonefieldbutlittleinothers,hewillnotbeofgreatusetosociety.Successinmanyrespectsdependson....Onthecontrary,failurein...oftenresultsfrom Lifeisbynomeansperfectandwhetherwefeelhappyornotdependsonhowwelookatour-26-problems.Whenconfrontedwithanadversesituation,somefolksfeelgloomyandfallintodepression.Others,onthecontrary,lookatthepositivesideofthesituationandremaincheerful.It'sourattituderatherthanthesituationitselfthatdetermineshowwefeci.三.結論段1.歸納結論段Theampleevidencepresentedenablesustoreasonablyconcludethat.Judgingfromtheevidencepresented,wecansafelyconcludethat.Afterconsideringalltheinfbnnationpresentedabove,I,asmostofotherswilldo,safelydrawtheconclusionthat.Unfortunately,hastriggeredaseriesofnegativeeffects,withbeingtheforemost.Quiteregrettably,hasbroughtsomeunforeseeableproblems,withbeingforemost.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,.Ifthissituationcontinued,wewouldpayahighpriceforthis.(根據(jù)一項調查表明，。如果這種問題繼續(xù)下去，我們將為此付出昂貴的代價。)2.預測趨勢段Onlybyadoptingtheseeffectivemeasures,canoursocietydevelopsteadilyandhaveabrighterprospect.措施段Withevidencefromthedrawing,itcanbeconcludedthatthesituationisboundtodeteriorateunlesseffectivemeasuresarecarriedout.Tomymind,itisimperativetotakestepstoreversethedisturbingtrendillustratedinthedrawing.Onemeasurewouldbeto.However,moreimportantly,.4.解決方法Itishightimethatwetookeffectivemeasurestosolvetheproblem.Foronething,itisessentialthatproperpoliciesbeworkedouttopromotestudents'employment.Foranother,studentsshouldbeeducatedtobroadentheirrangeofknowledge.Onlyinasensible,healthyatmospherecanwehopetowitnesstheidealsceneinwhichstudentscanenjoytheirlifetotheuttermost.四.圖畫作文三段式?27-2007考研真題大作文圖片.描述圖畫DescribethedrawingbrieflyAsisvividlydepictedabove,infrontofthefootballstandsanathlete,imaginingthegoalkeeperissogiantthathecanhardlyscorethegoal.Onthecontrary,thegoalkeeperminimizeshimselfandhecannotkeepthenetatall.Funnyasthepictureseems,thesymbolicmeaningisasdeepasoceans..闡述意義ExplainitsextendedmeaningWhatistheintendedmeaningofthepicture?Thewriter'srealpurposeisnotthedrawingitself,buttoleadustodiscoverwhathidesbehindtheiceberg.Thepastdecadehaswitnessedahugeadvanceinoursocietyonthegroundofthereformandopendoorpolicybeingcarriedout,bringingsomeproblemsatthesametime,withtheyouth'slackofconfidencebeingtheforemost.Toouramazement,accordingtothelatestsurvey,over60%ofyouthsgetdefeatedorfrustratedwhentheymeetwithanyhardship,whichneedsgreatsocialconcern..用例子來證明SupportyourviewwithexamplesAmongallthetouchinginstancesrelatingtoconfidencethatIhaveheard,noticed,andexperienced,themostimpressiveoneisDengyaping.Astheworldsportsstar,sheinvariablyimaginespositivelythatshecanwinineveryrace,nevershrinkinginfrontofotherexperiencedplayers.Hadshebeenafraidofherrivals,nevercouldshehavemadeanyworldrecordinth