2019年英語新必修四講義Unit4SectionⅤWriting-關(guān)注信

Section_ⅤWriting—關(guān)注信關(guān)注信(letterofconcern)屬于應(yīng)用文的范疇。關(guān)注信是作者就某一個(gè)問題或一些現(xiàn)象，表達(dá)自己對(duì)事件的關(guān)心，并提出自己的一些看法和解決辦法。一、基本結(jié)構(gòu)開頭：簡(jiǎn)單介紹寫信的緣由。主體：針對(duì)對(duì)方問題(如生病等)進(jìn)行有針對(duì)性的鼓勵(lì)和安慰，并適當(dāng)提出自己的建議。注意語氣一定要委婉，能體現(xiàn)出自己對(duì)對(duì)方的關(guān)切之情。結(jié)尾：簡(jiǎn)單的希望或祝福。二、增分佳句1．開頭常用語：①I’mshocked/awfullysorrytohearthat...②Itwasagreatshocktohearthat...③Itbrokemyhearttohearthat...④Ijustcan’ttellyouhowsadIwaswhenIheardthat...⑤Ican’ttellyouhowsorryIfeltwhenIheardthat...⑥Iamwritingtoexpressmydeepsympathy/careforyou.2．主體常用語：①Iunderstandhowyoufeelnow.②Iknowthewayyoufeelverywell.③You’llalwayshaveasupportinme.④It’struethatattitudedecideseverything.Soyoushouldnevergiveupnomatterwhathappens.⑤PleaseletmeknowifthereisanythingIcando.⑥IfIcanbeofanyhelp,pleasedon’thesitatetoletmeknow.3．結(jié)尾常用語：①I’mlookingforwardto...②Ihopeourcaringwillhelptocomfortyou.③Ihopethattimewilltakeawaythesorrowofyourrecentloss.④Rememberthatmyheartandmythoughtsarewithyou.[題目要求]為了幫助中學(xué)生健康成長(zhǎng)，某中學(xué)英文報(bào)開辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”專欄。假設(shè)你是該欄目的編輯Jamie，收到一封署名為Worried的求助信。信中該同學(xué)向你訴說了自己的困擾：近日容易發(fā)脾氣，使正常的學(xué)習(xí)和生活受到了影響。請(qǐng)用英文給該同學(xué)寫一封回信。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1．表示理解并給予安慰；2．提出建議并說明理由。注意：1.信中不能出現(xiàn)與本人相關(guān)的信息；2．信的開頭與結(jié)尾已為你擬好。參考詞匯：tempern．脾氣，情緒HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，Jamie第一步：審題構(gòu)思很關(guān)鍵一、審題1．確定體裁：本文為表達(dá)關(guān)注建議信；2．確定人稱：本文以第二人稱為主；3．確定時(shí)態(tài)：本文主要時(shí)態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。二、構(gòu)思第一段(表示理解并給予安慰)：很遺憾聽說對(duì)方有此問題，并指出每個(gè)人都可能遇到這樣的問題，所以讓對(duì)方不必?fù)?dān)心，但要學(xué)會(huì)控制自己的脾氣。第二段(提出建議)：與信任的人進(jìn)行交流，告訴別人你的困擾，釋放自己的壓力；多參加各種戶外活動(dòng)，多和朋友玩球類運(yùn)動(dòng)；保持樂觀的心態(tài)。第三段(提出希望)：希望建議能夠起到作用或?qū)Ψ降膯栴}得到解決。第二步：核心詞匯想周全1．period/stage階段，時(shí)期2．go_wrong變壞3．unnecessary不需要4．self-control自控5．a(chǎn)void/prevent避免6．share_..._with與……分享7．remove_negative_emotions驅(qū)除消極情緒8．effective有效果的9．keep_an_optimistic_attitude保持樂觀態(tài)度10．be_of_benefit有益的11．lift_one’s_spirits振作精神12．get_rid_of/do_away_with去掉第三步：由詞擴(kuò)句雛形現(xiàn)1．每個(gè)人都會(huì)有這么一段時(shí)間，一切好像都變得非常糟糕。(when引導(dǎo)定語從句)Everyone_will_have_one_of_those_periods_when_everything_seems_to_be_going_wrong.2．沒有必要擔(dān)憂。(it作形式主語)It_is_unnecessary_to_be_worried.3．你應(yīng)學(xué)會(huì)自控，這會(huì)幫你避免去說或做你將后悔的事。(that引導(dǎo)定語從句)You_should_learn_self-control_and_it_can_help_avoid_saying_and_doing_something_that_you’ll_regret.4．與老師和朋友分享心情是個(gè)不錯(cuò)的選擇，因?yàn)檫@樣做可以消除你的消極情緒。(it作形式主語，as引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句)It_is_a_good_choice_to_share_your_feelings_with_your_friends_and_teachers_as_you_can_remove_your_negative_emotions_by_doing_so.5．你應(yīng)當(dāng)多鍛煉身體，這可讓你振作精神。(which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句)You_should_take_more_physical_exercise,_which_can_lift_your_spirits.6．保持樂觀的生活態(tài)度，你將享受生活給你的快樂。If_you_keep_an_optimistic_attitude_towards_life,_you_will_enjoy_the_pleasure_life_has_brought_to_you.7．希望我的建議對(duì)你有益。I_hope_my_suggestion_will_be_of_benefit_to_you.8．祝你很快消除煩惱。May_you_get_rid_of_your_trouble_soon.第四步：句式升級(jí)造亮點(diǎn)1．用which引導(dǎo)非限制性定語從句改寫句3You_should_learn_self-control,_which_can_help_avoid_saying_and_doing_something_that_you’ll_regret.2．用動(dòng)名詞作主語改寫句4Sharing_your_feelings_with_your_friends_and_teachers_is_a_good_choice_as_you_can_remove_your_negative_emotions_by_doing_so.3．用“祈使句＋and＋陳述句”改寫句6Keep_an_optimistic_attitude_towards_life_and_you_will_enjoy_the_pleasure_life_has_brought_to_you.第五步：過渡銜接聯(lián)成篇HiWorried，I’msorrytoknowthatyou’rehavingsuchabadtimeatthemoment.Actually,everyonewillhaveoneofthoseperiodswheneverythingseemstobegoingwrong.Therefore,itisunnecessarytobeworried.Youshouldlearnself-control,whichcanhelpavoidsayinganddoingsomethingthatyou’llregret.Thefollowingarethreesuggestions.Tobeginwith,sharingyourfeelingswithyourfriendsandteachersisagoodchoiceasyoucanremoveyournegativeemotionsbydoingso.Anothereffectivesuggestionisthatyoushouldtakemorephysicalexercise,whichcanliftyourspirits.Lastbut