Unit 4 談論問題,提出建議話題作文寫作指導課件 2022-2023學年人教版八年級英語下冊

Unit4Whydon'tyoutalktoyourparents?單元話題滿分范文必背

單元寫作指導【話題解析】

本單元以“談論問題,提出建議”為話題,該話題常見的書面表達形式是訴說煩惱"和給出建議"。根據(jù)提示寫自已的問題和煩惱及征求建議.人際溝通與情感交流既有家庭方面的，也有社會層面的：人際溝通方面存在的問題。在家庭，父母與子女之間的溝通；在社會，朋友或同事之間的交流等。對人際溝通存在的問題給出一些建議。寫作此類話題作文的常用常用短語有：bestrictwithsb.對某人要求嚴格becomefat變胖allowsb.todosth.允許某人做某事dealwith處理

laughat嘲笑copyone'shomework抄某人的作業(yè)

getbadgrades成績不理想

havenofriends沒有朋友

underalotofpressure壓力很大toomuchhomework太多家庭作業(yè)domoreexercise多鍛煉asksb.forhelp向某人求助makeaproperplan制定恰當?shù)挠媱漢aveagoodcommunicationwithsb.和某人好好溝通getintoagoodhighschool/university進入一所好的高中/大學feelnervousbeforeexams考前緊張haveafightwithsb.和某人吵架getalongwithsb.與某人和諧相處寫作此類話題作文的常用表達有：1.Ihavesomuchhomework(todo)thatIdon'thaveanyfreetimetodothingsIlike.我有太多的作業(yè)要做以致于沒有空閑時間做自己喜歡的事2.Parentsarealwayssobusythattheydon'thaveanyfreetimetoplaywiththeirchildren.父母總是非常的忙碌，以致于沒有時間陪伴他們的孩子3.Myparentsdon'tallowmetohangoutwithmyfriends.我的父母不允許我和朋友出去逛街。4.lt'snoteasybeingyourage,andit'snormaltohavethesefeelings.像你這個年齡，這對你來說不容易，有這種感覺也是正常的。5.Istudieduntilmidnightlastnight,soIdidn'tgetenoughsleep.

我昨晚一直學習到半夜，所以我沒有睡好6.Myparentsgivemealotofpressureaboutschool.

我的父母給了我很大的關于學校的壓力。寫作此類話題作文的常用表達有：7.Asastudent,lifeshouldn'tjustbeaboutgrades.After-schoolactivitieslikesportsandhangingoutwithfriendsareimportant,too.對于學生來說，生活不應該僅僅關于成績。課外活動如運動和與朋友逛一逛也是非常重要的。8.Thesedays,Chinesechildrenaresometimesbusieronweekendsthanweekdaysbecausetheyhavetotakesomanyafter-schoolclasses.如今，中國的孩子有時候周末比上學的時候更忙碌，因為他們必須上許多補習班。9.Insomefamilies,competitionstartsveryyoungandcontinuesuntilthekidsgetolder.在一些家庭中，競爭在孩子很小的時候就開始了，然后一直持續(xù)到孩子長大。10.Whynottalkabouttheseideaswithyourteachers為什么不和你的老師談談這些想法呢？11Iwillneverforgettheday.我永遠忘不了這天。Itwasreallytheworstdayofmylife.這真是我人生中最糟糕的一天.寫作要點∶

1.與父母和諧相處很重要;2.與父母和諧相處的做去或建議;（1）理解與尊重父母;

（2）多與父母交流。（3）與父母和諧相處的感受第一段—第一段開門見山，表明自己的觀點It'sveryimportantforustogetonwellwithourparents.Buthowcanwegetalongwellwithourparents?Hereissomeofmyadvice.第二段—介紹與父母和諧相處的具體建議Weshouldunderstandandrespectourparents.Parentstalkmuchbecausetheycareaboutus.Wearesupposedtolistentothem.Whenwewanttotellthemouropinions,we'dbetterbeinapoliteway.Weshouldalsotalkwiththemaboutourhappinessandtellthemaboutourproblems.Whenwearefee,we'dbetterhelpthemdosomethings第三段—接著介紹自己與父母和諧相處的感受;最后總結全文。

Igetonwellwithmyparents.Ienjoysharingeverythingwithmyparents.Myparentsarelikemybestfriends.TheyareproudwhenIdosomethingwellandtheytrytheirbesttohelpmewhenIhavetrouble.Weloveeachother.Let'sgetonwellwithourparentsbecausetheyareourparents作文范例1：

假設你是張偉，你的英國筆友Frank來信告訴你，他因長時間打游戲與父母發(fā)生了爭吵，很難過。請你根據(jù)以下要點及要求，用英語寫封回信。要點：1.長時間打游戲是錯的，父母是對的；2．打游戲浪費時間，傷害眼睛，不利于學習；3．向父母道歉，與他們溝通；4．不打游戲，努力學習，幫父母做家務。要求：1.必須包括以上所有要點，可適當發(fā)揮；2．詞數(shù)90左右(開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù))；3．不能出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名及地名?！緦懽魉悸贰炕匦艃热?.表達關切之情；2．表明立場；3．分析對錯；4．提出解決問題的辦法；5．表達美好祝愿

DearFrank，

【范文展示】I'vereceivedyourletterandIknowyouarguedwithyourparents.Ireallyworryaboutyou.Ithinkit'swrongforyoutoplaygamesforalongtime.Yourparentsarerightbecauseplayinggameswastesalotoftimeandit'sbadforyoureyesandstudy.Youshouldunderstandandrespectyourparentsandgetonwellwiththem.Inthisway，youcanbehappyandimproveyourselfquickly.Ialsothinkthatyoushouldmakeanapologytoyourparents，foryouhavemadethemverysadandangry.Whenyoumeetsometrouble，you'dbettercommunicatewiththem.Don'tplaygamesanymore，studyhardandnevergiveup.Ifyou'refree，youcanhelpthemwithhousework.Pleasebehappyandeverythingwillbebetter.Yours，ZhangWei作文范例2：中學生在成長過程中經常會碰到一些煩惱。假設你是李華，請根據(jù)下表提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，在班會上談談你遇到的煩惱以及你自己的做法。你的煩惱

你的做法個頭不高，相貌平常

不必在意，相信自己父母不理解，朋友少

學會溝通，友善待人學習壓力大，課外活動少

……(自主發(fā)揮，至少兩點)要求：1．詞數(shù)100左右。開頭及結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；2．所寫內容必須包括表格中所有的信息，并作適當?shù)陌l(fā)揮；3．不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名、地名等相關信息。思路構建構思列綱提出問題①I'mnottallandI'mnotgood--looking.②Myparentscan'tunderstandwhatIdoandsay.Ihavefewfriendsatschool.③Ihavetoomuchpressureinstudy.Ihavefewafter-schoolactivities.提出建議①Idon'tcareaboutthese,andIbelieveinmyself.②IcommunicatewiththemandI'mfriendlytomyclassmatesatschool.③Irelaxmyself:Idosportsorlistentomusic.Igoshoppingwithmyparentsorfriends.Helloeveryone，IamLiHua.I'dliketotalkaboutmyproblemsandhowIdealwiththem.I'mnottallandI'mnotgood-looking.ButIdon'tcareaboutthese.Ialwaysbelieveinmyself.Myparentssometimescan'tunderstandwhatIdoandsay.Ihavefewfriendsatschool.SoIoftencommunicatewiththemandI'malwaysfriendlytomyclassmatesatschool.Ihavetoomuchpressureinstudytooandoftenhavefewafter-schoolactivities.SoIoftenrelaxmyself.WhenIhavefreetime,Ioftendosportsorlistentomusic.SometimesIgoshoppingwithmyparentsorfriends.Inthisway,wecangetbettergradesandenjoythecolorfullife.That’sall.Thankyou!單元話題滿分范文必背：

你將代表學校參加市中學生英語演講比賽，演講的題目是Learningtogetalongwithourparents。請你用英語寫一篇演講稿內容要點如下：現(xiàn)象：經常跟父母發(fā)火，甚至幾天不說話。原因：父母過分關注分數(shù)；我們…措施(不少于三點)：

我們應該和父母溝通；我們…；我們…要求：1.表達清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫；2．必須包括所有相關信息，可作適當發(fā)揮；3.詞數(shù)：80-100(劃線部分為已給開頭與結尾，不計入總詞數(shù))。參考范文

LearningtogetalongwithourparentsGoodmorning，ladiesandgentlemen!Todaymyspeech(演講)topic(主題)isLearningtogetalongwithourparents.Thesedays,mostofusfeelithardtogetalongwithoutparents.Weoftengetangrywithourparentsandevendon’ttalktothemforseveraldays.(開篇點題。引出觀點：存在相處困難的現(xiàn)象)Herearesomeofthereasons.First,ourparentsonlycareaboutourmarks(分數(shù))anditmakesusstressed.Second,wedon’twanttocommunicatewiththem.(展開表述。闡述第二條內容要點：列舉產生這種現(xiàn)象的原因)It’stimeforustochange.First,wecancommunicatewithourparentsbysharingoutjoysandworrieswiththem.Thenwecanhelpdosomehouseworktoshowourloveforthem.Finally,weshouldspendenoughtimeonourschoolworksothattheywon’tfeelworriedaboutus.(結尾綜述。闡述第三條內容要點：改變這種現(xiàn)象的措施)That’sallformyspeech(演講).Thankyou!訓練題目1：

★請你給雜志社寫一封信，來表述你對:家長們把孩子送到各種各樣的課外輔導班這件事的看法?！痉段恼故尽浚篒don’treallyagreewiththeideaofsendingkidstoafter-schoolclasses.Becausealltheseactivitiescancausealotofstressforchildren.Ifthere’stoomuchpressure,itwillbebadforachild’sdevelopment.Inmyopinion,kidsshouldhavetimetorelaxandthinkforthemselves,too.Ibelieveit’sbetterthatparentsshouldn’tcomparetheirchildrenwithotherchildren.It’scrazyandnotfair.Perhapsparentsshouldlettheirkidsbekids.Althoughit’snormaltowantsuccessfulchildren,it’sevenmoreimportanttohavehappychildren

訓練題目2：

面對現(xiàn)在越來越多的中小學生帶手機進校園,今年春季教育部發(fā)布了一項通知,表示了禁止中小學生帶手機進校園。請你根據(jù)同學們的不同觀點，寫一篇文章，談談自己的看法。參考詞匯：beconvenient,connectwith,information,bebadfor,cheatintheexams...主要觀點贊成1.便于和父母聯(lián)系2.能用手機查詢信息3.適當放松，能聽音樂……反對1.玩手機不利于學習2.使用手機對眼睛不好。3.考試用手機作弊……你的觀點及建議……Nowadays,smartphonesarepopularamongstudents.Shouldwebeallowedtousesmartphonesatschoolornot?Ourstudentshavedifferentopinions.Somestudentsthinktheycanusesmartphonesatschool.First,it’sconvenientforthemtocalltheirparents,teachersorfriendswhentheyhaveproblems.Second,theycansearchforwhattheyneedonsmartphones.Forexample,theycanlookupnewwordsandlookthroughnews.Third,theycanlistentomusictorelaxthemselvesonsmartphones.However,somestudentsdisagree.Theythinkusingsmartphonesatschoolisawasteoftime.Also,manystudentsspendtoomuchtimeongames,whichisbadfortheireyes.What'sworse,somestudentsmaycheatinexamswiththesmartphones.Inmyopinion.studentscan’tusesmartphonesatschool.Studentsshouldspendmoretimedoingsportsorhavingfunwithfriends.Theyshouldalsopaymoreattentiontotheirstudy.Iftheydothese,they’llbehappierandhealthier.

寫作實踐1

升入九年級之后，你有沒有經常和父母爭執(zhí)周末是否可以外出活動？請以“Areteenagersallowedtogooutonweekends?”為題，根據(jù)所給提示寫一篇英語短文。寫作提示：1.What’syourparents’opinion?2.What’syouropinion?寫作要求：1.語句通順，條理清晰，詳略得當，書寫工整；2.100詞左右，題目和開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)

【參考范文】金典范文Areteenagersallowedtogooutonweekends?IoftenarguewithmyparentsaboutwhetherteenagersshouldgooutonweekendsafterIaminGrade9.Myparentsthinkthatteenagersshouldstayathometogoovertheirlessons.Teenagersshouldalsohaveenoughtimetohaveagoodrestonweekends.Also,teenagersaresupposedtohelptheirparentsdosomehousework.Inmyopinion,weteenagersneedtogooutwithourfriendsforfunsothatwecanrelaxourselvesafterabusyweek.Andwecanshareideaswitheachother.What'smore,wecanalsotakesomeexerc