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(trend,2、大作文（20分/15分開頭what、中間why/effect3、小作文（10分trend,Trend（1）原題重現(xiàn)（僅替換漫畫10年1月→cultural (同2002年卷14年→mutual 05年→to/數(shù)據(jù)比13年大學2014人口話虛開頭(描述)+寬泛、宏觀的點評，50Howsuggestions:規(guī)則，行為，思想。60字左Coolstructure+luminousbusinesscycle---economicoverestimationofeconomicprosperity,bubbleinthesecuritiesandthecase:oneofmyfather'scolleagues,makeuseofinstallmentpolicy,speculateinrealestatemarket,onlypay30%oftotally-neededfundstopossess3apartments,withtheaggregatepriceoverRMB2million.“cooperation”---deliveringthemoderateoutlookofensuringourinvestingmannersmoreTheglobaleconomy,whoissleeoverthatstretcher,likeahelpless-sickwreck,isbeingpracticedemergencytreatmentbyworldwide-bankingsystems,whicharetryingtheirbesttosavethemarketintensivelybycooperation.Conspicuously,thisisahorribledepictionrelatedto/concerningtheeconomicdownturnaroundtheworld.Severalfactorsweighheavilyforthisroundofeconomicrecession,yettherearetwokernelssuspendedonthetopofthelistwhichshouldneverbeoverlooked.Firstofall,theeconomicslideinbusinesscycle,asthecaseofeconomiccrisis(theGreatDepressionhappeningbetween1929-1933forexample),wouldmakeitscomebackevery10-30yearsontheaverage,sowouldthistime!Furthermore,theoverestimationofeconomicprosperityhasresultedinagreatmultitudeofbubblesinthesecuritiesandtherealties.Acaseinpointisoneofmyfather'scolleagues,whomadeuseofinstallmentpolicytospeculateinrealestateindustry,thus,onlypaying30%oftotally-neededfundstopossess3apartments,withtheaggregatepriceoverRMB2million.Actually,itisnottheDayofJudgment!Whatwearegladtoseeisthekeyword—“cooperation”!Ifthedrasticmeasureswouldbetakenimmediay,justaslayingdowntheassociative-effectivedisciplinetopreventthecrisisfromspreadingallovertheworld,deliveringthemoderateoutlookofconsumptionandensuringourinvestingmannersmorerational,wewillsurelygetthroughthistoughperiodbeforelong.（二）大作文：開頭whatwhy/effect、結尾howWhat——虛開頭（描述）+寬泛、宏觀的點評What——虛開頭（描述）2012年預測vs.2012考Itishardly/barelydifficultforustofigureoutinthelefthalfofpicturegivenabovethata down-heartedandlong-faced,isrootinginhischamberandregrettinghisunhappybygones.However,intherightone,anotherman,passion-sufficientandenergy-continuous,isclimbinguponaladdertoreachhisshiningblueprint.pie 餅bar curvediagramlinechart曲線 （1）Thistableorderlyarrangestheinformation/percentagedistribution/proportion ,displayingthat句子(整體趨勢—>具體數(shù)據(jù)).case:Eg：ThistableorderlyarrangestheinformationconcerningthepopulationofAmericansmokersindifferentstates,displayingthattheweatherandthenaturalenvironmentplaycriticalrolesinshahumanbeings’lifestyle.Firstly,…Onthecontrary,…（2）Thiscurvediagramindicatesthetyfluctuationof overtheperiodfromto,unfoldingthat.Thiscurvediagramindicatesthetyvariationofjuveniledelinquencyintop-5metropolisesovertheperiodfrom2001to2003,unfoldingthathigheconomicboommaybe paniedbyevenmorebittersocialorders.Tobeginwith,…Furthermore, grow rocket riseup surge go drop level break表示波動的趨勢： dramaticallysteadilyincreasedramaticallyby70percentfrom1000in2001to1700inThethirdquarter,however,breakseven,withaslightdropofonly0.3percentcomparedwiththeformer、中間What——虛開頭（描述）+Itisastrikingmorningcall/atypicalwake-upcalltosendusasignificantmessagethat (n.)hasbeeninthespotlightincurrentsociety/ (n.)hasarousedwideconcernatanycornerofoursocialEg:Itisastrikingwake-upcalltosendusasignificantmessagethatthetopicconcerningtheway/theproblemconcerninghowtogetalongproperlywithfamilymembershasbeeninthespotlightincurrent(句)+原因/影響+例句Amongthetopicconcerning上位,asthedepiction/pictureshows,themostcardinaltipisrelatedtotheissueof 下位.Eg:Amongthetopicconcerningfamilymembers’inter-holdingrelationship,asthedepictionshows,thecardinaltipisrelatedtotheissueofraising句Amongthetopicconcerningpursuingknowledgeabroad,asthedepictionshows,themostcardinaltipisrelatedtotheissueofwhetheryouhavemadeanelaboratepreparationtofacethenewstudyingatmosphereandlifestyleinforeigncountries.Severalfactorscouldweighheavilyfor(thehappeningof),yetsuspendedatthetopofthelistarethefollowingtwoaspects.Tobeginwith, .Additionally, .(至少舉一個例子)SeveralfactorscouldweighheavilyforthedepressingstateofChinesetraditionalvirtueaboutrespectingandraisingseniors,yetsuspendedatthetopofthelistarethefollowingtwoaspects.Itishardlynecessaryformetocitealltheevidenceoftherevolutionaryinfluences(that)theaestheticoperationgivesriseto.Tobeginwith,…Apartfrom…,Itishardlynecessaryformetocitealltheevidenceoftherevolutionaryinfluences(that)thecrazeforstaffingthebureauresultsin.Tobeginwith,…Apartfrom…,Agoodcaseblowingmymindnowisn.人/物,who/Eg：Agoodcaseblowingmymindnowisaworldwell-knownman,whosenameisBillGates,committinghimselftocharityindustryafterhisretirement.Consequently,thehighsocialladderandthevastesteemarebestowedtothisgreatnotabilitywithoutanybeyond-expectation.單向話Thefactorscontributingtoabigrise/aconspicuousslide/ashockingaggravationin(n.)arevastlycomplex.Someattributeitto（n.).Othersplacetheblameon/Othersplacethehighvalueon(n.).Stilltherestcomplainof/attachimportanceto Thefactorscontributingtoabigriseinteenagersmokingarevastlycomplex.Someattributeittojuvenilesthemselves,whocannotresisttemptationfromtheirroommatesproducingthesecond-handcigarettes(thatare)harmfultoourhealth.Othersplacetheblameontheneglectfulparentswhotolerateorevenstimulatetheirkidstoindulgeclovecigarettes.Stilltherestcomplainofthedramaticincreaseintobaccos’advertisementsaswellaswhichenablekidstoapproach555,MarlboroandParliamentAccordingtomyhumble,everyswordisdouble-edged;thiskindofculturalshiftisbothpositiveandnegative.Tobeginwith,itgoeswithoutdenyingthatthenew-changedcustomsandhabitshavedistinctadvantages.Ononehand,theyabortthesuperstitionandtheignoranceoftraditionalChineseculturetokeepinaccordancewiththefastrhythmofmodernization.Ontheotherhand,theyeliminate“culturegap”toprovidemoreopportunitiesforcommunicationaswellasinteractionamongpeopleofdifferentnations,races,colorsandreligions,thus,makingourworldmore過渡句Although/Whilethenew-changedcustomsandhabitsenjoyconsiderablemerits,theystillhavetheirowndrawbackswhenthefollowingpointistakenintoaccount.過渡句Although/Whilebiddingfarewelltothebygonesenjoysconsiderablemerits,itstillhasitsownAgoodcasecomingtomymindnowisthecomiccompositionofthePostgraduateEnglishExam,2005,whichdescribestheeclipseofoneoftheChinesevirtues—readilyraisingseniors.Afterall,lotsofoldtraditionsstandfortheessenceofournation’smain-streamvirtue.So,todiscardonenation’sclassicculturallegacymaybeconsideredasakindofbetrayaltosomeextent.How——suggestion（規(guī)則，思想，行為1.Laydowntheeffectiveregulations 呼應2.Deliverthe n. outlooktoguideusbothphysicallyand3.Exert/implement/practicetherational mannerstoliveinamuchmoreharmonious/compatibleatmosphere/circumstance.Laydowntheavailable/reliableregulationstoprotecttherightsofLaydownthedrasticmeasurestoprotecttheenvironmentinwhichweLaydowntheself-remindingdisciplinetocultivateourhabitsconcerningstudyingaswellasDeliverthemoderatesuccess/life/material/world/knowledge/energy/moral/aestheticoutlooktoguideusbothphysicallyandmentally.Exerttherationalenergy-consuming/success-attainingmannerstoliveinamuchmorecompatibleAsaclassicsayinggoes,ajourneyofa beginswithasingleYet,itisveryprobabletosaythatdependingonthelackofsupervision/laws/education/moralcode,manycitizens/youthswouldhavebeenimmersedinsuchanextremeconditionforalongtime.Doesithaveopportunitiesforustomakeachange?/Isitpossibletomakeachange?Actually,asaclassicsayinggoes,“ajourneyofathousand beginswithasinglestep”.Wewillsurelyhandle/optimize/refrainfrom...aslongastheabovementionedproposalswouldbeimplementedimmediayYet,itisveryprobabletosaythatdependingonthelackofsocialconsensus,manycitizens/youthswouldhavebeenusedtosuchamoral-disastrousconditionforalongtime.Isitpossibletomakeachange?Actually,asaclassicsayinggoes,“ajourneyofathousand beginswithasinglestep”.Wewillsurelyrefrainfromabandoningourselvestotheslumpofmoralityaslongastheabovementionedproposalswouldbeimplementedimmediay.Yet,itgoeswithoutanyexaggerationthatdependingonthelackofavailablelegalsupervision,manycitizens/youthswouldhavebeenimmersedinsuchaconsumerism-orientederaforalongtime.Doesithaveopportunitiesforustomakeachange?Actually,asaclassicsayinggoes,“ajourneyofathousandbeginswithasinglestep”.Wewillsurelybuildathriftylifestyleaslongastheabovementionedproposalswouldbeimplementedimmediay#ItisdescribedbythechartthattheagingproblemhasshownanirreversibletrendinChina.Ascansee,theproportionthateldersabove60yearsoldtakeinthewholepopulationhasrisenupsteadilyby0.4%-0.8%onaverageeveryyearfrom11.6%in2007to13.7%in2011,whichhasbroughtaheavyburdentooursocialsecuritysystem.Generallyspeaking,theagingsocietyisthestrongestproofofacountry’ssounddevelopment.Itishardlydifficultforustofigureoutthispositivesignindevelopedcountries.However,whatweshouldnotignoreisthecomplicatedsituationinourmotherland.First,Chinaisavasteconomicandpoliticalentitywiththehugepopulation.Iftherearetoomanyoldsbutrelativelylessyoungsters,wedon’thaveenoughlaborsavailabletokeepourdevelopmentsustainable.Second,China’ssocialsecuritysystem,involvinginsurancemechanism,healthcarepolicy,etc.,isstillinalow-developedlevel,whichcanbarelymeettheneedsofvastmajorityofseniors.Thus,westillhavealonghardtrailtoblaze.Consideringthattheagingproblemistermedasacriticalfactortosocialstability,wehaveallreasonstobeseriousaboutit.Also,ourernmentshouldreformthesecuritysystemimmediaytobuildupasenseofjusticeandequality.It’sthemostinterestingcartoonI’veevermetinthelatest10-yearrealexampapers.Wecanfillintheblankundereverysingle withpairsofwords,forexample,justice(left)andefficiency(right),environment(left)anddevelopment(right),etc..Ifthemanintherightscissorstherope,boththevictimintheleftandhimself/herselfwilllosethechancetosurvive.Actually,tohurtsomeoneisgoodtononebutworsetoyourself,asaChineseclassicsayinggoes.Thesedays,we’veseenalotofmoraldisastersviasocialnetworks.Theunderlyingreasonforourmankindtohurteachotheristhatweareusedtoletourownegoout.Inthebackgroundofthe“fastandfurious”economicdevelopment,everyspecific canfeelunderunspeakablepressureduetothelimitedoccupationsandalNormally,thewaytofitthefiercesituationistochangeyourself.However,fewpeoplearewillingtogetoutofthewayofthemselves.Rather,theyhaveindulgedthemselvesinegoisticimpulse,whichmayleadthemtosacrificeother’sbenefits.What’sworse,itishardtobeawareofthefactthatinteractionaboundsinhumansociety,whichmeansyouhurtsomeonetoday,theywillsendyouanegativefeedbacknomatteraccidentallyorintentionally.Forexample,it’sveryirrationaltosacrificesocialjusticeinthenameofefficiencybecausetheterminalofhappinessisequalcaretowardseveryoneratherthantherichnessofminority.Whenefficiencykillsjustice,hehimselfwilldiesoon.Forthesakeofyourself,pleasecherisheverylittledripofother’skindnessanddiscardtheDevil (Dear

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