鳳凰國際英語托福獨立寫作強化提分

LessonTwo托福獨立寫作強化提分今日內容如何提升獨立寫作分數(shù)？1）開頭段：其他引言段寫作方法2）正文：其他論證結構3）活用素材4）語句潤色5）觀點創(chuàng)新6）限時寫作與講解開頭段傳統(tǒng)方法：背景+觀點常用詞匯事件：issue,problem,question熱門，棘手：hot,heated,urgent,burning,pressing,pervasive,rampant爭論：debate,controversy,argument,dispute一致，同意：consensus引起注意：inthelimelight,broughtintoattention,focus,concern帶來問題：impose,cause出現(xiàn)問題：loomup,cropus面臨問題：confront,encounter,facequestion緊急的：acute困擾：beplagued,embarrassed,upsetby見證：witness,see驚人的：alarming,startling,surprising使惡化：worsen,deteriorate討厭的：undesirable廣泛的：pervasive,rampant,prevalent存在：underway常用句型Withtherapid/amazingdevelopmentof…Accordingtorecentsurvey/poll/study,therehaveoccurred…Thereisaheated/focuseddebateatpresentabouttheissueof…Allreliableevidencejustifiesthefact/viewthat…isarampantissueintoday’ssociety.Recently/nowadays/atpresent,thephenomenonof…h(huán)asloomedupwidepublicconcern.Thealarmabouttheissueof…h(huán)ascausedconsiderable/generalattention.Thequestionof…h(huán)asbeeninthelimelight/broughtintofocus.Nowadays,oursocietyiswitnessingmoreandmore…其他方法：論題+各方觀點+觀點是指在文章開頭首先給出人們對要討論的問題的不同看法和觀點，然后提出作者對此問題的態(tài)度。適用于有爭議性的主題。語料常用詞匯反對：object,challenge認為：acknowledge,accept,maintain,hold,conceive爭議：controversy辯論：contend容忍，讓步：concede主張：setforth,advocate,endorse同意：consent招致反對：provokecriticism不可避免的：inevitable可行性：feasibility歪曲事實：slant,distort退一步說：conceding假想：assumption適度的，適量的：moderate懷疑的：skeptic套用句型Thereismuchdiscussionastotheproblemof…Thosewhoobjectto…arguethat…Butthosewhoadvocate…ontheotherhand,arguethat…Thereisnoagreementamongpeopleastotheissueof…Somepeoplesaythat…Otherssaythat…Astome,Iamonthefirstsideoftheargument.Thefollowingexamplescanprovemystandpoint.Thereisapublicdebateastotheissueof…Nowadays,itiscommonlybelieved/widelyheldthat…,butIdoubtwhetherNowadays,itisgenerallyacknowledgedthat…butIdoubtwhether…Whenaskedabout…,thevastmajorityofpeoplesaythat…Butotherpeopleregard…as…Whenfacedwith…quiteafewpeopleclaimthat…Butotherpeoplethink…套用句型Whenitcomesto...,mostpeoplebelievethat…butotherpeopleviewitas…Thereisapubliccontroversynowadaysovertheissueof…Thosewhoobjecttotheideaarguethat…Butpeoplewhofavor…arguethat…Thereisaheateddebatetodayabouttheproblemof…Inthefaceof…somepeopletakethepositionthat…,towhichIcan’tattachmyconsent.Althoughpeoplearriveathecommonunderstandingof…,theirviewsareatoppositepoleswhentalkabouttheissueof…….seemstoprovokewidecriticismintoday’ssociety.Thevalueofthisformof…isnowbeingquestionedby…Thereisagrowingskepticismtoward…例子1話題：經(jīng)濟應該緩慢發(fā)展還是迅速發(fā)展Nowadays,thereismuchdiscussionaboutwhetherfasteconomicgrowthisdesirable.Thosewhocriticizeeconomicgrowtharguethatwemustslowdown.Theybelievethatsocietyisapproachingcertainlimitsongrowth.Theseincludethefixedsupplyofnaturalresources,andthepossiblenegativeeffectsofindustryonthenaturalenvironment.Peoplewhowantmoreeconomicgrowth,ontheotherhand,arguethatevenatthepresentgrowthratetherearestillmanypoorpeople.Personally,Ithinkthesecondideawillholdwater.

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