高三英語作文公開課如何使你的作文顏值與才華齊飛

高三英語作文公開課如何使你的作文顏值與才華齊飛第1頁/共38頁欣賞一個人，

始于顏值，

敬于才華,

…第2頁/共38頁Howaboutacomposition?欣賞一篇文章

始于“顏值”

敬于“才華”第3頁/共38頁作文五檔：（從教師閱卷印象角度劃分）漂漂亮亮（21—25分）有模有樣（16—20分）馬馬虎虎（11—15分）稀里糊涂（6—10分）一塌糊涂（0—5分）第4頁/共38頁顏值代表第5頁/共38頁唐美林22.5第6頁/共38頁黃佳倩21第7頁/共38頁高“顏值”的文章能夠評委老師留下好印象，先聲奪人。但是“好文章”卻不僅限于只有“顏值”，…….第8頁/共38頁詞匯句型銜接過渡第9頁/共38頁回顧作文題目假設你是李華，你的美國筆友Andy即將到你所在的中學做一年的交換生，想提前了解一些情況，故向你求助。請給他寫一封回信，提供有關天氣、當?shù)仫嬍沉晳T、學校生活方面的信息。第10頁/共38頁高級表達過渡詞非限制性定語從句諺語賓語從句動名詞做主語第11頁/共38頁唐美林22.5第12頁/共38頁Itgoeswithoutsayingthatourclassmateisextremelywarm-heartedandopen-minded.Ifirmlybelievethatyouwillhaveacolorfulandmeaningfulschoollifehere.陳梅第13頁/共38頁Andourschooloftenhold

activitiestoenrichourschoollife,sowehaveameaningfulandcolorfulschoollife.Topromoteourfriendship,Iwillkeepagoodrelationshipwithyou.Ibelieveyoucanfitinourschoollife……陳小露第14頁/共38頁怎樣能使我們的文章顏值與才華齊飛？第15頁/共38頁Tips1：顏值★1、分段要合理。絕大多數(shù)高考范文以及高分作文都是分為2~3段的，也有少數(shù)是4-5段的。★

2、書寫要美觀。書寫要符合英文書寫習慣，字母的大小，字母之間的距離要勻稱，盡量減少涂改、增補的現(xiàn)象。第16頁/共38頁Tips2：詞匯1、高級詞匯代替低級詞匯chance---opportunity;so---thereforeimportant---vital2、短語代替單個單詞important---beofgreatimportanceshould---besupposedtohelpsb---dosbafavorvisit---payavisitto可參考三維設計P136頁第17頁/共38頁Tips3：句型定語從句賓語從句非謂語動詞被動句名詞性從句強調(diào)句With的復合結構常用諺語省略句倒裝句…….第18頁/共38頁Thereisnodoubtthat...Itgoeswithoutsayingthat毫無疑問,……Thereisnodoubtthat/Itgoeswithoutsayingthatmoreandmorestudentschoosetostudyabroad.

Moreandmorestudentschoosetostudyabroad.固定句型：同位語從句第19頁/共38頁MoreattentionshouldbegiventoteachingandlearningEnglish.Measuresshouldbetakentoprotectourmotherriver.固定句型：被動句Moreattentionshouldbegivento……Measuresshouldbetakento……第20頁/共38頁Itisbelievedthat...Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat.....人們認為Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthathealthismoreimportantthanwealth.Healthismoreimportantthanwealth.固定句型：主語從句第21頁/共38頁Onlyinthiswaycansbdo….Onlybydoing...cansbdo....只有通過這種方式我們才能....Onlyinthiswaycanyousolvethisproblem.Onlybytakingexercise

canwe

keephealthy.固定句型：倒裝句第22頁/共38頁IfIwereyou,Iwould……IfIwereyou,Iwouldtakepartinmoreactivities.固定句型：虛擬語氣Itishightimethatsbdidsth/shoulddosthItishightimethatwepaid/shouldpay

moreattentiontoourenvironment第23頁/共38頁1、Itis/was+被強調(diào)部分+that/who+其余成分固定句型：強調(diào)句2、Itis/wasnotuntil……that……3、用do來強調(diào)動詞Ibelieveyoucandoit.Idobelieveyoucandoit.Ourteacheralwayshelpuswhenweareintrouble.Itisourteacherthatalwayshelpuswhenweareintrouble.第24頁/共38頁我認為......Iamconvincedthat….AsfarasIamconcerned,…..Frommypointofview,…..FromwhereIstand,……第25頁/共38頁諺語格言名言1、Afriendinneedisafriendindeed2、Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.3、WheninRoam,doasaRomansdo.4、Practicemakesperfect.5、Nopains,nogains.6、Failureisthemotherofsuccess.7、Roamwasnotbuildinaday.8、Everycoinhastwosides.……Asanoldsayinggoes,“……”第26頁/共38頁firstly,secondly,thirdly,then,finally,intheend,what’smore,moreover,moreimportantly,besides，inadditiononeonhand,ontheotherhand，onthecontrary，therefore，asaresult，inotherwords，asyouknow,asweallknow,generallyspeaking,asamatteroffacttotellyouthetruth……Tips4：銜接過渡第27頁/共38頁第28頁/共38頁第29頁/共38頁可能整篇不完美，也許有一個段落應得稱贊；沒有一個段落完美，也許有一個句子值得肯定；沒有一句子完美，也許有一個詞用得精彩。Nevergiveup!!!Aslongasyoukeeptrying,youcansucceed.第30頁/共38頁Haveatry:第31頁/共38頁DearAndy,

I’mgladtohearthatyouarecomingtostudywithusforayearasanexchangestudent.

It’smygreathonortoprovideyousomeinformationaboutourcityandourschool,hopingitcanhelpyou.

ThereisnodoubtthatourcountryisdifferentfromAmerica,thereforeitisnecessaryforyoutorespectthelocalcustomandgetaccustomedtothelifehere.Inthefirstplace,theweatherhereischangeable.Itiswiseforyoutotakeanumbrellawhenyougoout.第32頁/共38頁Inaddition,ourcityhasareputationforitsdeliciousfood.Notonlycanyouenjoythetastyseafood,butalsovariousfruits.However,weallusechopsticks,whichisextremelydifficultforforeigners.Lastbutnotleast,ourschoolisafantasticplacewithmanyafterclassactivities.ourteachersandclassmatesareratherkindandfriendly,youcanturntothemforhelp.Lookingforwardtomeetingyou.Yours,LiHua第33頁/共38頁