2023屆高考英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)：寫(xiě)作道歉信課件 39張

道歉信2022.12.27寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)道歉信應(yīng)對(duì)自己具體的過(guò)失和疏忽作出解釋?zhuān)狼傅脑蛞欢ㄒ鎸?shí)而且容易接受，語(yǔ)言要得體委婉，表現(xiàn)出誠(chéng)意。道歉信由以下三部分組成：1.表明寫(xiě)信意圖，對(duì)某事表示歉意2.說(shuō)明道歉的具體原因3.再次表示歉意，請(qǐng)求諒解，并提出補(bǔ)救措施重難點(diǎn)：解釋的理由需要讓對(duì)方信服，情有可原，道歉要有誠(chéng)心01真題演練假定你是李華，與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書(shū)店，因故不能赴約，請(qǐng)給他寫(xiě)封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說(shuō)明原因；3.另約時(shí)間。注意：寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80左右。（2016全國(guó)卷Ⅲ）02首段首段謀篇思路寒暄問(wèn)候+寫(xiě)信背景與留學(xué)生朋友Bob約好一起去書(shū)店，因故不能赴約，+寫(xiě)信目的表示歉意寒暄問(wèn)候Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.見(jiàn)信好/展信安Howiseverythinggoing?最近怎么樣/最近還好嗎Howisitgoing?最近怎么樣/最近還好嗎寫(xiě)信背景+寫(xiě)信目的Learningfrommyteacherthatwewillhaveaveryimportantexamontheweekend

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Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmysincerestapologyforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouasweplannedearlier.從老師那里得知，周末我們將有一個(gè)非常重要的考試，我寫(xiě)這封信是為了表達(dá)我最真誠(chéng)的歉意，因?yàn)槲覀冎坝?jì)劃不能和你一起去書(shū)店。首段其他表達(dá)方式首段直接表達(dá)寫(xiě)信目的

I'mwritingtoapologizetoyouforbeingunabletoaccompany

youtothebookstoretomorrowasplanned.Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmysincerestapologyforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouasweplannedearlier.

用于開(kāi)頭段落的功能句:1.Iwouldliketoexpressmydeepestapologyfornotbeingabletogotothebookstore.我要對(duì)未能和你一起去書(shū)店表示最深切的歉意。表達(dá)我誠(chéng)摯的歉意expressmydeepestapology

conveymysincereapologymake/offeranapologytosb.for(doing)sth.為了（做）某事向某人道歉expressmydeepestapology

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(doing)sth.為了（做）某事向某人表達(dá)誠(chéng)摯的歉意道歉v.apologizeapologize(tosb.)fordoingsth.因做了某事（向某人）道歉eg.Imustapologiseformissingourappointmentyesterday.我必須為錯(cuò)過(guò)昨天的約會(huì)道歉n.apologymake/offeranapologytosb.for(doing)sth.為了（做）某事向某人道歉仿寫(xiě)練習(xí)我寫(xiě)信向你表達(dá)我誠(chéng)摯的歉意，因?yàn)槲覜](méi)有在我們約定的時(shí)間陪你去畫(huà)廊。accompany/??k?mp?ni/v.陪伴，陪同；在我們約定的時(shí)間atourappointedtime.I'mwritingtoconveymysincereapologies/expressmydeepestapology

toyoufornotaccompanyingyoutothegalleryatourappointedtime.我寫(xiě)這封信是為了向你爾道歉，因?yàn)槲覜](méi)有照顧好你的狗。I'mwritingtoconveymysincereapology/expressmydeepestapology

toyouformyfailingtotakecareofyourdog.Iamwritingthislettertoapologizetoyouformyfailingtotakecareofyourdog.仿寫(xiě)練習(xí)我寫(xiě)信向你道歉，因?yàn)槲艺f(shuō)話欠妥。I'mwritingtoapologizetoyouforastupidchoiceofwords.我寫(xiě)信向你表達(dá)我深切的遺憾。

I'mwritingtoshowmydeepregret.仿寫(xiě)練習(xí)Ihopethisletterfindsyouwell.

Learningfrommyteacherthatwewillhaveaveryimportantexamontheweekend

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Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmysincerestapologyforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouasweplannedearlier.

首段03中間段中間段謀篇思路說(shuō)明原因考試非常重要，不能考砸。需要整個(gè)周末備考另約時(shí)間詢(xún)問(wèn)下周是否可以說(shuō)明原因考試非常重要，不能考砸。需要整個(gè)周末備考SoimportantisthisexamthatIcan'taffordtofailit.Asaconsequence,Imustspendthewholeweekendpreparingforit.consequence/?k?ns?kw?ns/n.結(jié)果，后果；Asaconsequence因此，結(jié)果

另約時(shí)間但是，我還是想和你一起去However,Istillwanttomakethistripwithyou.

我想知道下周末你是否方便和我一起去書(shū)店。Iwonderwhetheritisconvenient

foryoutogotothebookstorewithme

nextweekend.我們不僅可以交換個(gè)人對(duì)書(shū)籍的看法，而且之后我們還可以吃頓像樣的晚餐。Notonlycanwe

exchangepersonalthoughtsonbooks,butalsowecanhaveaproperdinnerafterthat.中間段SoimportantisthisexamthatIcan'taffordtofailit.Asaconsequence,Imustspendthewholeweekendpreparingforit.However,Istillwanttomakethistripwithyou.Iwonderwhetheritisconvenient

foryoutogotothebookstorewithme

nextweekend.Notonlycanwe

exchangepersonalthoughtsonbooks,butalsowecanhaveaproperdinnerafterthat.考試非常重要，不能考砸。so...that..如此...以至于...SoimportantisthisexamthatIcan'taffordtofailit.倒裝語(yǔ)序Thisexam

issoimportant

thatIcan'taffordtofailit.正常語(yǔ)序倒裝句是為了突出、強(qiáng)調(diào)某些成分而將句子原有語(yǔ)序過(guò)進(jìn)行顛倒的句式。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)適當(dāng)使用倒裝句，一方面可以對(duì)重要信息進(jìn)行強(qiáng)調(diào)，另一方面，在通篇正常語(yǔ)序中突然出現(xiàn)一兩句倒裝句，恰如“萬(wàn)花叢中一點(diǎn)綠”，會(huì)格外吸引閱卷人的眼球倒裝句表達(dá)因果關(guān)系的倒裝so/such...that...(如此……以至于……)部分倒裝的寫(xiě)法將正常語(yǔ)序的句子改寫(xiě)為部分倒裝句時(shí)，可以按照以下三個(gè)步驟來(lái)操作。第一步:選取標(biāo)志詞及其修飾的成分，置于句首第二步:將主句改為一般疑問(wèn)句語(yǔ)序;第三步:保持從句不變，將從句與改寫(xiě)后的主句進(jìn)行整合

倒裝句示例MyteachergavemesomuchhelpthatIwillneverforgether.→正常語(yǔ)序我的老師給了我很多幫助，我永遠(yuǎn)都不會(huì)忘忘記她。第一步，選取標(biāo)志詞中的so/such及其修飾的成分，置于句首;Somuchhelp第二步，將主句改為一般疑問(wèn)句語(yǔ)序;改寫(xiě)時(shí)根據(jù)句意和時(shí)態(tài)選用正確的助動(dòng)詞或情態(tài)動(dòng)詞。

Myteachergavemedidmyteachergiveme第三步，保持從句不變，將從句與改寫(xiě)后的主句進(jìn)行整合。

SomuchhelpdidmyteachergivemethatIwillneverforgether.

Myteachergaveme

somuchhelpthatIwillneverforgether.Somuchhelp

didmyteachergivemethatIwillneverforgether.Tip:在“so/such...that...”倒裝句中，如果謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞為be的一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)或一般過(guò)去時(shí)，則為完全倒裝倒裝句1.音樂(lè)節(jié)在我們學(xué)校很受歡迎，很多同學(xué)都會(huì)參加。正常語(yǔ)序Themusicfestivalissopopularthatmanystudentswillattenditinourschool.倒裝語(yǔ)序Sopopular

isthemusicfestivalthatmanystudentswillattenditinourschool.倒裝句練習(xí)倒裝句練習(xí)在高中的第一年，英語(yǔ)對(duì)我來(lái)說(shuō)太有挑戰(zhàn)性了，我?guī)缀跻艞?。正常語(yǔ)序EnglishwassochallengingtomethatI

almostgaveitupinmyfirstyearofhighschool.倒裝語(yǔ)序SochallengingwasEnglishtomethatIalmostgaveitupinmyfirstyearofhighschool.倒裝句練習(xí)我忙著準(zhǔn)備期末考試，幾乎沒(méi)有時(shí)間查看電子郵件。正常語(yǔ)序Iwassobusy

preparingfor

thefinalexam

thatIbarelyhadtimetocheckthee-mail.

倒裝語(yǔ)序SobusywasIpreparingforthefinalexamthatIbarelyhadtimetocheckthee-mail.04尾段尾段謀篇思路重提主題+表達(dá)期待Hopefully,youwillacceptmyapology,andIlookforwardtoyourreply.希望你能接受我的道歉，我期待著你的回復(fù)。尾段功能句1.Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain，andI'lltrytomakeupformyfault.請(qǐng)?jiān)试S我再次致歉，我將盡力彌補(bǔ)我的過(guò)錯(cuò)。2.Willyoupleaseacceptmyapology?你能接受我的道歉嗎?3.Ihopeyoucanacceptmyapology我希望你能接受我的道歉4.Isincerelyapologizetoyouforanyinconveniencecausedbytheunexpectedchange.對(duì)于這個(gè)意外的變化給您帶來(lái)的不便，我深表歉意。5.Hopeyoucanacceptmyapologiesforthisunhappyexperienceandunderstandmysituation.對(duì)于這次不偷快的經(jīng)歷，希望你能接受我的道歉并理解我的處境。6.PleaseforgivemeandIassureyouthatsuchamatterwillneverhappenagain.請(qǐng)?jiān)徫?，我向你保證這樣的事情不會(huì)再次發(fā)生。尾段功能句05SampleDearBobIhopethisletterfindsyouwell.

Learningfrommyteacherthatwewillhaveaveryimportantexamontheweekend

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Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmysincerestapologyforbeingunabletogotothebookstorewithyouasweplannedearlier.SoimportantisthisexamthatIcan'taffordtofailit.Asaconsequence,Imustspendthewholeweekendpreparingforit.However,Istillwanttomakethistripwithyou.Iwonderwhetheritisconvenient

foryoutogotothebookstorewithme

nextweekend.Notonlycanwe

exchangepersonalthoughtsonbooks,butalsowecanhaveaproperdinnerafterthat.Hopefully,youwillacceptmyapology,andIlookforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua06小練筆真題演練練19:2013年山東卷假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，你的美國(guó)朋友Tom一周前給你發(fā)電子郵件，詢(xún)問(wèn)你暑假里的打算，但你因準(zhǔn)備期末考試未能及時(shí)回復(fù)。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給他回封郵件:1.未及時(shí)回信的原因;2.你假期的打算(如做兼職、旅行、做志愿者等)。注意:1.詞數(shù)120~150;2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearTom,