讀后續(xù)寫練習寫作指導講義-2023屆高三英語二輪復(fù)習

讀后續(xù)寫練習寫作指導講義讀后續(xù)寫（浙江省Z20名校聯(lián)盟2023屆高三第二次聯(lián)考英語試題）試題原題第二節(jié)（滿分25分）第二節(jié)：續(xù)寫（滿分25分）閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。Cathy,mymom,whosepetphrase（口頭禪）was“Nevergiveup",wasourfamily'sbeaconofpositivity.Itwasnotatitlesheearnedwithoutconcerted（——致的）effort,however.Whenshewasonlythirtyyearsold,herhusbandwaskilledinacaraccidentandshewaslefttoraisemealone.Mymomcouldhavelivedunderablackcloud.Instead,shechallengedherselftofindjoyeveryday.Leadingbyexample,Momtaughtmejusthowmuchonecouldaccomplishwithapositiveattitude.Shehastakenthesameapproachinherrelationshipwithhergrandchildren—MaxandCharley.Onehotsummerafternoon,mymomandhertwograndsons,havingspenttwohoursbuildingsandcastlesandcollectingseashellsonthebeach,sankintotheirbeachchairstohavearest.Howtheylongedfordeliciousicecreamtocoolthemselves,especiallythetwokids!Suddenly,mymomheardthefamiliarloudclang（叮當聲）oftheice-creammanbellfromherbeachchair.Sheturnedquicklyandsawhimbriefly,spottinghisdistinctivegreenshirtandcatchingthegleamofhiswavingbellbeforeheturnedanddisappearedoverthedunes（沙丘）.Happily,theice-creamman'svisitwasadailyoccurrenceatthebeach,althoughthelagtimebetweenthesoundofhisbellandthedepartureofhistruckwasnotlong.Onemustbequickenoughtocatchhimtobuytheicecream.MaxandCharleywereingreatdisappointmentwhentheydidn/tcatchhimintimethatdaybecausetheyreallywantedtohaveatasteofthosecoolice-creams.Thatwasuntilmymom'seyessparkledandshesaidtothekids,“Nevergiveup!”Sheexplainedtothekidsthatthetruckmightbegone,buttheyshouldbeabletocatchhimupatitsnextstop.Andthekidsagreedimmediately.注意：.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Paragraph1:SoMaxandCharley,accompaniedbymymom,begantheirmission.Paragraph2:MaxandCharley,encouragedbymymom,walkedanotherthreeblocks.試題分析?寫作分析L人物：①mymom②MaxandCharley:mytwokids.主題：人與社會，人與自我.續(xù)寫情節(jié)安排：▼第一段：SoMaxandCharley,accompaniedbymymom,begantheirmission.①（與開頭句銜接）Max和Charley的表現(xiàn)怎樣？②一直沒追到，他們的表現(xiàn)又將會是怎樣？③（與下文開頭句銜接）作者的媽媽怎么鼓勵他們？▼第二段：MaxandCharley,encouragedbymymom,walkedanotherthreeblocks.①（與開頭句銜接）在作者的媽媽的鼓勵下，兩個孩子一直追趕，直到好運來臨。②堅持的結(jié)果得到了怎樣的獎賞？③（主題升華）媽媽的"口頭禪〃激勵著一家人。下水作文SoMaxandCharley,accompaniedbymymom,begantheirmission.Soanxiousweretheytogetthedeliciousice-creamthattheyflewlikearrowstochaseaftertheman,leavingmymomfarbehind.Theflamingsunseemedtohavenoideatoweakentheirpassion.Thetruckwoundaroundtheneighborhoodswithmytwokidshotontheirheels.Whatmadethemfrustratedwasthatthetruckwasnowheretofind,onlythebellsheard.Followingthetruckalongthreeblocksbroughtthemtotheedgeofgivingup.Thencamemymom'spetphrase,sayingsweettastecamefrompersistence.（90words）MaxandCharley,encouragedbymymom,walkedanotherthreeblocks.Itwasjustthe"Nevergiveup"thatinspiredthemtokeepthetrackoftheice-cream.Goodluckalwayscameunexpectedly.Justaroundthecornersuddenlycamethebellofthetruck.Overjoyed,theygatheredtheirlaststrengthanddashedforward.Whenknowingthefact,theice-creammannotonlychargedthemnomoneybutpresenteachonemore.Theyeventuallytastedthepleasureofsuccessandbetterunderstandthemeaningofpersistence.AndMom'spetphrase"Nevergiveup〃inspiredustoovercomedifficultiesinourlaterIife.(90words)參考范文Para.1：SoMaxandCharley,accompaniedbymymom,begantheirmission.Drivenbytheprospectofhavingdeliciousice-cream,thetwokidsscamperedaheadsofastthatmymomcouldhardlyfollow.Notknowingwhichdirectionthetruckhadtaken,theyhadtoinquirepassers-byontheway.Havingwalkedthreeblocks,mykidsfelttheirtinylegsasheavyasleadandtheirfaithinthemissionbegantowaver.〃Weshouldgiveup."Theywonderedoutloud,“Wehavebeenwalkingprettyfarandstillcan'tseethetruckyet.""Nevergiveup!Thetruckshouldbearoundhere，"mymomsaiddeterminedly.So,theywalkedon,chantingMom'spetphrase.(102words)Para.2：MaxandCharley,encouragedbymymom,walkedanotherthreeblocks.Suddenly,mymomseemedtohearthefamiliarclangofthebell."Listen,theice-man'sbell!"shoutedmymomexcitedly.Theyimmediatelyrushedtowherethesoundcamefrom.Sureenough,themomenttheyturnedaroundthecorner,theice-creamman'struckcameintoview.Theyquicklycaughtupandboughttheice-creams.Lickingtheice-cr