高中英語讀后續(xù)寫積累素材積累(一)

續(xù)寫累積姓名：______________班級：_______________一、環(huán)境描繪的素材環(huán)境描繪分為客觀和主觀兩種角度：客觀為從環(huán)境事物自己下手，主觀則從察看者角度描繪。平常在描繪時(shí)主客觀交替進(jìn)行，主觀描繪比重稍大。客觀環(huán)境描繪：Part1環(huán)境描繪的adj要求：有聲，有色，有質(zhì)感，有滋味thebluesky(藍(lán)天）thesongsofbirds（鳥鳴）thethunderingclouds（電光閃雷鳴）thefragileflowers(嬌貴的花）;（thedark,rainingevening雨夜交加的夜晚）thegreengrass（青草）thefragrantroses（明朗的玫瑰）;thesetting/risingsun(夕陽/逐漸升起的太陽）Part2環(huán)境描繪的verb（vi&vt）要求)．Wind（blow/click/howl/wail/roar）1.Agustofwindblewandpartedthedroopingbranchesoftheweepingwillowlikeacurtain,一陣風(fēng)吹，吹起了彎柳的低垂枝條，就像卷起的窗簾。2.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.風(fēng)，柔和卻嚴(yán)寒，輕點(diǎn)著樹枝，攪動(dòng)著斜坡下的灌木叢。3.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthequietpark涼.爽的細(xì)風(fēng)吹拂著寧靜的公園。4.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.(涼風(fēng)吹拂過我的頭發(fā)）Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift.（今天正是放風(fēng)箏的晴天氣，強(qiáng)烈的風(fēng)力帶動(dòng)了風(fēng)箏的上漲。）)．Water(flow/travel/move/meander/enter)聲音：1.Atonepoint,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某處，潺潺的的水聲在山谷中奏響。顏色2.Thewaterwasdeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.水是深藍(lán)色的，陽光在透明的玻璃表面閃閃發(fā)光。3.Alittlewayoffwasasmallbrook,rushingandsparklingalongbetweengreenbank.離此不遠(yuǎn),有一條小溪，在綠色的河岸間奔跑閃耀。4.Itmurmuredinasoftvoicelikealittleinnocentgirlwhisperedtoherlovingmother.憂如它在溫柔低語，就一位天真少女對著她那慈祥的母親細(xì)細(xì)密語。(action,sound,colour))．Sky(stand/appear/turn)1.Theskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.天空是濃濃的灰色，伴著擁堵的朵朵云2.Blueskiesstoodtallandfar藍(lán)藍(lán)的天空高高矗立1主觀環(huán)境描繪：1.Sbfoundsthadj/doing/done某人發(fā)現(xiàn)某物（狀態(tài)/動(dòng)作/被）...2.Sbsaw/heard/felt/smeltsthdoing/done某人看到/聽到/感覺/聞到某物（狀態(tài)/動(dòng)作/被）3.Itwassoadjthatwefind/feel它是這樣....以致于4.Sthkeptsbspellbound/amazed/光景使我這樣沉醉/吃驚/sthheldsbentirelyintheirpower光景讓我完滿驚呆了5.Itlooked/seemed/appeared/feltlike光景看起來像二、場景描繪的素材（來自原著：追風(fēng)箏的人）Atleasttwodozenkitesalreadyhunginthesky,likepapersharksroamingforprey.Withinanhour,thenumberdoubled,andred,blue,andyellowkitesglidedandspuninthesky.Acoldbreezewaftedthroughmyhair.Thewindwasperfectforkiteflying,blowingjusthardenoughtogivesomelift,makethesweepseasier.（放風(fēng)箏的場景描繪，從各個(gè)角度，立體描繪）空中已經(jīng)掛著最少二十來只風(fēng)箏，憂如紙制的鯊魚，巡游搜獵食品。不到一個(gè)鐘頭，這個(gè)數(shù)字翻了一番，紅色的、藍(lán)色的、黃色的風(fēng)箏在蒼穹往返飛舞，熠熠生輝。嚴(yán)寒的細(xì)風(fēng)吹過我的頭發(fā)。這風(fēng)正適合放風(fēng)箏，風(fēng)速不大，恰巧能讓風(fēng)箏飄浮起來，也便于控制。Thewaterwasadeepblueandsunlightglitteredonitslookingglass-clearsurface.湖水澄藍(lán)，波平如鏡，陽光照在湖上熠熠生輝。3.ThenIglancedupandsawapairofkites,redwithlongbluetails,soaringinthesky.Theydancedhighabovethetreesonthewestendofthepark,overthewindmills,floatingsidebysidelikeapairofeyeslookingdownonSanFrancisco,thecityInowcallhome.（場景、比喻）我抬初步，看見兩只紅色的風(fēng)箏，帶著長長的藍(lán)色尾巴，在天空中逐漸升起。它們飛舞著，飛越公園西邊的樹林，飛越風(fēng)車，并排飄浮著，憂如一雙眼睛俯視著舊金山，這個(gè)我此刻看作家園的城市。Blueskiesstoodtallandfar,thesunlikeabrandingironsearingthebackofyourneck.CreekswhereHassanandIskippedstonesallspringturneddry,andrickshawsstirreddustwhentheysputteredby（.場景、比喻）天空一碧如洗，陽光像烙鐵般灼痛后頸。整個(gè)春季我和哈桑在溪流取水漂，到了夏季它們也枯竭了。黃包車嗒嗒走過，揚(yáng)起陣陣塵埃。Somewhere,abranchsnapped,anowlhooted.Thewind,softandcold,clickedthroughtreebranchesandstirredthebushesthatsprinkledtheslope.Andfrombelow,thefaintsoundofwatertumblingthroughthevalley.在某個(gè)地方傳來樹枝劈啪作響的聲音，還有貓頭鷹的喊聲。北風(fēng)輕輕拂動(dòng)樹枝，吹過山坡上的灌木叢。而下邊，水流在山谷淌動(dòng)，傳來陣陣略微的聲音。2Bythreeo'clock,therainhadstoppedandtheskywasacurdledgrayburdenedwithlumpsofclouds.Acoolbreezeblewthroughthepark（.天氣）到三點(diǎn)時(shí)，雨停了，鉛灰色的天空陰云密布，一陣北風(fēng)吹過公園。Thesunwasbeginningtoset,glitteringredthroughthecracksbetweentheramshacklebuildings.（情況）太陽開始下山，那些危如累卵的房屋的裂痕中，溢出閃閃的紅色斜暉。三、描繪時(shí)間，動(dòng)作，心理和感情)、感情好詞：喜樂Thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她臉上的笑臉像鉆石同樣閃閃發(fā)光。②Asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface他.臉上露出了一種理解的淺笑。③Arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一陣激動(dòng)聲穿過他們。Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑聲在房間里繚繞。⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛閃耀著快樂。Awildgaiety（快樂）tookholdofher.一種瘋狂的快樂控制了她。Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.令人難忘的是她的眼睛像鉆石同樣閃閃發(fā)光，嘴角保持著堅(jiān)固的淺笑。Iwaswildwithjoy.我驚喜若狂。Iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我快樂得難以形容。Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她臉上帶著絢爛的笑臉。Hersmilelitupthewholeroom.她的笑臉照亮了整個(gè)房間。Sheshedtearsofjoy.她快樂得流下了眼淚。Hereyesweresparklinglikediamonds.她的眼睛閃著鉆石般的光輝。Shewasoverflowingwithhappiness.她洋溢著幸福。Herflushedfacewasshiningwithexcitement.她激動(dòng)得滿臉通紅。?Joywelledupinsideher.她心中涌起歡喜。Iwasfloatingonair.我飛揚(yáng)在空中。Amusementgleamedinhiseyes.他眼睛顯現(xiàn)出快樂的神態(tài)。2.生氣：Iwasseizedbyanger我.充滿了生氣。Hewasfumingwithrage.他氣得雷霆之怒。③Hisangerboiledover.他的生氣迸發(fā)了。④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他幾乎控制不住怒火。⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充滿著怒火。Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的聲音因生氣而發(fā)抖。⑦Hegavemealookofburninganger.他生氣地看了我一眼。⑧Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼熱的眼光怒目著我。⑨Heflaredupattheword.他一聽到這個(gè)字就勃然震怒。⑩Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他氣得神態(tài)陰森。3.傷心煩憂①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他靜靜地站著，眼淚順著臉頰流了下來。3IfeellikeIamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我飛揚(yáng)在悲的大海里。Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears她.的手在發(fā)抖。她快要哭了。④Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine聽到.這個(gè)信息，他無望地把傷心吞沒在酒里。Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom她.忽然哭了起來，跑出了房間。⑥Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands她.掩面嗚咽。Itriedtofightbacktears./Myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼淚。/我的眼里充滿了淚水。Afrown（眉）nowstoodonhisface.他皺起了眉頭。Theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他們坐在那里，帶著一臉煩悶。⑩Thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.這信息使他臉上蒙上了一層暗影。?Hebrimmedoverwithsorrowwhen...他是悲???Theywereimmersedinsorrow.他們沉醉在沉痛之中。Thesedayshewasinlowspirits.這些日子他情緒低沉。4.懼怕：Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他轉(zhuǎn)過身來，眼里充滿了懼怕。Fearslowlycreepsuponher.懼怕慢慢地延伸到她身上。③Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...她感覺懼怕??④Shewaschokedbyfear.她因懼怕而窒息。Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied她.神態(tài)蒼白地站在那里，舌頭打結(jié)。⑥Afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中涌起一陣懼怕。/懼怕吞沒了他。Herheartbeat