大學(xué)英語六級(jí)考試寫作(新東方續(xù)志賢老師講義)

主要題型：對(duì)峙看法，給定看法，問題解決，數(shù)字圖表，書信應(yīng)用，題干的第一句是背景句，第二句用于判斷題目種類Agoodparagraphshouldbe:well-connected,clear,economical(usethefewestwordstosaythemost),tight(don‘a(chǎn)nds’‘buts’‘ors’ect.)※：gratefulbepleasanttoread.Topic=exploration+example

’tusemassof段落的三個(gè)要素：框架結(jié)構(gòu)——信息的輕重，語意表達(dá)——語意的上下，語法運(yùn)用——語法的一致主題句：Sthcanproducepositiveeffectson

inmorethanoneway.Sthmaybringaboutsomenegativeimpactson整體信息好細(xì)節(jié)信息不可以合并，改用句號(hào)Firstway/firstofall/first,sthwillmakeitpossibleforsbtodosth.Furthermore/secondly/besidesthwillenablesbtodosth.What’smore/inadditionsthwillprovidesbwithmorechancetodosth.,which知識(shí)角度：KNOWLEDGE:Littlebylittle,ourknowledgewillbewellenrichedandourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.SKILL:○1makeitpossibleforsbtodosth.○2enablesbtodo○3providesbwithmorechancetodosth○4sthcontributedirectlytosb’s(K/S/E)accumulation/enrichmentbydoing正確且有意義的：whichmayputtheminafavorableposesthejob/willbenefitthemalotinthefutureExperiencethattheywillneverbeabletogetfromthetextbook寫作常用角度：生活角度○1canbrightenupourlivesimmensely○2sthwillmakeourlifelivemoreenjoyableandpleasant○3canaddcolortothedullroutineofeverydaylife○4so,forthemajorityofsb.(對(duì)大多數(shù)人來說)doingsthhasbecomethesourceoftheirhappinessandcontentment（使。。。成為了他們生活快樂及內(nèi)心滿足的本源）時(shí)間角度○1Itprovidesrelationforleisurehour○2Collecting,byoccupyingsb’ssparetimesoconstructively(建設(shè)性的)makeapersoncontented,withnotimeforboredom全能原由之弊端Sthtakesuplimitedpreciouschildren’stimeotherwisewhichcanbeusedformorevaluableactivitiessuchassportsorhomework.Therefore,resultsinpooracademicperformanceandself-humiliation.時(shí)間角度的好與壞What’smore,livinginschoolcansavethemagreatdealoftimeonthewaybetweenhomeandschooleveryday,sotheywouldbeabletoconcentratemoretimeandenergyontheiracademicwork.（而且，生活在學(xué)校里能節(jié)約大量每天往返于學(xué)校和家的路上的時(shí)間，這會(huì)使他們有更多的時(shí)間和精力放在學(xué)習(xí)上。）壓力（社會(huì)、校園）SbUnderconsiderablepressurefromsththereforesth(n./doing)willonlyaddtosb’sburden.錢、精力Sth(n./doing)callsformoneyandenergy,bothofwhicharenotaffordableforsb.環(huán)境污染或不健康內(nèi)容Pollutionposesagreatthreatto（對(duì)。。。生計(jì)造成巨大威脅）ourexistence.Someofthearepoisonousanddangeroustohealth、對(duì)峙看法型：四段起：論證大綱擺問題，改題目，綜述看法承：好處4句話，1總3分轉(zhuǎn)：弊端2~3句，1總，1~2分合：總結(jié)先收一句，陳述看法，總結(jié)看法，總結(jié)Paragraph1背景句——標(biāo)題中試陳述句，不加whetherornotRecentlytheissueof(whetherornot)hasbeeninthelimelightandhasarousedwideconcerninthepublic(近來，可否。。。的問題已經(jīng)特別明確而且引起了社會(huì)的廣泛關(guān)注)Sthhasattractedextensiveattentionofthesociety.Nowadays,increasinglymoreargumentationsaboutcanbefoundinTVprograms,newspapers,evenuniversityclasses.改寫題目——改寫第二個(gè)大綱，第一段綜述，起承轉(zhuǎn)合“花開兩朵”句型：Mostofus，however，haveformedadifferencepictureoflifeonourfuturejob(主題)，somepeoplethinktheyarebeneficialwhichothersholdtheoppositeview.談?wù)揂ndwerarelyreachanabsoluteconsensusonsuchacontroversialissue.對(duì)于這種極具爭(zhēng)議的話題，我們很難作出絕對(duì)的回答。Paragraph2○1Somepeopletaketheattitudethatcanproducepositiveeffectsonusinmorethanoneway.○2Thosewhohavealreadybenefitedfrompracticingitsinghighpraiseofit.Firstofall,sthwillmakeitpossibleforustoFurthermore,sthwillenableustowhichmayputusinafavorablepositioninthefuture.What’smore,sthwillalsoprovideuswithmorechancestoParagraph3過渡句Theothersideofthepictureisquitetheopposite.○1Othersharbortheideathat,maybringaboutnegativeimpactsus.on○2Thosewhostronglydisapproveof...havecogentreasonsforit./havetheirownreasonforit.Foronething,Foranother,Granted,advertisingmaycarrysomedrawbacks.Paragraph4辦理方式1，公布傾向Perhapsthereisanelementoftruthinboththesepictures.○1Frommyownperspective,Iaminclinedtobeonthesideoftheformerview.在我看來，我較贊成前一種看法?！?Afterathoroughconsideration,formypart,Iaminfavoroftheformerview.經(jīng)過深思熟慮，我較支持前一種看法——呼叫句型作結(jié)語Oneofthethingsthatfascinatesusmostaboutcatsisthepopularbeliefthattheyhaveninelives.辦理方式2，趨利避害○1Weshould，therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.Whatwemustdoistoencouragethestrengthanddiminishtheweaknessestotheleastextent.Frommyownopinion,sth.hasdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople’slife,despiteasliceofunfavorable.○2Inthefinalanalysis,Iconcedethatadvertisingdoesnotcomewithoutsomebanes.However,theprosofadvertisingfaroutweighitscons.Onbalance,Iamconvincedthatwhatwemustdoistoencouragethestrengthanddiminishtheweaknessestotheleastextent.(平衡兩種看法)問題解決型drunkendrivingNobodycouldhavefailedtonoticethefactthatdrunkendrivinghasbeenagraveproblemwithwhichweareconfronted.Generallyspeaking,thereareseveralreasonsaccountingfor/behindthisphenomenon.FirstofallFurthermoreThemajorityofindividualsorstill(poorly-informeduninformedmisinformed)aboutthebanefulinfluencethatsthexerton.Sthisboundtogeneratesevereconsequenceifwekeepturningablindeyetoit.Firstandforthemost.besides.ThisbehavieswillalreadythreatenInviewoftheseriousnessofthisproblem,effectivemeasuresmustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.Giventheseverityofthecrisis,wehavenoalternativebuttotakevigorous( )measurestoaddressthesituation.Firstly,itisessentialthatthesupervisoryroleoflawsandregulationsshouldbestrengthenedtopunishthoseperformingdrunkendriving.Secondly,thepublic,especiallydrivers,shouldenhancetheirawarenessofpublicsafety.Inthefirstplace,wemustdoourutmosttoenhancepeople’sawarenessofhowbanefulnon-biodegradabletrashcanbetoourenvironmentandourdescendants.Inthesecondlyplace,thegovernmentandthetechnologistsshouldsparenoeffortinadvocatingtheuseofenvironmental-friendlycontainers.Withstringentlawsandalertpublic,itwillonlyamatteroftimefordrunkendrivingtobecomethingsofpast.HowtoManageStressCauses:Youmayfeelphysicalstresswhichistheresultoftoomuchtodo,notenoughsleep,apoordietortheeffectsofanillness.Nowadaysthesocialcompetitionisbecomingfiercerandeveryonewantstocopewithadversityandtoflourishintheireducation,vocation,andpersonalrelationships.給定看法型——一種看法或看法Recentlytheissueof(whetherornot)hasbeeninthelimelightandhasarousedwideconcerninthepublic.Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarebeginningtobelievethatcanproducepositiveeffectsonusinmorethanoneway.Thesituationisencouraging.(theirreasonsareasbelow)Frommyownperspective,part-timejobcanproduceafar-reachingimpactonstudentsandtheyshouldbeencouragedtotakepart-timejob,whichwillbenefitstudentsandtheirfamily,eventhesocietyasawhole.Frommyownperspective,Iholdtheoppositeviewonthesamecase..canreallyproducepositiveeffectsonthesocietyandthepeople.Foronething,..Foranother/Therefore,.shouldbeencouragedto.whichwillbenefitthepeopleeventhesocietyasawhole.十個(gè)全能原由：（二段闡述的10個(gè)方面）1．物質(zhì)回報(bào)：It（the30’sofreformingandopeningupinChina）canprovidepeoplewithdeliciousfood,fashionableclothes,comfortabledwellingsandhandsomeautomobiles.Somoreandmorepeoplearebeginningtopayattentiontotheirspiritualmoney,obtainwealth,profitfrom,benefitfrom.2．節(jié)約時(shí)間：Itsavetime;takeupmuch(little)time;occupylittletime;Itcanmakethemostofone’stime,浪費(fèi)時(shí)間：Itwasteshours;lavishesdays;squandersyears;frittersawaytime;idlesawayone’stime;killstime;murderstime.3．效率：Itextendsone’slearninghours,makespeoplewearyofotherimportantthings,discourageshimtolearnmore,andfinallylosetheirinteresttolearn,andleadtolowgrades.One’senergygraduallywearsoff.4．方便快捷：WorldWideWebprovidespeoplewithup-to-date,concreteandaccurateandvividinformation.MSNandelectronicmailboxcanshrinkthedistancebetweentownsandcities;smooththecommunicationbetweenresidentsandgetridofthebarrierbetweenpeople.5．安全：Hecansecurehisfoodandshelter.Itcanimproveone’slivingstandardsandmakeaneasyandcomfortablelife.表現(xiàn)：Itcanshield(保護(hù))peoplefromvariouskindsofhazardsrangingfrominjury,robbery,assaultstotrafficaccidents.6．身心健康：Itcanrelievepeopleressure,’panxiety,depression,stress,isolationandsolitude.Peoplecankeepfitphysicallyandmentally.Bytakingpartinavarietyofsportactivities,peoplestayhealthy,andthereforepreventheartdiseases,hypertension,diabetesorfattiness.Itcanlessenpeople’sstress,pressureandtension.Itcultivatesanoptimisticviewtowardtheworld,7．娛樂方式：It’samajormeansofentertainmentthatrelieveone’spressure,boredomandstress,burden.表現(xiàn)：Peoplegotoamusementparkstorelaxthemselves;theygototheseasidetoenjoysunshineorfreshair;theytryseafood;theyvisitplacesofinterestsinordertocontactadifferentculture;收益：broadenone’smind;enrichone’sexperience;enhancevigorandputmoreenthusiasmtoone’swork.Itiswellreceivedasaninstructivemodeofeducationthatprovidespeoplewithnotonlyabulkofinformation,butasourceofimaginationaswell.Inalessrigid（嚴(yán)格的）manner,itcanenhancepeople’sunderstandingonasubject,improvepeople’ndslearningskills,capaorcreateavigorousatmosphere.Itprovidesavarietyofleisureactivitiesthatenhanceyourenergy,enthusiasmandcharm.Itaddsaspecialmeansofentertainmenttoyourseeminglytedious,routineandmonotonouslife.Peoplecancommunicatewitheachothersthroughdinners,parties,orexcursion.8．有利于他人：Peoplecanobtainfinancialaids,materialsupport,mentalcomfort,orspiritualfromyoursupport.Theycandrawonexperiencefromyou.Throughyourspeeches,instructionsorassistance,theycanbroadentheirminds,increasetheirincome.Throughyourencouragement,theycultivatethespiritofcompetition,participationandcooperation.Itcanpromotecommunicationbetweenpeopleandridofbarriersbetweenpeople.Throughyourassistance,theycanaccumulatewealth,establishtheircareer,fitintosociety,andattainsocialstatus.Theycanfeelrelaxed,confiden