高考作文評(píng)卷

高考閱卷方式：1.分工明確，專(zhuān)人負(fù)責(zé)2.監(jiān)控嚴(yán)格，時(shí)間統(tǒng)一3.標(biāo)準(zhǔn)清晰，檔次分明請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合具體事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。

Smallthingsmakeabigdifference.Thesmallthingsyoudocanmakeusaresponsiblememberofthesociety.注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題；②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限；③內(nèi)容必須結(jié)合你生活中的具體事例；④文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；⑤詞數(shù)不少于120左右，如引入提示語(yǔ)則不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。評(píng)分原則①本題總分為30分，按5個(gè)檔次給分。②詞數(shù)少于120，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。③評(píng)分時(shí)，先根據(jù)文章的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言初步確定其所屬檔次，然后以該檔次的要求來(lái)衡量，確定或調(diào)整檔次，最后給分。評(píng)分檔次的確定應(yīng)在內(nèi)容符合題目要求的前提下側(cè)重語(yǔ)言的表達(dá)。④評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)注意的主要內(nèi)容為：內(nèi)容切題，語(yǔ)言表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確、多樣、連貫、得體。⑤拼寫(xiě)與標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)是語(yǔ)言準(zhǔn)確的一個(gè)方面，評(píng)分時(shí)，應(yīng)視其對(duì)交際的影響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫(xiě)及詞匯用法均可接受。⑥如書(shū)寫(xiě)太潦草，以至影響辨認(rèn)，將分?jǐn)?shù)降低一個(gè)檔次。我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我我各檔次的給分范圍和要求第五檔25-30分完全完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。所有內(nèi)容與提示吻合。應(yīng)用了較豐富的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯應(yīng)用準(zhǔn)確，雖有個(gè)別錯(cuò)誤，但不影響意義的表達(dá)；具備較強(qiáng)的語(yǔ)言運(yùn)用能力。恰當(dāng)使用了語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。完全達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。第四檔19-24分完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。主要內(nèi)容與提示吻合。應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能滿(mǎn)足任務(wù)的要求。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯應(yīng)用基本準(zhǔn)確，個(gè)別錯(cuò)誤對(duì)意義的表達(dá)有一定影響。較恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂昧苏Z(yǔ)句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構(gòu)較緊湊。達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。第三檔13-18分基本完成了試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。主要內(nèi)容與提示比較吻合。應(yīng)用的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯能基本滿(mǎn)足任務(wù)的要求。有一些語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)與詞匯的錯(cuò)誤，對(duì)意義的表達(dá)有較大影響。基本能使用語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，全文結(jié)構(gòu)比較松散。整體而言，基本達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫(xiě)作目的。第二檔7-12分僅完成試題規(guī)定的部分任務(wù)。主要內(nèi)容與提示基本吻合。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單調(diào)，應(yīng)用詞匯有限。有較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的錯(cuò)誤，影響了意義的表達(dá)。語(yǔ)句間的連接成分運(yùn)用不當(dāng)，缺少連貫性。信息未能清楚地傳達(dá)給讀者。第一檔1-6分未完成試題規(guī)定的任務(wù)。主要內(nèi)容與提示不太吻合。語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)單一，應(yīng)用詞匯十分有限。有較多語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)或詞匯方面的嚴(yán)重錯(cuò)誤，嚴(yán)重影響了意義的表達(dá)。缺乏語(yǔ)句間的連接成分，內(nèi)容不連貫。信息未能傳達(dá)給讀者。

Asamemberinoursociety,Icanneveremphasizetheimportanceofmakingcontributionstothesocietytoomuch.Asamatteroffact,itisthesmallthingswedothatshowoursenseofresponsibility.Whenitcomestothistopic,thestoryofmyselfisthecaseinpoint.Istillrememberthetimewhenourclasswasselectedtodocleaninginasmallcommunity.Mopsandotherkindsoftoolsinhand,weworkedhard,regardlessofawfulheatunderthesun.wedidallthetaskssocarefullythatitwasnotuntilduskthatwefinishedcleaning.Tiredaswewere,wefeltproudofourselves.Whatatiredbutgracefulday!ThemostinstructivelessonI’velearntfromtheexperienceisthateveryoneisadequatetodosomethingsmallbutremarkableinordertomakeoursocietycolorful.Onlyinthiswaycanwemakeourselvesaresponsiblememberofthesociety.第五檔27-28分漂漂亮亮靚

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knowntousall,smallthingscanmakeabigdifference.Inourdailylife,evenifthethingswedoareverysmall,westillcanmakeusaresponsiblememberofthe

society.Forexample,oneweekend,ourteacherstookustoaparkwherewewereabouttoplanttrees.Withthehelpofourteachers,everyoneatleastplantedonetree.Someenthusiasticstudentsplantedmore.Everyoneofuswasreallyhappytodosomethingforoursociety.Inthemeanwhile,wewereconfidentthattherewouldbeaforestintheparkmanyyearslater.Lastweek,Iwenttothepark.ThosetreesweplantedtenyearsagohavebeentallerthanI.whataexcitingthing!Wedomakeusaresponsiblememberofthesociety.Althoughwejustdidasmallthing,butitdidmakeabigdifference.Don’thesitatetodosmallthingsjustbecausetheyaresmall.Doit,andyouwillseethebigchangeyoumake.Letusbearesponsiblememberofthesociety.

第四檔22-23分清清楚楚順

Itgoeswithoutsayingthatthesmallthingswedocanmakeusaresponsiblememberofthesociety.Asaconsequence,smallthingsmakeabigdifference.

Threeyear

ago,Ifailedinanimportantexam.SoIhadtogotoaoldschool.Beforetheexam,Ithoughtthequestionswereveryeasyformetowritedown.SoIdidn’trealizesomesmallthingsabouttheexam.Eventually,Ifailed.Asmyownexperense,Icanfirmlyconvincedthatsmallthingswillmakeabigdifference.Andthesmallthingswillbehelpfulforsucceed.Ifyoudon’tnoticethesmallthings,youmustbefailed.Finally,Iwillgiveyousomeadvice.Inyourlife,pleaseremembernoticethesmallthings.Andthen,youwillsucceed.第三檔15-16分馬馬虎虎行

Asiswidelyacknowledged,smallthingsmakeabigdifference.IlearnedthisfromoneofmyexperiencethatIwasthroughSeniorOneschoollife.Oneday,whenIwasplaybadmintonwithmyclassmatesinmyPEclass,Imistake,soweclassnotgotagoodgrups.Ifeelnothing.Butmyclassmatetoldme:‘‘yourmistakeisabletoourteamlost.”IrealizedImistakeisveryimportant.Iwassofroursetrted.thatmyclassmates’confortandencourloagementaswellastheteacheradviceandinstactiontohelpedmedevotemysparetimetopractingplayingeveryday.Itwasn’tlongbefore.Wearewinonourschoolgame.Fromthisexperience,Iamdefinietlyconvincedthatasmallthingsmakeabigdifference,apeoplethemistakecanwilltotheclasslast.Thesmallthingswedocanmakeusaresponsiblememberofthesociety.第二檔9-10分糊里糊涂糊

Yearofmyschoollivetoughtmealotofmanythings.Whatimpressedmethesmallthingswedocanmakeusaresponsiblememberofthesociety.Memoriesbacktomy.justgotohighschool.thattimeIalway.Ididn’tnodotheteachersspeakandIdoreadmybook.thattimeIthinklistentoteachersspeakingisn’tnoimpant.Ithinkthisisasmallthing.NolistenIcandoit,butIntheexammygradeisfanlandlostisclass,theheadgotomy.Say:‘‘youwrong,listenissmall,butlistenteacherspeakyou.candoit.IthinkI’mwory