中考英語(yǔ)作文指導(dǎo)-旅游交通課件

旅游交通基礎(chǔ)篇旅游交通基礎(chǔ)篇【話題解讀】旅游交通包含兩個(gè)方面的話題：旅游和交通。旅游話題通常涉及景點(diǎn)介紹、旅游計(jì)劃、行程安排、游記等；交通話題通常涉及個(gè)人出行方式、各種交通方式的比較、交通安全、交通與環(huán)保的關(guān)系等。有的中考作文會(huì)同時(shí)涉及這兩個(gè)話題?！驹掝}解讀】【真題回放】在英語(yǔ)課上，老師組織了“Atriptothecountrysideortothecity”的話題討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)小組討論結(jié)果，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹兩者的不同特點(diǎn)，并寫(xiě)出你的選擇與理由。【真題回放】CountrysideCityrelaxing,freshair...noteasytotakepublictransportation...exciting...crowded,expensive...CountrysideCityrelaxing,fresh注意：1)短文必須包含記錄表中的信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、姓名等信息；3)詞數(shù)80~100，所給的文章開(kāi)頭供選擇，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。注意：IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2016浙江麗水)IntheEnglishclass,weh【真題分析】通過(guò)審題可知該寫(xiě)作任務(wù)要求對(duì)比“atriptothecountryside”和“atriptothecity”，介紹兩者的不同特點(diǎn)。介紹時(shí)要分別從優(yōu)、缺點(diǎn)兩個(gè)方面來(lái)寫(xiě)。表格中已經(jīng)列出了比較的方面，包括心情感受、空氣質(zhì)量、交通狀況、購(gòu)物消費(fèi)等，寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)圍繞這幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)闡述并有一定程度的發(fā)揮。最后記得要給出自己的選擇并陳述理由?！菊骖}分析】【標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文】IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.Havingatriptothecountrysidecanberelaxing.Youcangofishingorhikingthere.Andtheairisfresh.Butit'snoteasytotakepublictransportationinthecountryside.Havingatriptothecitycanbean【標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文】excitingexperience.Youcangotodifferentplacesandtrydifferentkindsoffood.Butitcanbecrowdedinthecityandthingsthereareusuallyexpensive.I'dliketohaveatriptothecity.Why?BecauseIlikeshoppingandIwanttobuyalotofthings.excitingexperience.Youcang旅游交通提高篇旅游交通提高篇【高分突破】IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.Havingatriptothecountrysidecanbearelaxingexperience.Andthefreshairisgoodforyourhealth.However,youmightnothavemanychoicesintransportation.【高分突破】Atriptothecityalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Ifyoulikeshopping,it'sveryexcitingtowanderinlargemalls.However,youmighthavetospendalotbecausethingsareexpensiveinthecity.Andthetrafficjammightletyoudown.Asforme,atriptothecountrysideissurelymytopchoice.IlikeplaceswhereIcangetclosetonatureandbreathefreshair.Atriptothecityalsoha【高分揭秘】

1.該習(xí)作要點(diǎn)齊全，段落層次清晰，語(yǔ)言地道優(yōu)美；

2.作者在第三段用了一句Atriptothecityalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages,起到了承上啟下的作用；同時(shí)also,however,and等詞的使用也使習(xí)作讀起來(lái)連貫、流暢；【高分揭秘】

3.作者在結(jié)尾部分表達(dá)自己的選擇和理由時(shí)，話語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)明扼要，mytopchoice更是用得準(zhǔn)確而貼切。3.作者在結(jié)尾部分表達(dá)自己的選擇和理由時(shí)，話語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)明【素材積累】1.詞匯

旅游：goonatrip,takeatrip,place

ofinterest,relaxing,beimpressed

with,

exciting

交通：crowded,redlight,trafficrules,

trafficjam,publictransportation

【素材積累】152.句子Travelingmakesusgetclosetonature.Trafficincitiesisgettingheavierandheavier.OurschedulefortodayistovisittheGreatWall.Ican'twaittosharethefantasticexperiencewithmyfriends.Travelingisagreatwaytolearnaboutyourselfandtheworld.2.句子16【寫(xiě)作任務(wù)】目前，家長(zhǎng)開(kāi)車(chē)接送孩子上學(xué)已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)普遍現(xiàn)象，人們對(duì)此做法褒貶不一，家長(zhǎng)們也有自己的看法。觀點(diǎn)1：省時(shí);安全;提供更多與孩子交流的機(jī)會(huì)。觀點(diǎn)2：學(xué)校周?chē)鼡頂D；最近發(fā)生了幾起交通事故；污染的空氣對(duì)身體有不良影響?！緦?xiě)作任務(wù)】17你的觀點(diǎn)：(必須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)注意：1.文章必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右(文章的開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；3.文中不得提及具體人名、校名及地名。你的觀點(diǎn)：(必須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)18Nowadaysit'scommonforparentstodrivetheirchildrentoschoolandbackhome,whichhascausedaheateddiscussion.Someparentsthink_____________________________________________________________________________________(2016湖北隨州)Nowadaysit'scommonforp19【參考范文】Nowadaysit'scommonforparentstodrivetheirchildrentoschoolandbackhome,whichhascausedaheateddiscussion.Someparentsthinkitsavestimeandisasafechoicefortheirchildren.Theyalsobelievethatitoffersthemmorechancestocommunicatewiththeirchildren,sothey【參考范文】20cangetalongwellwiththeirchildren.However,otherparentsthinkitmakestrafficnearschoolsworse.Asisknown,therehavebeenseveraltrafficaccidentsrecently.What'sworse,carspollutetheairandthatisbadforhealth.Ithinkweareoldenoughtogotoschoolbyourselves.Weshouldtakepublictransportationasmushascangetalongwellwiththeir21possible,whichwillnotonlyhelpreduceairpollution,butalsoimprovethetrafficsituation.possible,whichwillnotonly22中考英語(yǔ)作文指導(dǎo)--旅游交通課件23旅游交通基礎(chǔ)篇旅游交通基礎(chǔ)篇【話題解讀】旅游交通包含兩個(gè)方面的話題：旅游和交通。旅游話題通常涉及景點(diǎn)介紹、旅游計(jì)劃、行程安排、游記等；交通話題通常涉及個(gè)人出行方式、各種交通方式的比較、交通安全、交通與環(huán)保的關(guān)系等。有的中考作文會(huì)同時(shí)涉及這兩個(gè)話題。【話題解讀】【真題回放】在英語(yǔ)課上，老師組織了“Atriptothecountrysideortothecity”的話題討論。請(qǐng)根據(jù)小組討論結(jié)果，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，介紹兩者的不同特點(diǎn)，并寫(xiě)出你的選擇與理由?！菊骖}回放】CountrysideCityrelaxing,freshair...noteasytotakepublictransportation...exciting...crowded,expensive...CountrysideCityrelaxing,fresh注意：1)短文必須包含記錄表中的信息，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2)文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的校名、姓名等信息；3)詞數(shù)80~100，所給的文章開(kāi)頭供選擇，不計(jì)入詞數(shù)。注意：IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2016浙江麗水)IntheEnglishclass,weh【真題分析】通過(guò)審題可知該寫(xiě)作任務(wù)要求對(duì)比“atriptothecountryside”和“atriptothecity”，介紹兩者的不同特點(diǎn)。介紹時(shí)要分別從優(yōu)、缺點(diǎn)兩個(gè)方面來(lái)寫(xiě)。表格中已經(jīng)列出了比較的方面，包括心情感受、空氣質(zhì)量、交通狀況、購(gòu)物消費(fèi)等，寫(xiě)作時(shí)應(yīng)圍繞這幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)闡述并有一定程度的發(fā)揮。最后記得要給出自己的選擇并陳述理由?！菊骖}分析】【標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文】IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.Havingatriptothecountrysidecanberelaxing.Youcangofishingorhikingthere.Andtheairisfresh.Butit'snoteasytotakepublictransportationinthecountryside.Havingatriptothecitycanbean【標(biāo)準(zhǔn)范文】excitingexperience.Youcangotodifferentplacesandtrydifferentkindsoffood.Butitcanbecrowdedinthecityandthingsthereareusuallyexpensive.I'dliketohaveatriptothecity.Why?BecauseIlikeshoppingandIwanttobuyalotofthings.excitingexperience.Youcang旅游交通提高篇旅游交通提高篇【高分突破】IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.Havingatriptothecountrysidecanbearelaxingexperience.Andthefreshairisgoodforyourhealth.However,youmightnothavemanychoicesintransportation.【高分突破】Atriptothecityalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Ifyoulikeshopping,it'sveryexcitingtowanderinlargemalls.However,youmighthavetospendalotbecausethingsareexpensiveinthecity.Andthetrafficjammightletyoudown.Asforme,atriptothecountrysideissurelymytopchoice.IlikeplaceswhereIcangetclosetonatureandbreathefreshair.Atriptothecityalsoha【高分揭秘】

1.該習(xí)作要點(diǎn)齊全，段落層次清晰，語(yǔ)言地道優(yōu)美；

2.作者在第三段用了一句Atriptothecityalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages,起到了承上啟下的作用；同時(shí)also,however,and等詞的使用也使習(xí)作讀起來(lái)連貫、流暢；【高分揭秘】

3.作者在結(jié)尾部分表達(dá)自己的選擇和理由時(shí)，話語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)明扼要，mytopchoice更是用得準(zhǔn)確而貼切。3.作者在結(jié)尾部分表達(dá)自己的選擇和理由時(shí)，話語(yǔ)簡(jiǎn)明【素材積累】1.詞匯

旅游：goonatrip,takeatrip,place

ofinterest,relaxing,beimpressed

with,

exciting

交通：crowded,redlight,trafficrules,

trafficjam,publictransportation

【素材積累】382.句子Travelingmakesusgetclosetonature.Trafficincitiesisgettingheavierandheavier.OurschedulefortodayistovisittheGreatWall.Ican'twaittosharethefantasticexperiencewithmyfriends.Travelingisagreatwaytolearnaboutyourselfandtheworld.2.句子39【寫(xiě)作任務(wù)】目前，家長(zhǎng)開(kāi)車(chē)接送孩子上學(xué)已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)普遍現(xiàn)象，人們對(duì)此做法褒貶不一，家長(zhǎng)們也有自己的看法。觀點(diǎn)1：省時(shí);安全;提供更多與孩子交流的機(jī)會(huì)。觀點(diǎn)2：學(xué)校周?chē)鼡頂D；最近發(fā)生了幾起交通事故；污染的空氣對(duì)身體有不良影響?！緦?xiě)作任務(wù)】40你的觀點(diǎn)：(必須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮)注意：1.文章必須包括所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；2.詞數(shù)：80詞左右(文章的開(kāi)頭已給出,不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))；3.文中不得提及具體人名、校名及地名。你的觀點(diǎn)：(必須用2至3句話作適當(dāng)發(fā)41Nowadaysit'scommonforparentstodrivetheirchildrentoschoolandbackhome,whichhascausedaheateddiscussion.Someparentsthink___________________________________________________