定語從句在寫作中運(yùn)用(教師版)

定語從句在作中的運(yùn)用contradictionn.Sayingthatconflictswithsthsaidorwrittenbysb。disagreement反駁；矛盾obstacleThingstandsinthewaypreventsprogress障；阻礙approvaln.Showingorsayingonethinksacceptableorsatisfactory贊成；承認(rèn)revelationn.Makingsththatwassecretor。啟；揭示criticn.Personevaluatesanddescribesthequalityofsth,espworksofart,literature,music,etc批家；評論家sponsorn.Personwhoagreestoberesponsibleforsth。personputsforward。eent,etc,usuallyinreturnforadvertising擔(dān)人；發(fā)起人；贊助者merchantn.Personwhobuysandsellsgoodsinlargequantities商Burglarn.Personwhobreaksintohouses,shops,etcordertosteal賊Sequencen.Orderthingsoreventsfollowoneanother順序；序列10.SquirrelSmalltree-climbinganimalwithlongfurrytailthateatsnutsandalsostoresthemforthewinter松鼠一、寫作中常用的幾種定語從句．關(guān)系代詞引導(dǎo)的語從句關(guān)系代詞，whom，，，引導(dǎo)的定語從句是寫作的一大重點(diǎn)，尤其是which和引的非限制性定語從句在高范文中更是屢見不鮮。Actually,wecan'tineverythingthatwe福建高考滿分作)Asailorwhowillneverbecomeexcellentsailor.(2013·福建高考滿分作文)沒經(jīng)歷過暴風(fēng)雨的水手永遠(yuǎn)不會(huì)成為一名優(yōu)秀的水手。Iamdeeplyimpressedbythegreatchangesthathavetakenplaceintheschooloverthepastthreeyears

(2011·福建高考滿分作youexpectedencouragescreativemindsfullplaytoDIY遼高考滿分作)Ibookstorewaswaitingforthegreenlightataabouttenwascar,whichdroveoff湖北高考滿分作文thewhilearethespecialforthisfestival.(2013·遼高考滿分作)人們可以一邊吃月餅一邊賞月，月餅是這個(gè)節(jié)日的特殊食品。．關(guān)系副詞引導(dǎo)的語從句關(guān)系副詞引導(dǎo)的定語從句是指whenwhere，why引導(dǎo)的定語從句。/

Thereasonpeoplecelebrateisthattheyitthewhenthemoonisandbrightestinthepeoplewilltogethereatingmooncakesthefull遼寧考滿分作)人們慶祝這個(gè)節(jié)日的原因是他相信這時(shí)候是一年中月亮最滿最亮的時(shí)候人聚在一起吃月餅、賞滿月。．“詞＋”引導(dǎo)的定語從句Yearsofhavemealotofofwhichmostiscarenothurtwithourdeliberatelyorby湖北高考滿分作文多年的校園生活教會(huì)了我很多東西使印象最深的是我們應(yīng)該盡量不要用言語傷害別人，無論是故意還是無意。[即演用適當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)系詞填空．ordinaryjobsarealsopromotingofthe廣高考滿分作)．a(chǎn)llcleaningisoneofhardestwork.(2013·廣東高考分作)．youexpectedwhichencouragesmindsfullplaytoDIY遼高考滿分作)．ereryonewillperiodsthingsgoingsoyoudontoworry分文)．waseducatedatBeijingUniversity,wentheradvancedstudyabroad.二、定語從句的寫法定語從句是比較難掌握而又是學(xué)生在寫作中喜歡嘗試的復(fù)雜句，因此在寫作時(shí)可采用“三步法”：第一步：寫出兩個(gè)簡單句。第二步：在一個(gè)簡單句中找出一個(gè)要修飾的詞匯，這個(gè)詞在兩個(gè)簡單句中都有。第三步：把另一個(gè)簡單句改成定語從句，要特別注意引導(dǎo)詞的選擇。[示]第一步：寫出兩個(gè)簡單句。①TheforeignerisfromCanada.②Hevisitedclassyesterday.第二步：在句①中找出一個(gè)要修飾的詞匯。第三步：用句②充當(dāng)定語從句foreigner為行詞指人，句②中的代詞he代foreigner且句子中作主語，故用who或作導(dǎo)詞。TheforeignerclassyesterdayCanada./

[即演把下列每組題中的兩個(gè)簡單句合并為一個(gè)含有定語從句的復(fù)合句．I'velongedthedays.Iwillbebeindependentthen.．Ihavefriend.fatheran．plantedtrees.didn'tneedwater.．ThisbestItcanbe．senttheelderlysomefruits,cleanedthehadagoodwiththem.lonely.had_a_good_chat_with_them.三、定語從句寫作的幾點(diǎn)注意事．誤用關(guān)系詞誤：IliveinBeijing,istheofChina.正：IliveinBeijing,of誤：Ihavefriend,正：Ihavefriend,whosenameis．句子殘缺誤：weremanytookintheEnglishcompetition.正：weremanywhotookpartinEnglishcompetition.誤：favorofproposal,hands.正：areinfavorofhands.．有多余詞誤：ThefilmIsawitnightwasvery正：ThefilmIsawnightwasvery誤：Lastweek,IreturnedtothevillagewhereIthere正：Lastweek,IreturnedtothevillagewhereIup．定語從句與并列的混淆誤：Infact,smokingisbadhabit,itdoesgreatpeople's正：Infact,smokingisbadhabit,which/anditdoesharmtopeople'shealth.誤：Histoldhimtimestoplaytheitdidn't正：Histoldhimtimestoplaytheit[即演單句改錯(cuò)/

．findjob答案：Those后加．Somesongsremindusofpeople答案：→who(m)．Thisfactoryweityear.________________答案：掉it．Shebeenateacherfor30yearsinthebeapoor答案：where→which/that．Asachild,Jackstudiedinvillageit答案：it→which或it加and[綜演練提升I.用定從句翻譯短語一個(gè)叫Tom的男孩教我們語的老師昨天我媽給我的錢矗立在邊的樓房一位皮被偷了的女士我們在場工作的開心日子她工作地方她沒有作業(yè)的原因總結(jié)：定語從句可以修飾主句的同成分—主語，賓語，表語非限制性定語從句，有時(shí)可以修整個(gè)主句。1.Thegirlstudieshardisverybeautiful.2.Iknowgirlstudiesisgirlstudieshard./

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II.翻譯句子不努力習(xí)的學(xué)生不會(huì)通過考試的。Thestudentsdonstudyhardwillnot她上周的裙子非常好看。Thewhichsheboughtlastweeknice這就是爸爸工作的地方。Thisisplacewherehisworks.你們已取得了很大的進(jìn)步，這使老師非常高興。greatmakesteacher眾所周，他是一個(gè)好學(xué)生。knowntousall,a北京是國的首都，它是一座美麗的城市。Beijing,whichthecapitalcityofChina,isverybeautiful.魯迅的名是周樹人。在他的一生他寫了很多小說和散文prose)Luxun,whoseisnovelsprosesinhisIII.欣賞句子我總是會(huì)參觀一博物館些博物館對于拓寬視野豐知識(shí)來說是不應(yīng)錯(cuò)過的。Ivisitmuseumswhich_should_not_be_missedwidenmywellasmyknowledge.山高考滿分作)當(dāng)今父為他們的獨(dú)生子女做所有的事情使得這些獨(dú)生子女非常依賴于父母Nowadayseverythingfortheirchildren,badly.(2013·建高考滿分作文)．你知道，中國結(jié)非常受中國人的喜歡。As_you_know,_Chineseknotsarewith(2013·課標(biāo)全國卷Ⅱ滿分作文)．你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市參加一個(gè)國際會(huì)議。know,myuncleLiMinggoingcitywherelivetoaninternational新標(biāo)全國卷Ⅰ分作)．我經(jīng)常想起被陌生人的言語傷害和侮辱的時(shí)候，甚至有時(shí)是來自熟悉的人。IthinkaboutwhenIfelthurtinsultedbyruderemarksstrangerssometimesevenfromacquaintances.(2013·北高考滿分作)IV.寫句子例子：JackisfromCanada.Heinourschoolforthreeyearslearnwell.改寫：aofour,from.Hehasstudiedin/

schoolfor.HeoftenhelpslearnEnglishandwell.改寫：JackcomesfromCanada.studentofwherehestudiedfordoesheoftenhelpbuthespeaksfluentlywell實(shí)戰(zhàn)演練：Ourclassbig。Itof12girlsandboys.themmain