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unitWildlifeprotectionwriting寫作保護動物第1頁/共22頁【審題謀篇】第一自然段為總寫：寫明寫信目的，你的感受(應用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài))。第二段：反映你的所見所聞，應用一般過去時態(tài)。第三段：你的建議，應用一般現(xiàn)在時和將來時態(tài)。最后一段：請求該報幫助。本文應用第一人稱；可以用first，second，but，even等詞連接或過渡。第2頁/共22頁【寫作要點】1.我寫信是要告訴你上星期天我在動物園的經(jīng)歷。(1)____________________youaboutmyexperienceinthezoolastSunday.(2)HereIwritetotellyouabout________________inthezoolastSunday.答案：(1)I’mwritingtotell(2)whatIsaw第3頁/共22頁2．有很多動物被養(yǎng)在動物園內(nèi)，它們好像沒有得到很好的對待。(1)Thereweremanyanimals________________inthezooand________theywerenotbeingtreatedwell.(2)Manyanimals________________andthey________________treatedwell.(3)______________manyanimals______________werenotbeingtreatedwell.第4頁/共22頁答案：(1)kept；itseemedthat(2)werekeptinthezoo；seemednottobe(3)Itseemedthat；keptinthezoo3．首先要教育人們：動物是我們的朋友。動物對人們生活的重要性。(1)Firstweshouldmakepeopleknowthat____________________and____________________.第5頁/共22頁(2)__________，weshouldtellpeople_____________animalsandthattheyareourfriends.(3)_______________，weshouldmakepeopleknowanimalsareourfriendsandimportanttopeople’slife.答案：(1)animalsareourfriends；importanttopeople’slife(2)Firstly；theimportanceof(3)Firstofal第6頁/共22頁4．任何虐待動物的人都要被罰款。(1)____________________badlyshouldbefined.(2)____________________badlyshouldbefined.(3)____________________badlyshouldbefined.答案：(1)Anyonewhotreatsanimals(2)Whoevertreatsanimals(3)Thosewhotreatanimals第7頁/共22頁5．我建議把動物放回到自然界去。(1)Isuggestthat____________________innature.(2)________________isthattheseanimalsshouldbesetfreeinnature.(3)________________thattheseanimalsshouldbesetfreeinnature.答案：(1)thoseanimalsshouldbesetfree(2)Mysuggestion(3)Itismysuggestion第8頁/共22頁【連句成篇】________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________第9頁/共22頁【佳作欣賞】DearEditor，HereIwritetotellyouaboutmyexperienceinthezoolastSunday.Ifeelterriblysorryandashamedofwhatpeopledidtotheanimals.Thereweremanyanimalskeptinthezooanditseemedthattheywerenotbeingtreatedwell.Isawmanyvisitorsthrowsomestonesatthemandsomevisitorsevenpouredwaterontoabigbear’shead.Somepeoplejustlookedandlaughed，butnoonethoughtthosewerewrong.第10頁/共22頁Hereiswhatweshoulddo.Firstweshouldmakepeopleknowanimalsareourfriendsandimportanttous.Secondanyonewhotreatsanimalsbadlyshouldbefined.Last，ifpeoplecan’tstopdoingso，mysuggestionisthattheseanimalsbesetfreeinnature.Ihopeyoucanhelpeducatepeopletoloveandrespectanimals.Thankyou.Yourssincerely，LiHua第11頁/共22頁【類文點津】寫一封反映問題或提意見、征求意見的信1．一般書信體的組成：正式信件(多用于外交、商務、社交等場合)：開頭(start)，一般用Dear或Dear＋姓/身份/職務等，如Deareditor，Dearmayor，orDearSmith.正文(body)：正式信件講話要含蓄一點，用詞要謹慎一些。結尾(ending)：Yourssincerely，Sincerely，Sincerelyyours，Yourstruly，Yoursfaithfully等較正式用語。第12頁/共22頁非正式信件(多用于親友、同學、同事之間)開頭：Hi，Mydear；Dearest等。正文：因彼此情誼篤厚，講話可以直率一點、開門見山，意見要中肯。結束語：Love，Cheers，Regards，Bestwishes，Yours等相對隨便的詞語。2．常用表達：反映現(xiàn)象的常用開頭句式：I’mwritingtotellyouthat...Recentlywehavemadeasurveythat...第13頁/共22頁Manypeopleareworriedabout...Itworriesmoreandmorepeoplethat...提出措施的常用句式：Weintendto...tohelp/save/protect...Wearereadytocallonpeopleto...Wefeellikedoing...toteachtheillegalhuntersalesson...We’drathernot...butdo...We’dliketo...topunishthosewhodoharmtowildlife.第14頁/共22頁征求對方支持的常用表達：Weneedyoursupporttomademoreandmorepeople...Wouldyoupleasehelpusto...by...?We’llappreciateitifyoucan...Inorderto...，weneed......sothat...IhopethatIcangethelpfrom...Iexpectthatyoucan...第15頁/共22頁Asweknow，thenumberofsome①wildplantsandanimalshasalready②decreasedandsomeanimalshavealready③diedout.Soitishightimeforusto④paymuch⑤attentiontowildlifeprotection.Buthowcanwepreventendangeredanimalsfrombeing⑥indangerofdisappearing？Firstly，weshould⑦protectthem⑧frombeing⑨hunted.It’sof⑩importancetoeducatepeopletoregardanimalsasourfriends.Thosewho詞語串串練第16頁/共22頁wanttogetlarge?incomefromhuntinganimalsfortheir?furshouldbepunished.Secondly，somenature?reservesand?zonesshouldbeset?sothatanimalscanlive?inpeace.Itisalsonecessaryto?employsomepeopletolookafterthem.Onlyinthiswaywillanimalsnotbe?harmedmoreoften.Thirdly，thehabitofeatingthemeatofsome?endangeredanimalsshouldbegotridof.?Accordingtosomereports，somerestaurantsarestillservingsuchdishesnow.Thegovernmentshould第17頁/共22頁第18頁/共22頁正如我們大家所知，野生動植物的數(shù)目已經(jīng)減少，一些動物也已經(jīng)滅絕了。所以是時候我們該密切注意保護野生動植物了。但是我們怎樣能夠阻止瀕臨滅絕的動物面臨消失的危險呢？首先，我們應該保護它們免遭捕殺。教育人們把動物看作是我們的朋友很重要。那些想通過獵殺動物獲取它們的毛皮而獲得暴利(income收入)的人應該受到懲罰。第二，應該設立一些自然保護區(qū)和保護帶，為第19頁/共22頁的是動物能夠平靜地生活。雇用一些人照看