高中英語(yǔ)作文建議信公開(kāi)課【】課件

Aletterofgivingadvice

1.建議信是向收信人對(duì)某事提出寫(xiě)信人的建議和忠告。2建議信有可能是寫(xiě)給個(gè)人，就其遇到的某個(gè)問(wèn)題提出自己的看法和觀點(diǎn)；也可能是寫(xiě)給某個(gè)組織和機(jī)構(gòu)，就改進(jìn)其效勞提出建議或忠告。3建議信要寫(xiě)出寫(xiě)信的原因，建議的內(nèi)容，提出建議的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，語(yǔ)氣一定要禮貌領(lǐng)先。因此建議信要寫(xiě)得簡(jiǎn)明扼要、目的明確、具有合理性和說(shuō)服力。寫(xiě)作攻略Heading說(shuō)明寫(xiě)作意圖；一兩個(gè)句子2.Body提出具體建議；層次清楚3.Ending總結(jié)；照應(yīng)主題如何給閱卷人以好的第一直觀印象整體三局部建議信寫(xiě)作的本卷須知：a．這類文章一定要符合英語(yǔ)信件的根本格式。b．這類文章的根本時(shí)態(tài)多用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來(lái)時(shí)。

Dear

XXX,

①

Iamglad/sorrytohearthatyouhavedifficultyinlearningEnglish.

②Ifeelthatitismydutytomakesomesuggestionsconcerningenvironmentalprotection.

Hereissomeadvicethatmaybebeneficialtoyou.Firstly，….

Secondly,…．Thirdly,….

Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions

useful.Yours,XXX寫(xiě)作語(yǔ)料庫(kù)：英語(yǔ)建議信的常用詞句

A.建議信開(kāi)頭常用句式(對(duì)應(yīng)材料,說(shuō)明寫(xiě)作意圖)1．AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper/ontheinternet,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2．Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3．Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter.4.Ifeelthatitismydutytomakesomesuggestionsconcerning….5.Iamwritingtosharesomeadviceon…withyou.B.建議信第二段常用句式,給出建議及理由，井然有序。1.

Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…我想如果你能……可能會(huì)更好2.

Inmypersonalopinion,itwouldbewiseofyoutotakethefollowingactions.在我看來(lái)，如果你能采取以下措施，將是一種明智的選擇。3.

Firstly，…Secondly,…．Thirdly,….4.

To

begin

with,….In

addition,….What’s

more,….Last

butnotleast,….建議信結(jié)尾常用句式

1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoseriousconsideration.我相信你會(huì)認(rèn)真考慮我的建議的。2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.我希望這些建議/意見(jiàn)/看法對(duì)你來(lái)說(shuō)實(shí)用/有用/有幫助。3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.如果這方面有所改善我會(huì)非常開(kāi)心的。假設(shè)你是李華，在校園英語(yǔ)論壇〔forum〕上看到一些同學(xué)的帖子，他們?cè)诰腿绾螌W(xué)好英語(yǔ)尋求幫助。請(qǐng)你以Bookworm的網(wǎng)名給他們回帖，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)提出一些建議。內(nèi)容提示：1〕培養(yǎng)學(xué)習(xí)興趣；2〕找到適合的學(xué)習(xí)方法；3〕勤學(xué)好問(wèn)，多實(shí)踐。詞數(shù)100左右改錯(cuò)1.I’llhelpyouinyourEnglish2.MyEnglishisnotverywell.3.Finishit

onyourself.4.Therearesomeadvise.5.Don’tafraidofEnglish.6.Setupalearningaim,goaheadtoachieveit.7.Setdowntheknowledgeintheclass8.Youmustlistencarefullyandfollowteacherssaid.9.Onlyifyoureadaboutitaheadofschedule,youwilllearnitbetter.with/OnyourownisbeandwhatadvicewillyouWell---goodOn----byIamsureyou’llbesuccess.Youcansetdownthatyouthinkisimportant.successfulYoucansetdownwhatyouthinkisimportant.allBeautifulsentencesinyourcompositions

1.HereissomeusefuladviceforyouabouthowtolearnEnglishwell(class2JirunZe)2.HearingthatyouareintroublewithEnglish,I’dliketogiveyousomeadviceonhowtogetalongwellwithEnglish.(Class1MaguoQin)3.NoonecanfailtonoticethefactthatlisteningandreadingareplayinganimportantroleinlearningEnglish.(Class1HanXu)4.IwillgiveyousomenecessaryadvicewhichcanimproveyourEnglish.(Class7XieShuang)5.Noonecandenythefactthatitisimportanttolistentotheteachercarefully.(Cass7LiuxinYan)6.Onlyintheseways,canyouhaveagoodcommandofEnglish.假設(shè)你是李華，在校園英語(yǔ)論壇〔forum〕上看到一些同學(xué)的帖子，他們?cè)诰腿绾螌W(xué)好英語(yǔ)尋求幫助。請(qǐng)你以Bookworm的網(wǎng)名給他們回帖，結(jié)合自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)提出一些建議。內(nèi)容提示：1〕培養(yǎng)學(xué)習(xí)興趣；2〕找到適合的學(xué)習(xí)方法；3〕勤學(xué)好問(wèn)，多實(shí)踐。詞數(shù)100左右DearFriends,

Fromtheforum,I’velearnedthatmanystudentshavesomeproblemsinEnglishlearning.(IamsorrytoknowthatyouhavedifficultyinlearningEnglish.)NowIamwillingtosharemyadvicewithyou.

Hereissomeadvicethatmaybehelpfultoyou.Firstly,itisimportanttocultivate/developyourinterestinlearningEnglish.Asyouknow,interestisthebestteacher,whichcanencourageustolearnEnglishactively.Secondly,findingasuitablemethodissignificant.OnlyifyouuseeffectivemethodscanyouimproveyourEnglish.Thirdly,itissuggestedthatyoushouldaskyourteacherforhelpwhenyouareintrouble.Asyouknow,practicemakesperfect.Ihopeyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.IbelieveyourEnglishwillbeimproved.yours,Bookworm1.懷古思今，激發(fā)科技報(bào)國(guó)熱情，科技創(chuàng)新助推中華民族偉大復(fù)興的夢(mèng)想早日實(shí)現(xiàn)2、歐共體形成、日本成為經(jīng)濟(jì)大國(guó)、不結(jié)盟運(yùn)動(dòng)興起和中國(guó)的振興，這些共同構(gòu)成了世界的多極化趨勢(shì)。3、多極化趨勢(shì)還只是一種趨勢(shì)和方向，不是一種成熟的國(guó)際關(guān)系格局。4、兩極格局雖然受到多極化的沖擊，在當(dāng)時(shí)仍是國(guó)際關(guān)系