讀后續(xù)寫 復(fù)習(xí)課件 高三英語

讀后續(xù)寫conflictresolutioncrowbeakconflictSuddenly,hefoundawaterbottle,buttheopeningwastoosmallforthecrow’sbeaktofitin.resolutionThewisecrowfoundalotofstonesandputtheminthebottle,makingthewatercomeup.thestorybehaviorfeelingsApeekintothestoryActivity:Readforbasicinformation.beforetaskcharactersfirsttasksecondtaskbehaviorhelptheplane;showthelightfeelingslookaftergoatsbehaviorhappy/proud/excited/~~~promise;can’tshowthelightnervous/calm/worried/~~MarieFrenchsoldiersGermansoldiersthestorybeforetaskcharactersfirsttasksecondtaskhelptheplane;showthelightlookaftergoatshappy/proud/excited/~~~promise;can’tshowthelightnervous/calm/worried/~~MarieFrenchsoldiersGermansoldiersSavorthestoryActivity1:Predictwhathappenednext.Tip1：Usethebasicinformationtopredicttheendinginalogicalway.

conflictresolutionPara7:

Withtime

approaching,Mariegotmoreandmoreanxious.____________________________________________________________________Para8:

Noiselesslyshegotoutofthecottageandsetfiretoit.________________________________________________________________________Suddenlyagoodideahither.Tip2.

Usethefirstsentencestofurtherpredict.Activity2.Presentthefirstsentencesofthenexttwoparagraphstocheckwhetheryouhavealogicalguessing.Para7:

Withtimeapproaching,Mariegotmoreandmoreanxious._________________________________________________________________________WhydidMariefeelmoreandmoreanxious?Andhowdidtheauthorbringoutheranxiety?ConstructthecontentofthestoryConstructthecontentofthestoryActivity:Reviewthetextandfindoutwaystoexpressthefeelingsaccordingtothedetails.I’mhelpingtheplane;wonderingdidastold;heardaplaneflyingsatstill;couldn’tshowthelight;Iwon’tfailalargeforest;nightfell;twoGermansoldierswithguns;forbidden;Herfeelingshappyproudnervousfirmcalmworriedactionsthoughtswordssurroundings???moreandmoreanxiousConstructthecontentofthestoryactionsthoughtssurroundingswordsTip3:Thechangeoffeelingscanbebroughtoutthroughwords,thoughts,actions,surroundingsandsoon.Activity:Createthedetailsbyyourselfaccordingtothefourwaystoexpressthefeelings.ContinuethestoryPara7:

Withtime

approaching,Mariegotmoreandmore

anxious._________________________________________________________________________Requirements:1.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；2.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語；3.字?jǐn)?shù)70詞左右。Evaluatethecontinuation

Checklist（）HaveIincludedatleast5ofthegivenwordsandunderlinedthem？（）HaveIdescribedpeopleandthingsinfourways?（）HaveIusedappropriatetransitionalwords（過渡語）tomaketheparagraphcoherent?（）HaveIusedthesimplepasttensetonarrate（敘述）thestory?（）Arethereanygrammaticalerrorsinpluralsandverbforms?Para.7

Withtimeapproaching,Mariegotmoreandmoreanxious.Shequietlyapproachedthelittlewindow，however,theGermansoldiersuddenlyturnedover.Marieheldherbreath,standingstill.Fortunately,theydidn’twakeup.Astimewentby,theanxietyinherheartaccumulated.“Tonightisveryimportant.”thewordsfromtheFrenchsoldierechoedaroundherears.“Iwon’tfail!”sherepeateditfirmly,thinkingabouthowtoshowthelightinstead.Suddenly,agoodideahither.~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~1.Polishyourcontinuationwriting.

2.Finishthesecondparagraphandevaluateitbyyourself.Assignment

續(xù)寫訓(xùn)練【主旨大意】這篇文章主要描述的是“我”小時候，由于家庭的原因，很少有到室外玩耍的機(jī)會，同時，在家里也沒有人陪“我”玩耍，由于貪玩，“我”和朋友們一起偷偷跑出去，騎自行車玩耍。

【續(xù)寫思路】

根據(jù)段首語提示，續(xù)寫第一段，不知道從哪里突然冒出來一個小男孩，此時的“我”正騎著自行車疾駛，為了避免相撞，“我”肯定要采取措施。第二段的段首語寫到“我”媽媽匆忙趕去醫(yī)院，反推第一段，說明“我”受傷了。因此，在第一段中應(yīng)該主要寫“我”受傷的情況，環(huán)環(huán)相扣。第二段寫后來的結(jié)果，“我”的傷勢應(yīng)該不嚴(yán)重，但是自行車有損壞。從這件事情上，媽媽和“我”都進(jìn)行了反思?！緦懽黠L(fēng)格】主要抓住動作和心理細(xì)節(jié)進(jìn)行描繪。在語句中多使用動詞、形容詞、非謂語動詞進(jìn)行描寫。注意銜接詞的運(yùn)用。重點(diǎn)詞匯：meanwhileadv.與此同時consequentlyadv.因此strugglev.掙扎fortunatelyadv.幸運(yùn)的是severelyadv.嚴(yán)重地guiltyadj.內(nèi)疚的regretfuladj.后悔的重點(diǎn)短語：toone’ssurprise令某意外的是

outofcontrol失去控制重點(diǎn)句型：so...that...部分倒裝;Whendoingsth非謂語動詞；

強(qiáng)調(diào)句和定語從句...Paragraph1

Suddenlyoutofnowhere,alittleboyappearedinfrontofme.

SonervouswasIthatImadeasuddenturntotheotherdirectioninordertoavoidhim.

（面對意外闖出的小男孩，“我”為了避免撞到他，急打自行車的方向。）However,thebikewasoutofcontrol.(急打方向?qū)е碌慕Y(jié)果就是自行車失去控制。)Consequently,Iknockedontoatreeandfellover.（自行車失去控制導(dǎo)致“我”撞到樹上）Whenstrugglingtostandup,Ifeltmyrightlegwasingreatpain,bloodflowingoutfrommytrousers.（“我”撞到樹上后受傷。）Seeingthis,Junilwasfrightenedandheimmediatelyrushedtothegrocerystoretocallupmymom.（看到我受傷，“我”的朋友趕快去給“我”母親打電話。）Paragraph2Abouthalfanhourlater,mymomcameanddrovemetothenearesthospital.Fortunately,Iwasn’tseriouslyhurt.Noticingmother’sanxiousexpression,Ifeltguiltytomakeherworriedaboutme.(看到媽媽對“我”的擔(dān)心，我感到內(nèi)疚。)Tomysurprise,mymotherdidn’tblamemeforgoingout.Instead,shesaidsorryfornottakinggoodcareofme,whichmademeevenmoreregretful.（媽媽沒有責(zé)備“我”，而是反思自己的過錯。）Meanwhi