大學(xué)英語(yǔ)四級(jí)寫(xiě)作句子練習(xí)

英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作之二句子寫(xiě)作

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句子定義及作用句子成分和句子類型常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤句句子寫(xiě)作原則

句子多樣性及長(zhǎng)難句寫(xiě)法

內(nèi)容提要一、句子句子是文章基礎(chǔ)，是作者表達(dá)思想最小語(yǔ)言單位。句子的質(zhì)量直接影響文章質(zhì)量。寫(xiě)作基本要求——句子語(yǔ)法正確。好文章的共性——句型多樣。提高寫(xiě)作水平首先必須寫(xiě)好句子，掌握不同句型的寫(xiě)法，根據(jù)需要進(jìn)行靈活的句型轉(zhuǎn)換，使文中的句子長(zhǎng)短錯(cuò)落，起伏有致。下面幾個(gè)句子正確嗎?如果有誤,怎么改?1.Themeetingwilluntil3:00.2.Workhard,youwillsucceed.3.Thereareonly4studentstakepartinthesportmeeting.lastand^^^whotaking/totake1）句子的定義和作用句子是由詞按照一定的規(guī)則組成的能夠表達(dá)一個(gè)獨(dú)立完整意義的語(yǔ)言單位。二、句子的構(gòu)成（句子成分）

主語(yǔ)陳述和說(shuō)明的對(duì)象

謂語(yǔ)對(duì)主語(yǔ)動(dòng)作進(jìn)行陳述和說(shuō)明的文字

賓語(yǔ)動(dòng)作涉及的限定的文字對(duì)象

定語(yǔ)對(duì)名詞進(jìn)行修飾和

狀語(yǔ)對(duì)形容詞、動(dòng)詞、副詞、句子進(jìn)行修飾的文字

補(bǔ)語(yǔ)對(duì)賓語(yǔ)進(jìn)行補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明的文字

表語(yǔ)在系動(dòng)詞之后，對(duì)主語(yǔ)進(jìn)行說(shuō)明的文字

句子成份再?gòu)?fù)習(xí)主·謂·賓·表·補(bǔ)·定·狀·SsubjectPpredicateOobjectAttri.attributeAdv.adverbialCcomplementPpredicative1、按句子功能分類？2、按語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)分類？Question句子類型有幾種？分別是什么？1按句子功能分類陳述句（declarativesentence）疑問(wèn)句（interrogativesentence）祈使句（imperativesentence）感嘆句（exclamatorysentence）2按語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)分類簡(jiǎn)單句（simplesentence)并列句(compoundsentence)復(fù)合句(complexsentence)和并列復(fù)合句(compound-complexsentences)三、句子類型(一)、按句子的用途可分四種：1、陳述句（肯定、否定）：Heissixyearsold;Shedidn’thearofyoubefore.2、疑問(wèn)句（一般、特殊、選擇、反意）：Dotheylikeskating?Howoldishe?Ishesixorsevenyearsold?Marycanswim,can’tshe?3、祈使句Becareful,boys;Don’ttalkinclass4、感嘆句Howclevertheboyis!句子功能分類再?gòu)?fù)習(xí)陳述句（declarativesentence）疑問(wèn)句（interrogativesentence）祈使句（imperativesentence）感嘆句（exclamatorysentence）你會(huì)造句嗎？1、陳述句…..2、疑問(wèn)句…..3、祈使句…..4、感嘆句…..句子類型

（語(yǔ)法分類）簡(jiǎn)單句并列句復(fù)合句2HowtosaytheminEnglish簡(jiǎn)單句（simplesentence)并列句(compoundsentence)復(fù)合句(complexsentence)和并列復(fù)合句(compound-complexsentences)簡(jiǎn)單句：主語(yǔ)（或并列主語(yǔ)）部分+謂語(yǔ)（并列謂語(yǔ)）部分并列句：簡(jiǎn)單句+并列引導(dǎo)詞+簡(jiǎn)單句；常見(jiàn)的并列引導(dǎo)詞：and，or，so，for，but，notonly...butalso,either...or,neither...nor,when,while，therefore等復(fù)合句:簡(jiǎn)單句+從屬連接詞+簡(jiǎn)單句常見(jiàn)從屬引導(dǎo)詞：

whether,as,if,since等。

所有的句子都是由五個(gè)基本句型轉(zhuǎn)換來(lái)的。

三種句子定義與區(qū)別1、簡(jiǎn)單句

只有一個(gè)主語(yǔ)（或并列主語(yǔ)）和一個(gè)謂語(yǔ)（或并列謂語(yǔ)）構(gòu)成的句子叫做簡(jiǎn)單句。例如：

Alicestudiedhard.LiMingandZhangHuaworkinthesamefactory.BothTonyandJimgotoschoolatseveninthemorning,havelunchthereandcomebackatfiveintheafternoon.主語(yǔ)＋不及物動(dòng)詞（S+V）主語(yǔ)＋及物動(dòng)詞＋賓語(yǔ)(S+V+O)

主語(yǔ)＋系動(dòng)詞＋表(S+V+P)

主語(yǔ)＋及物動(dòng)詞+間賓+直賓(S+V+Oi+Od)

主語(yǔ)＋及物動(dòng)詞＋賓語(yǔ)＋賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)語(yǔ)

(S+V+O+C)簡(jiǎn)單句的五種基本句型五種簡(jiǎn)單句型及例句主語(yǔ)+不及物動(dòng)詞2.主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ)Birdsfly.Busesrunfromdawntillmidnight.Wearestudyinghard.Wehavereadmanybooks.Theydoshoppingattheweekend.WearelearningEnglish.

3.主語(yǔ)+系動(dòng)詞+表語(yǔ)4.主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+間接賓語(yǔ)+直接賓語(yǔ)5.主語(yǔ)+及物動(dòng)詞+賓語(yǔ)+賓語(yǔ)補(bǔ)足語(yǔ)

Wearestudents.Thatsoundsgood.HegaveTom

apresent.Heofferedmeajob.

Wemadehim

ourmonitor.Themanagerthinkstheplan

practical.

Hewillhavehisbike

repaired.Iwon’thaveyou

speakingtoherlikethat.英語(yǔ)系動(dòng)詞分幾類？有哪些？1、表示狀態(tài)系動(dòng)詞：be，說(shuō)明主語(yǔ)狀態(tài)（am、are、is、was、were）2、表示持續(xù)性系動(dòng)詞：keep、stay、lie、stand、remain3、表“像”系動(dòng)詞：“看起來(lái)像”seem、look、appear4、感官系動(dòng)詞：feel、smell、sound、taste等，主語(yǔ)往往是物，不是人5、表示變化系動(dòng)詞：become、grow、turn、fall、get、go6、表終止系動(dòng)詞：prove、turnout1、2、3、4、5、SVSVOSVPSVOOSVOCstart!五種基本簡(jiǎn)單句回顧&造句并列句需把幾個(gè)意思連接在一起時(shí)，可用分號(hào)或把兩個(gè)或幾個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句用并列連詞連接起來(lái)，這種結(jié)構(gòu)即構(gòu)成一個(gè)并列句。用分號(hào)：Wefishedallday;wedidn’tcatchanything.用分號(hào)，后跟一個(gè)連接副詞：Wefishedallday;however,wedidn’tcatchathing.用并列連詞（如and、but、so、yet等）Wefishedallday,but(we)didn’tcatchathing.并列句常用并列連詞

coordinatingconjunctions平行并列連詞:轉(zhuǎn)折并列連詞：因果并列連詞:

選擇并列連詞:and,both…and,notonly…butalso,neither…nor,andthenbut,however,while,yetfor,so,thereforeor,either…orExercise:請(qǐng)用合適的并列連詞把每組句子合并為一個(gè)并列句。Hewastired,sohewenttobed.1.Hewastired.Hewenttobed.

2.Thechildhidbehindhismother'sskirt.Hewasafraidofthedog.3.Hemadeapromise.Hedidn’tkeepit.Hemadeapromise,buthedidn’tkeepit.Thechildhidbehindhismother'sskirt,forhewasafraidofthedog.復(fù)合句=主句+從句由一個(gè)主句和一個(gè)或者一個(gè)以上從句所構(gòu)成的句子。主句:具有完整的句意,可以獨(dú)立存在。從句:句意不完整,不能獨(dú)立存在，必須和主句連用。

復(fù)合句

▲復(fù)合句主要包含以下類型從句：

1.主語(yǔ)從句2.賓語(yǔ)從句3.表語(yǔ)從句4.定語(yǔ)從句5.狀語(yǔ)從句6.同位語(yǔ)從句

▲寫(xiě)作最常使用從句

名詞從句狀語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句Idon’tknowhim.賓語(yǔ)從句thatheisleavingforWashington.whenheisleavingforWashington.whyheisleavingforWashington.howheisleavingforWashington.whetherheisleavingforWashington.賓語(yǔ)從句例句

主語(yǔ)從句thepeople

surprisedThatWhathesaidWhathedid主語(yǔ)Thathedidn’tknowtheanswerthere.定語(yǔ)whoweresittingintheroom.whowerepresent.whosesonswereatwar.whohadsignedthecontract.定語(yǔ)從句區(qū)別限定性定從VS非限定性定從形式

限

ThevillagewhereIgrewupisabeautifulplace.

非

IspentawholeafternoonwithTom,whowasveryhelpful.

功能

限

They’retwogirls.ThegirlthatIlikeiskind.

非

MysisterEllen,whoisnice,isanurse.先行

限

TheEnglishmanthatIknowisPeter.詞

非

Mikesoldthehouse,whichmadehisfatherangry.關(guān)系注意詞無(wú)“，”

，

去掉從句意思不完整

去掉從句不影響表達(dá)

既可以修飾單個(gè)名詞，也可是整個(gè)句子通常修飾單個(gè)名詞或代詞①that不能引導(dǎo)非限定性定從。②whom在非限定從中不能用who代替。③引導(dǎo)非限定從的關(guān)系詞，即使作賓語(yǔ)也不可省略。非限定性和限定性定語(yǔ)從句

試比較Shehasasonwhoisadoctor.（不止一個(gè)）Shehasason,whoisadoctor.（僅有一個(gè)）Hesaidnothingthatmadeherangry.Hesaidnothing,whichmadeherangry.

表語(yǔ)從句That

isthefact.表語(yǔ)what

heneeds.whathegaveme.why

hewaslate.what

hashappened.Theearthisround,___isknowntoall.___isknowntoall,theearthisround___isknowntoallthattheearthisround.as

AsIt定語(yǔ)從句在句首時(shí)只能用as,as具有正如之意，與之搭配的動(dòng)詞一般是固定的as的使用ThisisthesamebookasIlost.ThisisthesamebookthatIlost.這本書(shū)和我丟的那本一模一樣。這本書(shū)就是我丟的那本。狀語(yǔ)從句（九類）1時(shí)間2地點(diǎn)3原因4結(jié)果5目的6條件7讓步8方式9程度狀語(yǔ)從句1)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句Waituntilyouarecalled.Whenspringcomes,leavesturngreen.常用的關(guān)聯(lián)詞有：as,after,before,since,till/until,when,while,assoonas,whenever等2)地點(diǎn)狀語(yǔ)從句Putitwhereyoufoundit.Sitdownwhereveryoulike.常用的關(guān)聯(lián)詞有：where,wherever,anywhere3)原因狀語(yǔ)從句AsIdidn’tknowtheway,Iaskedapoliceman常用的關(guān)聯(lián)詞有：because,as,since4)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句IwasinthebathsothatIdidn’thearthetelephone.常用的關(guān)聯(lián)詞有：so,sothat,suchthat,that5)目的狀語(yǔ)從句I’llshowyousoyouwillseehowit’sdone.常用的關(guān)聯(lián)詞有：so,sothat,inorderthat6)條件狀語(yǔ)從句Ifitsnowstomorrow,wewillbuildasnowman.常用的關(guān)聯(lián)詞有：if,unless,incasethat,onconditionthat…常用的關(guān)聯(lián)詞有：though,although,ifevenif,eventhough,7)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句ThoughI’mfondofmusic,Ican’tplayanyinstrument.常用的關(guān)聯(lián)詞有：as,asif,asthough,how常用的關(guān)聯(lián)詞有：so,sothat,asfaras,solongas8)方式狀語(yǔ)從句Hedidjustasyoutoldhim.9)程度狀語(yǔ)從句Herunssofastthatnobodycancatchupwithhim

指出下列各從句的類型Ibelievethateverythingisgoingonwell.ShewasreadinganovelwhenIcamein.Sheisthegirlwhosingsbestinmyclass.賓語(yǔ)從句狀語(yǔ)從句定語(yǔ)從句Practice用所給連詞連接句子Hehasfoundout.Shewaslate.(why)Hehasfoundoutwhyshewaslate.Istillremembertheday.IfirstwenttoYorkonthatday.(when)IstillrememberthedaywhenIfirstwenttoYork.Practice句子寫(xiě)作原則完整連貫清晰簡(jiǎn)潔多樣清晰

指代要清楚

Parentsoftenmakeselflesssacrificesinordertoeducatetheirchildrenwell.Theyarewillingtodoalltheheavyhouseworksothattheycanburythemselvesinpilesofbooks.Theywantthemtostudyhard.Theylovethemverymuch.修正：

They,theirchildren,themselves.They,theirchildren.They,theirchildren.

Agreatcrowdofshoppersrushedinsideandoutsidehundredsmorewerepushingthroughthedoor.Agreatcrowdofshoppersrushedinside,andoutsidehundredsmorewerepushingthroughthedoor.正確使用標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)完整Mylittlebrotherhasmanyhobbies.Forexample,stampcollectionandpainting.Livinginthecityismoreconvenient.Mylittlebrotherhasmanyhobbies.Forexample,helikesstampcollectionandpainting.Livinginthecityismoreconvenientthanlivinginthecountryside.協(xié)調(diào)&一致AChinesestudentabroadhastodealwithalanguageproblembecausetheyhavetopursuetheirstudyinaforeignlanguage.

Whenonecatchescold,youshouldgetplentyofrestanddrinkhotwater.WhenIarrivedatthepark,Ifind,tomysurprisethatthereweresomanypeoplethere.Somearedoingmorningexerciseswhileothersarejustsittingthere,talkingwitheachothercheerfully.（數(shù)不一致）（人稱不一致）（時(shí)態(tài)不一致）怎樣修改？結(jié)構(gòu)平行Ifeelthattheschoolactivitiesareratherdullandmyclassmatesannoyme.Ifeelthattheschoolactivitiesareratherdullandmyclassmatesareannoying.Iamsureabouthishonestyandthathemeanswell.Iamsureabouthishonestyandhisgoodintentions.垂懸修飾語(yǔ)Tobesuccessful,talentsandluckareneeded.Tobesuccessful,oneneedstalentsandluck.Throughreadingextensively,ourrangeofknowledgecanbebroadened.Throughreadingextensively,wecanbroadenourrangeofknowledge.TolearnEnglishwell,agreatdealofpracticeisneeded.TolearnEnglishwell,you/weneedagreatdealofpractice.簡(jiǎn)潔OnaccountofthefactthatBeoftheopinionthatBecauseofthefactthatHavetheabilitytodoAtthispointintimeThereisnodenyingthefactthatBecauseBelieveBecauseCandoNowNodoubt句子多樣性多樣是指句子形式的多樣性，即長(zhǎng)短句子結(jié)合，結(jié)構(gòu)、類型和修飾語(yǔ)位置的多樣性，疑問(wèn)句，祈使句和感嘆句，簡(jiǎn)單句、并列句和復(fù)合句交替使用。靈活運(yùn)用各種句子結(jié)構(gòu)，如倒裝句、省略句、強(qiáng)調(diào)句、非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞，使文章語(yǔ)言生動(dòng)，富于表現(xiàn)力。要寫(xiě)出好作文，語(yǔ)法正確后首先要掌握句子結(jié)構(gòu)和句式變化及句子類型，下列介紹句子多樣化應(yīng)用.

句子寫(xiě)作多樣化的方法

一、改變句子開(kāi)頭二、巧用連接詞

三、長(zhǎng)短句交替

四、利用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)

句子寫(xiě)作的多樣化

一、改變句子開(kāi)頭

寫(xiě)作中多用與人有關(guān)的詞，用名詞和代詞作句子開(kāi)頭，如

People，We，I，He，They，She等。但這種開(kāi)頭見(jiàn)多了，難免讓人厭倦。試比較：

A.People

throughout

the

country

have

greatly

demanded

all

kinds

of

nutritious

food.

B.There

is

a

點(diǎn)評(píng)：既改變了主語(yǔ)＋謂語(yǔ)＋賓語(yǔ)單調(diào)句型，又把想強(qiáng)調(diào)的意思突出出來(lái)。great

demand

across

the

country

for

all

kinds

of

nutritious

food.

1.用副詞開(kāi)頭

Too

often，students

stray

into

the

habit

of

cheating

on

tests.

2.用同位語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭

Air，water

and

oxygen，everything

that

is

necessary

for

life

3.用狀語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭

Dark

and

empty，the

house

looked

very

differentfrom

the

wayI

remembered

it.

4.用表語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭

Equally

essential

to

the

highest

success

in

learning

a

language

are

intense

interest

plus

persistent

effort.

5.用賓語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭

My

advice

you

would

not

listen

to；my

helps

you

laughed

at.Now

you

will

have

what

you

asked

for.

6.以短語(yǔ)修飾語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭

1）以介詞短語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭

To

me

the

news

was

very

interesting，but

to

my

wife，very

boring.

2）以分詞短語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭

Disturbed

by

the

discord

of

American

life

in

recent

decades，Manchester

took

flight

for

the

pacific

islands.

3）以不定式短語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭

To

pass

the

exam，you

should

work

very

hard.

二、巧用連接詞

簡(jiǎn)單句過(guò)多會(huì)造成簡(jiǎn)單句堆砌；寫(xiě)復(fù)雜句反復(fù)用so，and，then，but，or，however，yet等，非但達(dá)不到豐富表達(dá)方式的目的，反而使句子結(jié)構(gòu)松散、呆板。為了避免這種現(xiàn)象，可以通過(guò)使用連接詞，尤其是表示從屬關(guān)系的連接詞，如

who，which，that，because，since，although，after，as，before，when，whenever，if，unless，as

if等，不僅能夠豐富句型，而且還能夠把思想表達(dá)得更清楚，意義更連貫。例句：

Natural

resources

are

very

limited.They

will

be

exhausted

in

the

near

future.It

is

not

true.But

it

becomes

a

major

concern

around

the

world.This

is

a

widely

accepted

fact.

全簡(jiǎn)單句，之間邏輯關(guān)系含糊不清，意思支離破碎。如用連接詞將單句前后合并，形成主次關(guān)系，就把一個(gè)比較復(fù)雜的內(nèi)容和關(guān)系表達(dá)得層次清楚、結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)。

Youtry:It

is

a

widely

accepted

fact

that

there

is

a

major

concern

around

the

world

for

the

exhaustion

of

limited

natural

resources

in

the

near

future，though

it

is

unlikely

to

be

true.

再如：

The

Mississippi

River

is

one

of

the

longest

rivers

in

the

world，and

in

spring

it

often

overflows

its

banks，and

the

lives

of

many

people

are

endangered.

此句用and把三個(gè)分句一貫到底，表達(dá)乏味，如用關(guān)系代詞which，語(yǔ)義更連貫，語(yǔ)言更流暢.Youtry：

The

Mississippi

River，which

is

one

of

the

longest

rivers

in

the

world，often

overflows

its

banks

in

the

spring

，endangering

the

lives

of

many

people.

三、長(zhǎng)短句交替

長(zhǎng)句和短句各有其優(yōu)點(diǎn)和缺點(diǎn)。長(zhǎng)句，因用定語(yǔ)、狀語(yǔ)較多，限制了概念的外延，增大了概念內(nèi)涵，比較精確、嚴(yán)密，但不夠活潑簡(jiǎn)便。短句，由于字?jǐn)?shù)少，直截了當(dāng)，較簡(jiǎn)潔、明快、有力，但不利于表達(dá)復(fù)雜語(yǔ)義內(nèi)容。在寫(xiě)作中，最好長(zhǎng)短句交替使用。既體現(xiàn)了節(jié)奏要求，也是意義需要。例如：

（1）We

can

imagine

the

beautiful

surroundings.（2）There

are

many

trees

along

the

streets.（3）There

is

a

clean

river

in

the

city.（4）

There

are

many

fishes

in

the

river.（5）There

are

willow

trees

on

one

side.（6）There

are

some

pieces

of

grassland

on

the

other

side.（7）There

are

many

flowers

on

them.

Youtry!簡(jiǎn)單句，結(jié)構(gòu)單一、表達(dá)單調(diào)。用從句、倒裝句修改Just

imagine

the

beautiful

surroundings

if

we

make

our

cities

greener.Green

trees

line

the

streets.A

clean

river

winds

through

the

city，in

which

a

lot

of

fishes

abound.On

one

side

stand

rows

of

willow

treesandon

the

other

side

lies

a

stretch

of

grassland

sprinkled

with

many

flowers.

長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合好

改寫(xiě)后的這段文字，有長(zhǎng)句1、3,也有短句2和4，長(zhǎng)短j結(jié)合抑揚(yáng)頓挫，句型結(jié)構(gòu)變化大，使文章流暢自然，生動(dòng)活潑。四、利用倒裝結(jié)構(gòu)

英語(yǔ)句子基本順序S＋V＋O，偶爾打破常規(guī)，改變某一成分的位置，不僅豐富句型，且能強(qiáng)調(diào)、突出被倒裝的部分，收到意想不到的表達(dá)效果。例如：Youcan’t

find

such

enthusiasm

for

applying

for

hosting

the

2008

Olympic

Gamesin

any

other

places

in

the

world

.

Freshmenarepermittedtotakemake-uptestsonlyunderspecialcircumstances.In

no

other

places

in

the

world

can

you

find

such

enthusiasmfor

applying

for

hosting

the

2008

Olympic

Games.

Onlyunderspecialcircumstancesarefreshmenpermittedtotakemake-uptests

句子多樣性實(shí)例

一、改變時(shí)態(tài)

Thebellisringingnow.

一般

二、改變語(yǔ)態(tài)

Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.一般

三、使用不定式

Heissokindthathecanhelpme.一般

四、使用過(guò)去分詞

Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudents

followedher.一般

Onceitisseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.一般

Theregoesthebell.

特殊

Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.特殊

Heissokindastohelpme.特殊

Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab

特殊.

Onceseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.特殊五使用v-ing

①Whenhearrives，pleasegivemeane-mail．一般②Iftheweatherpermits,Iwillcometomorrow.一般

六

使用名詞性從句

①Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidn’tturnup.一般

②Ihappenedtohavemethim.一般

③Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknows

somanythings.一般

Onarriving/hisarrival,pleasegivemeane-mail.特殊

Iwillcometomorrow,weatherpermitting..特殊

Thefactthathedidn't’tturnup

disappointedeverybody.特殊

IthappenedthatIhadmethim.特殊

Whatsurpriseshimisthatthelittlegirl

knowssomanythings.特殊

七

使用定語(yǔ)從句

Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Her

compositionwaswellwritten.一般

八使用狀語(yǔ)從句

⑴Iwon‘tbelievewhathesays.一般

⑵Ifyoucomebackbeforesixo‘clock,youcangoout.一般

⑶Ifshedoesn’tagree,whatshallwedo?一般Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.特殊

Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon‘tbelieveit.特殊

Youcangooutonconditionthatyoucomebackbeforesixo'clock.

Supposingthatshedoesn’tagree,whatshellwedo?特殊

九使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣Theshipdidn'tsinkbecausethereweretheeffortsofthecaptain.十使用倒裝句型

ThoughI‘mweak，I’llmaketheeffort.一般十一、使用同義詞Studyisimportantforstudentsanditisstudent’simportantjob.Workinghardisveryimportantforstudents.Itwillinfluencestudents’gradesandtheirfuture.同義詞：important,essential,significant，vitalButfortheeffortsofthecaptain,theshipwouldhavesunk.

WeakasIam,I'llmaketheeffort..特殊Studyalwayscomesfirstforstudentsanditisthemostsignificantandessentialdutyforthem.Workinghardplaysavitalroleinstudents’livesforitnotonlyimprovestheirgradesbutalsohasaprofoundeffectontheirfuture.

中國(guó)學(xué)生句子寫(xiě)作常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤1、MistakeType1.Wrongtenses2、MistakeType2Agreementproblems3、MistakeType3Pronounmisuses4、MistakeType4Wronguseofcomparativedegree5、MistakeType5Danglingmodifiers6、MistakeType6ImproperSubordinateClauses7、MistakeType7Impropercollocations8、MistakeType8Faultystructures9、MistakeType9Unnecessaryrepetition10、MistakeType10Unparalleledstructures11、Mistake11Confusedmood12、Mistake12IncompleteSentences13、Mistake13Run-onsentences常見(jiàn)錯(cuò)誤句類型MistakeType1.Wrongtenses[×]IhadalookatmywatchandIknewwhatwillhappen.[√]IhadalookatmywatchandIknewwhatwouldhappen.MistakeType2Agreementproblems[×]Everyoneofushavetherighttobehappy.[√]Everyoneofushastherighttobehappy.MistakeType3Pronounmisuses[×]Ifthehumanswanttolivewell,wemustkeepnatureinbalance.[√]Ifthehumanswanttolivewell,theymustkeepnatureinbalance.MistakeType4Wronguseofcomparativedegree[×]Withtheadvancementofscienceandtechnology,Ibelievethatpeople’slifewillbemoreandmorehappier.[√]Withtheadvancementofscienceandtechnology,Ibelievethatpeople’slifewillbecomehappierandhappier.MistakeType5Danglingmodifiers[×]Inordertogetagoodmark,ittookmemuchtime,whenIdidn’thaveclassesthisweekdays,togetreadyforthisexam.[√]Inordertogetagoodmark,Ispendmuchofmysparetimegettingreadyforthisexam.MistakeType6ImproperSubordinateClauses[×]Ifsomeonewantstogobacktoancientsociety,whichhadnoelectricity,clothandroom,allpeoplewillsayheiscrazy.[√]Ifanyonewantstogobacktoancienttimes,inwhichtherewasnoelectricity,clothorroom,allpeoplewillsayheiscrazy.

MistakeType7Impropercollocations[×]WhenTVcameintotheworld,thepeople’slifehadalargechange.[√]AfterTVcametotheworld,people’slifechangedagreatdeal.MistakeType8Faultystructures隨著中國(guó)經(jīng)濟(jì)的發(fā)展，汽車在中國(guó)進(jìn)入家庭將越來(lái)越普遍。[×]WiththeChineseeconomydeveloping,carsenteringfamiliesinChinaismoreandmorepopular.MistakeType10Unparalleledstructures無(wú)論你做出什么選擇，最終目標(biāo)應(yīng)該是為了更好地工作和進(jìn)一步發(fā)展。[×]Nomatterwhatchoiceyoumade,thefinalgoalshouldbetodobetterworkandfurtherdevelopment.[√]Nomatterwhatchoiceyoumake,thefinalgoalshouldbeforabetterworkandfurtherdevelopment.[√]AsChina’seconomydevelops,therewillbemoreandmorecarsenteringfamiliesinChina.Mistake11Confusedmood總之，如果沒(méi)有電視，我們就可能失去一些能給我們帶來(lái)幸福的東西。[×]Inaword,ifwehavenoTV,wemaylosesomethingwhichbringushappy.[√]Inaword,ifwehadnoTV,wemightlosesomethingwhichbringsushappiness.Mistake12IncompleteSentences[×]Will,likealighttowerinthesea,whichcanconductustoadvanceonarighttrack.[√]Will,likealighttowerinthesea,canconductustoadvanceonarighttrack.Mistake13Run-onsentences[×]Achairmanwashavinglunch,asoldierstoodbyhim.[√]Achairmanwashavinglunch,asoldierstandingbyhim.

海醫(yī)學(xué)生作文中出現(xiàn)的錯(cuò)誤一，中式英語(yǔ)二，詞匯誤用三，句法錯(cuò)用四，不一致一，中式英語(yǔ)A：完全漢語(yǔ)語(yǔ)序：TomyfriendaletterB：名詞動(dòng)用:Ialwaysheadache.C：形容詞動(dòng)用:IafraidIwouldmakesomemistakes.D：介詞動(dòng)用:Myfatheroftennotathome.E：無(wú)主句:Fromheretothecitybybusneedstwohours.Alettertomyfriend.Ialwayshaveaheadache.IamafraidIwouldmakesomemistakes.Myfatherisoftennotathome.Ittakestwohoursfromheretothecitybybus.二，詞匯誤用A:動(dòng)詞類：Thankyoutohavesavedmydog.B:形容詞副詞:Heismuchhigherthanhisbrother.C:介詞類We’regoingtovisitthefarminnextweek.D:代詞類:Mydictionaryismoreexpensivethanher.E:名詞：Iamgladtomakefriendwithyou.F:連詞Becauseheworkedhard,sohegothighmakes.Thankyouforsavingmydog.Heismuchtallerthanhisbrother.We’regoingtovisitthefarmnextweek.Mydictionaryismoreexpensivethanhers.Iamverygladtomakefriendswithyou.Becauseheworkedhard,hegothighmakes.三，句法錯(cuò)用A固定句型：Ithinktherewillhavealotofpeoplehelpme.B簡(jiǎn)單句:Thebuildingisbuiltforustostudy.C并列句:Playingpingpangisverygoodsport,eachofuslikesit.D復(fù)合句:WhenIcooking,myparentscamebake.Ithinktherewillbealotofpeople….Ithinkalotofpeoplewillhelpme.Thebuildingisbuiltforustostudyin.PlayingPingPangisaverygoodsport,andeachofuslikesit.WhenIwascooking,myparentscameback.四，不一致1.Edisonhadabitsmileonherface.his2.Heisoneofthemostpopularteacherinourschool.teachers3.Ilefthersincetwoyears.Ilefthertwoyearsago.4.Attheageof5,hermotherdies.Attheageof5,shelosthermother.Whenshewas5，hermotherdied.

寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)難句

How

to

develop

complex

sentences

寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)句是很多同學(xué)頭痛的事情，寫(xiě)出的文章往往充斥著短句。很多同學(xué)擅長(zhǎng)解剖長(zhǎng)句，而很難寫(xiě)出長(zhǎng)句來(lái)。那么如何擴(kuò)句、寫(xiě)長(zhǎng)句呢？

步驟

1.

寫(xiě)出key

words，確認(rèn)中心骨架

2.

邏輯排列，logical

arrangements

3.

加工潤(rùn)色，colorize具體方法1.寫(xiě)引導(dǎo)詞：包括起承轉(zhuǎn)合例（讓句子變得有邏輯）

２.寫(xiě)插入語(yǔ)（讓句子變得客觀）

3.寫(xiě)從句（讓句子變得多樣）

4.寫(xiě)后置定語(yǔ)或定語(yǔ)從句（讓句子變得高端）

例句：大部分學(xué)生相信業(yè)余工作會(huì)使他們有更多機(jī)會(huì)發(fā)展人際交往能力，這對(duì)他們未來(lái)找工作是非常有好處的。

Most

ofstudents

believethat

part-timejobscanprovidethemwithopportunitiestodevelopcommunicationability.Itisgoodfortheirlookingforjobsinthefuture.

A

majority

ofstudentshold

the

view

that

part-timejobscanprovidethemwithopportunitiestoimprovetheirsocialabilities/interpersonalskills,whichisbeneficialtotheirjob-huntingaftertheirgraduation.

1.寫(xiě)引導(dǎo)詞：包括起承轉(zhuǎn)合例起:

in

the

first

place首先,

first

and

foremost,

to

begin/start

with

承:

second

(ly),in

the

second

place,

furthermore,

moreover,

what’s

more,

in

addition,

besides

轉(zhuǎn):but,

however,

on

the

contrary與此相反,

in

contrast/comparison相比之下,

nonetheless;

nevertheless盡管如此,然而;合:

last

but

not

least最后同樣重要的，so,

therefore,

in

conclusion最后，綜上所述,

to

conclude最后,

in

a/one

word,

in

general,

例:

for

instance,

for

example,

such

as,

When

it

comes

to

說(shuō)起…

經(jīng)典引導(dǎo)句型

There

is

no

doubt

that/in

saying

that…

There

is

no

exaggeration夸張

in

saying

that…

It

is

known

to

us

all

that,…

It

is

well-known

that…

It

is

apparent/obvious顯然…that…It

is

not

hard

to

understand

that…

It

is

not

too

much

to

say

that…

It

is

commonly/widely/generally

agreed

that…

(acknowledged公認(rèn)的

that…/

believed

that)

２.寫(xiě)插入語(yǔ)插入語(yǔ)多半用逗號(hào)隔開(kāi)，可能是一個(gè)詞、一個(gè)短語(yǔ)或一個(gè)句子，例如：that

is

to

say換句或說(shuō)to

a

certain

extent在某種程度上

to

some

degree一定程度上，to

a

larger

degree在很大程度上

for

one

reason

or

another因?yàn)槟撤N原因to

put

it

in

another

way換言之

directly

or

indirectly

直接或間接

in

other

words

換句話說(shuō)

，as

a

matter

of

fact

事實(shí)上

常用插入語(yǔ)副詞：indeed的確，surely無(wú)疑，obvi