讀后續(xù)寫：遇險類（夫妻雨中遇險）講義-高三英語寫作專項

一、續(xù)寫原題ItwasarainyNovembermorning.Overcomewithanger,IknewifIdidn'tleavethehousesoonIwouldlosemytemperwithmyhusband,

Joe.Asraincamedowninsheets,Joeofferedtotakemetowork.I

struggled

intomyjacket,seizedmybagandteachingplansandignoredhim.Heinsistedandreachedforhisboots.Ilookedatthepilesofnewspapersandthedirtydishesstillonthetable."Don'tyouhaveenoughtodo?Icantakecareofmyself."Istormedout,notevenkissinghimgood-bye.Joe

shouted

aftermenottotakethe

shortcut(捷徑).JoeandIhadbeeneagerlylookingforwardtoourretirementwhenaheartattackthatpastspringforcedhimtoleavehisjobearlierthanwehadplanned.Asthemedicalbillsmountedwe

realized

Iwouldhavetocontinueworkingfull-timewhileJoestayedhomeandtookoverthe

housework.Thenewarrangementwasadisaster.Exhaustedafteradayoffullwork,allIwantedwasahothomecooked

meal

andagoodnight'ssleep.However,whatgreetedmeatthetablewasamicrowavepackage.Sometimeshewouldserveoatmeal(燕麥)forseveralnightsinarow.OnenightwhenIdraggedmyselftobed,IwasterrifiedtodiscoverJoehadturnedourwhitesheetsblue.Hetoldmehehadfoundouthowtosaveonwater,soapandelectricity.He

patted

hisbluetrousersandannouncedproudlywashingeverythingtogetherwasjustthesecret.Tenminuteslater,ignoringJoe'swarningIturnedoffthemainroute(道路).Ithoughtithadn'trainedenoughtofloodtheroad,butasIroundedthecorner,water

rushed

acrossmypath.Afterafewfeet,thecargotstuck.Iopenedthedoorandwaterpouredin.Ihurriedlyclosedthedoor.Icouldn'triskwalkinginthis.Almost20minutespassed.Thecarbegantoshake.Igot

frightened

todeathwhenIheardthreelonghonks(喇叭聲).

注意：1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.應使5個以上短文中標有下劃線的關鍵詞語；3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；4.續(xù)寫完成后,請用下劃線標出你所使用的關鍵詞語。Paragraph1:

Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofatruck.Paragraph2:

IscreamedthatIcouldn'tmakeit.二、下水思路1.

確定主題：OnarainyNovembermorning,IquarreledwithmyhusbandJoeforhisbadperformanceinhousehold.TooangrytorememberJoe'swarning,Itooktheshortcutbuthadmycarstuckbecauseofasuddenheavyrain.Facedwiththisdilemma,Ifoundthatthereappearedatruckwithlightsandhonkson,so......2.時空變化：

地點是在轉彎處的一條被水淹沒的小路上(...roundedthecorner,waterrushedacrossmypath)。丈夫的卡車在車子的后面(Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofatruck.)。時間是上午上班路上。(ItwasarainyNovembermorning....Joeofferedtotakemetowork.)續(xù)寫難點：情節(jié)安排相對較復雜，尤其是對丈夫如何營救我的描寫，涉及較多的動作描寫。(問題解決類續(xù)寫，要注意細節(jié)須緊扣主題，情節(jié)須合情合理，須反映解決問題的能力。)此外，通過對險境的描寫，突出丈夫的形象，為消除誤解，體會真愛作鋪墊。要回答的問題：Para1l:Whodrovethetruck?2:Didhe/shecametohelpme?Howtohelp?3:WhatdidIfeelbeforeandafterthe“driverappeared?4:WasIrescued?Para2:l:Whatwasthesituationatthattime?2:Whatwasthedifficulty?HowdidIsucceedinovercomingit?3:Didmyhusbandhelpmeoutoftrouble?答案：Q1:WhatdidIfeelbeforethe“driver”appeared?Itsuddenlyoccurredtomethattheremustbedanger,aflushofpanicspreadingacrossmycheeks.HardlyhadIthoughtofthedangerwhenawaveoffearfloodedoverme.3)Asthecarbegantoswingsidebyside,thefrightthathadbeensubmergedinmyheartsuddenlysurfacedQ2:Howdidthe“driver”helpme?WhenIsawhim,Iautomaticallyletoutacryofsurprise.Calmandcomposed,heurgedmetotakeonestepatatimeandassuredmeIcouldmakeit.2HethrewathickropesothatIcouldhangontoitandwalkstraighttowardhim.“Honey,don'tbefrightened!I'mthrowingathickrope,withwhichyoucangetoutofthedilemma."Heshoutedaffectionately.Q3.Whatwasthesituationatthattime?1.Asuddenfallleftmeintherushingwater,soIstruggledtomyfeet,findabranchblockingthewayrightinfrontofme.2Ilostmybalancebutseizedtheropetightly.Timepassing,tirednessengulfedmewithmyfeetstiffandshivering.Worsestill,Icouldn'tmoveaninchanymoreQ4:Afterbeingrescued,howdidIfeel?Sobbingagainsthischest,IapologizedthatIshouldn'thavetakentheshortcut.Ibreathedasighofrelief,grinningmerrilyathim.3)Iputmyarmsaroundhisneck,shoothimagratefullook,sayinginayouarethebestpersonwhocantakecareofmeintheworld!?下水續(xù)寫Paragraph1:

Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofatruck.↓1.Afamiliarfigureleapedout,

rushed

towardsmeandwadedintothewater.↓2.Thankgoodness,itwas

Joe

whocametomyrescue.↓3.However,thewaterwasrunningsorapidlythathehadtogoback.

↓4.

Frightened

andalittleangry,Icouldhardlyhelpsheddingtears.↓5.HowIwishedthatmyhusbandwerelikeasupermanwhocouldsavemefromdisaster.↓6.But,afterawhile,itturnedoutthatJoereturnedwithoneendofaropeinhishandandtheotherendtiedtothetruck.↓7.He

struggled

tothrowtheropetome

and

shouted,“Catch!Openthedoor!”↓Paragraph2:

IscreamedthatIcouldn'tmakeit.↓1.Atthatmoment,thesoundoftheragingwateroutsidegrewlouder,andthecarrockedmoreviolently.↓2.Worsestill,thewatercameuptoJoe’swaistandhealmostlosthisfootinginthewater.↓3.Afterseveralvainattempts,Joe

realized

thattherewasnochancetomakeit.↓4.Heputeveryounceofstrengthintogettingclosetomeandsaidsoothingly,"Don'tpanic,honey!I'mhere."↓5.WithJoe'shelp,Iburstthedooropen,andJoeimmediatelytiedtheropearoundmywaist.↓6.Themomentwepulledourselvesoutofthewater,thecarwaswashedaway.↓7.Whatanarrowescape!IhuggedJoetightly,happinessandlovewellingupinsideme.Paragraph1:

Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofatruck.

Afamiliarfigureleapedout,

rushed

towardsmeandwadedintothewater.Thankgoodness,itwas

Joe

whocametomyrescue.However,thewaterwasrunningsorapidlythathehadtogoback.

Frightened

andalittleangry,Icouldhardlyhelpsheddingtears.HowIwishedthatmyhusbandwerelikeasupermanwhocouldsavemefromdisaster.But,afterawhile,itturnedoutthatJoereturnedwithoneendofaropeinhishandandtheotherendtiedtothetruck.He

struggled

tothrowtheropetomeand

shouted,"Catch!Openthedoor!"

Paragraph2:

IscreamedthatIcouldn'tmakeit.

Atthatmoment,thesoundoftheragingwateroutsidegrewlouder,andthecarrockedmoreviolently.Worsestill,thewatercameuptoJoe’swaistandhealmostlosthisfootinginthewater.Afterseveralvainattempts,Joe

realized

thattherewasnochancetomakeit.Heputeveryounceofstrengthintogettingclosetomeandsaidsoothingly,"Don'tpanic,honey!I'mhere."WithJoe'shelp,Iburstthedooropen,andJoeimmediatelytiedtheropearoundmywaist.Themomentwepulledourselvesoutofthewater,thecarwaswashedaway.Whatanarrowescape!IhuggedJoetightly,happinessandlovewellingupinsideme.參考答案：Paragraph1:

Lookingovermyshoulder,Istaredintotheflashinglightsofatruck.

ItwasJoe!Icouldn’thelpb