讀后續(xù)寫：個人成長類-蛙泳比賽講義 高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項

高三第三次適應(yīng)性考試英語讀后續(xù)寫題目：閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。讀后續(xù)寫原文Ohno.CoachCaffertyjustsaidmyname.Forthatevent.Thetwo-hundred-metrebreaststrokeforthecomingmeet!NotthebackstrokeIhadwishedandpracticedforsolong!中文噢不。Cafferty教練剛剛喊了我的名字。這個比賽項目是200米蛙泳，而不是我長期以來一直希望和練習(xí)的仰泳！Beadsofsweatpoppedoutovermyupperlip.(積累這個句式)

Morganpressedherelbowintomyside,tryingtoofferme

moralsupport.

Butitdidn'thelp.

Mystomachsanktomykneeslikeabrickinwater.

Morgantriedtoconvincemeitwouldbefine."MaybeCoachhasmoreconfidenceinyouthanyouthink.""OrmaybeCoachCaffertyjustwantstogivetherestalaughwhenIsinktothebottomofthepool,"Ithoughtdesperately.IwalkedtowardsCoachCaffertyandtoldheraboutmyinabilityandmydesiretoquitthisevent.ShefrownedandaskedifitwaswhatIreallywanted.Ihesitated.Placingherhandonmyshoulder,shestartedsmilingandencouragedmetopushmyselfoutsideofmycomfortzone.汗珠從我的上唇冒出來。Morgan胳膊肘頂著我的腰，試圖給我精神鼓勵。但這沒有幫助。我的胃像磚塊一樣下沉到了我的膝蓋處。Morgan試圖說服我一切都會好的?！耙苍S教練對你的信心比你想象得更多?！薄盎蛘逤afferty教練只是想讓其他人在我沉到池底時發(fā)笑，”我絕望地想到。我走向Cafferty教練，告訴她我的無能和想要退出這個比賽項目的愿望。她皺起眉頭問我是否真的這么想。我猶豫了。她把手放在我的肩上，開始微笑并鼓勵我突破自己的舒適區(qū)。Thefirstpracticewasadisaster.Ilostrhythmonmystrokes.Imessedupmyturns.Ievenhadtostopandcatchmybreathafewtimes.Ifelteveryonewaslaughingatmeand

mystomachtwisted.

HowcouldImakeitwithinjusttwoweeks?ButonceIdraggedmyselfoutofthewater,exhaustedandfrustrated,CoachCaffertythumbeduptome,sayingIdidreallywellandjustneededmoreconfidenceinmyselfandmoretimetopractice.第一次練習(xí)是一場災(zāi)難。我的劃水節(jié)奏不對，轉(zhuǎn)彎出現(xiàn)了問題。我甚至不得不停下來喘口氣。我感覺每個人都在笑我，我的胃直扭曲。在僅有兩周的時間內(nèi)如何完成？但是當(dāng)我筋疲力盡，沮喪地從水中爬出來時，Cafferty教練豎起大拇指，說我做得很好，只需要更多自信和練習(xí)的時間。Onthewaybackhome,Morgancomfortedme,"Dear,justignoreothers.Raceagainstyourself.Countyourownstrokes.Provetoyourselfthatyoucandoit."Withthesewordssaidtomealmosteveryday,beforeoraftereachpractice,somethinggraduallychanged:bothhowIswamthebreaststrokeandhowIfeltabouttheeventaswellasmyself.在回家的路上，Morgan安慰我說，“親愛的，別在乎別人，與你自己比賽，計算自己的劃水次數(shù)，向自己證明你能做到。”她幾乎每天在練習(xí)前后說這些話給我聽，漸漸地，一些事情發(fā)生了改變：我的蛙泳成績以及我對比賽和我對自己的看法。Themeetfinallycame.Iarrivedatthepoolhall,stillalittlebitworried.

Aseacheventclickedclosertomine,mykneesshook.

Ibitmylipandlookedoutovertheotherswimmers.

Morganleanedforward."Justswimyourrace.Remember,youcan!"比賽終于來了。我來到游泳館，仍有點(diǎn)擔(dān)心。隨著每個比賽項目逐漸接近，我的膝蓋不停地顫抖。我咬著嘴唇看著其他游泳者。Morgan傾身對我說道："只需游好自己的比賽。你要知道，你行的！"續(xù)寫第一段：Thenthetwo-hundred-meterbreaststrokewasannounced.然后宣布了200米蛙泳的比賽項目。續(xù)寫第二段：Therewasonly50meterstogo.只剩下50米了。主旨：克服挑戰(zhàn)，突破自己。

故事線：主人公因?yàn)榻叹毟淖兯谋荣愴椖慷械骄趩剩窃诮叹毢团笥训墓膭钕?，她開始克服困難和不安，最終在比賽中取得了成功。發(fā)展線：一是主人公在練習(xí)蛙泳的過程中，遇到了很多困難和挫折，但通過不斷努力和教練的指導(dǎo)，逐漸提高了自己的技能和信心；二是主人公內(nèi)心的變化，從最初的焦慮和自我懷疑，到最后的自信和勇氣。試水作文：續(xù)寫第一段:Thenthetwo-hundred-milestonebreaststrokewasannounced.MyheartsankasItookmyplaceatthestartingblock,surroundedbyexperiencedswimmerswhohadbeenpracticingformonths.Thewhistleblewandwewereoff,thewaterchurningaroundmeasIplungedforward.

Forthefirsthalfoftherace,

Istruggledtokeepupwiththeothers.

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words:"Justswimyourrace."Ifocusedonmyownstrokes,countingeachoneasIpulledmyselfthroughthewater.續(xù)寫第二段:(沒寫主人公贏得比賽，而是寫成戰(zhàn)勝了自己，打破了自己的最好成績。）Therewasonly50meterstogo.

Myarmsandlegsburnedwithexhaustion,butIrefusedtogiveup.Ipushedmyselfharderthaneverbefore,countingmystrokesandfocusingonmytechnique.AsIapproachedthefinishline,Igaveonefinalburstofenergyandtouchedthewall.Ilookedupatthescoreboard,andmyheartleapedwithjoy.Ihaddoneit!Ihadnotonlycompletedtheracebuthadalsobeatenmypersonalbesttime.TearsofhappinessstreameddownmyfaceasIhuggedmyfamilyandfriends.IhadproventomyselfthatIwascapableofanythingifIjustbelievedinmyselfandpushedmyselfoutsideofmycomfortzone.范文：Thenthetwo-hundred-milestonebreaststrokewasannounced.

Calmnessgraduallyseizingme,Icontinuedtopractiseandgraduallymadeprogressinthefollowingpractices.Finally,WednesdaycameandIarrivedatthepoolhallnervously.Soonitwasmyturnandtomysurprise,Ihadagoodbeginning.

AsIplungedintothewater,Icouldfeelmybodymovingsmoothlythroughthepool.Mystrokeswerestrongandsteady,andIfeltlikeIwasmakinggoodprogress.Thefirstfewlapswentbyquickly,andIwassurprisedathowwellIwasdoing.However,asIapproachedthehalfwaymark,mybodystartedtofeelthestrain.Mylegsbegantoache,andmyarmswerestartingtotire.Despitethepain,Ikeptpushingmyselfforward,determinedtofinishtherace.Therewasonly50meterstogo.

Mylegswerepillarsoflead.Ikicked,butitfeltlikeIwasmovingthroughcement.Myarmswereonfire,andmylungswerebursting.IslappeditwithwhatlittleenergyIhadleft.Therewasnooneelseleftinthepool.Ihadfinishedlast.Afterthemeet,Morganfoundme,exhausted,collapsinginachair.“I’msoproudofyou,”hesaid.“Ilost.”“Yeah.”Shenodded.“Butyoudidit,right?”Ibitmylip.“Yeah.IguessIdid.”Ididn’tcomeclosetoplacing,butIhadgiveneverythingIhadtofinish.“Iswammyrace.AndIthinkIwon.”Raceisnotonlytobeatyourcompetitorsbutalsotoraceagainstyourself.這篇讀后續(xù)寫文本和《湖南省永州市2023屆高三上學(xué)期第二次適應(yīng)性測試（二模）英語試題》讀后續(xù)寫以及《2023年浙江省溫州市龍灣區(qū)、洞頭區(qū)中考一模英語試題》的完形填空來源同一文本。但是本篇讀后續(xù)寫的最大區(qū)別在于“CoachCafferty”和“Morgan”角色的不同，在永州二模卷里，“Morgan”變成了“Mom”，Coach的“鼓勵”角色被弱化，在中考模擬卷里只有Coach的角色，而溫州三模是將“鼓勵”的角色一分為二，分別給與了Coach和Morgan，所以對于人物處理來說，本篇的讀后續(xù)寫難度更大。附上永州二模的讀后續(xù)寫：《湖南省永州市2023屆高三上學(xué)期第二次適應(yīng)性測試(二模)英語試題》讀后續(xù)寫“JAMIEEVANS”O(jiān)hno.PleasetellmethatCoachCaffertydidNOTjustsaymyname.Notfortheone-hundred-meterbreaststroke(睡泳).Exceptalleveswereturnedtomewhensheannouncedit,andherevesmetmineovertheclipboardthatheldthelistofeventsandswimmersforthePlainTownshipAquaticCentermeet.ThePTACmeetwasthefirstoftheseason,andlwasnotready.“Remember,themeetisonWednesdaynight.Behereatfourthirtyforandtheracekicksoffatsix.I'llseeyouatpracticetomorrow”CoachCaffertyadded.Thecrowdclearedquicklyandlheadedbackhome,feelingdesperate.“DidyoufindoutyoureventsforWednesday?"Momaskedassheslidthepizzaboxacrossthetabletome.-“Yeah.One-hundredbreaststroke,finallysaid,notmeetinghereyes.“Idon’tknowwhyCoachdidn'tgivemebackstroke(仰泳).Sheknowsit'smybest.Ican'tswimbreaststroke!”“Maybesheseessomethingyoudon't."Momsaid."Ormaybelshouldjustquittheswimteam.Momfrowned.“Isthatwhatyouwant?”Isighed.“No."tookabiteofmypizza."I'mterribleatbreaststroke.WhathappenswhenlshowuponWednesdayandrace,andIsinktothebottomofthepool?Orevenworse,comeinlast?”“Someonehastobelast”Mompointedout.ButIdon'tevenknowiflcanswimbreaststrokeforone-hundredmeters!Isetmypizzadown.“Shehadsubmittedthenames,butthere'snowaylcandothis.“Youcould.Buthowwillyouknowunlessyoutry?”Mompersuaded.“Yeah,butifItry,Icouldfail.lnfrontofeveryone."Ipicturedtheentirecrowdwatchingasfinishedlast,pointingandlaughing.Mybellysqueezed.MomsetherpizzadownandgavemeherI'm-saying-something-important-so-listenface“Don'tworryaboutotherpeople.Justraceagainstyourself.Forgetaboutanythingelseexceptdoingyourbestandswimmingyourownrace.Provetoyourselfthatyoucandoit.”Somehow,thereseemedamysteriouspowerinherwordscomfortingmyunsettlingheartandIdecidedtohaveatry.Thenextday,Iwasatpracticeasrequired.Paragraph1:-Thefirstpracticewasadisaster.-Paragraph2:Theneverythingcrashedinthelast5metersoftherace.范文：Paragraph1:Thefirstpracticewasadisaster.Ididn'tswimbreaststrokeforone-hundredmetersandsanktothebottomofthepool.couldfeepeoplesurroundingwereapointingandlaughing,Whatashame.Faceblushing,wasabouttogiveupagainwhenmom'swordsresoundedinmymind."Don'tworryaboutotherpeople.Justraceagainsty