人教版高中英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作專題訓(xùn)練-慰問信-導(dǎo)學(xué)案

高中英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)寫作專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練—慰問信Learningaims:Tolearnhowtowritealetterofsympathy;Towritealetterofsympathybyimitatingthesample.Step1Self-learning作文原題：你班同學(xué)Tom生重病住院兩個(gè)星期了，同學(xué)們都很難過。今天班主任要去醫(yī)院看他，并請你代表全班同學(xué)寫一封慰問信，要點(diǎn)如下：

1.

表示同情和關(guān)心

2.

送他一個(gè)包裹（幸運(yùn)星和千紙鶴；現(xiàn)金一萬元）

3.

祝他早日康復(fù)，返校上課

參考詞匯：

幸運(yùn)星：lucky

stars

千紙鶴：paper

cranes

OnePossibleVersionDear

Tom,

I’m

very

sorry

to

heat

that

you

are

seriously

ill

and

that

you

have

been

in

hospital

for

about

two

weeks.

We

are

very

concerned

about

you

and

your

studies.

Our

head

teacher

is

coming

to

see

you

today,

so

we

ask

him

to

bring

you

a

packagewith

some

lucky

stars

and

colorful

paper

cranes

in

it.

I

hope

you

will

like

it

and

it

will

bring

good

luck

to

you.

Also

you’ll

receive

10,000

yuan,

which

will

help

you

pay

the

medical

fees.

Don’t

worry

aboutyour

studies,

we’ll

try

to

help

you

make

up

the

lessons

you

have

missed,

because

we

are

good

friends.I

hope

I

can

come

and

see

you

soon

on

Sunday.

Everyone

in

our

class

misses

you

very

much,

hoping

you’ll

be

well

again

and

get

back

soon.

Yours

sincerely,

Li

Hua1.題型特點(diǎn)

慰問信是向失敗者、生病者、不幸者、愁苦者或遇到天災(zāi)人禍的人表示安慰或同情的信件。此類信要寫得及時(shí)、簡明扼要，感情要真誠，措辭要貼切，盡量以樂觀的口吻減輕親友的煩惱和痛苦，并鼓勵(lì)對方對日后煩人生活、學(xué)習(xí)、工作充滿信心。2.寫作思路

第一步：引出事實(shí)，表達(dá)惋惜和同情；

第二步：安慰對方或鼓勵(lì)對方，預(yù)測未來；

第三步：表達(dá)愿望和祝福。慰問信寫作必備詞匯詞組:慰問sympathyn.2.痛苦painn.3.緩解reliefn.4.祈禱prayv.5.接受慰問acceptsb’ssympathy6.代表...onbehalfof....7.我想表達(dá)...I’dliketoexpress...8.這封信的目的是...Thepurposeoftheletteristo…9.英語日期表達(dá)：2017年9月6日September6(th),2017e.g.TheywillgetmarriedonOctober25,2017.10.我們很期待...We

are

looking

forward

to...

詞句模板

1．段首常用語：普通版：①We

are

so

sorry

to

hear

the

news

about

the

earthquake.

聽到地震的消息我們很難②I

was

shocked

at

the

news

about

the

earthquake

in

…

聽聞……地震的消息我很震驚。

高級版：I

just

can’t

tell

you

how

sorry

I

was

to

learn

of

your

accident.

我剛得知上個(gè)星期你病了。

2.段中常用語：普通版：If

there

is

anything

I

can

do

to

help

you,

please

let

me

know.

如果需要我的幫助，請告知。高級版：Please

extend

our

deep

sympathy

to

your

family.

請向你的家人轉(zhuǎn)達(dá)我們最深切的同情。3.段尾常用語：普通版：I

hope

you

are

getting

some

relief

from

the

pain.

我真心希望能減輕你的痛苦。高級版：We

are

looking

forward

to

/hoping

and

praying

for

your

speedy

and

full

recovery.

我們真心希望你早日康復(fù)。慰問信格式模板：Dear,

I

am,

I

am

very

sorry

to

have

heard

that.

/

I

am

shocked

at

the

newsabout(引出具體實(shí)情，表示惋惜和同情)

If.

Please

extend

our

deep

sympathy

to

your

family.

I

hope

you

will

make

efforts

to

overcome

all

kinds

of

difficulty,

no

matter

how

hard

it

is.

You

are

sure

to

make

it.(進(jìn)一步安慰并鼓勵(lì)對方)

I

will

try

my

best

to,

which

may

help

you

.It

will

give

more

courage

to

liveon.(表示自己意愿提供幫助)

I

hopeWe

are

looking

forward

to.

(表達(dá)愿望與祝福)

Yours

sincerely,

XX

Step2WritingWritealetterofsympathywithinthetimegivenaccordingtowhatyouhavelearnt.據(jù)報(bào)道，7歲的美國女孩Amy

Bruce得知自己身患肺癌(lung

cancer)后處于極度的痛苦之中，美國抗癌協(xié)會(ACS)決定，每當(dāng)Amy收到一封慰問信，就給她增加3美分的治療款。

假如你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，請你用英文給Amy寫一封慰問信，主要內(nèi)容包括：

自我介紹

2、得知的情況

3、表示鼓勵(lì)

4、打算為她做什么

5、祝她早日康復(fù)_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Step3DiscussionDiscussthedifficultpointswithyourgroupmembers.Step4Feedingback

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