2022年湖北省黃石市大學英語6級大學英語六級模擬考試(含答案)

2022年湖北省黃石市大學英語6級大學英語六級模擬考試(含答案)學校:________班級:________姓名:________考號:________

一、1.Writing(10題)1.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledMyOpiniononCollegeGraduatesWorkingasVillageOfficials.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.這種做法的意義何在?

2．這些大學生能給農(nóng)村帶去什么?

3．大學生能從中得到什么?

2.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteathank-youletteronbehalfofthestudentuniontoacompanywhosponsoredtheschoolfootballgame.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.代表學生會感謝×公司對校內(nèi)足球賽的贊助

2．向該公司贈送一份很有紀念意義的禮物

3．表達美好的祝愿，希望該公司繼續(xù)支持本校的各項活動

AThank-youLetter

3.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledSayNotoAvianInfluenza.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.“禽流感”危害的后果及其嚴重性

2．造成這種突發(fā)疫情的原因

3．我們應(yīng)該如何對待

Usefulwordsandexpressions:

禽流感:avianinfluenza

預警系統(tǒng):warningsystem

應(yīng)急機制:emergencyresponsemechanism

SayNotoAvianInfluenza

4.1.留守兒童的現(xiàn)象在農(nóng)村非常普遍

2.這種現(xiàn)象帶來的弊端

3.我診斷該如何時處理這些問題

5.Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledSayNotoPiratedProducts.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.

1.目前盜版的現(xiàn)象比較嚴重

2.造成這種現(xiàn)象的原因及其危害

3.我們應(yīng)該怎么做

Usefulwordsandexpressions:

盜版:piracy(n.)

盜版產(chǎn)品:piratedproducts

知識產(chǎn)權(quán):intellectualpropertyrights

侵犯版權(quán):infringesb.'scopyright;copyrightinfringement

SayNotoPiratedProducts

6.Directions:Forthispartyouareallowed30minutestowriteacompositionaboutDiligenceIstheKeytoSuccess.YouaregiventhefollowingoutlinesinChineseandarerequiredtowritenolessthan150words.Remembertowriteclearly.

1.對“勤奮是成功的關(guān)健”涵義的理解；

2.成功不是靠運氣；

3.了解成功重要性的意義。

7.Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledMyViewonOnlineShopping.Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:

1.網(wǎng)上購物漸漸成為一種時尚，越來越多的大學生選擇網(wǎng)上購物

2．分析大學生網(wǎng)上購物的原因

3．我對此現(xiàn)象的看法

MyViewonOnlineShopping

8.1.隨著生活水平和醫(yī)療水平的提高，我們身邊的老人日漸增多。

2.作為大學生，能為他們做些什么

3.這樣做的原因

TakingCareoftheOld

9.1.目前在中國，校園安全事故時有發(fā)生

2．這種現(xiàn)象造成了惡劣的影響

3．應(yīng)該如何杜絕這種現(xiàn)象

10.假設(shè)你是李明，請你給保護長城志愿者工作指導中心寫一封申請信，申請成位保護長城項目的志愿者。信中必須包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.你從某報紙中得知這個項目招募志愿者的消息，感受到十分的高興

2.想當這個項目志愿者的原因

3.簡單介紹個人的性格和愛好，并表示十分希望自己能成為一名志愿者

ALetterofApplicationforVolunteeroftheGreatWallReservationProject

二、2.ReadingComprehension(SkimmingandScanning)(10題)11.

Thewaterandnutrientstosupportthebiomassofthetreeareprovidedby______andconductedby______.

12.Youshouldpayspecialattentiontothefirstsixquestionsofthe12questionsbecausetheymakeupthebaseonwhich______.

13.Wal-Mart

Wal-Martismorethanjusttheworld'slargestretailer.Itisaneconomicforce,aculturalphenomenonandalightningrodforcontroversy.ItallstartedwithasimplephilosophyfromfounderSamWalton:Offershopperslowerpricesthantheygetanywhereelse.ThatbasicstrategyhasshapedWal-Mart'scultureanddriventhecompany'sgrowth.

NowthatWal-Martissohuge,ithasunprecedentedpowertoshapelabormarketsgloballyandchangethewayentireindustriesoperate.

HistoryofWal-Mart

SamWaltonopenedhisfirstfive-and-dimein1950.Hisvisionwastokeeppricesaslowaspossible.Evenifhismarginsweren'tasfatascompetitors,hefiguredhecouldmakeupforthatinvolume.Hewasright.

Intheearly1960s,WaltonopenedhisfirstWal-MartinRogers,Arkansas.Thecompanycontinuedtogrow,goingpublicin1970andaddingmorestoreseveryyear.In1990,Wal-MartsurpassedkeyrivalKmartinsize.Twoyearslater,itsurpassedSears.

Waltoncontinuedtodriveanoldpickuptruckandsharebudget-hotelroomswithcolleaguesonbusinesstrips,evenafterWal-Martmadehimveryrich.Hedemandedthathisemployeesalsokeepexpensestoabareminimum—amentalitythatisstillaltheheartofWal-MartculturemorethanadecadeafterWalton'sdeath.Thecompanyhascontinuedtogrowrapidlyafterhisdeathin1992andnowoperatesfourretaildivisions—Wal-MartSupercenters,Wal-Martdiscountstores,NeighborhoodMarketstoresandSam'sClubwarehouses.

Wal-MartStrategy

Let'sstartwithtechnology.Wal-Martpushedtheretailindustrytoestablishtheuniversalbarcode,whichforcedmanufacturerstoadoptcommonlabeling.Thebarallowedretailerstogenerateallkindsofinformation—creatingasubtleshiftofpowerfrommanufacturerstoretailers.Wal-Martbecameespeciallygoodatexploitingtheinformationbehindthebarcode.Andthusitisconsideredapioneerindevelopingsophisticatedtechnologytotrackitsstockandcutthefatoutofitssupplychain.

Recently,Wal-Martbecamethefirstmajorretailertodemandmanufacturersuseradiofrequencyidentificationtechnology(RFID).Thetechnology,usesradiofrequenciestotransmitdatastoredonsmalltagsattachedtopallets(貨盤)orindividualproducts.RFIDtagsholdsignificantlymoredatathanbarcodes.

Thefrugalculture,establishedbyWalton.alsoplaysintoWal-Mart'ssuccess.Thecompanyhasbeencriticizedfortherelativelypoorwagesandhealthcareplansthatitotterstorank-andfileemployees.Ithasalsobeenaccusedofdemandingthathourlyworkersputinovertimewithoutpay.Storemanagersoftenworkmorethan70hoursperweek.

Thiscultureisalsopresentatthecompany'sheadquarters.Wal-MartisheadquarteredinBentonville,Arkansas,insteadofanexpensivecitylikeNewYork.Thebuildingisunattractiveanddull.Youwon'tcatchexecutivesinqualitycarsandyouwon'tseethemdraggingintoworkat9:30a.m.Executivesflycoachandoftensharehotelroomswithcolleagues.Theyworklonghours,typicallyarrivingatworkbefore6:30a.m.andworkinghalfdaysonSaturdays.

ThecentralgoalofWal-Martistokeepretailpriceslow—andthecompanyhasbeenverysuccessfulatthis.ExpertsestimatethatWal-Martsavesshoppersatleast15percentonatypicalcartofgroceries.Everything—includingthetechnologyandcorporateculture—feedsintothatultimategoalofdeliveringthelowestpricespossible.Wal-Martalsopushesitssuppliers,somesaycruelly,tocutprices.InTheWal-MartEffect,authorCharlesFishmandiscusseshowthepriceofafour-packofGElightbulbsdecreasedfrom$2.19to88centsduringafive-yearperiod.

ThePower

BecauseofWal-Mart'smassivesize,ithasincrediblepower.Ithasdrivensmallerretaile

A.productsatlowerprice

B.anykindofgoodsthecustomersmaywant

C.amorecomfortableshoppingenvironment

D.free-of-chargepackaging

14.

Thehydrogencanbegeneratedfrom__________________orproducedbyreformingfossilfuels.

15.

Aseriesofexperimentsdescribedinthepassageistoexaminewhetherthoughtandbehavior.can______.

16.

Duringanearthquake,totakeanelevatoristhefastestwaytorunawayfromafallingbuilding.

A.YB.NC.NG

17.

The______ofthosecaloriesisofsignificancewhennutritionistakenintoconsideration.

18.

Thefirstuseoftheterm"organicfarming"isusuallycreditedto______inhis1940book,LooktotheLand.

19.

Americans'shortcomingsinsciencearevast,andunfortunately______ismakingeffortstodefeatthem.

20.Howfarwaterdropstotheturbinesinapowerstationisknownas______.

A.theheads

B.theflowrate

C.theverticaldistance

D.theheights

三、3.ListeningComprehension(10題)21.(25)

A.Abusinesswoman.

B.Abusinessadministrator.

C.Awildlifeworker.

D.Anaccountant.

22.

【B4】

23.(24)

A.Itisasubconsciousthing.

B.Itreflectsalackofself-consciousness.

C.Itisunnecessaryindeed.

D.Itisakindofconsciousact.

24.聽力原文：W:Frank,what'syourimpressionofEnglishpeople?

M:Well,theyarethemostreserved,themostsuspicious,themostunreceptive,themostunfriendly,thecoldest-h,andthemostdomineeringofallwesternpeople.

W:Why?Itseemsyou'reyouarereallyprejudicedagainsttheEnglishpeople.

M:Notnecessarily.ThisisthejudgmentbyallotherEuropeanpeople.AskaFrenchman,anItalian,aGermenlikeme,orevenanAmerican,whathethinksaboutEnglishman;andeveryonewilltellyoutheverysamething.

W:Don'tyouhaveanycomplimentsfortheEnglishpeople?

M:Oh,yes.YouwouldfindontheotherhandthatnearlyallnationswouldspeakhighlyofcertainotherEnglishqualifiesenergy,courage,honor,andjustice.Althoughnomanissodifficulttomakefriendswith,thefriendshipofanEnglishmanoncegainedismorestrongandtruethananyother.Whatdoyouthinkofthemanyway?

W:Idon'tknowmuchaboutEnglishpeople.Butlastsemester,wehadateachernamedMr.McCourtteachinguswriting,heisfromLiverpool.Heisrathersilent,reserved,andnotamiable.Someofuswerereallyafraidofhim.Buthewasagreatteacher,andhastaughtusmanywritingtechniques.Ihavemademuchprogress.

M:ThenheisatypicalEnglishman,fortheEnglishmanofthebesttypeismuchmoreinclinedtobejustthanbeistohekind.

W:That'sfight.Mr.McCourtoftentoldusthatkindnessisanemotionalimpulse,andweshouldbeonourguardagainsteverykindofemotionalimpulse.

M:Butwithallthis,thecharacterisagoodone,anditssuccesshasbeentheveryproofofitsvalue.

(23)

A.TheEnglishmen'shabits.

B.TheEnglishmen'saccent.

C.TheEnglishmen'scharacter.

D.TheEnglishmen'steachingstyles.

25.(43)

26.(41)

27.【B5】

28.聽力原文：W:Ifyoudon'tmind,I'dliketohavealittlemoretimetolookoverthecontractbeforeIsignit.

M:Certainly.Ifyoudecidetosign,youwillbethefirsttobeacceptedbythecompany.

Q:Whatisthewomanpreparingtodo?

(17)

A.Signacontract.

B.Workoutaplan.

C.Takeaninterview.

D.Applyforajob.

29.聽力原文：M:HowdoJaneandBillliketheirnewhome?

W:It'sreallycomfortable,butthey'retiredofhavingtohearthejetsgoovertheirhouseatallhours.

Q:WhatislocatedclosetoJaneandBill'snewhome?

(14)

A.Anairport.

B.Abusstation.

C.Asuperhighway.

D.Atrainstation.

30.(32)

A.Theearlydinosaurremains.

B.Ancientpicturesofdinosaurs.

C.Thebodybonesofsauropods.

D.Asauropodskulldiscovered.

四、4.ReadingComprehension(ReadinginDepth)(3題)31.

Welearnedfromthepassagethat______.

A.evenin2030,obstaclesstillexistinreadingandinterpretinghumanthought

B.nowadayspeoplefeelangrywiththedominationofthehistorybyelites

C.bytheyear2050,humanbeingscanleadaneverlastinglifebiologically

D.peoplecanonly"livein"silicontogetanimmortallife

32.

What'stheprospectofhomeschooling?

A.Moreandmoreparentswillrecognizethehadsidesofthepubliceducation.

B.Moreandmoreparentswilladopthomeschoolingfortheirchildrentalentedinartorsports.

C.Thegovernmentwillsetupmorereligiousschoolstosatisfytheneedsofreligiousparents.

D.Thegovernmentwillbanhomeschoolingandforceparentstosendtheirchildrentopublicschools.

33.

【C10】

五、5.ErrorCorrection(3題)34.

【S8】

35.【S6】

36.

【S2】

六、6.ErrorCorrection(3題)37.

【S8】

38.

【S4】

39.Itishardtopredicthowscienceisgoingtoturnout,

andifitisreallygoodscienceitisimpossibletopredict.

Ifthethingstobefoundareactuallynew,theyareby

definitionunknowninadvance.Youcannotmakechoices

inthismatter.Youeitherhavescienceoryoudon't,ifyou【S1】______.

haveityouareobligedtoacceptthesurprisingand

disturbingpiecesofinformation,alongwiththeneat

andpromptusefulbits.【S2】______.

TheonlysolidpieceofscientifictruthaboutwhatI【S3】______.

feeltotallyconfidentisthatweprofoundlyignorant【S4】______.

aboutnature.Indeed,Iregardthisasthemajordiscovery

ofthepasthundredsyearsofbiology.Itis,initsway,an【S5】______.

illuminationpieceofnews.Itwouldhaveamazedthe

brightermindsofthe18thcenturyEnlightenment(啟蒙【S6】______.

運動)tobetoldbyanyofushowlittleweknowandhow

bewilderedseemsthewayahead.Itisthissudden【S7】______.

confrontationtothedepthandscopeofignorance【S8】______.

thatrepresentthemostsignificantcontributionofthe【S9】______.

20thcenturysciencetothehumanintellect.Inearlier

times,weeitherpretendtounderstandhowthings【S10】______.

workedorignoredtheproblem,orsimplymadeup

storiestofillthegaps.

【S1】

參考答案

1.MyOpiniononCollegeGraduatesWorkingasVillageOfficialsNowadaysmanycollegegraduatesfindithardtofindajobupongraduation.EventuallysomeofthemchoosetoworkasvillageOfficialsintheruralareas.Ithinkitisagoodidea.Whatcancollegegraduatesofferthecountryside?Inmyopiniontheycanbringtheadvancedscienceandtechnologytothebackwardruralareas.Forexampletheycanhelpthevillagersinvariousaspectssuchashowtofarmscientificallyandeffectivelyhowtomakeuseofthelocalresourcesthusleadingthepeasantsonthewaytoawell-offlife.Atthesametimecollegegraduatesmaygainagreatdealfromtheirvillagepositions.Bygoingdeepintothemassesinthecountrysidetheymaylearnsomegoodqualitiesofthelaboringpeoplesuchasindustrioushard-workingetc.Inthiswaytheywillbeabletotrainthemselvesandaccumulatenecessaryexperiencefortheirfuturework.InconclusionIaminfavorofthisidea.Foritnotonlycaneasethejob-huntingpressureinthebigcitiesbutalsoprovidethecollegegraduateswithachancetoservethesociety.(186words)MyOpiniononCollegeGraduatesWorkingasVillageOfficialsNowadaysmanycollegegraduatesfindithardtofindajobupongraduation.Eventually,someofthemchoosetoworkasvillageOfficialsintheruralareas.Ithinkitisagoodidea.Whatcancollegegraduatesofferthecountryside?Inmyopinion,theycanbringtheadvancedscienceandtechnologytothebackwardruralareas.Forexample,theycanhelpthevillagersinvariousaspects,suchashowtofarmscientificallyandeffectively,howtomakeuseofthelocalresources,thusleadingthepeasantsonthewaytoawell-offlife.Atthesametime,collegegraduatesmaygainagreatdealfromtheirvillagepositions.Bygoingdeepintothemassesinthecountryside,theymaylearnsomegoodqualitiesofthelaboringpeople,suchasindustrious,hard-working,etc.Inthisway,theywillbeabletotrainthemselvesandaccumulatenecessaryexperiencefortheirfuturework.Inconclusion,Iaminfavorofthisidea.Foritnotonlycaneasethejob-huntingpressureinthebigcities,butalsoprovidethecollegegraduateswithachancetoservethesociety.(186words)解析：按照指令所給出的3個問題，我們可以將這篇作文寫成4段。第1段指出，在新的嚴峻就業(yè)形勢下，大學畢業(yè)生當村官顯然是一個很有意義、值得肯定的做法。第2段回答問題：這些大學生能給農(nóng)村帶去什么?他們可以將利。技知識帶到農(nóng)村，改變農(nóng)村的落后面貌，帶領(lǐng)農(nóng)民走上致富的道路。第3段回答問題：大學生能從中得到什么?通過深入農(nóng)村基層，接觸廣大農(nóng)民群眾，他們可以學到勞動人民勤勞苦干、艱苦樸素的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)，為將米的工作積累寶貴的生活經(jīng)驗。第4段作為結(jié)論，應(yīng)當首尾呼應(yīng)點題，扼要重復自己的看法：大學畢業(yè)生當村官不但能夠減輕國家的就業(yè)壓力，而且可以回報社會、服務(wù)社會，不失為一個好主意。

2.AThank-youLetterJune19th[l]DearSirorMadam[2]OnbehalfoftheStudentUnionofouruniversityIsincerelythankXcompanyAThank-youLetterJune,19th[l]DearSirorMadam,[2]OnbehalfoftheStudentUnionofouruniversity,IsincerelythankXcompany解析：這篇作文屬于應(yīng)用文寫作。在寫信的時候，首先必須把自己置于相關(guān)的情境中：明白寫信人(“我”)是誰，收信人(“你”)是誰，二者關(guān)系如何，寫這封信的目的是什么。在此基礎(chǔ)上，再根據(jù)outline的要求考慮如何把相關(guān)信息融入信中。這樣的信，才能得體。

以本作文為例，我們可以判斷：①寫信人是代表學生會動筆的，不應(yīng)看做私人信件。這種信可以用DearSirorMadam作抬頭，也可以直接稱呼對方DearMr.Smith之類(當然可以假定寫信人是認識對方X公司的經(jīng)理或老總的了)。落款則應(yīng)寫自己的名字。②寫信的目的有兩個，首先是感謝對方的贊助(送禮也是表示謝意的方式)，其次是表達良好的祝愿。要辨明重點，應(yīng)該以表示謝意為主，祝愿的內(nèi)容只需最后簡短表示即可。③學生會這樣的學生團體如果要給贊助過自己的企業(yè)表示感謝，應(yīng)該會送什么禮物呢?outline沒有明確說明，需考生沒身處地杜撰一個——這是本作文題的難點!絕不能太貴；一定要有紀念意義；該禮品注重精神價值而非物質(zhì)價值；該禮品應(yīng)該可以為公司收藏，可以放入公司“陳列室”里。從這些要求出發(fā)設(shè)想一個禮品出來吧!范文用記錄足球賽頒獎典禮的DVD作禮品，就很好，很得體。(此外還可以考慮送什么禮物呢?書畫作品、相冊、都可以吧!)

Analysis

[1]這是公函的格式。

[2]把outline的第1點開門見山說出來。應(yīng)用文忌套話空話，直接點題是最好的辦法。注意“代表……表示感謝”的說法。

[3]寫信時的必背句型。無論求職求學還是別的場合，都有可能需要隨信附送別的文件/物件之類，就要用到attached/enclosedpleasefind…。

[4]說明送禮意圖。remembrance，用得好。此處也可以用gift等。

[5]對禮物的含義加以說明是必要的。下面的幾句話都是說明該禮物與公司贊助的活動之間的關(guān)系的。

[6]再次表示感謝。

[7]緊扣outline的第3點。表示祝愿。注意文中“感謝”的表達方法：thank,gratitude，appreciate。詞語富于變化才能顯得有文采。

3.SayNotoAvianInfluenzaAvianInfluenzaknownasaninfectiousdiseaseswiftlysweepthewholecountry.SounexpectedlyandpowerfullydoesitcomethatitsoonbecomepervasivearoundAsiaandallovertheworld.Suchkindofdiseaseoccursnotonlyinthedevelopingcountriesbutalsointhedevelopedcountries.Peoplewhohavecaughtthediseasewillsufferfromhighfevermuscleacherunnynoseandsorethroat.Somemayevengeteyeproblemandhavedifficultybreathingatalaterstage.AvianInfluenzabecomesanepidemicwhichhasseriouslyaffectedpeople'sdailylifeandnationaleconomyaswell.Itisevidentthatsuchphenomenoncanbeattributedtothefollowingreasons.Directcontactwiththeinfectiouspoultrywhichmakespeoplefallillisviewedasthemajorreason.Furthermorecontaminatedobjectsincludingdailynecessitiesmaycastamalignantshadowonpeople'slifethroughwhichpeopleeasilygetinfected.Finallybreathandfoodtransmissionmakespeoplehorrifiedinthemulti-organfailure.AvianInfluenzafactuallyprovokesfearandpanicamongthenativesandtouristsaswell.InmyopinionAvianInfluenzamaycausetheglobaloutbreakofthediseaseifitisnotbroughtunderthecontrol.Governmentshouldmonitorthewholesituationestablishingthewarningsystemtopreventthepeoplefrominfectionandadoptingtheemergencyresponsemechanismtoreducethedeathrate.Moreimportantpeoplemustberesponsibleforthemselves.Theyshouldenjoygoodhabitandlifestylesuchasself-cleaningandprotectionthoroughcookingofpoultrymeatseparationofrawfoodfromthecookedfoodandetc.Onlyinthiswaycanwereallyavoidthedisaster.SayNotoAvianInfluenzaAvianInfluenza,knownasaninfectiousdisease,swiftlysweepthewholecountry.SounexpectedlyandpowerfullydoesitcomethatitsoonbecomepervasivearoundAsiaandallovertheworld.Suchkindofdiseaseoccursnotonlyinthedevelopingcountriesbutalsointhedevelopedcountries.Peoplewhohavecaughtthediseasewillsufferfromhighfever,muscleache,runnynoseandsorethroat.Somemayevengeteyeproblemandhavedifficultybreathingatalaterstage.AvianInfluenzabecomesanepidemicwhichhasseriouslyaffectedpeople'sdailylifeandnationaleconomyaswell.Itisevidentthatsuchphenomenoncanbeattributedtothefollowingreasons.Directcontactwiththeinfectiouspoultrywhichmakespeoplefallillisviewedasthemajorreason.Furthermore,contaminatedobjectsincludingdailynecessitiesmaycastamalignantshadowonpeople'slife,throughwhichpeopleeasilygetinfected.Finally,breathandfoodtransmissionmakespeoplehorrifiedinthemulti-organfailure.AvianInfluenzafactuallyprovokesfearandpanicamongthenativesandtouristsaswell.Inmyopinion,AvianInfluenzamaycausetheglobaloutbreakofthediseaseifitisnotbroughtunderthecontrol.Governmentshouldmonitorthewholesituation,establishingthewarningsystemtopreventthepeoplefrominfectionandadoptingtheemergencyresponsemechanismtoreducethedeathrate.Moreimportant,peoplemustberesponsibleforthemselves.Theyshouldenjoygoodhabitandlifestyle.suchasself-cleaningandprotection,thoroughcookingofpoultrymeat,separationofrawfoodfromthecookedfood,andetc.Onlyinthisway,canwereallyavoidthedisaster.

4.Left-behindChildrenintheCountrysideEveryyearmillionsofpeoplefromruralareas①pourintocitiestofindjobs.①Andthephenomenonofleft-behindchildrenisprevalent.②Left-behindchildrenaresufferingaseriesofproblems.Theyarenottakengoodcareofbytheirparentsbecauseofthedistance.Thereforemanyofthemareratherweakphysicallyandpsychologically.Besidestheyareeasilyledastrayduetotheabsenceofparentalloveandguidance.③Inmyopinionmeasuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblem.FirstlybothpeopleintheCitiesandcountrysideshouldendeavortoofferloveandconcerntothesechildren.Theparentsinparticularshouldnotmakemoney③atthesacrificeofignoranceoftheirchildren.Secondlypoliciesshouldbeimplementedsothatchildrenfromcountrysidecanalso③haveaccesstoeducationalopportunitiesmedicalcareandotherservicesinthecity.Finallyitisurgenttodevelopeconomyintheruralareassothatpeoplecangetwell-paidjobsneartheirhomes.Left-behindChildrenintheCountrysideEveryyear,millionsofpeoplefromruralareas①pourintocitiestofindjobs.①Andthephenomenonofleft-behindchildrenisprevalent.②Left-behindchildrenaresufferingaseriesofproblems.Theyarenottakengoodcareofbytheirparentsbecauseofthedistance.Therefore,manyofthemareratherweakphysicallyandpsychologically.Besides,theyareeasilyledastrayduetotheabsenceofparentalloveandguidance.③Inmyopinion,measuresshouldbetakentosolvetheproblem.Firstly,bothpeopleintheCitiesandcountrysideshouldendeavortoofferloveandconcerntothesechildren.Theparentsinparticularshouldnotmakemoney③atthesacrificeofignoranceoftheirchildren.Secondly,policiesshouldbeimplementedsothatchildrenfromcountrysidecanalso③haveaccesstoeducationalopportunities,medicalcareandotherservicesinthecity.Finally,itisurgenttodevelopeconomyintheruralareas,sothatpeoplecangetwell-paidjobsneartheirhomes.解析：①審題及布局。根據(jù)提綱，這篇作文的第一段闡述現(xiàn)象，第二段闡明此現(xiàn)象的弊端，第三段提出解決辦法。這三個部分的論述要有側(cè)重點，我們可以把重點放在第二段或第三段。第一段闡明留守兒童現(xiàn)象是隨著大批進城務(wù)工者的出現(xiàn)而出現(xiàn)的。第二段闡述留守兒童所遭遇的問題：缺少父母的關(guān)愛，他們的身心都很有可能得不到健康的發(fā)展。第三段可以根據(jù)弊端的根源即缺少關(guān)愛人手，提出一系列建議，讓他們感受到關(guān)愛，得以健康成長。②語言。這篇文章討論的是當前的情況，用一般現(xiàn)在時即可。在第二、三段的論述中，為了達到表意清晰，邏輯性強，要使用各種關(guān)聯(lián)詞，同時注意用詞的鮮明、準確。

5.SayNotoPiratedProductsPiracyisaseriousproblemwithwhichthiscountryisconfronted.Inmanyplacesweseepeoplepeddlingpiratedbooksordisks.ActuallypiracyhasbecomesowidespreadthatithassevSayNotoPiratedProductsPiracyisaseriousproblemwithwhichthiscountryisconfronted.Inmanyplacesweseepeoplepeddlingpiratedbooksordisks.Actually,piracyhasbecomesowidespreadthatithassev

6.DiligenceIstheKeytoSuccessDiligenceisthekeytosuccess.Itmeansthatsuccessinvolvespersistentworkbutdoesnotimplythatwearetoexertourselvesaroundtheclockwithoutfooddrinkorsleep.Thetruemeaningofdiligenceisthecarefuluseofone'stimeforthepurposeofsuccessortoworkpersistentlywithoutwastingtime.Somepeoplebelieveinluck.Thisisaseriousmistake.Ifthereisreallyanyluckatallitwillnevercometoalazyperson.Ifafarmerplowshisfieldonedayandthenremainsidlefortherestoftheseasonthebestofluckwillnotbringhimanything.Therewouldbenoharvestforhimatall.Thosearecleverwhounderstandtheimportanceofdiligenceandmakeittheirhabit.Itistheywhoareontherightwaytosuccess.Therearealsopeoplewhoalwaysthinkthatluckismoredecisiveinbringingaboutsuccessandthereforethereisnoneedforworkinghard.Buttheyfailtorealizethatdiligenceisthekeyandonlydiligencewillbringthemluckandsuccess.DiligenceIstheKeytoSuccessDiligenceisthekeytosuccess.Itmeansthatsuccessinvolvespersistentworkbutdoesnotimplythatwearetoexertourselvesaroundtheclockwithoutfood,drinkorsleep.Thetruemeaningofdiligenceisthecarefuluseofone'stimeforthepurposeofsuccess,ortoworkpersistentlywithoutwastingtime.Somepeoplebelieveinluck.Thisisaseriousmistake.Ifthereisreallyanyluckatall,itwillnevercometoalazyperson.Ifafarmerplowshisfieldonedayandthenremainsidlefortherestoftheseason,thebestofluckwillnotbringhimanything.Therewouldbenoharvestforhimatall.Thosearecleverwhounderstandtheimportanceofdiligenceandmakeittheirhabit.Itistheywhoareontherightwaytosuccess.Therearealsopeoplewhoalwaysthinkthatluckismoredecisiveinbringingaboutsuccessandthereforethereisnoneedforworkinghard.Buttheyfailtorealizethatdiligenceisthekey,andonlydiligencewillbringthemluckandsuccess.

7.MyViewonOnlineShopping(1)Intheeraofnetworkonlineshoppinghasbecomeoneofthemodernmeansbywhichpeopledotheirshopping.MoreandmorecollegestudentsareenjoyingtheconvenienceandfunthatnetwoMyViewonOnlineShopping(1)Intheeraofnetwork,onlineshoppinghasbecomeoneofthemodernmeansbywhichpeopledotheirshopping.Moreandmorecollegestudentsareenjoyingtheconvenienceandfunthatnetwo解析：本文是一篇六級作文考試中常見的議論文，要求考生就“大學生網(wǎng)上購物”展開討論。題目要求考生首先描述這一現(xiàn)象，其次分析原因，最后表達自己的看法，是典型的現(xiàn)象解釋型作文。

[寫作提綱]

一、描述背景，引出現(xiàn)象

1．描述背景：網(wǎng)絡(luò)時代，網(wǎng)上購物成為一種流行趨勢(network，onlineshopping，modern)

2．引出現(xiàn)象：大學生選擇網(wǎng)上購物，享受其帶來的方便和樂趣(collegestudents，enjoy，convenience，fun)

二、分析原因

1．原因一：網(wǎng)上購物價格便宜，能省錢(lowerprice，savemoney)

2．原因二：網(wǎng)上購物資源豐富，能買到商場里買不到的東西(awealthofcommodityinformation，available，everythingconceivable)

3．原因三：網(wǎng)上購物不用排隊，只需點鼠標(insteadofqueuingup，afewclicksofmouse)

三、“我”的看法：更多人將接受網(wǎng)購，享受到選擇多、價位低的好處(accept，cheapershopping，moreselections)

(1)intheeraof意為“在…時代”。

(2)過渡句，提出問題。

(3)分析原因的常用表達。

(4)Firstofall，Besides，Moreover，分析網(wǎng)上購物流行的三條原因。

(5)Inotherwords意為“換言之”，進一步解釋上文所表達的意思。

(6)常用來引出個人觀點。

8.TakingCareoftheOld(1)Agingisbecomingaglobalissue.Thedevelopmentofmedicaltechnology(2)makesitpossibleforpeopletolivelongerthaninthepast.Andtakingcareoftheoldhasbecomeamajorconcernforall(3)thatliveinanagingsociety.(4)Asundergraduateswhatshouldwedofortheold?(5)Firstofallwecanbeginfrom(6)caringforourelderrelatives.It'shelpfulthatwevisitouraginggrandparentsregularlytakethemoutforawalkandtalkabouttheolddays.(5)What'smoreitisagoodideatofilloursparetimeworkingasvolunteersto(7)lookaftertheelderatnursinghomes.(5)Lastbutnotleastwemayjointheeffortwithourknowledgeinconstructinganelderlycaringsystemwiththeintegrationoffamiliescommunitieswelfareinstitutionsandgovernments.(8)Thereisnodoubtthattakingcareoftheoldisademandingandtime-consumingtask.(9)Howeverthelivingconditionofseniorcitizensreflectsanation'slivingstandardandsocialmorals.Moreimportantlylivingwiththeelderandcaringforthemisarewardingexperience.TakingCareoftheOld(1)Agingisbecomingaglobalissue.Thedevelopmentofmedicaltechnology(2)makesitpossibleforpeopletolivelongerthaninthepast.Andtakingcareoftheoldhasbecomeamajorconcernforall(3)thatliveinanagingsociety.(4)Asundergraduates,whatshouldwedofo